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<div>Jan’s. Episode Descriptions .. including corrections from class 4 </div>
WIL: …. ? ( maybe not to give up when you don’t know how to proceed?)
—- and there are still real flaws in the mid section
Episode 1: Oliver returns to Germany for his father’s funeral and mother passed too, he suspects foul play
Episode 1: A Soldier’s Coming Home
Oliver returns to Germany for his father’s funeral
discovers his mother’s sudden passing.He suspects foul play in their deaths and seeks answers.
Oliver visits the notary and finds a recently signed power of attorney,
This raises suspicions about his mother’s intentions.
He meets Petra, a homicide detective, who initially dismisses any foul play.
In a pub brawl, Oliver gets injured but finds solace in Marie, leading to a deeper connection between them.
Cliffhanger: Restless in dawn, Oliver discovers his mothers diary
Episode 1: A Soldier’s Coming Home
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Oliver returns to Germany for his father’s funeral and discovers his mother’s sudden passing.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver must meet his family and navigate the stuffy world of his hometown
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver must seek answers about his parents’ deaths
ACTION/REACTION: Oliver investigates his parents’ house and discovers a hidden compartment containing his mother’s diary.CLIFFHANGER: The discovery of his mother’s diary shows a first hint at the hidden truths surrounding his parents’ deaths.
Episode 1: A Soldier’s Coming Home
Oliver returns to Germany for his father’s funeral and discovers his mother’s sudden passing. He suspects foul play in their deaths and seeks answers. He meets Petra, a homicide detective, who initially dismisses any foul play.
Oliver visits the notary and finds a recently signed power of attorney, raising suspicions about his mother’s intentions. In a pub brawl, Oliver gets injured but finds solace in Marie, leading to a deeper connection between them. A restless PTSD with sleeping disorders , he searches his parents house and discovers a hidden compartment containing his mothers diary. A peaceful death, really?
Episode 2: Oliver and Marie realize they are cousins. Oliver visits shipyard.
Episode 2: Meet the family
Oliver and Marie wake up realizing they are cousins,
Petra continues to see no need for investigation
Oliver meets Uncle Hans, who prioritizes his brother’s funeral over a mutual one
The notary provides Oliver with crucial information, and the will’s opening is scheduled.
Oliver visits the shipyard where his father drowned, uncovering potential clues.
The general insists Oliver seeks therapy for his war trauma.
Meanwhile, Marie helps Oliver find an undertaker for his mother
Oliver confronts the banker regarding his mother’s accounts.Cliffhanger: Uncle Hans receives a visit from Johan. Is the WM-deal at risk?l
Episode 2: Meet the Family
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Oliver and Marie wake up realizing they are cousins, adding complexity to their relationship.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: While police refuses to investigate Oliver faces the challenge and confronts family members
ACTION/ REACTION Oliver join forces with Marie to uncover the truth. He receives additional intel from the notary.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: ACTION/REACTION: Oliver is on his own after Uncle Hans prioritizes one funeral over two mutual ones. Oliver finds with Marie assist an undertaker himself
CLIFFHANGER: Uncle Hans receives a visit from Johan, a member of the wider family/tribe Is the WM-deal at risk?
Episode 2: Meet the family
Oliver and Marie wake up realizing they are cousins, adding complexity to their relationship. Uncle Hans, who prioritizes his brother’s funeral over a mutual one surprises Oliver. The notary provides Oliver with crucial information, reflecting that he might want to stay a bit longer; and the will’s opening is scheduled. Oliver visits the shipyard where his father drowned, uncovering potential clues. The general insists Oliver seeks therapy for his war trauma. Meanwhile, Marie helps Oliver find an undertaker for his mother, and Oliver confronts the banker regarding his mother’s accounts, presenting his. Power of attorney while Uncle Hans is visited by Johan, another member of the Wind family, questioned if the WM would be at risk?
Episode 3: Accusations of incestuousness arise. Oliver obliged to see shrink. Oliver inherits everything.
Episode 3: Family Secrets Emerge
Accusations of incestuousness arise,
tension in the family.Oliver begins therapy sessions with Stefanie, focusing on funeral matters.
Oliver joins Petra during his mother’s autopsy and discovers evidence of foul play.
Oliver searches his parents’ house for more clues.
The will is finally opened, shocking the family with Oliver as sole heir.
Oliver gives a speech he will stay until the truth is uncovered.
Marie reveals to Oliver the existence of a network most of the Windsor part of.
Episode 3: Family Secrets Emerge
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Accusations of incestuousness arise from Hans’ wife, causing tension in the family.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver joins Petra during his mother’s autopsy and discovers evidence of foul play.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: At the reading of the will Oliver becomes the sole heir; he responds that he will not stay longer than necessary to solve the death of his parents.
ACTION/REACTION: Oliver sees therapist Stefanie as he was obliged by his general, to address his emotional struggles. Oliver begins therapy sessions with Stefanie, focusing on scapegoats.
CLIFFHANGER: Marie unveils a shocking detail about her family, the network of the Winds
Episode 3: Family Secrets Emerge
Accusations of incestuousness arise from Hans’ wife, causing tension in the family.
Oliver begins therapy sessions with Stefanie, focusing on funeral matters.
Oliver joins Petra during his mother’s autopsy and discovers evidence of foul play.
He meticulously searches his parents’ house for more clues.
The will is finally opened, shocking the family as Oliver inherits everything.
Oliver gives a determined speech to uncover the truth.
Marie reveals the existence of a network of influential individuals known as the Winds.
Episode 4: The therapy kicks in, The funeral is weird; Oliver discovers a toxic substance linked to his father’s death.
Episode 4: Darker Waters
Stefanie helps Oliver to make progress with war traumata;
Oliver realizes the shipyard’s peculiar water patterns and investigates further.
Petra informs Oliver of torture marks on his father’s body before drowning.
Oliver asks Petra to have his father’s stomach and blood samples checked for certain chemicals;
Marie reveals her connection to eco-activists and her dream of being an eco-photographer.
Oliver uncovers a hasty deal to sell the shipyard,
The funeral takes place, dividing the family,
Oliver gains unexpected support from his grandmother.
Jürgen, a much disliked acquaintance re appears in Oliver’s live.
Uncle Hans urges Marie to drive with them, Maris insists to walk with Oliver
Cliffhanger : A car bomb detonates on the graveyard compound, was this Oliver’s limo?
Episode 4: Darker Waters
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Stefanie helps Oliver in therapy, making progress with his emotional struggles.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver continues to investigate the shipyard sale and its implications.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Petra reports torture marks and Oliver must gather evidence and discovers a toxic substance that could be linked to his father’s death,
ACTION/REACTION: Oliver realizes the shipyard’s peculiar water patterns and investigates further.
CLIFFHANGER: Walking back from the funeral, car bomb detonates. Was this the limo Oliver is supposed to sit in?
Episode 4: Darker Waters
Stefanie helps Oliver in therapy, making progress with his emotional struggles. Oliver realizes the shipyard’s peculiar water patterns and investigates further. Petra informs Oliver of torture marks on his father’s body before drowning. Marie reveals her connection to eco-activists and her dream of being an eco-photographer. Oliver uncovers a hasty deal to sell the shipyard, involving Jürgen, a disliked acquaintance. The funeral takes place, dividing the family, but Oliver gains unexpected support from his grandmother while Jürgen appears at the funeral, a shady memory to former life of Oliver. Walking back from the funeral, car bomb detonates. Was this the limo Oliver is supposed to sit in?
Episode 5:- Oliver and Marie delve into the shipyard sale and the Water Mill’s connection to a high-ranking government official. The general presses on both spies
Episode 5: Bubbly Reasons
Petra investigates the car bomb assassination on Oliver ,
Oliver and Marie were not in the limo because he followed Jürgen
Oliver and Marie delve deeper into the hasty shipyard sale
Oliver interviews the notary, about his mother’s influence on stepping back from the deal
The notary opens up being a long timer admirers of his mother
The general urgently seeks information about Stefanie’s therapy methods.
Oliver attends another therapy session with Stefanie, leading to a realization that they are both being manipulated.
Oliver questions why someone would rush to buy the shipyard
Oliver narrowly escapes an attempted murder by goons.The general threatens Stefanie for information about Oliver’s state of mind
Episode 5: Bubbly Reasons
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Oliver and Marie delve deeper into the hasty shipyard sale and its implications.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver must open up to Stefanie to uncover the motives behind the generals approach;
CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver faces resistance from the Water Mill organization and its powerful connections.
ACTION/REACTION: Oliver and Marie investigate the shipyard’s sale and the general urgently seeks information about Stefanie’s therapy methods.
CLIFFHANGER: The Stefanie receives a call from the general, he threatens her to uncover a hidden file containing classified information about the Water Mill’s connection to a high-ranking government official. And to her.
Episode 5: Bubbly Reasons
Oliver and Marie delve deeper into the hasty shipyard sale and its implications while the general urgently seeks information about Stefanie’s therapy methods. Oliver attends another therapy session with Stefanie, leading to a realization that they are both being manipulated. Oliver questions why someone would rush to buy the shipyard, the notary opens up about his past with Oliver’s mother. Oliver narrowly escapes an attempted murder by goons. The general presses for information about Stefanie’s therapy techniques and threatens her.
Episode 6: Unveiling the Water Mill’s Plans. Marie unveiling her feelings for Stefanie
Episode 6: Diving into the Plans
Marie provides Oliver with information about the shipyard sale
the Water Mill was the buyer and the deal orchestrated by Uncle Hans
Jürgen planning run for a political career in the state was involved as well as matchmaker
Marie picks up Oliver and is introduced to Stefanie
Marie later returns, convincing her to reconsider a relationship.
Oliver confronts Hans about the shipyard deal, discovering the Water Mill’s plans for a new water production facility, they seemingly have no funds for.
Who is cash flowing these deals buying all these properties in the Lake District?
The town welcomes the project, anticipating economic growth.Oliver receives a message suggesting to stay away from Marie and to investigate her past with the Water Mill.
Episode 6: Diving into the Plans
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Marie provides Oliver with information about the shipyard sale being orchestrated by the Water Mill.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver and Marie work together to expose the Water Mill’s plans and protect their loved ones.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver doesn’t know that Marie shows her feelings for Stefanie while unraveling the Water Mill’s plans.
ACTION/REACTION: Marie meets Stefanie and later returns to convince her to reconsider their relationship.
CLIFFHANGER: Oliver receives a mysterious message suggesting to stay away from Marie and to investigate her past with the Water Mill.
Episode 6: Diving into the Plans
Marie provides Oliver with information about the shipyard sale being handshake closed with Johan from the Water Mill, orchestrated by Jürgen and Hans. Marie meets Stefanie first time through Oliver and later returns, convincing her to consider a relationship. *?missing* Oliver confronts Hans about the shipyard deal, discovering the Water Mill’s plans for a new water production facility. While he found out that they don’t have the funds to finance this alone. The town welcomes the project, anticipating economic growth but has no financial involvement. Oliver returning to the shipyard gets mysterious message suggesting to investigate Marie’s past with the Water Mill.
Episode 7: Johann reveals his true allegiance, putting Oliver’s life in danger. Oliver takes a stand and opens on his ultimate core wound.
Episode 7: Shadows on Lee side
Oliver attends a week end group meeting in a nearby town,
Oliver opens up about his past trauma, earning respect from others.
Johann approaches Oliver, and tensions rise.
Johann warns others about losing their investment in the shipyard, claiming Oliver wants to keep it solely for himself.
Stefanie contemplates breaking up with Marie, but Marie proposes an alternative solution to maintain a polyamorous relationship.
Cliffhanger: Clarice drives by her father Johan, who is talking on the phone, ordering an end to this Oliver situation.
Episode 7: Shadows on Lee side
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Oliver attends a group meeting in a nearby town where he opens up about his past core trauma.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver confronts his inner demons and gains the respect of others through his honesty.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver faces tensions with Johann and must navigate his true allegiance.
ACTION/REACTION: Johann approaches Oliver, and tensions rise between them.
CLIFFHANGER: Johann reveals a shocking secret about his involvement with the Water Mill, exposing his true allegiance and putting Oliver’s life in danger.Episode 7: Shadows on Lee Side
Oliver attends a group meeting in a nearby town, where he opens up about his past trauma, earning respect from others. Johann approaches Oliver and tensions rise. Johann warns others about losing their investment in the shipyard, claiming Oliver wants to keep it solely for himself. Clarice takes action into her own hands while Stefanie contemplates breaking up with Marie, but Marie proposes an alternative solution to maintain a polyamorous relationship. And Johan requests to end Oliver’s thirst to unlock the riddle.
Episode 8: Oliver’s plan to make the shipyard his home. Huge losses ahead Johann and Clarice starting to react and act.
Episode 8: No Stopping
Johann informs Clarice and the board about potential losses in the shipyard investment due to Oliver’s actions.
Stefanie’s relationship with Marie is tested.
Oliver is attacked by unknown assailants while driving, but he manages to escape.
He retaliates by defeating the attackers and contacts Petra for assistance.
The general grows increasingly impatient for information on Stefanie’s therapy methods.
therapy, Oliver and Stefanie realize they are both being coerced into spying on each other.
Oliver and Stefanie develop a plan how to report as spies while giving away nothing.
Petra receives intel from department Organized crime and forwards it
Oliver has now a lead onto a group of dirty-work -for-hire!Cliffhanger: He asks buddies at ISAF in Prague and Warsaw to investigate on the killers
Episode 8: No Stopping
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Johann informs Clarice and others about potential losses in the shipyard investment due to Oliver’s actions.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver strives to uncover the truth and protect those close to him from the Water Mill’s retaliation.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: In therapy, Oliver and Stefanie realize they are both being coerced into spying on each other and a plan evolves how to deal with that while maintaining their relationship
ACTION/REACTION: S Oliver is attacked by unknown assailants while driving, but he manages to escape. He retaliates by defeating the attackers and contacts Petra for assistance.
CLIFFHANGER: Oliver network with soldier buddies at ISAF in Prague and Warsaw to investigate on the killers
Episode 8: No Stopping
Johann informs Clarice and the board about potential losses in the shipyard investment due to Oliver’s actions. Stefanie’s relationship with Marie is tested. Oliver is attacked by unknown assailants while driving, but he manages to escape. He retaliates by defeating the attackers and contacts Petra for assistance. The general grows increasingly impatient for information on Stefanie’s therapy methods. In therapy, Oliver and Stefanie realize they are both being coerced into spying on each other and a plan evolves how to deal with that. Oliver receives knowledge about the killers and that they are part of an organized group to finish dirty work for hire.
Episode 9: Oliver realizes he has been under constant surveillance and confronts the Water Mill’s involvement.
Episode 9: Deep Dive for Hidden Secrets
Oliver discovers a hidden technical facility beneath the covered docks of the shipyard,
Oliver suspects the Water Mill is involved.
The notary reveals that Oliver’s father had planned to sell the shipyard but his mother intervened to keep it in the family.
Oliver learns that his mother revisited the notary’s office a day before her death to finalize the will.
The notary is under surveillance too.
Episode 9: Deep Dive for Hidden Secrets
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Oliver discovers a hidden technical facility beneath the covered docks of the shipyard.
CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver must uncover deeper layers of the conspiracy and confronts tUncle Hans and Johan at Water Mill head-on.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver must navigate the dangerous facility and gather evidence against the Water Mill.
ACTION/REACTION: Oliver explores the secret water pipeline and stumbles upon a room filled with surveillance equipment
CLIFFHANGER: we learn that the notary is under surveillance too
Episode 9: Deep Dive for Hidden Secrets
Oliver discovers a hidden technical facility beneath the covered docks of the shipyard, leading him to suspect the Water Mill’s involvement. Oliver uses his friendship to a soldier from USA army who flies and monitors satellites over Europe and asks for favor and to check underground in depth around the shipyard
The notary reveals how his parents have dealt with a mutual understanding how to divide their heritage so that his father could sell the shipyard but after his death his mother rewrote this unsigned will and inherited everything to Oliver accidentally came in one day earlier than scheduled and signed her will, while we learn the notary os under surveillance too.
Episode 10: – Oliver and Marie discover crucial evidence, find notary poisoned. Oliver calls Petra.
Episode 10: Homecoming of a Son
Oliver decides to move to the shipyard
considers living there permanently.Marie surprises him with a revelation.
Oliver and Marie break into the notary’s office for additional evidence but find the notary poisoned.
Oliver cleverly covers their tracks and contacts Petra for assistance.
Marie and Stefanie suggest a polyamorous relationship, they both want to explore loving him same time.
Oliver is shocked, will refuse the offer?
Episode 10: Homecoming of a Son
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Oliver decides to move to the shipyard and considers living there permanently.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver seeks closure and builds a future while continuing his investigation.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver must balance his personal life with his pursuit of justice.
ACTION/REACTION: Oliver and Marie break into the notary’s office for additional evidence.
CLIFFHANGER: Oliver is speechless when Marie and Stefanie suggest a threesome romance.
Episode 10: Homecoming and Intrigue
Oliver decides to move to the shipyard and considers living there permanently. Marie surprises him with a revelation. Oliver and Marie break into the notary’s office for additional evidence but find the notary dead from poisoning. Oliver cleverly covers his tracks and contacts Petra for assistance. Meanwhile, Marie and Stefanie suggest a polyamorous yet romantic relationship which shocks Oliver.
Episode 11: Oliver confronts Jürgen and makes him flee, Oliver invites Marie and Stefanie to movie, accepts experiment
Episode 11: Thirst for Trust
Oliver confronts Hans about the mounting evidence against him,
Oliver opens up to Marie and Stefanie about his doubts and hopes for their relationship.
Oliver receives intel from his USArmy buddy, there is a huge underground pipeline leading for several miles to the unifier that belongs to the Water Mills license.
Oliver and his two new life partners preparing at the shipyard for a threesome life.
Oliver confronts the entire family with the truth, Hans putting this illegal deal together, forcing his own brother to sell his shipyard while already preparing the pipeline to steal the water from public.
Oliver exposes Jürgen as the middleman ordering of all the killings via hisAlbanian contacts
And it was Jürgen who was responsible for his best friend’s death 18 years ago.
Jürgen flees, like back then;
Johann receives a call
Clarice seeks help from her father’s driver.Episode 11: Thirst for Trust
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Oliver receives intel from his US Army buddy about a significant underground pipeline leading to the Water Mill’s unifier.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver confronts Hans about the mounting evidence against him, setting the stage for a confrontation and potential revelations.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver must confront Hans and the entire family with the truth, exposing their involvement in illegal deals and the manipulation of his father’s death. He also faces the challenge of exposing Jürgen’s connection to his friend’s death 18 years ago.
ACTION/REACTION: Oliver opens up to Marie and Stefanie, expressing his doubts and hopes for their relationship, showing his growth and willingness to build a new life. He, Marie, and Stefanie prepare for a threesome life and take action to confront the culprits.
CLIFFHANGER: When Jürgen escapes, Clarice seeks help from her father’s driver, hinting at her involvement.
Episode 11: Thirst for Trust
Oliver confronts Hans about the mounting evidence against him, leading to a heated exchange. Oliver opens up to Marie and Stefanie about his doubts and hopes for their relationship. And the shipyard. He decides to confront the entire family with the truth, exposing Jürgen as the main villain responsible for his best friend’s death 18 years ago. Jürgen flees, and Johann receives a call while Clarice seeks help from her father’s driver.
Episode 12: Johann faces consequences for the Mill, Claire manages to escapes, setting the stage for a thrilling pursuit.
Episode 12: Out of Energy
Johann faces the consequences of his involvement in the conspiracy,
Clarice manages to escape
Oliver proves that the Water Mill played a significant role in his parents’ deaths.
Marie confronts her father „Uncle Hans“
Clarice tricks the Oliver team and flees the country,
The general is unsatisfied with the intel on Stefanie,
Oliver enlists the help of his ISAF friends to locate Clarice, who has risen to a prominent position in a renowned water company
Oliver announces his return to Mali
Clarice leaves a cryptic message behind for Oliver,
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12: Out of Energy
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Johann faces the consequences of his involvement in the conspiracy.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver must confront everybody involved in his parents’ deaths
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver must navigate either the legal system and gather enough evidence or become a vigilanteACTION/REACTION: Oliver enlists the help of his ISAF friends to locate Clarice and confronts Johann who confesses that Clarice took the reins out of his hands
CLIFFHANGER: Clarice leaves a cryptic message behind for Oliver, hinting at her involvement in a much larger conspiracy than he ever would anticipate, and asks him to lay low
Episode 12: Out of Energy
Johann faces the consequences of his involvement in the conspiracy, and there is no room for negotiation. Oliver discovers that the Water Mill played a significant role in his parents’ deaths. Followed by Oliver and Marie, Clarice manages to trick them and to escapes the country. Oliver enlists the help of his ISAF friends to locate Clarice, who has risen to a prominent position in a renowned water and nutrition company, sends a cryptic message for Oliver to give up, he has no ops against the main conglomerate.
Episode 13: Oliver returns to his military base and sets a plan to take Clarice down without becoming a vigilante. Oliver, Marie, and Stefanie are pursued by a highly trained assassin.
Episode 13: The Healing Begins
Oliver returns to his military camp
Oliver is back on duty, planning his next move.
He visits the assassin from the first episode, offering him a deal that could grant him freedom with his family.
The plan is set in motion together with friends at ISAF and others to get Mohammad to SA.
Clarice is ambushed near the Water Mill headquarters in South Africa.
Same time Oliver is shot on his watch in Mali in the thigh.
Oliver sets Mohammad and his wife free taking an oath from him
Oliver is flown back home ,
Oliver reunites with Marie and Stefanie,
Oliver plans for long rehab and healing process.Leaving the airport, laughing unaware of an unknown character is following them, in his earpiece we hear the go to kill Oliver.
Episode 13: The Healing Begins
HOOK/INTRIGUE: Oliver returns to his military camp and plans his next move.
MAIN CHARACTER JOURNEY: Oliver seeks redemption and closure while focusing on his healing and rehabilitation.
MAJOR CHALLENGE/CONFLICT: Oliver must navigate his physical and emotional challenges, reconcile with his past, and protect himself and his loved ones from the unknown spy.
ACTION/REACTION: Oliver visits Mohammad, offering him a deal for freedom and sets a plan in motion with the help of his ISAF friends.
CLIFFHANGER: As Oliver, Marie, and Stefanie leave the airport, they are being followed by an unknown spy who has been ordered to kill Oliver.
Episode 13: The Healing Begins
Oliver returns to his military camp and continues his duties while planning his next move. He visits Mohammad, the assassin from the first episode, offering him a deal that could grant him freedom with his family. The plan is set in motion together with friends at ISAF and others to get Mohammad to SA.Clarice is ambushed near the Water Mill headquarters in South Africa. During the operation, Oliver is shot on his watch in Mali in the thigh. Oliver sets Mohammad and his wife free and is flown back home for rehabilitation, where he reunites with Marie and Stefanie, starting the healing process and seeking a brighter future together. Leaving the airport, an unknown character is following them, in his earpiece we hear the go to kill Oliver, setting the stage for a thrilling and dangerous pursuit in the upcoming season.
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Cat Miggs Episode Description
What I learned doing this assignment is keep an open mind and just put an idea down and not fix it or try to make it perfect.
Episode 1- Susan gains magic!
Hook/Intrigue: Shocking Event: Susan gets shot, falls and bleeds out, to the next moment she wakes up, sits up and see the bullet is sitting next to her. A figure steps out of the tree and becomes a shape of the man of her dreams dressed in a forest ranger outfit.
Main Character journey: Susan learns she now owes the trees a favor and discovers she has magic.
Major Challenge/Conflict: Wilma is not happy that a human has gotten power
Action/Reaction: Susan being introduced to this whole other world that she did not know existed.
Cliffhanger:A Shadow is lurking around and more harm is happening then good, who/what is the Shadow.
Episode 2- After a of a ranger goes missing (he’s dead), Susan gets to step away from working the front desk to join the A-team
Hook/Intrigue: A ranger is dead, the Shadow stands over it and drags it deep into the forest
Main Character journey: Susan gets promoted for the day when a ranger doesn’t show up for work and there is a little girl who is missing, Susan moves from front desk to joining the A-team
Major Challenge/Conflict: Susan is not welcomed by the A-team
Action/Reaction: A little girl is missing as Susan is out searching for her, Susan uses her magic but bad magic is released too.
Cliffhanger: after the little girl is found, the little girl gives Susan a message and then forgets instantly that she gave Susan a message, the message is a warning.
Episode 3- Susan and Mystery Forest Ranger can’t get on the same page and things become worse.
Hook/Intrigue: Mystery Forest Ranger can’t break his habit of trying to find Susan’s soulmate, he attaches himself to a High level Criminal that Susan is suppose to catch but makes Susan fall in love with
Main Character journey: Susan is trying to do her job and Mystery Forest Ranger is suppose to be helping her find a way to save the forest but she gets distracted falling in love with a criminal
Major Challenge/Conflict: miscommunication that leads to worse problems
Action/Reaction: comedy of errors between Susan and Mystery Forest Ranger
Cliffhanger: Criminal escapes with Susan help,the bad magic gets stronger
Episode 4- The shadow says hello to Susan.
Hook/Intrigue: The Shadow sees Susan help the Criminal escape, kills him to retrieve their memories and learns about Susan
Main Character journey: Susan has a pull feeling to the Shadow
Major Challenge/Conflict: Susan is getting more confused with her magic
Action/Reaction: the Shadow follow Susan until they meet face to face
Cliffhanger: the shadow asks Susan to think about why her magic comes out for both good and bad.
Episode 5- Susan is just trying to do her job but can’t win
Hook/Intrigue: A grizzle bear has been taken over by bad magic
Main Character journey: Susan using her magic but its not working for her the way she wants it to work
Major Challenge/Conflict:The A-team is catching on that Susan has something that a human should not have.
Action/Reaction:The more frustrated Susan gets the worse things get
Cliffhanger: Chuck, part of the A-team witnesses Susan using magic and the Shadow takes over his body
Episode 6- Magic is now entering into the human world
Hook/Intrigue: Kids are playing innocently, bad magic enters and the kids are doing magic spells creating harm to the forest, Chuck who is taken over by the Shadow outs Susan in front of everyone
Main Character journey:Susan is finding it hard and hard to explain herself
Major Challenge/Conflict: Magic is becoming more visible in the forest
Action/Reaction: More trees are dying as magic is entering the human world
Cliffhanger: Pine, part of the circle of trees dies
Episode 7- Death is entering the Circle of Trees
Hook/Intrigue: a flashback to Susan ancestry line
Main Character journey: Susan starts having flashbacks to another life
Major Challenge/Conflict: The circle of trees are suppose to be the life source for all trees but when Pine tree dies its like we are entering into a new era
Action/Reaction: the humans are noticing the forest is dying and people are getting sick that they think maybe a disease is spreading of some sort
Cliffhanger: A flashback that shows how history is repeating itself.
Episode 8- Wilma Reveals a secret of Susan’s past.
Hook/Intrigue: A glimpse of how Susan and the Shadow are connected in a dream Susan has and wakes up to find the dead ranger from early on in the season laying at Susan feet
Main Character journey: Susan is starting to connect to a part of herself she did not know existed
Major Challenge/Conflict: Wilma doesn’t want to admit it but if it’s true Susan needs to learn of her past
Action/Reaction: Wilma has to accept that Susan could be the key.
Cliffhanger: Wilma reveals a secret of Susan past.
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What I learned doing this assignment is that it’s easier knowing that this is only a rough draft. Using the bulletpoints from Lesson 4, made this somewhat of an easy process, but also showed some gaps in the flow of the story. So I had to go back and make some changes so that things stayed chronological and made sense.
EPISODE 1
Hook/Intrigue: Henry blackmails Willie into making him CEO
Main Character journey: Tony needs to step away from the family business to get the things he wants.Major Challenge/Conflict: Tony must decide if he will stay with Jones Farmacy under Henry
Action/Reaction: Pete extends an offer of employment to TonyCliffhanger: Tony leaves the company, goes to work for Pete
After years of being overlooked, Willie finally decides to give Tony a shot at running the company. Before he can share the news with Tony, Henry, his estranged cousin arrives at Jones Farmacy with evidence that Willie used his inheritance to fund his cannabis empire. Henry demands that Willie pay him the initial amount plus interest. When Willie can’t come up with the money, Henry opts for being made CEO, effective immediately. Tony is furious and announces his immediate resignation. With the word out that he is no longer with Jones Farmacy, offers roll in for Tony. Tony accepts an offer from Jones Farmacy’s number one competitor, Green Diamonds.
EPISODE 2
Hook/Intrigue: Tony is thriving in his new role. Henry struggles in his role as CEO <div>Main Character journey: Tony needs to make a name for himself in the cannabis industry
Major Challenge/Conflict: Willie and Tony grow more distant, personally, and professionally
Action/Reaction: Tony challenges the LOCC on their policies<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Cliffhanger: Pete loves having Tony in his corner, he has Tony’s back against the LOCC
Tony now a Green Diamonds employee, is thriving in his new role, while Henry struggles with his CEO duties at Jones Farmacy. Tony is on a mission to make a name for himself in the cannabis world, independent of his father. He starts by challenging some of the LOCC’s outdated policies. Willie attempts to quiet him down, to no avail. While Pete publicly announces his support for Tony. Since joining forces with the competition, Tony and Willie have grown progressively more distant, both personally and professionally. Pete backs Tony publicly in the LOCC hearing, much to the chagrin of the other Commissioners.
EPISODE 3
Hook/Intrigue: Green Diamonds monthly sales soar ahead of Jones Farmacy. </div><div>Main Character journey: Tony needs to learn to trust others.
Major Challenge/Conflict: Willie is bothered by Tony and Pete’s relationship
Action/Reaction: Pete does an interview, gives Tony props publiclyCliffhanger: Tony gets the Governor’s attention.
It’s been one month since Tony began at Green Diamonds, and their sales have soared ahead of Jones Farmacy for the first time in years. Tony and Pete grow closer as Tony begins to let his guard down with Pete. Willie is bothered by Tony and Pete’s closeness and becomes more passive aggressive as a result. Pete invites Tony to accompany him on a national news interview. He praises Tony for Green Diamonds’ boost in business, which includes the story of how he was overlooked at Jones Farmacy. The interview grabs the Governor’s attention. She has her eyes on Tony now.
EPISODE 4
Hook/Intrigue: The cannabis business owners rally behind Tony against the LOCC. </div><div>Main Character journey: Tony is building a reputation for himself, independent of his father.
<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Major Challenge/Conflict: Willie refutes Tony’s accusations that the LOCC excessively fines companies.
<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Action/Reaction: Willie bribes Henry into sabotaging Tony and Green Diamonds.
Cliffhanger: Tony discovers secrets about Pete through Noelle.After seeing Tony speak on the news, many of the cannabis business owners begin to come to him to show compassion and support. As Tony takes on the LOCC, the business owners rally behind him, also bringing forth their complaints. Willie and several of the other LOCC members refute Tony’s accusations in defense of their policies. The hearing goes in Tony’s favor, which drives him to investigate more concerns with the LOCC, particularly the excessive fines to local cannabis business owners. Willie is pissed and retaliates by recruiting Henry to sabotage Tony and Green Diamonds. Meanwhile, Tony and Noelle get closer, and she reveals secrets about her father that could destroy his future in the cannabis industry.
EPISODE 5
Hook/Intrigue: Henry reaches out to Tony for advice. </div><div>Main Character journey: Tony struggles saying “No,” much to his own detriment.
Major Challenge/Conflict: Tony brings up a case against the LOCC.
Action/Reaction: The LOCC is forced to repay $500K.
Cliffhanger: The Governor launches a statewide internal LOCC investigation.
After many weeks of remaining silent, Henry reaches out to Tony for advice on dealing with Willie. This is not the walk in the park that he imagined it to be. Tony reluctantly takes a meeting with Henry, and they both discuss their rocky relationships with Willie. After speaking with Henry, Tony is ready to go to the Governor with information that businesses are being excessively fined by the LOCC, and that the LOCC members are signing off on it with one another. The Governor hires her own investigator, who confirms Tony’s findings. The LOCC is commanded to return close to $500K of fines they’ve collected, with more pending. The Governor hires an investigative team and launches a statewide investigation into all the LOCC members, including Pete and Willie.
EPISODE 6
· Hook/Intrigue: Pete is accused of ethical misconduct
· Main Character journey: Tony must decide between his allegiance to Pete and his allegiance to himself.
· Major Challenge/Conflict: Tony must publicly condemn Pete for his role at the LOCC.
· Action/Reaction: Tony hires an investigator to investigate the tainted crops.
· Cliffhanger: Taj asks Tony to make amends with Willie.
The findings from the LOCC investigation reveal Pete’s involvement in ethical misconduct. It’s possible that other LOCC Commissioners covered up this information, which infuriates the Governor. She calls for a few of the Commissioners to step down immediately, which requires the remaining Commissioners to extend their jurisdictions. Tony is asked to speak about it publicly, which Pete encourages him to do. Pete is given a Plan of Correction that he must satisfy to retain his appointment. Meanwhile at Green Diamonds, the crops have been tainted with toxic fertilizer, and Tony suspects Willie’s involvement. Tony launches a witch hunt against Willie until Taj asks him to call it off and make amends.
EPISODE 7
· Hook/Intrigue: Tony finally agrees to meet with the Governor.
Main Character journey: Tony must step away from the crowd and into the light. Tony must manage his guilt. </div><div>Major Challenge/Conflict: Tony must tell the LOCC about Willie being blackmailed.
Action/Reaction: Tony calls a truce with his family.Cliffhanger: Robin shows up for the dinner with Taj.
The Governor requests a meeting with Tony. He agrees. Heather learns about Henry blackmailing Willie and goes to Tony with the information. Tony explains his obligation to report the information to the LOCC. Willie calls a family meeting with Tony, Heather, Henry and Cynthia. Willie forbids Tony from going to the LOCC. Tony agrees that is the best decision, as he does not want to disappoint Taj. The family agrees to move forward peacefully, planning a dinner for Taj to reconnect with the Joneses. Robin shows up unexpectedly, but we later learn Willie invited her.
EPISODE 8
Hook/Intrigue: Tony gets an offer from the Governor to oversee the LOCC
Main Character journey: Tony must decide in his own best interest
Major Challenge/Conflict: Accepting the position may bring conflict with the family and the business owners. </div><div>Action/Reaction: Tony accepts the Chief Deputy position in the Governor’s office
Cliffhanger: Tony is now Willie and Pete’s boss.
The cannabis business owners suggest forming a union and ask Tony to be the chairperson. Governor Brown invites Tony to the Governor’s mansion for a private meeting. She offers Tony a position as Chief Deputy of the LOCC. Tony worries that accepting either position would bring conflict to his family and business relationships. Tony meets with the business owners and tells them his decision to move forward with the Governor’s offer. He reassures them that he will protect them from the inside. Willie and Pete learn that Tony will be their new boss.
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KZ’s Episode Descriptions
What I learned doing this assignment is… writing out the key components makes the story much clearer and also highlights what’s missing. Many of these are way too long. I will continue working on them as I move forward. This story can be confusing because of the two parallel worlds, so I’ll have to figure out how to keep it short and sweet, while still giving enough detail for clarity.
Episode 1: I, Murderer
- Hook/Intrigue: Raymond, a handsome young man, escapes into a stairwell, clutching his throat, which has been clawed. He tries to hide but he’s pushed over the banister, falling to his death in the foyer of Oliver’s building. Oliver wonders to Indigo (his therapist/tarot reader) whether he could be the murderer…
- Main Character Journey:…because he has partial amnesia, and he just found a key piece of evidence in his apartment: Raymond’s missing shoe. Oliver finds a mysterious door that leads to the apartment next door, where the attractive tenant, Tony, seems to believe that he and Oliver are clandestine lovers, hiding their love from his older partner, Nolan Harris, an author of supernatural thrillers who is renowned for his jealousy.
- Major challenge/conflict: Nolan is harangued by the Russian who owns the publishing company, which is actually a money laundering operation. Nolan has tried to get his books banned for the publicity, and the Russian has a recording of it. The Russian reminds him that he doesn’t care how many books sell, all that matters is that it appears to sell.
- When Nolan returns home, Tony shoos Oliver out, makes him promise to keep out of sight for a while.
- Cliffhanger: Michelle, the superintendent, informs Oliver that Raymond was Tony’s latest crush, and that anyone who flirts with Tony dies a gruesome death.
Description: Raymond, a handsome young hunk, is pushed to his death by an unknown assailant. Oliver, suffering from partial amnesia, confides to his therapist/tarot reader, Indigo, that he may be the murderer since he’s found a key piece of evidence in his possession: Raymond’s missing shoe.
When Detective Uhm and the superintendent, Michelle, enter his apartment to search it, Oliver escapes to the apartment next door via a secret passage. There, he encounters Tony, who seems to believe that they have been having a clandestine love affair, hiding it from Tony’s jealous older partner, Nolan…but Oliver remembers nothing of it.
On Zoom in his office, Nolan lobbies the Russian who owns a publishing company that is really a money laundering operation to take steps to increase legitimate sales of his books. The Russian mocks Nolan for trying to get his books banned to increase legitimate sales, and reminds him that it doesn’t matter how many books actually sell. Nolan emerges from his office and Tony shoos Oliver away, warning him not to let Nolan know that he’s out of the hospital.
Michelle, the superintendent, informs Oliver that Raymond was Tony’s latest crush, and that anyone who flirts with Tony dies a gruesome death…and that Oliver could suffer the same fate.
Episode 2:
- Hook/Intrigue: Oliver is wary of deepening the relationship with Tony, but when he sees Tony, it’s as if they never met. Tony seems to have no knowledge of him.
- Major Character Journey: Oliver assumes that everything Tony told him was a lie, and that he’s back to square one with discovering his true identity.
- Major Challenge/Conflict: The Russians pressure Nolan – they want to know why they haven’t seen anything about Oliver’s death in the news.
- Cliffhanger: Detective Uhm finds the shoe and accuses Oliver of murder. Michelle convinces him not to make an arrest because she’s sure that Tony planted the shoe.
Description:
Oliver decides to end the affair with Tony, but when he sees Tony, it’s as if they never met. Tony has no knowledge of him. He consults with Michelle, who describes Tony as a lying libertine with violent tendencies and advises him to steer clear.
The Russian pressures Nolan – why haven’t they heard of Oliver’s death? Nolan tells them that Oliver is intubated in the hospital with Covid, and he will surely die soon. The Russian cajoles him – poison would have been better.
Michelle tells Oliver that Nolan holds the key to his identity and she urges him to set up an interview. During the interview, Nolan tells Oliver his story. Oliver wonders who told him all of his secrets? Was it Michelle? Indigo?
Nolan poses as a religious nut who wants Nolan’s books banned because they promote homosexuality. Then he contacts the press to complain that his books have been banned.
Meanwhile, Oliver sneaks into the apartment. He finds a tarot card and thinks he knows that Indigo told Nolan his secrets.
Tony returns and Oliver hides. He overhears an argument where Tony complains that Nolan is writing about Oliver. Tony wads up some pages and storms out. Oliver grabs the pages from the wastebasket and returns home, narrowly avoiding being discovered by Nolan.
In the hallway, he keeps seeing a mysterious woman with a letter A on her black cloak.
Episode 3:
- Hook/Intrigue: The Russian sees Oliver and chases him. Oliver vanishes through the secret portal.
- Major Character Journey: The Russian confronts Nolan, tells him that he has seen Oliver alive, and accuses him of hiding him in the apartment, and begins to search it.
- Major Challenge/Conflict: The Russian takes Nolan to the hospital. He says that if Oliver is still alive, that Nolan must use poison to finish him off. They find IRL Oliver on a ventilator, but a nurse tells them to leave and assures him that Oliver is not going to make it.
- Action/Reaction: IRL Tony uses the secret passageway to enter Oliver’s apartment.
- Cliffhanger: Oliver and IRL Tony are in bed when Bad Tony comes in. Oliver keeps the two Tonys apart, but Bad Tony sees the other and runs away. IRL Tony leaves behind a book of Nolan’s and departs. Oliver reads the book.
Description:
The Russian is sitting at Nolan’s desk, quietly reading his books while waiting for Nolan to return. Oliver enters the apartment, and is seen by the Russian. Oliver manages to use the secret passageway without it being discovered. Nolan and Tony return to find the Russian tossing the apartment, looking for Oliver. The Russian forces Nolan to accompany him to the hospital to prove that Oliver is still there. They don protective gear and enter as though they are nurses. IRL Oliver is indeed on a ventilator. The Russian hands Nolan poison and instructs him to use it, but a nurse enters and tells them they have to leave. She assures them IRL Oliver is not going to make it.
The Russian cajoles Nolan that his books lack realism – it’s clear he never committed a murder. And he points to a review by a blogger who says the same thing. He gives Nolan a line to include in his book and says he needs to finish it in a week.
Back at the apartment, IRL Tony uses the secret passageway to enter Oliver’s apartment. The two wind up in bed, but then Bad Tony comes in. Oliver keeps the two Tonys apart, but Bad Tony sees the other and runs away. IRL Tony leaving behind a copy of Nolan’s latest book, and returns home just before Nolan does. Oliver begins to read about the fictionalized Tony, discovering that he’s the product of a one-night-stand between a human woman and a werewolf… and that on full moons, he becomes a serial killer.
Episode 5:
- Hook/Intrigue: (Major Character Journey:) Oliver leaves by his apartment door, but the hallway quickly devolves into barely imagined drawings, and then nothingness. Michelle calls Oliver back to his apartment. She fixes Oliver a drink and explains that Nolan didn’t imagine unused areas. She tells him that they’re all fictional characters based on real people.
- Major Challenge/Conflict: Oliver confronts Nolan
- Action/Reaction: IRL Tony leaves.
- Cliffhanger: Nolan gets revenge against IRL Tony by writing a new ending: Oliver will be made to kill Tony.
Description:
After an argument with Michelle, Oliver discovers the limits of his world when the hallway turns into a rough sketch, and the doorway at the end of the hall opens out into white nothingness. Michelle explains that although they’re based on real people, they’re all inventions of Nolan’s.
IRL Tony and Nolan argue. IRL Tony uses the portal to join Oliver. Nolan searches and discovers the portal.
Oliver tries to tell IRL Tony the truth of their situation, but they have to hide while Nolan snoops around Oliver’s apartment.
IRL Tony escapes back through the portal. Oliver confronts Nolan and tells him that he and Tony are in love. Nolan laughs and says that Oliver is his creation and will do whatever he dictates, including killing Tony. Nolan seals up the portal so that Oliver is stuck in the fictional world with the fictional Tony, who is growing increasingly erratic as the full moon nears.
Episode 6:
- Hook/Intrigue: Oliver gets a tarot reading from Indigo. She denies being a fictional character.
- Major Character Journey:
- Major Challenge/Conflict: Oliver breaks into Nolan’s apartment. Tony is gone, Nolan is dead drunk.
- Action/Reaction: Oliver steals the usb drive
- Cliffhanger: Oliver opens the file and tries to make changes, but doesn’t know how to write.
Description:
Indigo reads Oliver’s tarot, but denies being a fictional character. Oliver breaks through the portal. Nolan is dead drunk, depressed because the real Tony left him. Oliver steals the USB drive. He opens the file and tries to make changes, but doesn’t know how to write, so he goes farther back in the story to give himself that talent.
Episode 8:
- Hook/Intrigue: It’s a full moon, and Tony is coming for Oliver
- Major Character Journey: Oliver takes control of the narrative
- Major Challenge/Conflict: Tony is coming to kill Oliver
- Action/Reaction: Oliver lifts passages from Nolan’s previous novels, rewrites the ending.
- Cliffhanger: Tony goes on a killing spree, which Oliver reverses.
Description:
It’s a race against time as Oliver tries to change key parts of the manuscript before having to either kill Tony, or be killed. Tony kills Michelle, twice, and Oliver reverses it each time. He is about to be killed himself when he kisses Tony, transferring a mouthful of colloidal silver, which affects Tony’s werewolf nature and temporarily neutralizes him.
Episode 9:
- Hook/Intrigue: Oliver visits IRL Oliver in the hospital
- Major Character Journey: dying IRL Oliver gives him proof of Nolan’s espionage activities
- Major Challenge/Conflict: The Russian sees Oliver, pursues him
- Action/Reaction: Oliver flees back to the fictional world. Nolan follows him to get away from the Russian.
- Cliffhanger: Oliver hides the incriminating evidence and discovers the identity of the mysterious woman: it’s Hester Prynne, from The Scarlet Letter, and he realizes that fictional characters from other stories are invading his world.
Description:
In the hospital, Oliver visits his dying IRL counterpart. IRL Oliver confesses that he is, in fact, a CIA Agent who was spying on Nolan, and accidentally fell in love with IRL Tony. He gives Oliver proof of Nolan’s espionage activities. Leaving the hospital, Oliver is spotted by the Russian, who pursues him. Oliver flees back to the fictional world, and at the last moment, allows Nolan inside to keep him from being assassinated by the Russian. The woman with the Scarlet Letter is there, and Nolan recognizes Hester Prynne from The Scarlet Letter. She hints that more fictional characters will be joining them, in an effort to free themselves from their stories.
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