• Lois Wickstrom

    Member
    March 2, 2022 at 4:20 pm

    problem continues. Nobody else is at this point. I can’t know if my script has problems if I don’t get feedback.

  • Lisa Molenda

    Member
    March 8, 2022 at 4:29 am

    Lisa completed P/S grid #2

    What I learned doing this assignment is that I can still make something great without having all the answers. I started coming up with ideas for clever dialogue and added intrigue for some scenes, so I changed and tweaked a few scenes. I think it’s really coming along and it’s going to be awesome!

  • Brenda Clarke

    Member
    April 20, 2022 at 4:32 am

    Problem/Solution GRID #2

    No. 6 Characters Need More Depth.

    I need to add scenes that show more of the characters profiles, to give them more depth.

    For example, I have now written a dance scene where it shows Richard is the leader and Elliot is the follower. This is to forecast their masculine side (Richard) and the more feminine side of Elliot.

    I have added dialogue to show Harriets wound, re her father leaving her and her mother.

    SECRET reveal is that Harriet and Rosie are lovers, now I need to add a scene after the big reveal, where Harriet shows her desperation/concern for finding her maid.

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