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  • Lynn Vincentnathan

    Member
    October 18, 2022 at 3:24 pm

    Lynn Vincentnathan’s Outline Exchange 1

    Ready to exchange my WEATHERING IT outline (a RomCom about two college students who try to overcome family fights about global warming and get married during the worst ever Texas freeze) for your outline.

    • Monica Arisman

      Member
      October 18, 2022 at 5:24 pm

      Hi Lynn,

      I will exchange with you. I only have time for one exchange as I’m going away.

      My email is marisman@shaw.ca. Thanks.

      Monica.

  • Deleted User

    Deleted User
    October 18, 2022 at 4:51 pm

    I’m ready to exchange a script that is in the adventure/ drama/ fantasy genre called, Solo Spot,. A story of a traumatized, spotted hyena, living living grub to grub after being cast from his clan in Africa. Thanks…

  • Deleted User

    Deleted User
    October 18, 2022 at 5:22 pm

    I decided to re-do this clip since I wasn’t that thorough. The concept is: A young, traumatized hyena, ousted from his
    clan, must win acceptance in another, or struggle to survive the jungle
    predators alone. Thanks.

    • victor Valleau

      Member
      October 20, 2022 at 12:40 am

      Hi Karen

      I missed your reply. If not interested, ill go on to another partner.

      Please advise. My acceptance to your request was posted below your

      invitation.

      victorvalleau@yahoo.com

  • victor Valleau

    Member
    October 19, 2022 at 1:29 am

    Hi Karen

    Let’s exchange: Please send your outline if interested to:

    victorvalleau@yahoo.com

    I have a modern romantic comedy called “Bob’s Baby”.

    An anonymous sperm donor with 40 babies, Bob wants one who calls him “Daddy”.

    Thanks

    Vic

    • Renee Miller

      Member
      October 20, 2022 at 4:19 pm

      Hey Victor – If you haven’t found someone to exchange with, I’ll have my second outline ready by this evening.

      • victor Valleau

        Member
        October 20, 2022 at 5:28 pm

        Hi Renee

        I’m ready to exchange anytime. My offer to Karen

        seems unanswered so I’m available.

        Thx Vic Text: 310-985-3525

        Victorvalleau@yahoo.com

        • Renee Miller

          Member
          October 20, 2022 at 5:35 pm

          Hey Victor. I sent you an email, so go ahead and send yours over and I will get mine to you in a bit.

  • Lynn Vincentnathan

    Member
    October 20, 2022 at 2:46 am

    Will be ready again in a few days to exchange. Busy revising based on great feedback. I’ll notify when ready.

  • Renee Miller

    Member
    October 20, 2022 at 3:58 pm

    I will be ready to do another exchange with someone this evening. I have a horror/thriller called “Something’s in the Woods.” Let me know if anyone would like to exchange. Thanks!

    • Lynn Vincentnathan

      Member
      October 20, 2022 at 4:50 pm

      I’d like to exchange once I’m finished with my current exchange – maybe in a day.

      • Renee Miller

        Member
        October 20, 2022 at 5:00 pm

        Yeah, Lynn. I’m finishing up my corrections/fixes, and can send it over once I’m done. Go ahead and send yours over as soon as you finish. I’ll message you my email address.

    • victor Valleau

      Member
      October 20, 2022 at 5:30 pm

      Hi Renee

      I will exchange.

      Victorvalleau@yahoo.com

  • ROBERT Ingalls

    Member
    October 21, 2022 at 11:31 am

    I have an Action outline and I’m ready to exchange feedback.

    • Lisa Paris Long

      Member
      October 22, 2022 at 1:26 am

      Hello Rob,

      If you’d like to exchange, I’m available with my second outline version based on my first exchange.

      I have a drama titled CHESAPEAKE GIRL about a 12-year-old aspiring dancer…not sure if it’s up your alley but let me know if you’re interested.

      Lisa Long

      llongmolly@gmail.com

      • ROBERT Ingalls

        Member
        October 23, 2022 at 1:14 pm

        Hi Lisa. Sure, we can exchange. I’ll send you a test email. My computer was on the fritz all yesterday. Rob

        • Lisa Paris Long

          Member
          October 24, 2022 at 2:06 am

          Hi Rob,

          FYI–I sent my feedback to your email address.

          Thanks, Lisa

    • Andrew Boyd

      Member
      October 22, 2022 at 10:44 am

      Hi Rob,

      I’d be happy to exchange with you?

      Mine is:

      Hitler’s Choirboys, a drama based on a true story set during the Nuremberg Trail of the leading Nazis in 1945. Here’s the concept:

      Hitler’s henchmen are on trial for their lives; hell-bent on keeping the war raging forever – can a couple of chaplains and a Jewish psychologist win their battle of wills and break the Nazi legend?

      What do you think?

      Andrew

      • ROBERT Ingalls

        Member
        October 23, 2022 at 1:17 pm

        Andrew, I just accepted another, but as soon as I’m done, I’m up for it.

        Rob

  • Lynn Vincentnathan

    Member
    October 22, 2022 at 5:27 am

    I’m ready for my next exchange of my RomCom, WEATHERING IT.

    This has really been a great chance for outline improvement.

    Lynn Vincentnathan

  • Andrew Boyd

    Member
    October 22, 2022 at 10:41 am

    Andrew Boyd’s Outline Exchange 1

    Hi! I’m ready to exchange my outline for Hitler’s Choirboys. This is a drama based on a true story set during the Nuremberg Trail of the leading Nazis in 1945. Here’s the concept:

    Hitler’s henchmen are on trial for their lives; hell-bent on keeping the war raging forever – can a couple of chaplains and a Jewish psychologist win their battle of wills and break the Nazi legend?

    I’d be delighted to exchange it for your outline.


  • Lynn Vincentnathan

    Member
    October 23, 2022 at 6:46 pm

    I’m ready to exchange again.

    Lynn

    • David Holloway

      Member
      October 25, 2022 at 12:05 am

      Hi Lynn,

      I’d like to read your outline. Mine is a drama, 50 years in the future, about two young Englishmen trying to cross what was once America and has become a number of independent nation-states.

      What do you think?

      Dave Holloway

      • Andrew Boyd

        Member
        October 25, 2022 at 10:56 am

        Hi David,

        I’d love to read your outline. Mine is a drama / true story.

        Nuremberg 1945: Hitler’s henchmen are on trial for their lives; if they go down as heroes, a new generation of Nazis could rise – only three men stand in their way, a couple of US chaplains and a Jewish psychologist. Can they face them up to their crimes?

        Would you be interested in an exchange?

        Andrew Boyd

        My email is andrewboydconsultant@btinternet.com

        • This reply was modified 2 years, 7 months ago by  Andrew Boyd.

      • Lynn Vincentnathan

        Member
        October 25, 2022 at 1:22 pm

        Maybe Andrew should swap first, then I can swap with you. Some notes came in and I’m in process of revising right now.

        • David Holloway

          Member
          October 25, 2022 at 7:50 pm

          Sounds good, Lynn.

          Dave

  • Frances Emerson

    Member
    October 24, 2022 at 10:09 pm

    I’ve been sick for the entire week and haven’t been able to work on anything. So, I have nothing to exchange right now. Please pass me by until I can catch up. Thank you,

  • Marcus Wolf

    Member
    October 25, 2022 at 12:19 pm

    Hi Everybody,

    I’m ready to swap outlines.

    Mine is a Western (Drama) entitled, BEYOND THE FADED TRAIL.

    A builder, critically short on lumber takes his men to a ghost town to dismantle it, only to discover that it is being used by a gang of outlaws as a hideout.

    Marcus

    • Renee Miller

      Member
      October 25, 2022 at 4:19 pm

      Hi Marcus,

      I have a little cleaning up to do, but would love to swap outlines with you. I can have mine over to you later today. You can email me yours whenever you’re ready. My email is rmiller0911@gmail.com.

      Thanks,

      Renee

      • Marcus Wolf

        Member
        October 26, 2022 at 5:03 am

        Thanks, Renee,

        I’m working with another classmate, but as soon as I’m done with his feedback, I’ll swap outlines with you.

        -Marcus

        • Renee Miller

          Member
          October 26, 2022 at 2:06 pm

          Sounds good Marcus!

  • JOEL STERN

    Member
    October 25, 2022 at 1:24 pm

    Hi Everyone,

    I’m ready to exchange. My script is a thriller about a WWII Medal of Honor winner who comes home after the war and faces major reality-check.

  • Renee Miller

    Member
    October 25, 2022 at 4:20 pm

    If anyone needs feedback on their script, let me know. I’m ready to exchange again.

    • Dana Abbott

      Member
      October 25, 2022 at 5:55 pm

      Hi Renee

      I’d like to exchange outlines with you, if you’re still available. I’ve only done one exchange so far. Life got in the way for a few days. I’m writing a thriller, and I’d enjoy reading your horror outline.

      Dana

      • This reply was modified 2 years, 7 months ago by  Dana Abbott.

      • Renee Miller

        Member
        October 26, 2022 at 2:05 pm

        Hi Dana,

        Let’s do it. You can email yours to rmiller0911@gmail.com. As soon as I get yours I’ll send mine over.

        Renee

  • Lisa Paris Long

    Member
    October 26, 2022 at 1:04 am

    Hello Everyone,

    I’m ready for my next exchange if anyone is interested my email is llongmolly@gmail.com.

    Mine is a coming-of-age drama.

    Lisa

    • Lynn Vincentnathan

      Member
      October 26, 2022 at 2:04 pm

      I’m ready now. I can exchange with you.

    • victor Valleau

      Member
      October 27, 2022 at 12:29 am

      Hi Lisa

      I will exchange rom coms with you. I should

      have 2nd draft critique back today from Karen, so will send it over, if

      agreeable. My email is

      victorvalleau@yahoo.com

      Thanks

      Vic

      • Lisa Paris Long

        Member
        October 27, 2022 at 12:52 am

        Hi Victor,

        I’m waiting for two people to send me their feedback. When I get them back and make the changes to the outline, I’ll send it on to you. In the meantime, you can send me your outline when you’re ready at llongmolly@gmail.com.

        I saw your email…Thanks, Lisa

        • victor Valleau

          Member
          October 28, 2022 at 12:14 am

          Lisa

          Here’s “Bob’s Baby” and Thanks! Ill email it to you now. Sen me yours when you are ready.

  • ROBERT Ingalls

    Member
    October 26, 2022 at 2:41 pm

    I’m ready to do another exchange (thanks Lisa for your feedback). It’s an action/drama.

    Rob

  • Paul Dees

    Member
    October 26, 2022 at 10:47 pm

    Hi Folks,

    I have an action/thriller outline I’m ready to exchange with someone.

    Best,

    Paul

    • George Petersen

      Member
      October 27, 2022 at 5:43 pm

      Hi Paul,

      I have a thriller also: The Summer of Haight.

      Please let me know if you would like to exchange.

      Thanks,

      George Petersen

  • Frances Emerson

    Member
    November 1, 2022 at 10:56 pm

    Hello everyone. I am finally recovered from my illness. It took awhile, but I was able to work on my outline and finally get it as completed as I could. Is there anyone out there who still needs to exchange? I would be most happy to exchange with you.

    • Joe Donato

      Member
      November 18, 2022 at 10:46 pm

      Hi Frances. I, too have been out of class for 2-3 weeks as I had to take time to rewrite another script that was requested by producers. I know I bailed on you last year on finishing reading your script, but I wont bail this time on your outline if you still want feedback in exchange for mine. (I decided to write a different Rom-Com in this class, and see if I learn enough to go back and fix the other one). Anyways, if you still need someone to read your outline I’m up for it, and I’ll do it within 2 days of you sending it to me. -Joe (donato2008@verizon.net)

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