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Lesson 6
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KZ’s Example Show Relationship Map: MR. ROBOT
What I learned from doing this assignment: to not only pay attention to character traits, but also how characters interact with each other.
Protagonist: ELLIOT / Antagonist: MR. ROBOT
- Surface: Fellow malcontents
- Common Ground: They use coding skills to cure injustice and f— society.
- Conflict: Elliot works from the inside. Mr. Robot wants to blow things up, no matter who he hurts or kills.
- History: Mr. Robot caused Elliot to be hospitalized when he punished him for not being loyal
- Subtext: Mr. Robot needs Elliot’s insider status; Elliot needs Mr. Robot’s vision and leadership
- Relationship arc: (Don’t know yet)
Protagonist: ELLIOT / Love interest?: ANGELA
- Surface: Co-workers, friends
- Common Ground: They each lost a parent to Evil Corp’s machinations.
- Conflict: She depends on her job at Allsafe; Elliot is working to destroy their major client, which will destroy Allsafe.
- History: They clung to each other in childhood; each other’s true friend
- Subtext: Elliot has unrequited love for her.
- Relationship arc: (Don’t know yet)
Protagonist: ELLIOT / 2nd Antagonist: TYRELL
- Surface: Employee / Client
- Common Ground: Fellow coding wizards
- Conflict: Tyrell wants Elliot to work for E-Corp, not knowing he’s actively trying to destroy it.
- History: Elliot caused the imprisonment of E-Corp’s CEO; Tyrell tells him he knows and doesn’t care.
- Subtext: They’re each trying to find out each other’s secrets
- Relationship arc: (Don’t know yet)
Protagonist: ELLIOT / Ally: DARLENE
- Surface: Fellow coders
- Common Ground: They each are dealing with Mr. Robot’s abusive management style
- Conflict: Darlene is a bomb thrower; Elliot is more patient
- History: Darlene violates Elliot’s privacy in real life, breaking into his apartment
- Subtext: Darlene has established that Elliot has no secrets she can’t pry loose, no boundaries she won’t break down.
- Relationship arc: (Don’t know yet)
Protagonist: ELLIOT / Ally: KRISTA
- Surface: Patient Therapist
- Common Ground: They’re looking out for each other
- Conflict: Elliot won’t divulge his interior thoughts.
- History:
After a year of not speaking during his sessions, Krista boots him as a
client. Only then does Elliot reveal that he has hacked her accounts
and knows all her secrets. - Subtext: You want to know all about me, but I know all about you.
- Relationship arc: (Don’t know yet)
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KZ’s SHOW – Relationship Map • Assignment #2
What I learned… mapping out the relationships gave me some ideas about how to build the plot and showed me where the story is thin and needs improvement.
Concept: Two estranged sisters fight over their deceased hoarder mother’s house.
AVERY (protagonist) / REGAN (antagonist)
- Surface: Sisters
- Common ground: They grew up in the same house, experienced the same events.
- Conflict: Avery wants to preserve her mother’s junk to honor her memory; Regan wants to throw everything in the dumpster and put the house on the market. Also– they have completely different interpretations of childhood events. And — Regan is trying to get Avery declared mentally ill and unfit to administer the estate.
- History: Avery was like her mother, also a bit of a hoarder. Yet the mother placed all her hopes on Regan, who managed to let go of the past and start a new life.
- Subtext: The sisters compete for their mother’s love, even after her death.
- Relationship arc: (don’t know yet)
AVERY / AUGUSTUS (the Archaeologist)
- Surface: Client / Consultant
- Common ground: They both value the mother’s hoard.
- Conflict: Avery wants a romantic relationship; Augustus placates her to have access to the hoard.
- History: On their first date, Augustus was wounded by the mother’s junk when he opened a closet door. He agreed not to sue if Avery would let him catalogue the stuff. Then Regan showed up, throwing a wrench into the works.
- Relationship arc: (don’t know yet)
AVERY / THE DECLUTTER KING
- Surface: Patient / Doctor
- Common ground: They’re both obsessed with stuff.
- Conflict: She wants to keep everything / he wants to throw everything out.
- History: Avery has fought off previous declutter experts.
- Subtext: His reputation is at stake. He must win out.
- Relationship arc: (don’t know yet)
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Denice’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is that layers can get deeper and deeper. A relationship map is an easy tool to organize relationships at a glance and be able to adapt or change when necessary. It’s an easier way to compare the six main relationship categories. AI sometimes gives me a better words and ideas to explain the characters’ relationships.I found it difficult to make a very good map with “Hijack” because they really only have one main character, one main adversary, and in this episode, Detective Daniel. There are a lot of secondary background characters. The characters that started the show, like Sam’s wife, aren’t in all the episodes so far. That’s the case for most of the characters. The plan of the adversaries seems more important as to how it unravels and affects officials on the ground making the decisions and the hijackers in the air. For now, there has been a shocking twist with a passenger killing the pilot (I think) and taking over the cockpit.
Maya – Blake – Sophia – Lysandra
Surface: Father – Grandmother – Adversary (Mom)
Common Ground: dreams, prophecy – family secrets, strategic, smart – dreams
Conflict: kidnapping, betrayal – protectiveness, disobedience – power struggle
History: Daddy’s girl, secrets of his work – mysterious past, loving grandmother – dark dream influence, unknown parenthood
Subtext: His unresolved guilt, her fear of being alone – unrevealed secrets, distrust – unrecognized connection. intrigue, manipulation
Arc: forgiveness, reconciliation – control of Sophia – enemies or the end of series, death
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Sunil Pappu’s Show Relationship Map
“What I learned doing this assignment is…that the relationship map is quite critical to create layers and intrigue for the series to sustain over five seasons. I also learned to fill in the blanks and put something there even if I was drawing a blank on some categories. Also, it took a lot of work even with AI to fine-tune these maps.”
ASSIGNMENT 1:
Example Show: Mr. Robot
Relationship Map
Elliot Vs:
Mr. Robot
Surface: Activist Hacker
Common Ground: To bring down Evil Corp
Conflict: Disagree on the methods
History: No prior association but knew about Elliot’s Dad
Subtext: Keeps plans close to his chest
Relationship Arc: from strangers to rival hackers to fellow activists
Tyrell
Surface: Techie Exec
Common Ground: Techies; To protect Evil Corp
Conflict: Turns down a promotion offer
History: No prior association
Subtext: To show his superiority in hacking
Relationship Arc: from boss/underling to reluctant collaborators
Shayla
Surface: Drug Dealer / Hippie Neighbour-Girlfriend
Common Ground: Drugs
Conflict: With her Supplier who rapes her
History: No prior association
Subtext: knows his real self
Relationship Arc: from neighbour to drug dealer to lover
ASSIGNMENT 2:
Relationship Map of My Show
Title: Ghost Ledger
Genre: Heist Thriller (One Hour Serial)
Concept: A suspended RAW agent with the Indian Intelligence Service assembles a crew of expert international thieves to penetrate an enigmatic hawala network operation outside India, unveiling a web of international intrigue and betrayal.
Main Characters:
1. Arjun Nair (AKA Raven)
• Unique Role: Former RAW agent turned mastermind behind the operation. He’s a brilliant strategist with knowledge of espionage and the Hawala Network.
2. Meera Verma (AKA Ghost)
• Unique Role: A gifted hacker and expert in navigating the Ghost nodes of the Hawala Network. She’s the tech-savvy brains behind the operation.
3. Sofia Petrovna (AKA Chameleon)
• Unique Role: Master of disguise and infiltration. Sofia can become anyone and slip into the most secure locations without being detected.
4. Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow)
• Unique Role: A highly skilled field operative with a history as a renowned thief. He excels in intelligence extraction and covert heists.
5. Lina Chen (AKA Oracle)
• Unique Role: A brilliant financial analyst and a key member of the team. She provides crucial insights into the Hawala Network’s money flow and helps devise strategies to disrupt their financial operations.
6. Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena)
• Unique Role: Raghav Patel is a charismatic and ruthless leader within the Hawala Network, masterminding its clandestine financial operations and ensuring its survival.
7. Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra)
• Unique Role: Harsh Mehta serves as Raghav Patel’s trusted enforcer within the Hawala Network, ensuring compliance, enforcing loyalty, and eliminating threats to the organization.
Relationship Maps:
Arjun Nair (AKA Raven) Vs:
Meera Verma (AKA Ghost)
Surface: Tech ally
Common Ground: Stealing the Ghost Ledger
Conflict: Trust issues. Vanished from their lives and reappeared recently.
History: Besties with Arjun’s sister who betrayed her to the cybercriminal org
Subtext: Mutual dependency; Has a childhood crush on him
Relationship Arc: Friends to Forbidden Love to Hatred
Sofia Petrovna (AKA Chameleon)
Surface: Mysterious infiltrator
Common Ground: Both staked their sisters to the network
Conflict: Mole within the team
History: Worked on unsanctioned covert ops in Eastern Europe
Subtext: Hidden Agendas; Enamoured by her but doesn’t know the real Sofia.
Relationship Arc: From enigma to discovering true identity
Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow)
Surface: Suspicious operative
Common Ground: Stealing the Ghost Ledger; in love with Sofia
Conflict: Disagreement on Arjun’s suspension
History: Took over his position at RAW
Subtext: Suspects Arjun as a double agent
Relationship Arc: from Colleagues to Competitors to Collaborators
Lina Chen (AKA Oracle)
Surface: Financial analyst
Common Ground: Revenge against the Network
Conflict: Her involvement in the Hawala scheme led to his suspension
History: Met on a covert job playing poker at Macau
Subtext: Fear of exposure
Relationship Arc: From Advisor to Adversary to Mutual Redemption
Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena)
Surface: Arch enemy
Common Ground: Both want the Ghost Ledger; Smitten by Sofia
Conflict: Leader-enemy dynamic
History: Long-time adversaries
Subtext: Power struggle
Relationship Arc: Confrontation/Defeat
Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra)
Surface: Personal vendetta
Common Ground: Terror attack
Conflict: Revenge focus
History: Attack on sister
Subtext: Unresolved grief
Relationship Arc: Revenge/Reconciliation
Meera Verma (AKA Ghost) Vs:
Arjun Nair (AKA Raven)
Surface: Hacker Leader
Common Ground: Stealing the Ghost Ledger
Conflict: Trust Uncertainty.
History: Besties with his sister who betrayed her to the cybercriminal org
Subtext: Has a childhood crush on him; Mutual dependency
Relationship Arc: Friends to Forbidden Love to Hatred
Sofia Petrovna (AKA Chameleon)
Surface: Mysterious infiltrator
Common Ground: Good at hiding their real selves.
Conflict: Arjun is smitten by her
History: Arjun’s old crush
Subtext: Wants to prove she’s superior
Relationship Arc: triangle with Arjun
Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow)
Surface: Stealth Operative
Common Ground: Uncovering the mole/betrayer; Surveillance – online vs on-ground
Conflict: Hidden Agendas
History: No direct history; Known through Arjun
Subtext: Hidden Intentions
Relationship Arc: From Teammates to Targets
Lina Chen (AKA Oracle)
Surface: Financial Pro
Common Ground: Redemption
Conflict: Hidden Agendas
History: Connected through Arjun’s sister
Subtext: Past Remorse
Relationship Arc: From Unknown to Allies
Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena)
Surface: Network Overlord
Common Ground: Terror Attack that killed Arjun’s sister
Conflict: Direct opposition
History: Former Cybercriminal org works with Hawala
Subtext: Cyber ghost on their network
Relationship Arc: Ongoing Confrontation
Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra)
Surface: Violent Enforcer
Common Ground: Terror Attack that killed Arjun’s sister
Conflict: Enemy of Ally
History: Former Cybercriminal org works with Hawala
Subtext: Cyber ghost on their network
Relationship Arc: Unpredictable Clash
Sofia Petrovna (AKA Chameleon) Vs:
Arjun Nair (AKA Raven)
Surface: Mission Leader
Common Ground: Both staked their sisters to the network
Conflict: Mole within the team
History: Worked on unsanctioned covert ops in Eastern Europe
Subtext: Hidden Agendas; No one knows the real Sofia.
Relationship Arc: From enigma to revealing true identity
Meera Verma (AKA Ghost)
Surface: Tech Genius
Common Ground: Good at hiding their real selves.
Conflict: Arjun’s crush on her
History: Linked through Arjun
Subtext: Hide her true self
Relationship Arc: Triangle with Arjun
Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow)
Surface: Covert Expert
Common Ground: Stealing the Ghost Ledger
Conflict: Loyalty Questions
History: No Prior Interaction
Subtext: interplay of romance and covert motives
Relationship Arc: from passion to potential heartbreak
Lina Chen (AKA Oracle)
Surface: Financial Wizard
Common Ground: Secret: Helped the Hawala network
Conflict: Past Deceit
History: Macau Job
Subtext: Seeking Redemption
Relationship Arc: Forgiveness/Acceptance
Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena)
Surface: Ultimate Adversary
Common Ground: Wellbeing of sister
Conflict: Blackmail
History: Funded her Acting career as an arms dealer in Eastern Europe
Subtext: Intense Hostility; Smitten by her enigmatic presence
Relationship Arc: Confrontation/Battle
Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra)
Surface: Target of Investigation
Common Ground: Kidnapping of sister
Conflict: Hostile Intent
History: Worked together in the bars – dancer and bouncer
Subtext: Unveiled Secrets
Relationship Arc: Revelation/Conflict
Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow) Vs:
Arjun Nair (AKA Raven)
Surface: Team Leader
Common Ground: Stealing the Ghost Ledger; in love with Sofia
Conflict: Disagreement on Arjun’s suspension
History: Took over his position at RAW
Subtext: Suspects Arjun as a double agent
Relationship Arc: From Colleagues to Competitors to Collaborators
Meera Verma (AKA Ghost)
Surface: Cyber Expert
Common Ground: Uncovering the mole/betrayer; Surveillance – online vs on-ground
Conflict: Hidden Agendas
History: No direct history; Known through Arjun
Subtext: Hidden Intentions
Relationship Arc: From Teammates to Targets
Sofia Petrovna (AKA Chameleon)
Surface: Disguise Artist
Common Ground: Stealing the Ghost Ledger
Conflict: Loyalty Questions
History: No Prior Interaction
Subtext: Complex interplay of love and deception
Relationship Arc: From attraction to clarity to betrayal
Lina Chen (AKA Oracle)
Surface: Financial Guru
Common Ground: Stealing the Ghost Ledger
Conflict: Secretive Past
History: No Prior Interaction
Subtext: Skeptic of her predictions
Relationship Arc: from cynic to believer
Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena)
Surface: Main Adversary
Common Ground: Both looking for a mole
Conflict: Direct Conflict
History: Historical Enemy
Subtext: Intense Animosity
Relationship Arc: Confrontation & Defeat
Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra)
Surface: Ruthless Opponent
Common Ground: Physical prowess & torture
Conflict: Vengeful Opposition
History: Marked by conflict, hostility
Subtext: Wants to show physical superiority
Relationship Arc: Continuous Conflict
Lina Chen (AKA Oracle) Vs:
Arjun Nair (AKA Raven)
Surface: Mission Leader
Common Ground: Revenge against the Network
Conflict: Her involvement in the Hawala scheme led to his suspension
History: Met on a covert job playing poker at Macau
Subtext: Fear of exposure
Relationship Arc: From Advisor to Adversary to Mutual Redemption
Meera Verma (AKA Ghost)
Surface: Tech Expert
Common Ground: Redemption
Conflict: Hidden Agendas
History: Connected through Arjun’s sister
Subtext: Past Remorse
Relationship Arc: From Unknown to Allies
Sofia Petrovna (AKA Chameleon)
Surface: Disguise Expert
Common Ground: Secret: Helped the Hawala network
Conflict: Past Deceit
History: Macau Job
Subtext: Seeking Redemption
Relationship Arc: Forgiveness/Acceptance
Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow)
Surface: Tactical Expert
Common Ground: Stealing the Ghost Ledger
Conflict: Secretive Past
History: No Prior Interaction
Subtext: Skeptic of her predictions
Relationship Arc: from cynic to believer
Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena)
Surface: Nemesis
Common Ground: Deeply enmeshed in the criminal networks, on opposing sides
Conflict: Direct Opposition
History: Prior Victim: Unknowingly helped the network in the past
Subtext: Past Victimhood
Relationship Arc: Inevitable Confrontation
Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra)
Surface: Dark Enforcer
Common Ground: A shared history in the dark realms of crime and manipulation
Conflict: Concealed Animosity
History: Historical animosity for unknowingly helping the network
Subtext: Hidden Rage
Relationship Arc: Unmasking Realities
Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena) Vs:
Arjun Nair (AKA Raven)
Surface: Formidable Foe
Common Ground: Both want the Ghost Ledger; Smitten by Sofia
Conflict: Leader-enemy dynamic
History: Long-time Enemies
Subtext: Deep Hostility
Relationship Arc: Ongoing Confrontation
Meera Verma (AKA Ghost)
Surface: Technological Threat
Common Ground: Terror Attack that killed Arjun’s sister
Conflict: Cyber Conflicts
History: Former Cybercriminal org works with Hawala
Subtext: Mutual Deception
Relationship Arc: Technological Showdown
Sofia Petrovna (AKA Chameleon)
Surface: Stealth Adversary
Common Ground: Wellbeing of sister
Conflict: Blackmail
History: Funded her Acting career as an arms dealer in Eastern Europe
Subtext: Smitten by her enigmatic presence
Relationship Arc: Revealing Intentions
Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow)
Surface: Covert Threat
Common Ground: Both looking for a mole
Conflict: Subterfuge Battles
History: Operational Clashes
Subtext: Distrust and Suspicion
Relationship Arc: Unfolding Confrontations
Lina Chen (AKA Oracle)
Surface: Financial Nuisance
Common Ground: financial manipulation
Conflict: Financial Feuds
History: Prior Victim: Unknowingly helped the network in the past
Subtext: Past Victimhood
Relationship Arc: Inevitable Confrontation
Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra)
Surface: Loyal Enforcer
Common Ground: Loyalty to Network
Conflict: Obedience vs. Morality
History: Shared Dark Secrets
Subtext: Depths of Loyalty
Relationship Arc: Evolving Loyalties
Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra) Vs:
Arjun Nair (AKA Raven)
Surface: Mortal Enemy
Common Ground: Terror attack
Conflict: Vengeance Focus
History: Attack on sister
Subtext: Unresolved Hatred
Relationship Arc: Path to Confrontation
Meera Verma (AKA Ghost)
Surface: Digital Adversary
Common Ground: Terror Attack that killed Arjun’s sister
Conflict: Cyber Conflict
History: Former Cybercriminal org works with Hawala
Subtext: Cyber ghost on their network
Relationship Arc: Battles in the Shadows
Sofia Petrovna (AKA Chameleon)
Surface: Invisible Threat
Common Ground: Kidnapping of sister
Conflict: Mystery and Uncertainty
History: Worked together in the bars – dancer and bouncer
Subtext: Unveiled Secrets
Relationship Arc: Unfolding Mysteries
Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow)
Surface: Stealth Opposition
Common Ground: Physical prowess & torture
Conflict: Shadow Conflicts
History: strategic confrontations and covert battles
Subtext: Wants to show physical superiority
Relationship Arc: Covert Confrontations
Lina Chen (AKA Oracle)
Surface: Economic Rival
Common Ground: clandestine networks of crime and deceit
Conflict: Financial Foes
History: Historical animosity for unknowingly helping the network
Subtext: Hidden Rivalries
Relationship Arc: Financial Warfare
Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena)
Surface: Loyal Ally
Common Ground: Criminal Association
Conflict: Obedience and Secrecy
History: Dark Collaborations
Subtext: Trust and Suspicion
Relationship Arc: Test of Loyalties
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Etta’s Relationship Map
What I learned about this
This is hard, and it seems like it is harder because it is comedy
For Scandal
For my show
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Gayla Betts: Assignment #1: THE MORNING SHOW / Episodes 1-6
Relationship Map for Alex Levy
Alex and Bradley:
Surface: Co-hosts
Common Ground: Background reporting, both have painful family issues
Relationship Conflict: Competition, Bradley doesn’t respect Alex for her experience, Alex suspects Bradley trying to be top dog.
Relationship History: Though they’ve known each other only a week, Bradley has rebelled professionally, but softened personally.
Relationship Subtext: More alike than realized? Can they be friends?
Relationship Arc: Not knowing each other, not trusting each other, fiercely irritated with one another, opening up to perhaps being friends.
Alex and Chip:
Surface: Producer
Common Ground: Both understand network culture.
Relationship Conflict: Have different goals; Alex wants to stay on top, Chip afraid he’ll lose his job.
Relationship History: Worked together 15 years.
Relationship Subtext: She expects him to have her back. Can she trust him?
Relationship Arc: Came up through the ranks, she expects him to have her back, will he let her down?
Alex and Jason:
Surface: Husband
Common Ground: Married, have a daughter together.
Relationship Conflict: Not getting what they want from the other. She wants to stay married for appearances. He feels taken for granted.
Relationship History: Longtime marriage, keeping façade while separated. He’s always covered for her.
Relationship Subtext: They developed as friends, are together for daughter.
Relationship Arc: She’s taken him for granted to the point he’s asked for a divorce. She will have to deal with life without him.
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Gayla Betts’ Show Relationship Map – Assignment #2
What I learned doing this assignment was that AI gives me freedom to think outside the box and change components without too much stress, but not to rely on AI for verbatim answers and make my own decisions. It’s also really good to do the relationship map from each character’s POV.
#1: Jess Harper
Relationship with Lilah:
Surface: Proprietor of the café – become friends
Common ground: Mythic Café – a magical connection.Conflict: Jess doesn’t know if she should trust Lilah.
History: They are getting to know each other and Jess suspects Lilah knows more than she shares.
Subtext: They are building trust, but not immediately.
Arc: Strangers to friends to being Lilah’s mentee.Relationship with Gabriel Frost:
Surface: Jess finds him strangely attractive yet irksome.
Common ground: Magical connection.
Conflict: Jess finds him overly nosy.
History: Jess is wary of Gabriel.
Subtext: Jess is surprisingly drawn to him though he provokes her.
Arc: Opposite interests to mutual interests to friends, to potential love interest.Relationship with Senator Rebecca Jackson:
Surface: Has met her at political events.
Common ground: They both know her father on different levels.
Conflict: Jess is suspicious of the Senator and doesn’t like her. The Senator has political ambitions.
History: The senator has tried to act like a surrogate mother and Jess sees through her.
Subtext: Jess thinks the Senator is after her father’s affections.
Arc: Acquaintances to arch enemies.#2: Lilah Thornwood
Relationship with Jess:
Surface: Jess seeks refuge in her café.
Common ground: They have a magical connection.
Conflict: Lilah has more experience that she’s not sure she wants to share with Jess as not sure she if can trust.
History: Lilah knew Jess’ mother.
Subtext: Lilah holds some guilt about Jess’ mother.
Arc: Strangers to mentoring Jess.Relationship with Gabriel Frost:
Surface: They have known each other for a long time.
Common ground: The magical realm.
Conflict: They don’t agree on methodology.
History: Gabriel has burnt Lilah in the past.
Subtext: They each other’s weaknesses which reins them in.
Arc: Pseudo-friends to deep allies.Relationship with Senator Rebecca Jackson:
Surface: Have never met.
Common ground: Jess
Conflict: Lilah will protect Jess, Rebecca will use her.
History: None.
Subtext: Lilah knows what’s best for Jess.
Arc: Strangers to an ultimate conflict.#3: Gabriel Frost
Relationship with Jess:
Surface: Immediate attraction to this stranger.
Common ground: Magical connection
Conflict: He knows she will become a political hot potato and not sure if he wants to get involved.
History: He knows her mother.
Subtext: He weighs his options of helping Jess.Arc: Strangers to verbal sparring to helping to love interest
Relationship with Lilah:
Surface: They go way back.
Common ground: They have a deep understanding of the magical realm.
Conflict: They don’t have the same morals.
History: They’ve been on opposite sides of conflicts before but have managed to remain friends.
Subtext: Can he trust her?Arc: adversaries to friends to comrades
Relationship with Senator Rebecca Jackson:
Surface: They haven’t met.
Common ground: Interest in magicals.
Conflict: Jess’ best interests
History: None yet.
Subtext: Will Gabriel fall prey to Rebecca’s charms?Arc: Adversaries to flirtatious to enemies.
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Joan Macbeth’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is that I’m already working with too many characters in my project. I observed in my example show “The Handmaid’s Tale” how they set up their main characters – one each to represent each strata of their society: One Commander, One Commander’s Wife, One Martha (house servant) One Eye (man who is combo security guard/driver/helper but also probably a spy) One Aunt (keeper of handmaids). The exception is the handmaid characters, where there are a few connected characters that show up every so often but they’re not really driving the main story. Usually the other handmaid does something wrong, which is a warning to our heroine not to go out of bounds. Then there are a ton of extras: commander scenes, commanders’ wives scenes, aunts controlling the handmaids scenes, scenes of guards everywhere. (So definitely three circles of characters!)
With respect to my own show – it’s that inner circle of connected characters which seems very large. I will be thinking of characters that can be combined, or perhaps another way to structure the planned episodes. My Relationship Map is a work in progress!
ChatGPT was able to produce a table, but most of it seemed pretty generic.
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BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 6: Build Your Character Relationship Map
Sylvia’s “Show Relationship Map”
What I learned doing this assignment is…how temperamental AI is. ChatGPT has been crashing since yesterday so, I used Bard. It’s harder to copy and paste from.
The assignment itself is intriguing. I see much more in the “why” I enjoy the characters. The depth explained is interesting to see how I can transfer the ideas into my own writing.
Assignment #1:
TV Relationship Map table not transferring…
Assignment #2: AI
M1 L6 AI in Bard Prompt (ChatGPT has crashed 11-8-23)
Create a TABLE showing the relationship between these four [Characters] for a Serial TV series that is [Format / Genre] about [Concept].
Relationship means how these two characters relate or interact or feel about each other within the categories provided.
Please tell us the [Main Character] experience of the other characters in these areas – Common Ground, Relationship Conflict, Relationship History, Relationship Subtext, and Relationship Arc.
Title it “Character Relationships for [Main Character]”. This will compare the Main Character to each of the other characters. Across the top of the table, list the names of [Main Character] in the far left hand box, then [Character 2], [Character 3], [Character 4]. In the left hand column, under the Main Character’s name, present a row for each of these categories — Common Ground, Relationship Conflict, Relationship History, Relationship Subtext, and Relationship Arc. Where each column and row intersect, fill in that part of the relationship between the Main Character and that column’s character.
Format / Genre = Dramady
Concept = In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past.
Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients
Main Character = Emily Montclair
– Unique Role: Emily Montclair is a wealthy socialite with a passion for philanthropy. She is the driving force behind charity galas in the town, using her charm and resources to support the local hospital. However, she harbors a secret desire to reconnect with her estranged daughter, whom she gave up for adoption years ago.
– Secret or Intrigue: Emily’s philanthropic work brings her into the mysterious world of the hospital’s pediatric ward, where she starts to uncover unsettling secrets and supernatural occurrences that have remained hidden for years.
Character 2 = Abigail Montclair (Emily’s Estranged Daughter)
– Unique Role: Abigail is a talented investigative journalist who resents her mother, Emily, for giving her up for adoption when she was a baby. She is determined to uncover the truth about her past and her mother’s involvement in the hospital’s mysteries.
– Secret or Intrigue: Abigail secretly infiltrates the hospital to investigate the hospital’s secrets, unaware that she’ll cross paths with her estranged mother in the process.
Character 3 = Unique Role: Lily is a no-nonsense, dedicated nurse working in the pediatric ward. She’s known for her unwavering commitment to her young patients, often acting as their guardian angel. Lily develops a deep connection with Emily as she helps her navigate the strange occurrences within the hospital.
– Secret or Intrigue: Lily has a unique ability to communicate with the “Ghostly Guardians” of pediatric patients, a skill she keeps hidden from her colleagues and the world at large.
Character 4 = Abigail Montclair (Emily’s Estranged Daughter)
– Unique Role: Abigail is a talented investigative journalist who resents her mother, Emily, for giving her up for adoption when she was a baby. She is determined to uncover the truth about her past and her mother’s involvement in the hospital’s mysteries.
– Secret or Intrigue: Abigail secretly infiltrates the hospital to investigate the hospital’s secrets, unaware that she’ll cross paths with her estranged mother in the process.
ANSWERS from Bard:
Tables not transferring…
Anyone know how to upload a PDF from BARD?
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Phyllis’ Show Relationship Map
What I learned from this assignment is that I have to sharpen the conflict among my characters and I need to think more about their character arcs with each other over the season.
Assignment 1
Sample Show: The Walking Dead
Protagonist: Rick/Love Interest: Lori
- Surface: Marriage-Wife
- Common Ground: Marriage. Their son.
- Conflict: How to survive
- History: Troubled Marriage
- Subtext: Non- confrontational
- Relationship Arc: From estrangement to love
Protagonist: Rick/Partner: Shane
- Surface: Sheriff Partner
- Common Ground: Both protectors
- Conflict: In love with Rick’s wife Lori
- History: Close Friendship
- Subtext: Anger and Jealousy
- Relationship Arc: From friendship to antagonism
<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Protagonist: Rick/Adversary: Darryl
<ul style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>- Surface: Adversaries
- Common Ground: Both have good instincts and are stubborn
- Conflict: Darryl’s more aggressive and impulsive
- History: Rick left Darryl’s brother to die in Atlanta
- Subtext: Grudging respect
- Relationship Arc: From adversaries to allies
Assignment 2
Diana Sagraves/Mark
- Surface: Antagonists during past Senate inquiries
- Common Ground: Ambitious, morally flexible
- Conflict: He’s impatient and she wants to go slow and correct the experiment’s unforeseen flaws
- History: She testified in front of his Senate Committee
- Subtext: Unresolved romantic interest
- Relationship Arc: From antagonism to a modicum of trust
Diana Sagraves/Peter
- Surface: Former colleagues
- Common Ground: Project success is most important
- Conflict: He wants to cover-up problems and she doesn’t care as long as they’re solving them
- History: Romantic relationship a long time ago
- Subtext: Mutual exploitation
- Relationship Arc: From wariness to conspirators
Diana Sagraves/Suzanne
- Surface: Fellow Test Subject
- Common Ground: Strong, talented
- Conflict: Suzanne doesn’t share Diana’s agenda of making the project’s success the first priority
- History: She was admired by Diana, from afar
- Subtext: Mutual respect
- Relationship Arc: From strangers to allies
Mark Ashburn/Peter
- Surface: Washington to Silicon Valley connections
- Common Ground: Ego-driven, controlling
- Conflict: He wants to serve his country, while Peter wants to make a fortune off the tech
- History: He helped Peter clear regulatory hurdles
- Subtext: Competition
- Relationship Arc: From cooperation to competition
Mark Ashburn/Suzanne
- Surface: Former Campaign Supporter
- Common Ground: Want a do-over, he as a politician, Suzanne as a wife and mother
- Conflict: He wants Suzanne’s help with his campaign
- History: Donated funds to his previous campaigns
- Subtext: Frustration
- Relationship Arc: From acquaintances to adversaries
Peter Barnett/Suzanne
- Surface: Philanthropic Connections
- Common Ground: Tops in their fields, driven
- Conflict: He doesn’t want Suzanne’s war with her children to lead to bad publicity for the project
- History: They’ve met at philanthropic events
- Subtext: Grudging respect
- Relationship Arc: From acquaintances to reluctant allies
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Phyllis Strong. Reason: Changed some relationships and arcs due to additional AI exploration
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Could someone please post Lesson #6 here. Can’t access it. Thanks.
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I’ve been informed by Cheryl that Lessson 6 & 7 will be up sometime this week.
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Yup. Missing mine too. I’ve sent in two CS requests. Darn, I was on a roll too…
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Seems odd who is picked to get the assignments and who isn’t. Putting my name in as one who has NOT – in case someone there needs to know.
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I think it may have some thing to do with the date that you signed up for the program.
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That’s what I was told as well, but I signed up the day it was announced and am not receiving assignments. Maybe the first to sign up is the last to get them?
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I don’t think that is it. I signed up when it was announced and I don’t have any of the remaining assignments for module 1 and mine only goes to Module 3 with very few lessons for those modules.
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I get the feeling that people posting the assignment here are using the pre-AI versions of the lessons. I have those as well since I took the class in 2019, but I’m going to wait for the new versions as they have been updated in other ways as well.
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PJ’s relationships.
This task has enlightened me to the importance of fostering stronger connections within a complex web of conflicts that may unfold over extended periods.
Sera’s Relationship Dynamics:
1. Sera and Draven:
– Surface: Closest friends, inseparable, partners in The Mind Code.
– Common Ground: Twin siblings, both geniuses.
– Conflict: Draven doubts the Mind Code’s potential for anything other than harm.
– History: They grew up isolated together.
– Subtext: Sera is concerned about Draven’s mental well-being.
– Relationship Arc: Transitioning from codependent siblings to becoming the most sought-after figures in Purgatory.
2. Sera and Elizabeth:
– Surface: Elizabeth is Rhea’s mentor and the financier of the Mind Code project.
– Common Ground: Both believe the Mind Code can alleviate human suffering.
– Conflict: Elizabeth aims to perfect the Mind Code for personal gain, while Sera wants to use it for the benefit of humanity.
– History: Elizabeth has steadfastly supported Sera.
– Subtext: Sera conveys a sense of superiority towards Elizabeth.
– Relationship Arc: Evolving from mentorship to a more complex, adversarial relationship.
3. Sera and Price:
– Surface: Price has been closely investigating Sera’s code for an extended period.
– Common Ground: Both are exceptionally stubborn.
– Conflict: Price seeks access to Sera’s code, but she refuses.
– History: Price has been monitoring Sera since she demonstrated consciousness.
– Subtext: Sera finds solace in Price’s presence.
– Relationship Arc: Progressing from investigator and investigated to determined allies united against Purgatory.
4. Sera and Albert:
– Surface: Albert is Sera’s grandfather and confidant.
– Common Ground: They share a belief in extraterrestrial intelligence.
– Conflict: Sera yearns for Albert’s belief in her.
– History: Albert played a crucial role in Sera’s education.
– Subtext: Sera keeps certain facts concealed from Albert.
– Relationship Arc: Transforming from mentor and protege to a more protective, grandfatherly bond.
5. Sera and Charlotte:
– Surface: Mother and daughter.
– Common Ground: Both aspire to communicate with extraterrestrial intelligence.
– Conflict: Charlotte harbors distrust towards Elizabeth.
– History: Charlotte maintained a strict, controlling environment for Sera.
– Subtext: Sera resents her mother for the isolation she endured.
– Relationship Arc: Shifting from a strained mother-daughter connection to a deeper, loving bond.
6. Sera and Troi:
– Surface: A famous person and her bodyguard.
– Common Ground: Both prioritize their safety.
– Conflict: Troi exhibits an overprotective nature.
– History: Troi has stood by Sera since their college days.
– Subtext: Troi holds romantic feelings for Sera.
– Relationship Arc: Moving from a trusted bodyguard to apparent betrayal and abandonment.
7. Sera and Avaya:
– Surface: Soul Twins.
– Common Ground: They need each other to transcend.
– Conflict: They harbor intense hatred for one another.
– History: Avaya is privy to all of Sera’s actions and resents her for them.
– Subtext: Sera yearns for Avaya’s acceptance and forgiveness.
– Relationship Arc: Transitioning from discovering each other to outright animosity.
Draven’s Relationship Dynamics:
1. Draven and Albert:
– Surface: Grandson and grandfather.
– Common Ground: They have been together for an extended time.
– Conflict: Draven feels envious of the attention Albert bestows on Sera.
– History: Albert has been a significant figure in Draven’s life.
– Subtext: Bitter resentment lingers.
– Relationship Arc: Evolving from a typical grandfather-grandson relationship to becoming battle-hardened allies.
2. Draven and Elizabeth:
– Surface: Boss and employee.
– Common Ground: Both support Sera’s research.
– Conflict: Draven suspects Elizabeth has ulterior motives.
– History: Elizabeth accepts Draven primarily because of his association with Sera.
– Subtext: Draven conceals information from Elizabeth.
– Relationship Arc: Progressing from boss-employee dynamics to a situation where they are being hunted by and hunting each other.
3. Draven and Price:
– Surface: Mentor and protege.
– Common Ground: Both are dedicated to protecting Sera.
– Conflict: Price is training Draven for a mysterious purpose he cannot reveal.
– History: Price has taken Draven under his wing.
– Subtext: Price holds Draven in high regard, akin to a son.
– Relationship Arc: Transitioning from a father-son dynamic fraught with tension to a formidable, united fighting duo.
4. Draven and Cronus:
– Surface: Soul Twins.
– Common Ground: They are interdependent for their transcendence.
– Conflict: They cannot love each other despite their deep longing.
– History: Their lives have been marked by a profound yearning for each other.
– Subtext: Draven aims to prove himself to his twin.
– Relationship Arc: Shifting from longing to an urgent, indispensable need.
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Can anyone who reads this post the assignment so we can start doing it also?
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Yes I agree with James I would truly appreciate that.I don’t have a lot of time and must schedule the home work in –
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Here it is for those who are missing it in lessons 🙂
BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 6: Build Your Character Relationship Map
cheryl croasmun October 13, 2023
Hi everyone,
Character relationships are a big part of any TV series. Throughout a series, you’ll be bringing characters together in many ways. Sometimes, you’ll create relationships. Sometimes, you’ll destroy them. Either way, relationships are the cause of much of the drama and intrigue in your show.
In some ways, relationships are as important as characters.
But here is the key: Relationships need to have multiple layers to work for an ongoing series.
Today, you will create a relationship map that shows the relationships each of the main characters have and gives us multiple layers of basic understanding. Combine this with Lesson 2: Engaging Character, Lesson 3: Layers of Character Intrigue, and Lesson 4: Depth of Emotion, and you will have endless amounts of intriguing set ups for the show.
OBJECTIVE: Create distinct and unique character relationships that are clearly defined on multiple levels, thus making it easier to write interesting interactions between them.
Don’t worry. It will actually be easy. Just take the steps I give you today and you’ll be surprised how much depth this process will create for your show.
WHAT IS A RELATIONSHIP?
Usually, when people say “I have a relationship with them,” they mean they have a “good” relationship. They like each other. But in reality, even if two people hate each other, there is still a relationship.
Definition of Relationship: A connection, association, or involvement between people.
To get this, let’s think of the two extremes; love and hate. If two people love each other deeply, they can’t stop thinking about each other. They feel emotional when in each other’s presence. They plan for their interactions together. They obsess about their moments together. Anything they have done together becomes imbued with emotion. Right?
Isn’t all of that also true for two people who hate each other?
Why is this important to know? Because those two extreme experiences are identical; except for the specific emotion. In fact, take any extreme emotion and plug it in there and you’ll see similar results. Consider the relationships that are created when two people are experiencing suspicion or jealousy or competition or have a common enemy or in a power struggle with each other. If they are on the same side, it is a bonding relationship. If they are on opposite sides, it is a adversial relationship.
The point is that relationship happens when any two people interact. Our job as writers is to make that connection, association, or involvement interesting and emotional.
GIVING RELATIONSHIPS MULTIPLE LAYERS
One of the easiest ways to create interesting relationships is to look beneath the surface. The good news is that this is easy to do. You just have to ask the questions and see what answers show up for you. Then, you allow the relationships to evolve as you take future steps.
To accomplish this, we’ll use our unique Relationship Map.
Essentially, we’re going to map out one character’s relationships with the other characters. Then, we will move to another character, comparing them to the others, etc..
EXAMPLE: The Relationship Map for Chuck Rhoades on the show BILLIONS might look like this:
THE SPECIFICS OF THE RELATIONSHIP MAP
When looking at the Relationship Map, you’ll notice that we’ve listed the relationships that Chuck has with Bobby Axelrod, Wendy Rhoades, and Brian Connerty. With each relationship, we’ve looked at the following categories:
Surface:Common Ground:Conflict:History:Subtext:Relationship Arc:WHY IS THIS SO IMPORTANT?
The instant thing that this allows us to do is to look beneath the surface of the relationship. If you have two police officers working together, on the surface, they are partners. Beneath the surface, they could have all kinds of things going on — hating each other, competing, cheating, backstabbing, setting the other up for a fall, etc..
Our job is to EXPLORE the possibilities, then make decisions that could create drama in the show. But just to be clear, you do not need the perfect answers right now. In fact, I encourage you to use the “fill in the blanks” strategy to come up with AN answer — any answer that is in the ballpark. Then “keep the question open” so you can improve it in the future.
THE CATEGORIES OF THE RELATIONSHIP MAP
As you are working with each of these, remember you are not talking about a single character, but instead about the RELATIONSHIP of each character with the main character.
Surface: How does this relationship appear on the surface? Are they teammates, competitors, drinking buddies, married couple, business partners, co-anchors, friends, or what?
Common Ground: What do they have in common? Job, school, friends, goals, needs, values, beliefs, experience, background, common enemies, etc.. Look for what these two share. Even if they hate each other, they likely have something in common. It will all come in handy as you write the show.
Conflict: What things, issues, or situations will they fight about? Power, control, property, relationships, jealousy, competition, betrayal, different political views, physical conflicts, etc.. First look for the big conflicts because those will be the ones that run throughout the entire season.
History: What is the past of this relationship that makes it what it is today? Are they old lovers? Did they fight like cats and dogs? Was one superior to the other? Did one betray the other? There may be thousands of details, but you are looking for the moments that define this relationship.
Subtext: What is under the surface, hidden, or covert? Unexpressed love or hate, competition, schemes, or maybe it is a secret that has been present the whole time, but won’t come out until the season finale!
Relationship Arc: Where does the relationship start at the beginning of the series and end at the completion of the season? From friends to enemies. From unknown to lovers. From competitors to partners. From suspicion to believing in each other. Think of how the relationship might change by the end of the season.
DIFFERENCE BETWEEN RELATIONSHIP AND CHARACTER
It is easy to focus on character, rather than relationship. For example, Relationship History is not the history of one character, but rather the past experiences between these two people.
When creating your own Relationship Map, you want to brainstorm possible answers for each of the categories. When you do, just compare the characters to each other and ask “How might these characters have related to each other in this category?”
BASIC RELATIONSHIP MAP
Use this Relationship Map document. Across the top, list a main character, then the characters they will interact with the most. From there, just fill in the blanks for each category.
DOWNLOAD the Relationship Map with this link: https://s3.amazonaws.com/bingeworthytv/tv-relationship-map-5.docx
<hr>ASSIGNMENT 1:
Watch the next episode of your Example Show and focus on ONE of the main characters and how they interact with others. Notice how much you discover that could go into their Relationship Map.
Create a Relationship Map for one lead character and their relationship with three others.
Purpose: Give you a deeper experience of the relationships in a well written show.
Deadline: 24 hours
<hr>ASSIGNMENT 2:
1. Create a Relationship Map for THREE lead characters from YOUR SHOW IDEA.
2. Using the Relationship map, pick a main character (place in upper left hand corner), and with each character he or she is in relationship with, give us the 6 relationship experiences listed below:
Surface:Common Ground:Conflict:History:Subtext:Relationship Arc:
3. Do the same process for the second lead character and the third lead character.
4. Answer the question, “What I learned doing this assignment is…?” and put it at the top of your work.
5. Post your assignment in the forums at https://www.screenwritingclasses.com/forums/
Subject line: (Your Name’s) Show Relationship Map (place in first line)
Deadline: 3 days (including both Assignment 1 + 2)
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As with previous lessons, just fill in the blanks with whatever comes to you. Then start putting together the puzzle. And leave the question open so you can continue to discover more about these character relationships.
The most important thing is to ask the question and see what emerges. As you do, know that you are free to change or evolve these relationships at any time in the future.
Have fun creating relationships!
Hal
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Thanks, Helen! Maybe you should be working in Customer Service. 😃
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@helen-roberts Hi Helen. The relationship map for the Billions example is not showing up. Could you please post the table. Thanks a bunch.
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BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 6: Build Your Character Relationship Map
cheryl croasmun October 13, 2023
Hi everyone,
Character relationships are a big part of any TV series. Throughout a series, you’ll be bringing characters together in many ways. Sometimes, you’ll create relationships. Sometimes, you’ll destroy them. Either way, relationships are the cause of much of the drama and intrigue in your show.
In some ways, relationships are as important as characters.
But here is the key: Relationships need to have multiple layers to work for an ongoing series.
Today, you will create a relationship map that shows the relationships each of the main characters have and gives us multiple layers of basic understanding. Combine this with Lesson 2: Engaging Character, Lesson 3: Layers of Character Intrigue, and Lesson 4: Depth of Emotion, and you will have endless amounts of intriguing set ups for the show.
OBJECTIVE: Create distinct and unique character relationships that are clearly defined on multiple levels, thus making it easier to write interesting interactions between them.
Don’t worry. It will actually be easy. Just take the steps I give you today and you’ll be surprised how much depth this process will create for your show.
WHAT IS A RELATIONSHIP?
Usually, when people say “I have a relationship with them,” they mean they have a “good” relationship. They like each other. But in reality, even if two people hate each other, there is still a relationship.
Definition of Relationship: A connection, association, or involvement between people.
To get this, let’s think of the two extremes; love and hate. If two people love each other deeply, they can’t stop thinking about each other. They feel emotional when in each other’s presence. They plan for their interactions together. They obsess about their moments together. Anything they have done together becomes imbued with emotion. Right?
Isn’t all of that also true for two people who hate each other?
Why is this important to know? Because those two extreme experiences are identical; except for the specific emotion. In fact, take any extreme emotion and plug it in there and you’ll see similar results. Consider the relationships that are created when two people are experiencing suspicion or jealousy or competition or have a common enemy or in a power struggle with each other. If they are on the same side, it is a bonding relationship. If they are on opposite sides, it is a adversial relationship.
The point is that relationship happens when any two people interact. Our job as writers is to make that connection, association, or involvement interesting and emotional.
GIVING RELATIONSHIPS MULTIPLE LAYERS
One of the easiest ways to create interesting relationships is to look beneath the surface. The good news is that this is easy to do. You just have to ask the questions and see what answers show up for you. Then, you allow the relationships to evolve as you take future steps.
To accomplish this, we’ll use our unique Relationship Map.
Essentially, we’re going to map out one character’s relationships with the other characters. Then, we will move to another character, comparing them to the others, etc..
EXAMPLE: The Relationship Map for Chuck Rhoades on the show BILLIONS might look like this:
THE SPECIFICS OF THE RELATIONSHIP MAP
When looking at the Relationship Map, you’ll notice that we’ve listed the relationships that Chuck has with Bobby Axelrod, Wendy Rhoades, and Brian Connerty. With each relationship, we’ve looked at the following categories:
Surface:Common Ground:Conflict:History:Subtext:Relationship Arc:WHY IS THIS SO IMPORTANT?
The instant thing that this allows us to do is to look beneath the surface of the relationship. If you have two police officers working together, on the surface, they are partners. Beneath the surface, they could have all kinds of things going on — hating each other, competing, cheating, backstabbing, setting the other up for a fall, etc..
Our job is to EXPLORE the possibilities, then make decisions that could create drama in the show. But just to be clear, you do not need the perfect answers right now. In fact, I encourage you to use the “fill in the blanks” strategy to come up with AN answer — any answer that is in the ballpark. Then “keep the question open” so you can improve it in the future.
THE CATEGORIES OF THE RELATIONSHIP MAP
As you are working with each of these, remember you are not talking about a single character, but instead about the RELATIONSHIP of each character with the main character.
Surface: How does this relationship appear on the surface? Are they teammates, competitors, drinking buddies, married couple, business partners, co-anchors, friends, or what?
Common Ground: What do they have in common? Job, school, friends, goals, needs, values, beliefs, experience, background, common enemies, etc.. Look for what these two share. Even if they hate each other, they likely have something in common. It will all come in handy as you write the show.
Conflict: What things, issues, or situations will they fight about? Power, control, property, relationships, jealousy, competition, betrayal, different political views, physical conflicts, etc.. First look for the big conflicts because those will be the ones that run throughout the entire season.
History: What is the past of this relationship that makes it what it is today? Are they old lovers? Did they fight like cats and dogs? Was one superior to the other? Did one betray the other? There may be thousands of details, but you are looking for the moments that define this relationship.
Subtext: What is under the surface, hidden, or covert? Unexpressed love or hate, competition, schemes, or maybe it is a secret that has been present the whole time, but won’t come out until the season finale!
Relationship Arc: Where does the relationship start at the beginning of the series and end at the completion of the season? From friends to enemies. From unknown to lovers. From competitors to partners. From suspicion to believing in each other. Think of how the relationship might change by the end of the season.
DIFFERENCE BETWEEN RELATIONSHIP AND CHARACTER
It is easy to focus on character, rather than relationship. For example, Relationship History is not the history of one character, but rather the past experiences between these two people.
When creating your own Relationship Map, you want to brainstorm possible answers for each of the categories. When you do, just compare the characters to each other and ask “How might these characters have related to each other in this category?”
BASIC RELATIONSHIP MAP
Use this Relationship Map document. Across the top, list a main character, then the characters they will interact with the most. From there, just fill in the blanks for each category.
DOWNLOAD the Relationship Map with this link: https://s3.amazonaws.com/bingeworthytv/tv-relationship-map-5.docx
<hr>ASSIGNMENT 1:
Watch the next episode of your Example Show and focus on ONE of the main characters and how they interact with others. Notice how much you discover that could go into their Relationship Map.
Create a Relationship Map for one lead character and their relationship with three others.
Purpose: Give you a deeper experience of the relationships in a well written show.
Deadline: 24 hours
<hr>ASSIGNMENT 2:
1. Create a Relationship Map for THREE lead characters from YOUR SHOW IDEA.
2. Using the Relationship map, pick a main character (place in upper left hand corner), and with each character he or she is in relationship with, give us the 6 relationship experiences listed below:
Surface:Common Ground:Conflict:History:Subtext:Relationship Arc:
3. Do the same process for the second lead character and the third lead character.
4. Answer the question, “What I learned doing this assignment is…?” and put it at the top of your work.
5. Post your assignment in the forums at https://www.screenwritingclasses.com/forums/
Subject line: (Your Name’s) Show Relationship Map (place in first line)
Deadline: 3 days (including both Assignment 1 + 2)
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As with previous lessons, just fill in the blanks with whatever comes to you. Then start putting together the puzzle. And leave the question open so you can continue to discover more about these character relationships.
The most important thing is to ask the question and see what emerges. As you do, know that you are free to change or evolve these relationships at any time in the future.
Have fun creating relationships!
Hal
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Copyright 2017 – 2021, Hal Croasmun, All rights reserved
http://ScreenwritingU.com -
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Hi, Helen,
Thanks for posting. It seems missing a PROMPT. I have lessons from the regular BWTV course I took awhile ago, but not the AI PROMPTS for this lesson.
I tried to create a table via Chat GPT, and struggled, until I straight forward asked AI to give me a prompt to create a table prompt. Bizarre, right? It did suggest a prompr, but, it seems like an extra effort to write, so, I gave up.
So… I wonder, if you have a current lesson with the AI prompt, or used the old one? :0)
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There was not a prompt in the lesson I have for my class here, and the title of the lesson is <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 6: Build Your Character Relationship Map. 🙄 Guess we will have to ask, cause I could have sworn I watched Hal in the video paste one in AI.
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He did paste one. He also said don’t worry about what the prompt is, it will be in the lesson. It’s probably a complicated prompt to set up the grid. Much easier to copy/paste the prompt from the upcoming lesson.
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Hi, Brent. You’re right. He did the table on the vid, which, admittedly, I failed to create by not knowing the how to prompt.
I don’t even have Lesson 6 & 7 posted (to be unlocked later) on my “Your Screenwriting Classes” thread. idk. I made it up to Example of Queen’s Gambit and it won’t let me go any further than that.
Notably, Hal’s first intro recording vid shows 12 lessons for module 1.
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Hey guys, just a thought for those that do not have lessons unlocked. I had to click on the bottom of each lesson that it was competed, before the next was showing as available. Just mentioning in case some of you hadn’t figured it out, and I didn’t think it was obvious. Some do say they are not available until a specified date, but those are in the next module in my class content. I hope this is helpful 🙂
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Hi all, just an update – I managed to get ChatGPT to create the table properly by tweaking the lesson instructions. I have posted the process with my show below, sorry it’s so long, but I hope this helps. Note, I included quite a bit of detail from the previous class in the characters =
After it created the relationships, I used this prompt and it spit it out as tables:
“Can you create 3 different table’s for the relationships and input the information you just gave into those charts”
Create a Relationship Map in a table format for [THREE lead characters] from this [TV show concept].
2. Using the Relationship map, pick a main character (place in upper left hand corner), and with each character he or she is in relationship with, give us the 6 relationship experiences listed below:
Surface:
Common Ground:
Conflict:
History:
Subtext:
Relationship Arc:
3. Do the same process for the second lead character and the third lead character.
Concept = Eighteen year old Bethany Ayzariyyah – Highly gifted medium, descendent of Lazereth of Bethany, discovers she has awakened paranormal powers, and by touching a likeness of a deceased person, she can communicate with them. With the help of her BFF’s Ghost, she goes on a hunt to solves cold cases, and find her BFF’s murderer.
3 lead characters = 1. BETHANY AYZARIYYAH A. Situational Hope / Fear: Hope: Bethany hopes to use her paranormal powers to bring justice to the deceased and their families by solving cold cases. Fear: She fears the unknown origin of her powers and whether they could lead to unintended consequences. B. Motivation: Want / Need Want: Bethany wants to uncover the truth behind her abilities and her connection to Lazereth of Bethany. Need: She needs to find her best friend Rachel’s murderer to provide closure for both herself and Ghost. C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion / Public Mask Base Negative Emotion: Bethany struggles with the sadness and grief of losing her best friend, but she often puts on a brave and determined public face. D. Weaknesses Bethany’s vulnerability lies in her curiosity and her desire to seek answers, even when it puts her in dangerous situations. E. Triggers Bethany is triggered by the sight of her best friend Ghost, which pushes her to continue her paranormal investigations and search for Rachel’s killer. The way her father avoids eye contact is another trigger for her. She reminds him too much of her mother. F. Coping Mechanism Bethany copes with her internal struggles by channeling her emotions into solving cold cases and helping ghosts find peace. 2. RACHEL “GHOST” GREENBLUNT A. Situational: Hope / Fear Hope: Ghost hopes to find a way to express her love for Bethany even in her spectral form. Fear: She fears that her romantic feelings for Bethany will never be reciprocated, and she’ll never find peace. B. Motivation: Want / Need Want: Ghost wants to see Bethany happy and fulfilled, even if it means she can’t be with her in the same way. Need: She needs to find her own closure and move on to the afterlife. C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion / Public Mask Base Negative Emotion: Ghost’s base emotion is unrequited love. Hides it behind a cheerful and supportive facade. D. Weaknesses Ghost’s weakness lies in her inability to let go of her feelings for Bethany and her longing to be with her. E. Triggers Seeing Bethany in danger or sad is a trigger for Ghost, motivating her to help and protect her, even from the afterlife. F. Coping Mechanism Ghost copes by assisting Bethany in her investigations, as it keeps her close to the one she loves, even if it’s in spirit form. 3. DR. SCOTT LOGAN A. Situational: Hope / Fear Hope: Dr. Logan hopes to maintain his secret about Bethany’s birth mom and protect her from danger. Fear: He fears that Bethany will discover the truth about her origins and potentially get involved in dangerous situations. B. Motivation: Want / Need Want: Dr. Logan wants to maintain his daughter’s safety and protect her from the paranormal world. Need: He needs to balance his loyalty to his family with his commitment to his job as an FBI medical examiner. C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion / Public Mask Base Negative Emotion: Dr. Logan’s base emotion is guilt for lying to Bethany, but he masks it with protective behavior. D. Weaknesses Dr. Logan’s weakness is his inability to be completely honest with Bethany, which strains their relationship. E. Triggers Discovering Bethany’s involvement in paranormal investigations and the danger she faces is a trigger for Dr. Logan. F. Coping Mechanism Dr. Logan copes by continuing to lie to Bethany to keep her safe, even though it weighs heavily on his conscience.
Here is a table format relationship map for the three lead characters in your TV show concept:
Now, let’s explore the six relationship experiences for each character:
Bethany Ayzariyyah:
Surface: Bethany maintains a close friendship with Ghost and seeks justice for her murder. She also has a strained relationship with her father, Dr. Logan, due to his secrecy.
Common Ground: Bethany and Ghost share a desire to solve cold cases and find Rachel’s killer. She also shares a family connection with her father, Dr. Logan.
Conflict: Bethany’s conflict lies in her internal struggles and the danger her investigations bring. Her strained relationship with Dr. Logan adds to the conflict.
History: Bethany has a history of friendship and shared secrets with Ghost, while her history with Dr. Logan is marked by his efforts to protect her by keeping secrets.
Subtext: The subtext in Bethany’s relationship with Ghost includes unspoken romantic feelings from Ghost’s side. With Dr. Logan, the subtext involves the hidden truth about Bethany’s birth mom.
Relationship Arc: Bethany’s relationship arc with Ghost revolves around finding closure for Rachel’s spirit and potentially addressing their unspoken feelings. Her relationship arc with Dr. Logan involves discovering the truth about her origins and finding a balance between her paranormal investigations and her father’s protective instincts.
Rachel “Ghost” Greenblunt:
Surface: Ghost’s surface relationship is with Bethany, as she supports her paranormal investigations from the afterlife.
Common Ground: Ghost and Bethany share a common goal of solving cold cases and bringing closure to spirits. They also have a deep, unrequited love for each other.
Conflict: Ghost’s internal conflict is her unrequited love for Bethany and her inability to move on to the afterlife. There is no significant external conflict in her relationship with Bethany.
History: Ghost and Bethany have a history of friendship and love, which has continued even beyond death.
Subtext: The subtext in Ghost’s relationship with Bethany is her unspoken romantic love, which she hides behind a cheerful facade.
Relationship Arc: Ghost’s relationship arc revolves around finding a way to move on and express her love for Bethany, even if it means letting go. Her arc with Bethany is about supporting her investigations and ensuring her safety from the afterlife.
Dr. Scott Logan:
Surface: Dr. Logan’s surface relationship is as Bethany’s father and a protector.
Common Ground: He and Bethany share a family bond, and both want to keep her safe, although their methods differ.
Conflict: The conflict in Dr. Logan’s relationship with Bethany arises from his need to keep her safe through secrecy, which strains their trust.
History: Dr. Logan has a history of raising Bethany and concealing the truth about her birth mom from her.
Subtext: The subtext in his relationship with Bethany is his guilt for lying to her, which he masks with protective behavior.
Relationship Arc: Dr. Logan’s relationship arc revolves around maintaining his daughter’s safety, discovering a balance between his loyalty to his family and his job, and eventually coming clean about the truth regarding her origins.
Can you create 3 different table’s for the relationships and input the information you just gave into those charts
Certainly, here are three separate tables for the relationships of the lead characters in your TV show concept.
Note, the table was perfect, unfortunately it won’t let me post it here properly formatted.
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Update, my lesson 6 in the class has had a prompt added to it. If you didn’t before, maybe check again 🙂
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BRIAN BULL – Show Relationship Map
“What I learned from doing this assignment is…
I enjoyed thinking about how each of the characters are intertwined with each other.WEDNESDAY
ASSIGNMENT 1
Watch the next episode of your Example Show and focus on ONE of the main characters and how they interact with others. Notice how much you discover that could go into their Relationship Map.
Create a Relationship Map for one lead character and their relationship with three others.
Purpose: Give you a deeper experience of the relationships in a well written show.TV Relationship Map
WEDNESDAY
ENID
Surface: Roommates / Friends
Common Ground: Share a room
Conflict: Wednesday is B&W, Enid is colorful; Opposites
History: Enid wants desperately to be friends
Subtext: Ying-N-Yang, They need each other
Relationship Arc: From not knowing each other to becoming friendsBIANCA
Surface: Classmates, Adversaries
Common Ground: Fencing, Better than everyone else
Conflict:Wed. & Bianca think that they are better than the other
History: Bianca defeated Wed. in a fencing duel, Wed.’s team beat Bianca’s in a race
Subtext: They push each other to become better
Relationship Arc: From disliking each other to disliking each other even moreXAVIER
Surface: Friends, Love Interest
Common Ground: Childhood friends, History
Conflict: Xavier likes Wed., Wed. has no interest
History: Wed. saved Xavier’s life as a child playing Hide-N-Seek
Subtext: Xavier is just a pawn, Easily manipulated for conspiracies
Relationship Arc: From friends to so-so friendsASSIGNMENT 2
FORESIGHT
JIM BROWN
Delores
Surface: Co-workers / Friends
Common Ground: Looking out for each
Conflict: He doesn’t believe in psychics / She doe.
History: They have worked together 10 years
Subtext: He worries and cares for her well being
Relationship Arc: From mutual respect to controllingGloria
Surface: Love of Jim’s life
Common Ground: Both are in the psychic world
Conflict: Jim is in love, Gloria not so much
History: New relationship
Subtext: Jim will do whatever to win her over
Relationship Arc: From enthralled to obsessiveMom
Surface: Mother / Son
Common Ground: Each other
Conflict: Jim is over-protective
History: Father had a mysterious accident at work
Subtext: Jim doesn’t want anything to happen to his mother
Relationship Arc: From easy-going to overly concernedDELORES
Jim Brown
Surface: Co-workers / Friends
Common Ground: Looking out for each
Conflict: She believes in psychics / He doesn’t
History: They have worked together 10 years
Subtext: She’s more capable than Jim knows
Relationship Arc: From helpful to independentGloria
Surface: Sweet and innocent
Common Ground: They both like Jim
Conflict: Delores doesn’t trust Gloria
History: New relationship / Started off well
Subtext: Gloria’s hiding something and I want to know
Relationship Arc: From trusting to suspicionDelivery Guy
Surface: Friendly banter
Common Ground: The internet Delivery system
Conflict: He’s out of her league
History: 5 years of service
Subtext: Delores is crazy about him
Relationship Arc: From friends to being a coupleGLORIA
Jim Brown
Surface: She likes him but just as friends
Common Ground: Both are in the psychic world
Conflict: Jim is in love, Gloria not so much
History: New relationship
Subtext: Does Jim know where the crystal ball is???
Relationship Arc: From liking Jim to help me distance myself from JezebelDelores
Surface: Sweet and innocent
Common Ground: They both like Jim
Conflict: Gloria knows Delores doesn’t trust her
History: New relationship / Started off well
Subtext: Gloria can win Delores over with psychic stuff
Relationship Arc: From friends to skepticismJezebel
Surface: Gloria is meek, Jezebel is sinister – They are in cahoots
Common Ground: They both want the crystal ball that belonged to Zelda
Conflict: There’s only one crystal ball
History: They are sisters
Subtext: Meek; waiting for the right moment to strike
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Renee’s Relationship Maps
What I learned doing this assignment is how to look at each character and examine their relationships with other characters to create deeper and more well-rounded characters.
Assignment #1
Kate v. Hal
Surface: husband
Common Ground: they are both U.S. Ambassadors
Conflict: she wants a divorce, he doesn’t
History: they’re married
Subtext: he is using her to find his way to the Vice Presidency/Presidency
Relationship Arc: from hostile to cordial
Kate v. Stuart
Surface: she is his boss
Common Ground: she used to do his job
Conflict: she doesn’t always consult with him before doing things
History: He was vetting her for the soon-to-be-open Vice Presidency
Subtext: he was scheming with the President about making her Vice President
Relationship Arc: unsure of her to want her to succeed
Kate v. Dennison
Surface: Ally
Common Ground: they are both trying to keep their countries from going to war with Russia/Iran
Conflict: Kate wants him to be forthcoming but doesn’t always give him the same courtesy
History: He was reluctant to work with her
Subtext: they are attracted to one another
Relationship Arc: From competitors to allies
Assignment #2
Veronica Thornfield and
Samuel:
Common Ground: Connection to the Cult
Relationship Conflict: Manipulation by Samuel, the conflict between their goals
Relationship History: Sees him as a key source of information about the cult
Relationship Subtext: His hidden agenda is to use Veronica to fulfill the prophecy
Relationship Arc: She trusts Samuel initially, but the trust starts to erode as she discovers his intentions.
Dr. Isabella Stone:
Common Ground: Shared interest in the cult’s history
Relationship Conflict: Willingness to take risks and ethical dilemma
Relationship History: Collaboration on past investigations; mutual respect
Relationship Subtext: An undercurrent of competition between the two to see who can uncover the most valuable secrets of the cult’s history.
Relationship Arc: Their relationship evolves into one of mutual reliance and respect.
Father Malachi:
Common Ground: Investigative approach to uncover the cult’s secrets
Relationship Conflict: Veronica’s skepticism towards spirituality and past with the cult
Relationship History: They are aware of each other and their past involvements with cults.
Relationship Subtext: Her skepticism about spirituality and religion creates underlying tension with him as he struggles with his past involvement with the cult.
Relationship Arc: From tension to unity, finding common ground in their pursuit of the truth.
Samuel and
Dr. Isabella Stone:
Common Ground: Shared interest in the cult’s history and the desire to preserve ancient artifacts.
Relationship Conflict: Disagreements regarding the ethical implications of using ancient artifacts.
Relationship History:
Relationship Subtext: Unresolved tension regarding their differences in how to approach the use of ancient artifacts.
Relationship Arc: Collaboration deepens as she gradually reveals hidden knowledge.
Father Malachi:
Common Ground: Mutual desire to better understand the malevolent entities used by the cult.
Relationship Conflict: Tensions related to Father Malachi’s past attempts to infiltrate the cult.
Relationship History: His attempts in the past to infiltrate the cult and uncover its secrets.
Relationship Subtext: His inner conflict and search for redemption and Samuels’s concealed identity.
Relationship Arc: His internal struggle and eventual choices; Samuels concealed motives.
Dr. Isabella Stone and
Father Malachi:
Common Ground: Interested in uncovering the cult’s rituals and a shared spiritual perspective.
Relationship Conflict: Tension related to his past attempts to infiltrate the cult.
Relationship History: His previous attempts to infiltrate the cult and uncover its secrets.
Relationship Subtext: His inner conflict and search for redemption.
Relationship Arc: His internal struggles and eventual choices. Samuels concealed motives.
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Mike’s Show Relationship Map
I learned I need a lot more work on making the relationship dynamics more intriguing and engaging. It sounds plain but friendships and close relationships can sometimes be greater tests than strangers because they are part of a person’s life and not so easily cast aside. But, I look forward to further development and more practice. I’ll lay this out in more readable way in future lessons.
Atticus Taylor
Morrigan
Olivia
Sophie
Surface
Adversaries, Co-volunteers
Friend
Friend
Common Ground
Invested in the secrets at the archaeological dig site.
Both want to stop corruption; value truth.
Struggling with life after school.
Conflict
Opposing worldviews; distrustful of Morrigan, thinks him to manipulative.
She stole the lab results; truth not always easy.
Quick judgments and conspiracy theories can get in the way of a good theory.
History
Volunteers on a dig site.
Childhood and school friends.
University friends.
Subtext
Suspects Morrigan’s has a nefarious involvement but lacks evidence.
Olivia hides that she stole her lab results from Atticus.
Sophie conceals her knowledge of Morrigan’s identity.
Relationship Arc
A journey of friendship to distrust to competitive to adversarial to a final plea for doing the right thing.
They begin as friends but through trust issues and opposing tactics, become stronger friends.
Enjoy each others’ company but friendship strained when Sophie puts her own success before the quest. A journey to respecting differing views.
Morrigan Grimoire
Olivia
Sophie
Atticus
Surface
Volunteers at a dig site.
Volunteers at a dig site.
Volunteers with differing tactics; adversaries
Common Ground
Fascinated by science.
Likes arcane theories.
Have a purpose for being there.
Conflict
Distrust; blackmail.
Threat of exposure; death threats.
Atticus trying to reveal, Morrigan trying to mislead.
History
Met at site.
Met on a mixer for the job.
First meet because of this job.
Subtext
Doesn’t want to hurt Olivia, but doesn’t want her to be a nuisance, either.
Wants to recruit Sophie into the secret order.
Likes Atticus at the start, but tries misleading Atticus to get him removed.
Relationship Arc
Strangers to Opposition.
Strangers to Opposition.
Friends to Enemies.
Olivia
Sophie
Thad
Atticus
Surface
Friends.
Friends.
Friends.
Common Ground
Youth, life after University.
Trying to advance their own careers.
Want less corruption and a better future.
Conflict
Science vs. Pseudoscience.
Ideas; elevation of her field of study over his.
Not always truthful, perhaps, some old grudges that surface occasionally.
History
School friends through Atticus.
School friends through Atticus.
Childhood friends.
Subtext
Values Sophie’s ideas but values opinions of academic peers more.
Thinks he’s brilliant but has a hard time admitting to it.
Really there to advance her own career; doesn’t put much stock into Atticus’s quest at the beginning.
Relationship Arc
Stronger friendship.
Sees other disciplines in their equally valuable and respective places.
From patching old wounds and becoming stronger friends.
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(FYI, the system is saying I’m replying to Kristina who put up the first post.)
Richard’s Character Relationship Map
What I learned from this assignment is that using graphs to chart out relationships can be useful. It offers a way into the territory but be careful of mistaking it for the real work of creating characters interacting with each other. I sense too that I will be revisiting this character map as I get to know the characters more. With adding AI into the mix and being open to its suggestions, I see a whole new set of possibilities for my five main characters as well as some of the 2nd Ring characters in the Circles. New episode possibilities begin to surface—yea!
Assignment 1: RIVERDALE
Character Map for Veronica Lodge
Veronica Lodge Archie Andrews Betty Cooper Cheryl Blossom
Relationship Surface Friends Best Friends Frenemy
Relationship Common Mutual attraction. Care about Betty. Both are on the edge of
Ground popular/outsider. Both come
from wealthy backgrounds.Relationship Conflict Veronica’s direct Archie can be Cheryl thinks Veronica
nature conflicts w/ a sore point, and wants to usurp her. Veronica
Archie’s trans- Betty is mistrustful reads her and is a step
actional and self- because of V’s b.g. ahead of her—she used to absorbed aspect. be Cheryl.Relationship History The somewhat Veronica is new— Veronica is new–no hx.
spoken attraction no history. Her mom Cheryl’s parents looked
between them is and Betty’s parents looked down on V’s Mom.
palpable, will no didn’t like each other
doubt play a part in high school.
in future episodes.
A’s dad and V’s mom
are mutually attracted.Relationship Subtext They skirt about the Fear of losing the Rivalry but with empathy
attraction while they friendship. on V’s part.
strive to make space
for each other.Relationship Arc From friends to allies. From friends to From frenemy to enemy?
estranged.Assignment 2: THE APOCALOPTOMISTS or THE NEWCOMERS
Dermot’s Character Relationship Map:
Mayor Marchetti
Surface: Citizens/fellow businessmen
Common Ground: Both have influence in Skanekta
Conflict: Mayor Marchetti’s hidden agendas could conflict
with Dermot’s desire to save the town.History: They start off as allies, but their relationship becomes strained as Dermot learns more about Mayor Marchetti’s true nature.
Subtext: Dermot is both fascinated and repelled by Mayor Marchetti’s power and charisma.
Arc: They become adversaries with Dermot working to expose Marchetti’s corruption.
Taliesin Kerrdorion
Surface: Fellow newcomer
Common Ground: Both are outsiders in the town, trying to find their place.
Conflict: Dermot’s marriage to Michael, and Dermot is not pagan.
History: They start off as wary of each other, but eventually develop a mutual trust and respect.
Subtext: Dermot is drawn to Taliesin’s msterious and enigmatic nature.
Arc: They begin a secret affair, which eventually
comes to light and threatens to destroy Dermot’s marriage. In the end, Dermot
chooses to be with Taliesin, divorces David, and starts a new life with him.Annabel Masterson
Surface: Fellow newcomer
Common Ground: They share a passion for social and environmental justice.
Conflict: Annabel’s idealism and Dermot’s pragmatism could lead to conflict
History: They start off as professional colleagues, but eventually develop a deep friendship and mutual respect.
Subtext: Misunderstandings lead to a strained tug-of-war between them
Arc: They remain close friends throughout the series.
Mayor Marchetti’s Character Relationship Map:
Dermot Friend
Surface: Citizens/fellow businessmen
Common Ground: Both have influence in Skanekta
Conflict: Mayor Marchetti’s hidden agendas could conflict
with Dermot’s desire to save the town.History: They start off as allies, but their relationship
becomes strained as Dermot learns more about Mayor Marchetti’s true natureSubtext: Mayor Marchetti is wary of Dermot’s intelligence and ambition. He also fears that Dermot may expose his corruption.
Arc: They become adversaries, with Mayor Marchetti trying to undermine Dermot’s efforts to save the town.
Taliesin Kerrdorion
Surface: Colleagues
Common Ground: Both have visions for the future; intelligence.
Conflict: Mayor Marchetti is suspicious of Taliesin’s
mysterious nature and his hidden powers.History: They start off as strangers, but Taliesin
eventually becomes Mayor Marchetti’s confidant.Subtext: Mayor Marchetti is drawn to Taliesin’s power and
charisma. He also sees Taliesin as a potential asset in his plans to control
the town.Arc: Taliesin eventually realizes that Mayor
Marchetti is not who he seems, and he turns against him.Annabel Masterson:
Surface: Cordial Adversaries
Common Ground: They share a passion for social and
environmental justice.Conflict: Annabel’s idealism and Mayor Marchetti’s skullduggery
will lead to conflict.History: They start off as professional colleagues, but
Annabel eventually becomes suspicious of Mayor Marchetti’s motives.Subtext: Mayor Marchetti is attracted to Annabel’s
intelligence and idealism. However, he also sees her as a threat to his power.Arc: Annabel eventually exposes Mayor Marchetti’s
corruption, leading to his downfall.Taliesin Kerrdorion’s Character Relationship Map:
Dermot Friend:
Surface: Fellow newcomers / eventual lovers
Common Ground: Both are outsiders in the town, trying to find
their place.Conflict: Taliesin’s secret powers and Dermot’s corporate
past could clash.History: They start off wary of one another but develop
trust and respect. Taliesin is attracted to Dermot’s intelligence, compassion
and strength.Subtext: They each feel a spark between each other and
develop a passion and intensity in their affair. Because it’s secret, they have
to pretend to just be acquaintances and save their true romance behind closed
doors.Arc: The secret affair will challenge their
relationship, with both feeling guilt and shame about hurting Michael, while Taliesin
deals with the frustration of feeling out of his integrity. It leads to a reckoning,
with Dermot leaving Michael for Taliesin.Mayor Marchetti:
Surface: Initially adversarial but then respectful
Common Ground: Both are ambitious and intelligent individuals who
are eager to make a difference in Skanekta.Conflict: Mayor Marchetti is suspicious of Taliesin’s
mysterious nature and his hidden powers.History: They start off as strangers, but Taliesin
eventually becomes Mayor Marchetti’s confidant.Subtext: Taliesin is intrigued by this man who seems
comfortable with the middle path. He sees someone who has lessons to teach, but
also to be wary.Arc: Taliesin eventually realizes that Mayor
Marchetti is not who he seems, and he turns against him.Annabel Masterson
Surface: Mutual curiosity
Common Ground: They share a passion for social and
environmental justice.Conflict: Annabel’s idealism and Taliesin’s cynicism could
lead to conflict. Also, some tension between Annabel’s Christian views with
Taliesin’s pagan ones.History: They start off as professional colleagues, but
eventually develop a deep friendship and mutual respect.Subtext: Taliesin is drawn to Annabel’s idealism and her
commitment to fighting for what she believes in. She can tell something’s
bothering him, having to do with Dermot and that creates some distance.Arc: Seeing their differences in approach evolves toward
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Jeffrey Alan Chase’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is AI can offer some good ideas about how my main characters are related on many different levels. Episode six of The Queen’s Gambit did a great job of showing Beth’s tailspin into drugs and booze AND that it was HER decision to do so. Cleo shares responsibility, but we weren’t shown, or haven’t been shown yet, if her motives were anything more than simply hedonistic. Great writing.
I also learned that the AI prompt needs some updating. I found some ways to make AI give better looking table returns, but there isn’t a way to paste the tables into the forums. I’ve pasted a non-table AI return for my Assignment 2 to see what it looks like in the forums. Looking forward to learning if it’s possible to paste tables in Hal’s next meeting on Saturday.
Here’s a table showing the relationship between Noah Adams, the main character, and the other characters in the context of the one-hour serialized TV show with a faith-based sci-fi genre and the concept you provided:
</p><p>Character Relationships for NOAH ADAMS</p><p>Categories | Character 2 (KEITH KANE) | Character 3 (James John) | Character 4 (Mary Adams)</p><p>------------------------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Common Ground | Army background, | Faith and spirituality, | Past connection through</p><p> | shared military history, | willingness to help, | marriage, unresolved</p><p> | quest for justice. | support for Noah. | feelings of love.</p><p>------------------------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Relationship Conflict | Pursuit by Keith for | Initial distrust, | Conflicted emotions,</p><p> | justice, Keith's | skepticism about | loyalty to her family,</p><p> | manipulation by evil, | supernatural | guilt for divorce.</p><p> | Keith's disregard for | properties, different |</p><p> | Noah's innocence. | worldviews. |</p><p>------------------------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Relationship History | Past military connection,| Strangers turned | Formerly married,</p><p> | Keith's belief in Noah's| friends, James' | separation, shared</p><p> | guilt, shared trauma of | willingness to help | history, emotional</p><p> | the supposed massacre. | Noah. | baggage, unresolved</p><p> | | | issues from the divorce.</p><p>------------------------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Relationship Subtext | Keith's inner conflict, | James' role as a | Mary's hidden</p><p> | spiritual elements in | guardian or mentor, | feelings for Noah,</p><p> | the story, potential | potential spiritual | Mary's loyalty to her</p><p> | redemption for Keith. | guidance for Noah. | family's wishes.</p><p>------------------------------------------------------------------------------</p><p>Relationship Arc | Keith's pursuit of Noah | Development of trust | Reconciliation and</p><p> | and potential redemption,| and faith in the | resolution of past</p><p> | shifting from adversary | supernatural aspects of | issues, rebuilding of</p><p> | to ally or understanding.| the backpack's power. | trust and relationship.</p><p>
This table outlines the various aspects of the relationships between Noah Adams and the other characters in the serial TV series. These categories provide insight into their connections, conflicts, history, subtext, and potential character arcs throughout the show.
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I learned that by investigating the characters’ relationship map leads to many new emotions between them.
**Character Relationships for Juan “El Diablo” Rodriguez**
| Relationship Aspect | Maria “La Serpiente” Gutierrez | Carlos “El Lobo” Morales |
|————————|———————————|—————————|
| Common Ground | Childhood friendship, leadership in the group | Shared childhood experiences, loyalty to the group |
| Relationship Conflict | Trust issues due to Maria’s secretive nature, her potentially betraying the group | Carlos’s personal vendetta and impulsiveness conflicting with Juan’s strategic approach |
| Relationship History | Childhood friends turned partners in crime | Former military comrades with a shared traumatic experience |
| Relationship Subtext | Unresolved romantic tension from their past | Juan’s unspoken guilt for leading the team into dangerous situations |
| Relationship Arc | A complex journey of betrayal, forgiveness, and redemption | A turbulent journey of camaraderie, conflict, and reconciliation |
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Margaret’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned: How the character’s intersect with each other and the value of a relationship map.
Both assignments I did as a table. I can’t figure out how to post the table here and it is quite extensive. I don’t want to retype the whole think, but I did do the assignment!
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BW TV Assignment 6
Lenore Bechtel’s Show Relationship Maps
What I learned from this assignment is that planning characters relationships in advance of writing the script is very challenging, but using the relationship map helped a lot.
Map for main character in Winning Time:
TV Relationship Map
3 maps for main characters in Hypnotized by Hope
TV Relationship Map
TV Relationship Map
TV Relationship Map
I can’t understand how I could cut and paste the maps into a word processing document, but when I try to paste the whole thing here, it won’t work. At least it works for me to print out and refer to during the writing process.
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BW TV Assignment 6
Lenore Bechtel’s Show Relationship Maps
What I learned from this assignment is that planning characters relationships in advance of writing the script is very challenging, but using the relationship map helped a lot.
Map for main character in Winning Time:
TV Relationship Map
3 maps for main characters in Hypnotized by Hope
TV Relationship Map
TV Relationship Map
TV Relationship Map
I don’t understand how I could cut and paste these maps into a word processing document, but when I try to cut and paste it here, it doesn’t work. At least I’ll be able to print them out to refer to as I continue the writing process.
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Jerry Robbins Show Relationship Map
What I learned from this assignment is that AI seems to be growing very stale. I don’t feel like it advanced much. I can see why this lesson is important in understanding the relationship of one character to the rest.
Assignment 1: Succession
Kendall and Roman:
- Surface: Kendall and Roman are siblings, and they share a family bond.
- Common Ground: They both come from the wealthy Roy family and have grown up in a world of privilege and power.
- Conflict: Despite their blood ties, Kendall and Roman often have a contentious relationship. They often compete for their father Logan’s favor and control within the family business.
- History: They grew up together as part of the Roy family but may not have experienced the family ties quite the same way.
- Subtext: There is an underlying rivalry between them, as each seeks to prove themselves as the most capable successor to their father’s empire.
- Relationship Arc: Their relationship fluctuates throughout the series, with both cooperation and moments of intense rivalry, reflecting the general power struggles within the Roy family.
Kendall and Shiv:
- Surface: Kendall and Shiv are also siblings, part of the Roy family.
- Common Ground: They share a family bond and an understanding of the family’s dynamics in the business world.
- Conflict: Their relationship is marked by competition and occasional clashes, especially concerning their aspirations and positions within the company.
- History: They grew up together, and their past includes moments of closeness and discord within the family.
- Subtext: There is tension between them as they vie for power and recognition within the family, particularly with getting their father’s approval.
- Relationship Arc: Their relationship evolves throughout the series, with moments of alliance and moments of tension, reflecting the shifting dynamics within the Roy family.
Kendall and Logan:
- Surface: Kendall is the son of Logan Roy, the patriarch and founder of the family’s media conglomerate, and Logan’s relationship with Kendall is central to the series.
- Common Ground: They share a family tie, with occasional moments of mutual respect and understanding.
- Conflict: Their relationship becomes an intense power struggle as Kendall seeks to prove himself and take control of the company, often coming into direct conflict with his father’s wishes.
- History: Their history is marked by Kendall’s upbringing and the expectations placed on him as the heir to the family business.
- Subtext: The subtext of their relationship is centered on Kendall’s ambition, Logan’s disappointment, and a desire for Logan’s approval and validation.
- Relationship Arc: The dynamics between Kendall and Logan are central to the show’s narrative, with their relationship changing from respect to anger, despair, and disappointment.
Assignment 2:
1. Alexia and VirtuMax
Surface: Trusted advisor and ally
Common Ground – Mutual desire for truth.
Conflict: Reluctance to reveal the conspiracy’s origins
History: VirtuMax’s role as an advisor and ally
Subtext: VirtuMax’s hidden involvement in the conspiracy
Relationship Arc: VirtuMax’s assisting Alexia in uncovering the conspiracy
2. Alexia and Cipher:
Surface: A conflicted AI
Common Ground: Shared interest in redemption
Conflict: Cipher’s fear of endangering others by exposing the truth.
History: Cipher’s previous involvement in the conspiracy.
Subtext: Cipher’s need for redemption and the guilt he carries
Relationship Arc: Cipher’s quest for redemption and his role in exposing the truth
3. Alexia and Iris Sterling:
Surface: hired hacker and tech-savvy ally
Common ground: both seek to expose AI secrets
Conflict: potential conflict due to differences in approach
History: Working together to uncover AI secrets
Subtext: Iris’ motivations for hacking and exposing secrets
Relationship Arc: Iris aiding in uncovering AI secrets
4. Alexia and Binary Enigma or Benny
Surface: sympathetic bartender
Common Ground: Sympathizes with their mission
Conflict: Potential conflict due to mistrust of holographic AI entities
History: his support for their mission
Subtext: his knowledge of the holographic society
Relationship Arc: his support and crucial information sharing
Alexia and Doctor Quantum:
Surface: medical caretaker during the crisis
Common Ground: getting entangled in the conspiracy
conflict: Fear of reprisal from some source
History: his involvement in Cipher’s treatment
Subtext: Fear of getting involved
Relationship Arc – role in unfolding conspiracy increases
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Adite’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned: Understanding how the characters interact with each other helps to uncover multiple layers in the story. Fine tuning the map with AI is too much work! It’s easier to use my own instincts and go with the flow.
Assignment 1.
The Handmaid’s Tale
Offred’s Relationship Map:
With the Commander
Surface – Servant/Employer
Common ground – they both need each other: she to survive in this world; he to fulfil his desire for a child.
Relationship Conflict – different world views. He believes that he is helping her fulfill her biological destiny of bearing children; she believes that the most important thing in life is love.
Subtext – If she can bear a child, the Commander will trade her along with other “fertile” handmaids to another country.
Relationship arc – being civil with each other to being raped to trying to establish a connection, to being treated as a commodity.Assignment 2.
Concept: When a banker unwittingly makes a large fund transfer to an account being operated by a shadowy group, and it coincides with the kidnapping of her daughter, she comes up against a criminal network of kidnappers, bankers and tech savvy students.
Simone: Protagonist (single mom, banker)
Relationship with: Amish
Surface – Investigator turned ally
Common ground – Both pursuing the same goal: rescuing Simone’s daughter Ria/exposing the criminal organization.
Conflict – she wants to control the investigation process. He has his own process to follow and has to answer to his superior.
History – they meet when he is assigned to the case and they agree to help each other after initial suspicions. The keep secrets from each other thus threatening the whole operation.
Subtext: Simone hides the fact that Ria is the daughter of Ishan, a well known industrialist. Amish is secretly investigating the disappearance of his brother.
Relationship Arc: From strangers to allies to lovers to suspecting each other of betrayal.Relationship Map with Maddy (Antagonist)
Surface – Adversarial
Common Ground – understanding of the financial world and how it operates.
Conflict – Simone wants to save her daughter Ria. Maddy’s plans hinge on how he can manipulate Simone by holding Ria hostage.
History – he knows all about her unethical dealings, and uses this to manipulate her.
Subtext – Maddy wants revenge for the injustice done to him and he is using Simone as a tool.
Relationship arc – from strangers to kidnapping her daughter to her most formidable enemy.Relationship Map with Bella (former colleague and friend who is collaborating with Maddy)
Surface – friends and colleagues
Common ground – share a lot of experiences as they worked together and bonded as friends
Conflict – competition in the workplace spills into their personal lives
History- They first meet as trainees, become friends, rivals, Bella feels betrayed by Simone and wants to bring her down.
Subtext – Simone hides the fact that she was the one who destroyed Bella’s career. Bella hides the fact that she is now collaborating with Maddy.
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Rob’s Show Relationship Map
WIL: Amazing what AI can do.
Relationship Map for Brandi
With Sherri
Common Ground: Both are passionate about the success of Brandi’s start-up company
Relationship Conflict: Sherri feels undervalued and overworked
History: Sherri has been Brandi’s assistant for 2 years. She is loyal but also ambitious and has her own dreams
Subtext; Sherri sees Brandi as a mentor
Arc: Their relationship deepens. However, Sherri’s growing ambition may create conflict.
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Eclipse Neilson Relationship Map
What I’ve learn today the more you can develop depth and loops the more the story moves forward and holds together.
Asignment1
QUEENS GAMBIT
MAIN CHARACTER -Beth (protagonist)
SURFACE chess champion
COMMON GROUND
CONFLICT copes with addiction
HISTORY a tragic childhood
SUBTEXT must believe in herself and let someone love her.
RELATIONSHIP ARC must learn to let someone in other heart
MAIN CHARACTER -Benny
SURFACE chess genius
COMMON GROUND he and Beth are obsessed with chess
CONFLICTBenny is falling in love
HISTORY he has won but now is a loser
SUBTEXT he wants to save Beth a
RELATIONSHIP ARC they must learn to navigate a complicate relationship.
ASIGNMENT 2
Concept: Sent by the universe, a teen war orphan navigates intertwined worlds using healer-secrets taught to her by the spirits of the ancient forest to helps save humanity, only to discover she must first save her village’s forest from the evils of a big business builder.
MAIN CHARACTER -ROBYN STIR (protagonist)
SURFACE A lost withdrawn war orphan who feels humanity is dangerous.
COMMON GROUND bonds with Winthrop and the creatures of the forest
CONFLICT her forest is threatened to be destroyed by Walter Burdock
HISTORY sent from the universe to help open the hearts of humanity
SUBTEXT she is gifted with magical psychic powers that often scare her
RELATIONSHIP ARC she learns that she is a true spirit guardian sent to help save humanity.
MAIN CHARACTER –WINTHROP CUNNINGHAM
SURFACE adopted father
COMMON GROUND both introverted and creative
CONFLICT fearful of his high society wife who sees Robin as a quagmire.
HISTORY born into money but does not value it.
SUBTEXT he feels like a failure.but is a dreamer like Robyn
RELATIONSHIP ARC he learns he can help fight for Robyns dream.
MAIN CHARACTER –WALTER BURDOCK (antagonist)
SURFACE-money hungry mall builder
COMMON GROUND both have interest in the town’s forest
CONFLICT opposite reasons he wants to destroy the forest to build a mall
HISTORY inherited his money
SUBTEXT Money is his identity and god
RELATIONSHIP ARC he must break down to see why Robyn haunts him .
.MAIN CHARACTER-WING THE SPARROW KING
SURFACE a playful magical character who befriends Robyn
COMMON GROUND Best friends
CONFLICT he has fallen in love with Robyn but he is a ghost
HISTORY they have travelled many life times together
SUBTEXT he loves her and tries to lure her back home to the heavens.
RELATIONSHIP ARC he must learn to let go
MAIN CHARACTER –THE OLD ONE
SURFACE Guardian (mother Earth)
COMMON GROUND Both are sent by the universe with a task
CONFLICT she won’t let Robyn wander off her path and Robyn must make sure the Old One (mother Earth ) doesn’t give up.
HISTORY they both are on a mission from the Council of Universal Beings.
SUBTEXT Robyn is her grandchild -a warrior of mother earth
RELATIONSHIP ARC they are each others strength
5.MAIN CHARACTER –FRANCIS CUNNINGHAM
SURFACE –adopted mother
COMMON GROUND love of the old fairytales
CONFLICT she wants Robyn to be a part of high society and the daughter she always wanted.
HISTORY- comes from a English family background who lost all their money
SUBTEXT- Francis never got to be her wild self
RELATIONSHIP ARC they come to understand each other
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Jason Lauer’s Relationship Map Assignment 1 (Prison Break)
Micheal
Surface:
Lincoln: Brother
Veronica: Lawyer and friend
LJ: Nephew
Common Ground:
Sucre: Cell mate and escapee
John: prisoner and escapee
Lincoln: Prisoner, brother, and escapee
Conflict:
T-Bag: Michael shunned him and now has an enemy
John: Micheal has information that John needs, but Michael will not give it until he gets what he wants
Bellick: Corrupt Correction Officer who doesn’t trust anyone, particularly Michel.
History:
Lincoln: Brother, they fought through life together after their mother died.
Veronica: Represented Michael and date Lincoln. Micheal and she remained friends.
LJ: Michael is a stable person in his life, so when his Uncle goes to jail and his father is getting close to his execution date, he snaps.
Subtext:
Lincoln: Michael loves his brother and will do whatever is needed for him.
Sarah:Michael cares for her but doesn’t know how to express it while he’s in prison.
T-Bag: T-Bag wants to possess Michael, but Michael finds him repulsive.
Relationship Arc:
Lincoln: They are still brothers and care very much for one another. I’m assuming that they get out.
Sucre: They start to trust each other more and more. Michael starts taking some advice from Sucre.
Sarah: Their feelings will come to the surface and admit how they feel about one another.
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Jason Lauer’s Relationship Map Assignment 2
What I learned doing this assignment
Concept: A cunning criminal joins the military to avoid arrest, acquiring deadly skills to use in his criminal enterprises. Unbeknownst to him, his bed military friend becomes a relentless cop, sparking a high-stakes cat and mouse game.
JAMES COOPER
Surface:
DAVID MILLER – They have a brotherly bond from their time in the military. David doesn’t know that James is a criminal.
MIKEY RODRIGUEZ – James’ best friend growing up. There is nothing that these two won’t do for each other.
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MIA FOSTER – She is a love interest for James. She cares for James, and is his entree into a higher echelon of criminal.
Common Ground:
DAVID MILLER – Military brothers and partners when they were both Military Police.
MIKEY RODRIGUEZ -They are trying to keep each other out of jail and off the police’s radar.
DET. LAURA REYNOLDS – ????
MIA FOSTER – Their fascination with the criminal underworld.
Conflict:
DAVID MILLER – David is a Police Officer and is hunting criminals in the city.
MIKEY RODRIGUEZ – Mikey has evidence linking James to the original crime that caused him to flee to the military.
DET. LAURA REYNOLDS – She wants to arrest him for the death of the individual before James fled to the military.
MIA FOSTER – Feels like James is pushing her away from her criminal contacts.
History:
DAVID MILLER – Were in the military together.
MIKEY RODRIGUEZ – Best Friends since they were 5.
DET. LAURA REYNOLDS – Is Hunting James for the death of the individual.
MIA FOSTER – They were introduced by a common friend.
Subtext:
DAVID MILLER – James is hiding his career as a criminal from David.
MIKEY RODRIGUEZ – Trust each other, but James does not realize that Mikey can bury him with the evidence.
DET. LAURA REYNOLDS – Has a blind hatred for James without knowing who he is.
MIA FOSTER – Romantic.
Relationship Arc:
DAVID MILLER – They are on a collision course that will end with one of them dead by the end of the show.
MIKEY RODRIGUEZ – Either Mikey or James will be forced to betray their friend by the end of the show.
DET. LAURA REYNOLDS – They will cross each other’s paths by the end of the first season.
MIA FOSTER – Can they trust each other enough to have a meaningful relationship? Will Mia be willing to leave everything if James has to run?
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What I learned doing this: This exercise helped me see how the characters work together. It also made me realize there are still character things I haven’t yet figured out.
Teri’s relationship to Tony on 24 at CTU
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1. Surface: How does the relationship appear on the surface? Tony and Teri are fellow agents at CTU. Tony’s an agent at CTU but he’s super smart and realizes Teri’s up to something. He has his eye on everyone at CTU and knows what’s up.
2. Common ground: What do they have in common? They both would give their lives to carry out their mission.
3. Conflict: What things, issues, or situations will they fight about? Secrets: Why did Teri leave with Jack? Teri has to prove to Tony that one of the agents is a mole, that Jack is compromised.
4. History: What is the past of this relationship that makes it what it is today? Tony is jealous because Teri and Jack were once an item and he wants to be with her.
5. Subtext: What is under the surface, hidden or covert? Teri’s covering up her true motives for seeing Jack. She keeps giving Tony the runaround.
6. Relationship arc: Where does the relationship start at the beginning of the series and end at the completion of the season? It goes from suspicion to Teri explaining what’s going on. Jack is compromised and one of the agents is a mole. Once Tony knows this his entire persona changes and he goes after the mole as well as becoming protective of Teri and Jack.
<br clear=”all”> This table outlines the initial dynamics and how the relationships evolve over the course of the story. A Relationship map for STAR ROVER: Character Relationships for Ryan Gordon.
Seth
Surface: Mentor and Guardian.
Common Ground: Mysterious connection.
Conflict: Trust issues, Seth’s secrecy.
History: Seth Saved Ryan From Hermes.
Subtext: Seth’s true motives for protecting Ryan.
Relationship Arc: Ryan becomes more independent.
Indigo:
Surface: Classmate and fellow outsider.
Common Ground: Both feel like outsiders at school.
Conflict: Trust issues, Ryan’s powers.
History: Both are bedeviled by psychic experiences.
Subtext: Indigo’s potential psychic abilities.
Relationship Arc: Bond strengthens, uncovering mysteries.
Dr. Blaine:
Surface: Pursuer and antagonist.
Common Ground: Both possess unique abilities.
Conflict: Ethical conflicts, loyalty.
History: Dr. Blaine once kidnapped Ryan.
Subtext: Dr. Blaine’s hidden agenda.
Relationship Arc: Antagonism escalates.
JIMMY:
Surface: Mysterious spirit guide.
Common Ground: connected through their shared mission.
Conflict: Ryan’s search for Jimmy’s true identity.
History: Jimmy’s presence since Ryan’s childhood.
Subtext: The true identity of Jimmy.
Relationship Arc: Unveiling the mysteries of Jimmy.
Art Blum
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Barbe’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned from doing this assignment is that my Connecting Characters are more interesting than my Main Characters (never a good thing.)
Assignment #1
STAR TREK: DISCOVERY (Season 4)Protagonist: MICHAEL BURNHAM / Antagonist: RUON TARKA
- Surface:
Capt. Of Discovery / Specialist - Common
Ground: They both want to find the DMA. - Conflict:
They want to find the DMA for different reasons. She wants it as an opportunity for first contact with the species that created it. He wants to destroy it and steal the power source at its center. - History:
No shared history. She is all
Starfleet. He was a prisoner of the Emerald Chain. - Subtext:
She doesn’t trust him. / He knows she has a hold on Book and threatens his
mission. - Relationship
arc: Burnham accepts Tarka’s presence, even though he overrules the
research into the DMA, over her crew specialist, Commander Stamets. Once
Tarka and Book take off in pursuit of the DMA, Burnham sets out to
apprehend them, knowing it might end in their deaths.
Protagonist: MICHAEL BURNHAM / Love interest: CLEVELAND “BOOK” BOOKER
- Surface:
Capt. of the Discovery / Courier and Empath - Common
Ground: They both want to find the DMA. - Conflict:
They want to find the DMA for different reasons. She wants it as an
opportunity for first contact with the species that created it. He wants
to destroy it because it killed his family and destroyed his planet,
Kwejian. He wants to destroy it
before it hurts anybody else. - History:
Before Burnham rejoined Starfleet, she and Book worked together as
couriers. Their relationship developed into a romance. - Subtext:
She worries about his obsessive tendencies. / He knows someday he will be
forced to choose between her and his freedom. - Relationship
arc: They started out as antagonists (he got her arrested.) They worked as
couriers together, then became romantically involved. When she rejoined
Starfleet and was given command of the Discovery, he joined her and parked
his ship in the shuttle bay. He also possesses the gene that makes it
possible for him to operate the Spore Drive. When he takes off with Tarka
to destroy the DMA, Burnham realizes she might have to kill him.
Protagonist: MICHAEL BURNHAM / Ally: LAIRA RILLAK
- Surface:
Capt. Of Discovery / Pres. of the Federation - Common
Ground: They both want to find the species that created the DMA. They both
want to attempt first contact. - Conflict:
Rillak believes that Burnham - History:
Burnham starts out suspicious of Rillak. Burnham always chooses the crew
over protocol. Rillak thinks Burnham is incapable of making the tough
decision when it means choosing the many – over the one. Rillak, as
President, overrules Burnham, and joins a mission to observe Burnham in
action. - Subtext:
Burnham resents the scrutiny from Rillak. / Rillak doesn’t trust Burnham’s
judgement. - Relationship
arc: Rillak starts out underestimating Burnham’s skills as a leader. She
reconsiders when Burnham’s negotiating skills prove insightful and when
her dedication to the Federation is proven when she pursues Book.
DESTINY
Concept: A wealthy inter-planetary industrialist and his wife, an archaeologist, travel the galaxy in their space yacht, Destiny. As an inter-planetary syndicate, led by Vosskara Slyth, gains strength in the system, the couple learns of the husband’s previously unknown, now 21-year-old son. They follow clues to the son’s whereabouts while battling the threats to their empire.
NOREN AMSALA (protagonist)
Role: Interplanetary Entrepreneur/ Industrialist
NOREN AMSALA (protagonist) / VOSSKARA SLYTH (antagonist)
- Surface: Competitors / Former allies
turned enemies - Common ground: They grew up poor on
the same planet. - Conflict: Slyth wants to take over
Noren’s business empire. - History: They start out as friends.
Slyth betrays Noren. Noren is arrested and thrown in jail. When Noren
gets out he reinvents himself, becomes successful, and seeks to do only
good for this sector of the galaxy. Slyth will try to destroy him. - Subtext: Noren doesn’t trust Slyth /
Slyth resents Noren’s success - Relationship arc: Friends to enemies.
NOREN AMSALA (protagonist) / NIKA KRILAN (protagonist)
- Surface: Husband / Wife
- Common ground: Everything. They travel
the galaxy together. - Conflict: When it is necessary to
track down Noren’s son, A’Lyx, Nika will pretend to break with Noren.
Nika and her symbologist friend, Aurora Kael, will leave the Destiny to
pursue leads to A’Lyx. - History: (Well, there isn’t much of a
backstory just yet but I’m sure love at first sight was involved.) - Relationship arc: Love to potential
mistrust when she takes off to find A’Lyx
NOREN AMSALA (protagonist) / A’LYX AMSALA (Ally or Antagonist?)
- Surface: Father / Son (although
neither of them know it – yet) - Common ground: Troubled beginnings
- Conflict: To begin with they are on
opposite sides. A’Lyx will be in league with Slyth. - History: They have a history, but they
will not find that out until the end of the season. - Subtext: The death of A’Lyx’s mother
to a mysterious incident creates unresolved feelings and a sense of
responsibility for his newly discovered son, A’Lyx. - Relationship arc: While on Cryos,
Noren stumbles upon a cryptic message hinting at a long-lost relative. He
realizes that he may have fathered a child during a previous visit to the
planet. Determined to find answers, Noren and Nika make it their mission
to locate Noren’s son, A’Lyx.
VOSSKARA SLYTH (antagonist)
Role: Head of an Interplanetary Syndicate
VOSSKARA SLYTH (antagonist) / NIKA KRILAN (protagonist)
- Surface:
Competitor of her husband, Noren / Wife of his enemy - Common
ground: Noren’s son, A’Lyx (although nobody knows that – yet.) - Conflict:
Slyth will do anything for control – even destroy ancient civilizations.
Nika, as an archaeologist, will fight against his methods. - History:
Only what Noren has told her. - Subtext:
Vosskara plans to use Nika against Noren / Nika doesn’t trust Vosskara - Relationship
arc: Someone to be used to formidable adversary.
VOSSKARA SLYTH (antagonist) / A’LYX AMSALA (Ally or Antagonist?)
- Surface:
Head of Syndicate / Acolyte or Adversary? - Common
ground: Working against Noren Amsala - Conflict:
A’Lyx is an enigma – a sort of double agent. Is he working for himself? Or someone
else? - History:
Does A’Lyx ally himself with Slyth for a purpose? Or does Slyth find him
in a compromising situation and spin a web to catch him? TBD - Subtext:
They are using each other. - Relationship
arc: Leader and follower to adversaries to target and tracker.
NIKA KRILAN (protagonist)
Role: Archaeologist. Wife of Noren Amsala
NIKA KRILAN (protagonist) / A’LYX AMSALA (Ally or Antagonist?)
- Surface:
Father’s wife / Husband’s Son (although neither of them know it – yet) - Common
ground: - Conflict:
Nika will use all her powers to guard Noren from A’Lyx while A’Lyx is
working for Slyth - History:
Not much of one yet. - Subtext:
Can I trust him? / She shouldn’t trust me. - Relationship
arc: Dedicated to finding him. Dismayed when she learns he’s part of
Slyth’s operation. Hopeful that she’s wrong about him.
Assignment #3 – ChatGPT
Format / Genre = Sci-fi
Concept = A wealthy inter-planetary industrialist and his wife, an archaeologist, travel the galaxy in their space yacht, Destiny. As an inter-planetary syndicate gains strength in the system, the couple learns of the husband’s previously unknown, now 21-year-old son. They follow clues to the son’s whereabouts while battling the threats to their empire.
Main Character = Noren Amsala: Interplanetary Entrepreneur and Industrialist, devoted husband of Nika Krilan, and in direct competition with syndicate boss, Vosskara Slyth.
Character 2 = Nika Krilan: Telepathic archaeologist and devoted wife of Noren Amsala, she studies ancient civilizations and artifacts across different worlds.
Character 3 = A’Lyx Amsala: Noren’s 21-year-old unknown son from an earlier relationship, he struggles with identity and belonging and is either an acolyte or an adversary (perhaps both) of Vosskara Slyth
Character 4 = Vosskara Slyth: Head of the Interplanetary Syndicate, Ruthless Adversary of Noren Amsala he is driven by a deep-seated envy stemming from their shared impoverished upbringing.
Chat’s response
I’m unable to create visual tables, but I can provide you with a text-based representation of the table you described.Here’s a brief explanation of the relationships:
Title: Character Relationships for Noren Amsala
1. Common Ground:
• Nika Krilan: Devoted spouse, they share a deep love and commitment to each other.
• A’Lyx Amsala: Ambiguous, their relationship is complex and uncertain due to A’Lyx’s conflicting feelings towards Noren and his upbringing.
• Vosskara Slyth: Shared history, they both come from impoverished backgrounds, but have taken very different paths in life.
2. Relationship Conflict:
• Nika Krilan: Trust issues, there may be moments of doubt or challenges in their relationship, especially in the face of external threats.
• A’Lyx Amsala: Identity clash, A’Lyx’s struggle with his identity and his conflicting feelings towards Noren may lead to conflict.
• Vosskara Slyth: Rivalry, they are direct adversaries, driven by their competing interests and Vosskara’s envy of Noren.
3. Relationship History:
• Nika Krilan: Love and trust, they have a deep and long-standing history of love, trust, and shared experiences.
• A’Lyx Amsala: Discovery, Noren and A’Lyx are just getting to know each other, with A’Lyx learning about his father and his father’s world.
• Vosskara Slyth: Childhood ties, they share a history of poverty and adversity, which has shaped their divergent paths.
4. Relationship Subtext:
• Nika Krilan: Unspoken bond, there may be moments of unspoken understanding and connection between Nika and Noren.
• A’Lyx Amsala: Familial tension, there may be underlying tension and unresolved issues related to A’Lyx’s upbringing and Noren’s role in it.
• Vosskara Slyth: Envy, Vosskara harbors a deep-seated envy towards Noren, which drives their adversarial relationship.
5. Relationship Arc:
• Nika Krilan: Growth together, their relationship may evolve and grow stronger as they face challenges together.
• A’Lyx Amsala: Identity journey, A’Lyx’s journey to understand his identity and find his place in the world will be a central arc in the story.
• Vosskara Slyth: Showdown, their conflict is likely to escalate, leading to a climactic confrontation between Noren and Vosskara.
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Bob’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned: Looking at the blank relationship map is a bit overwhelming but taking it a box at a time makes it so much easier.
NAVY RECON – TV Relationship Map
HM1 Leisa Hunter Dr. LT Sergio Diaz GySgt William “Bird Dog” Roscoe Capt Alford Carl
Surface
Ex-boyfriend, ex-co-worker
Rogue team member
Marine SpecOps commander, superior officer
Common Ground
Medical background / experience
Extensive combat training
Commanding Officer / subordinate
Conflict
She forced breakup – he has fiancé but still interested. He wants her to follow Navy rules (except relationship)
It always been “my way or the highway” and he hates getting orders from a junior
He’s by-the-book and she’s do what’s right
History
They worked side-by-side as Dr/Nurse, romantic partners.
She was his nurse in hospital.
When he was 2nd Lt and she was LTj.g., he asked her on a date. She embarrassed him by declining
Subtext
She’d hooked him up with his fiancé to distract him from her
She knows his thieving history and wants to control it for her needs. Hides illegal activities committed for Capt
His unrequited affection
Relationship Arc
Romantic – break up – deep friendship (or more?)
Nurse-patient / friends / co-conspirators
Equals / superior-subordinate / enemies / her savior (maybe?)
Character Relationships for HM1 Leisa Hunter, US Navy
Dr. LT Sergio Diaz, US Navy GySgt William “Bird Dog” Roscoe, retired Capt Alford Carl, US Marine Corp Common Ground Medic background, care for wounded Military experience, commitment to the mission Duty and loyalty to their respective branches Relationship Conflict Secret love affair, loyalty to Sergio’s fiancée Hidden arms dealer business, distrust Conflict over Leisa’s actions and her brother’s rescue Relationship History Past romantic relationship, shared deployments Military camaraderie, served together Commanding officer-subordinate relationship Relationship Subtext Unresolved feelings for each other, tension Unacknowledged trust issues, Roscoe’s hidden activities Carl’s duty vs. Leisa’s family loyalty Relationship Arc Emotional turmoil, jealousy, decision about the relationship Growing mistrust, potential confrontation Escalating conflict, court-martial threat, changing dynamics
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James’ Character Relationships –
My show:
Format/Genre = 1 hour Crime Drama
Concept = An Autistic 17 year old becomes the youngest Detective ever because of the amazing, unique way his mind works to use to capture killers, despite his struggles which his autism brings.
WELL – the Maps will not transfer to here. What a surprise!!
What I did learn to do is to get the first map done and then ask AI for one darker and more intense – sometimes another one even more evil and CLAUDE was accepting that and turned out some very good thoughts for my project. The kind that the shows do so ruthlessly (except no murders yet)
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Kimbal Thompson BWAI Module 1, Lesson 6 Assignment
What I learned from this assignment is the potentially changing complexity of interactions between characters.
Assignment 1:
Watch the next episode of your Example Show and focus on ONE of the main characters and how they interact with others. Notice how much you discover that could go into their Relationship Map.
Create a Relationship Map for one lead character and their relationship with three others.
KATE HAL STUART EIDRA
SURFACE: Married – Husband Handler/Groomer Embassy staff/Advisor
COMMON GROUND: Diplomatically savvy Initially, then go to VP accurate intelligence.
CONFLICT: married/pending divorce Kate’s future conflict w/ Stuarts future
HISTORY: Ambassador to her No. 2 Hated D.C. Stuart nixed her Sta. change
SUBTEXT: major competitiob.in love Distrust of Kate’s trust Committing to Stuart
RELATIONSHIP ARC: her wanting divorce, he not His wanting out of DC Secret to not secret
to return to D.C. with Kate.
Assignment 2:
1. Create a Relationship Map for THREE lead characters from YOUR SHOW IDEA.
2. Using the Relationship map, pick a main character (place in upper left hand corner), and with each character he or she is in relationship with, give us the 6 relationship experiences listed below:
ART BOE STETH MR. TORTEA
SURFACE: Professional=Merchant Suspected Drug Smuggler Dinner mate
COMMON GROUND: Indian stone crony of Art Southern India region
CONFLICT: difficult to travel with didn’t know he was suspect didn’t want travel to SI
HISTORY: As stone supplier none none
SUBTEXT: cautious Distrust Distrust
RELATIONSHIP ARC: Prof. to travel to from suspecting him, From dinner to Interpol
co-conspirators to tailing him to rescuing him
BOE ART SETH MR. TORTE
SURFACE: Professional – Client none Dinner
COMMON GROUND: Travel to India none Region of southern India.
CONFLICT: had distractions questioned who he was travel to southern India.
HISTORY: As potential client none none
SUBTEXT: treat with “kid gloves” evasion Distrust
RELATIONSHIP ARC: Prof. to travel to from suspect to tail from dinner to attempting
Co-conspirators to better know him
BOE ART SETH MR. TORTE
SURFACE: Married – Husband Handler/Groomer Embassy staff/Advisor
COMMON GROUND: Diplomatically savvy Initially, then go to VP accurate intelligence.
CONFLICT: married/pending divorce Kate’s future conflict w/ Stuarts future
HISTORY: Ambassador to her No. 2 Hated D.C. Stuart nixed her Sta. change
SUBTEXT: major competitiob.in love Distrust of Kate’s trust Committing to Stuart
RELATIONSHIP ARC: her wanting divorce, he not His wanting out of DC Secret to not secret
to return to D.C. with Kate.
Using this prompt, fill in your format/genre, concept, and four characters, giving a one sentence explanation of each character with their role and main form of intrigue.
Art Relationships Boe Bosley DEA Agent Seth Johnson Mr. Torte
Common Ground Both are passionate Both inadvertently involved None, initially
about quality of in Seths’s suspicion due to
Indian slate their shared travel
Conflict Art’s perfectionism frustration Art’s defiance
conflicts with Boe’s
History previously worked nondirect, by association none
Together with Art
Subtext Art see Boe as a Art regards Seth as a Art sees him as an
crucial but unreliable threat to his reputation impediment to their trip
Supplier
Arc Their dynamic evolves Art’s distrust transforms Art’s defiance grows
as Art balances into a nuanced stronger against Mr.
perfectionism with understanding of Seth Torte’s threats
pragmatism
This showcases the dynamic relationships between Architect Art and the other characters in terms of common ground, conflicts, history, subtext, and how their relationships progress throughout the series.
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Assignment 1 Tom’s “24” Example Show Relationship Map
Doing this assignment, I learned AI provides surprisingly good material among extraneous stuff.
Relationship Map of my Example show “24”:
Jack———————-Nina———————Teri—————————— Tony
Surface——————- Employee, Ex-lover——–Wife————————— Employee, computer whiz
Common Ground———Smart, strategic———–Married, parents—————-Decrypts terrorist messages
Conflict ——————Had an affair ————–Ashamed he cheated on her—-Spies on Jack for Jack’s boss
History ——————-Spent weekend together –Will they stay married?———Tips Mason that Jack screws up
Subtext ——————-Work well together ——-Doesn’t trust him ————– Dislike each other but work together
Relationship Arc ———-Not close to closer —— Distrusts him but uniting ——–Work together, no longer close
Assignment 2 Tom’s Show BORDER TOWN – Mike’s relationship with three other main characters.
Mike relationship with Bridget:
Surface – Employee, ex-lover
Common Ground – Smart, strategic
Conflict – They had an affair; co-workers found out
History – They were lovers for a weekend
Subtext – Adjusting to being only co-workers
Relationship Arc – They return to working well together
Mike relationship with Maria:
Surface – Wife
Common Ground – Married, one daughter
Conflict – Desperately wants to reunite with her and daughter Dora
History – Due to Mike’s affair, unsure if they’ll stay married
Subtext – He moved back in; she doesn’t trust him 100%
Relationship Arc – From totally apart to much closer together
Mike relationship with Alan:
Surface – Employee, computer whiz
Common Ground – He monitors terrorist computer threats
Conflict – Spies on Mike for Pentagon boss; In love triangle with Mike and Bridget
History – Squeals on Mike to O’Neill
Subtext – Remain professional co-workers
Relationship Arc – They return to working well together
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What I learned: As someone said during the last class, AI was having a bad day. Even with follow-up questions it was still kind of crappy. And yet: some of it’s completely “wrong” answers triggered my creative brain into finding what I needed. I learned this from being a high level improviser on the piano: mistakes can lead to discoveries. Hal, of course, says much the same regarding the creative process in screenwriting. It’s nothing new to me, but it’s good to hear that it works in another medium. Also, that AI is, among other things, a great generator of mistakes that can take you down paths you had never considered.
QUICK NOTE: it’s impossible to paste in tables in this software, and not worth my time to get everything looking right. Since I doubt anybody reads this, it’s just proof that I did the work.
Assignment 1: Empire
Luscious-Cookie-Jamal-Hakeem
Surface-Wife, ex-wife-Son-Son
Common Ground-Co-founders of Empire-Both are looking for the next hit-To make Jamal the next big Empire Star
Conflict-She took the fall, wants her fair share, they back different sons for stardom-Lucious’ homophobia, and backing Hakeem-Hakeem wants to prove he did it with out dad’s help but is reliant on him
History-Founded company together through hard times, she made him the first star-Always demeaned Jamal’s homosexuality but expect his loyalty. -The favored sun
Subtext-Competitors-Jamal wants to outdo his dad, Lucious wants to control him-H wants to have it both ways
Relationship Arc-From husband/wife creative team to fighting for control of Empire-Always contentious and getting worse-An uneasy truce to get Hakeem to the top
My Show: Tune Out the EndMISTY van MONK
–Surface–Common Ground–Conflict–History–Subtext–Arc
Caden “Cade” Crosswell-First officer of DeFunked, Misty RH man, ship’s AI-To save the universe-CC withholds information to protect himself-They went to school together, were friends-She see’s him something less than human-From relying on each other to subtly working at cross purposes to openly at war
Bandu Cantar-Bandu is the chief engineer in charge of FTL and instruments-Making the ship work and indestructible-He’s a misogynist who doesn’t believe a woman can do the job-She recruited him for his technical genius, he to the job break away from a troubled past.-She relies on him, he thinks she’s too impulsive-From uneasy working relationship to possible betrayal
Elan Trank-Former lovers, Elan was her mentor, now adversaries-They both no the universe must be repaired-He wants to reset it, she wants to fix it-She studied programming with him, became his lover before leaving him.-Fatal attraction, mutual distrust-From teacher student to battle
Celine Mordant-She banished Misty from Earth, Misty is bitter-They both want to save Earth-Celine can help Misty, but Misty’s bitterness makes it impossible-Celine was initially a big fan, till the cultural ministry turned her against Misty-Mutual distrust, but also curiosity-From supporter to enimies to frenemies to working together quietly.
Caden Crosswell
–Surface–Common Ground–Conflict–History–Subtext–Arc
Bandu Cantar-As 1st officer, CC is technically Bandu’s superior-Working together to save the ship and outsmart the Programmers. Collaboration on ship maintenance. -CC was developed on Earth, has biases against aliens; Bandu distrusts AIs-They worked togther to create the ship. Bandar’s initial skepticism and underestimation. -Mutual prejudice-From working together to fighting for control of ship
Elan Trank-CC was initially programmed by Elan-CC has Elan’s moral imperatives built in-CC has grown beyond his programming, distrusts Elan. Misty’s affair with Elan is a source of jealous-Was programmed by Elan, studied with him-mutual mistrusts-From common ground to working against, to CC working for and against.
Celine Mordant-He was briefly her chief of staff-They worked together to upgrade Earths embedded tech capabilities-She treated him poorly, as a kind of AI slave-See above-Using each other for knowledge and skill-From CC being her underling to battling against each other to tacit agreement against Misty
Misty van Monk-Misty is her boss on the DeFunked– Both share a deep commitment to thwarting the Programmers’ plan for universe reset. – Cade admires Misty’s musical talent and supports her mission.– Tensions arise when Misty feels Cade may not be fully transparent about his knowledge or capabilities. Cade doubts Misty’s abilities as a leader.– Cade has been with Misty since the starship’s inception, helping her through numerous challenges.– There may be underlying romantic tension between Cade and Misty, given their close bond and shared experiences.-From relying on each other to subtly working at cross purposes to openly at war
Bandu Cantar
–Surface–Common Ground–Conflict–History–Subtext–Arc
Misty van Monk-Misty is his captain on the DeFunked-Getting the ship at top speed, protecting it from the Programmers, mutual nerdiness about instruments-His misogyny makes him view her as an inadequate captain, leads him to decisions behind her back-She hired him to design the DeFunked, then he goes conspires against her.-Mutual distrust mixed with admiration for each other’s skill-He took the job to escape his troubled past on his home planet, and appreciates her rescuing him, but over time he undermines her decisions. They find a way to work together in the end
Caden “Cade” Crosswell-They work together to make the ship formidable-Technical collaboration on the starship.-Bandar’s skepticism towards AI creates friction. Caden, showing his prejudice, was against brining in Bandu on as engineer.-Worked on ship design, -Possible hidden information or agenda from Cade.-The work together uneasily and will undermine each until they realize they must work together.
Elan Trank-Bitter rivals.-Both believe they have the answers to fix the universe-Bandar believes Elan and the programmers are frauds with stolen technology. Elan fears Bandar’s genius-They met briefly on earth and have been fighting ever since-Hate, disrespect-Enemies from start to finish
Celine Mordant-Recruited Bandar to work on Earth defenses, Misty stole him away.-She’s the protector of Earth, he’s an Earth-o-file-Distrust since Misty stole him away.-Briefly worked on Earth with Celine-See previous-From collaborators to bitter enemies
Elan Trank
–Surface–Common Ground–Conflict–History–Subtext–Arc
Misty van Monk-Misty is his former student and lover-Love of music: he’s in awe of her musical abilities-He suspects that her musical abilities can be used against the programmers-Former teacher and lover.-Attraction, distrust-Love and Hate while still using each other
Caden “Cade” Crosswell-Cade was created by Elan-Shared interest in technical advancements-Elan mistrusts Cade, thinking he’s gone beyond his directive-Creator and User-Uncertainty-From mentorship to battle
Bandu Cantar-Bitter rivals.-Both believe they have the answers to fix the universe-Bandar believes Elan and the programmers are frauds with stolen technology. Elan fears Bandar’s genius-They met briefly on earth and have been fighting ever since-Hate, disrespect-Enemies from start to finish
Celine Mordant-Working together on reset which Trank says keeping earth-Both have a connection to Misty, both are for the reset-Celine fears Elan is using her, will not save Earth. Elan fears the opposite-Brief fling together after Misty left Elan. -Mutual distrust-from working together to betraying each other’s goals
Celine Mordant
–Surface–Common Ground–Conflict–History–Subtext–Arc
Misty van Monk-Banished Misty from earth though she didn’t want to-Both aligned with the Programmers at various times, for various reasons-Celine wants to manipulate Misty for her own agenda. Misty despises her.-Celine supported Misty until the artistic authority turned her against Misty-Mutual distrust, mixed with curiosity and admiration-Celine may attempt to use Misty for her own interests, leading to betrayal or alliance.
Caden “Cade” Crosswell-He was briefly her chief of staff-They worked together to upgrade Earths embedded tech capabilities-She treated him poorly, as a kind of AI slave-See above-Using each other for knowledge and skill-From CC being her underling to battling against each other to tacit agreement against Misty
Bandu Cantar-Recruited Bandar to work on Earth defenses, Misty stole him away.-She’s the protector of Earth, he’s an Earth-o-file-Distrust since Misty stole him away.-Briefly worked on Earth with Celine-See previous-From collaborators to bitter enemies
Elan Trank-Working together on reset which Trank says keeping earth-Both have a connection to Misty, both are for the reset-Celine fears Elan is using her, will not save Earth. Elan fears the opposite-Brief fling together after Misty left Elan. -Mutual distrust-from working together to betraying each other’s goals
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Patrick’s Show Relationship Map
This was difficult, but I learned to examine the more detailed aspects of the characters’ relationships.
ASSIGNMENT 1: THE DIPLOMAT
Kate Wyler relationship with Hal Wyler
Surface: married
Common Ground: both diplomats
Conflict: Hal’s meddling in her business
History: he is an experienced ambassador, she was a lower diplomate, now an ambassador
Subtext: she hates his interference and causing problems
Relationship Arc: from pushing him away to seeking his counsel
<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Kate Wyler relationship with Austin Dennison British (Foreign Secretary)
Surface: diplomatic associates
Common Ground: peacefully resolve attack on British ship, stop PM from attacking Iran or Russia
Conflict: she has unorthodox methods, he goes by the book
History: physically attracted to each other
Subtext: admire the others abilities
Relationship Arc: from differing to understanding, perhaps to romantic
ASSIGNMENT 2: DEAD LAKES
Ollie Grier relationship with Clark Grady
Surface: old friends from childhood
Common Ground: want to find the gold
Conflict: argue/ fight over direction of expedition
History: helped Grant’s grandfather search for the gold years ago
Subtext: petty conflicts and jealousies
Relationship Arc: growing trust
Ollie Grier relationship with Tammy Marshall
Surface: acquaintances, she is Clark’s fiancé
Common Ground: both experienced with the wilderness, keep Clark safe
Conflict: he doesn’t like her, finds her haughty
History: she once blocked him from getting a job
Subtext: she is attracted to him
Relationship Arc: he’ll come to respect and rely on her survival skills
Ollie Grier relationship with Grant Cutter (aka Grant Fairchild)
Surface: rivals
Common Ground: on the trail of the gold
Conflict: in competition find the gold, intense rivalry
History: he purposely misled Grant as to where to search for gold
Subtext: strong dislike, mistrust
Relationship Arc: possibly work together to fight the Amaruga
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In contrast to previous lesson assignments, I couldn’t get a useful answer from chatgpt on this assignment.
Using the prompt provided, AI described a relationship between the main character and character 2, although it was very superficial and uninteresting and didn’t provide a ‘from’/’to’ type of character arc, it just described what the main character was doing, not the shape of the relationship. It didn’t provide any creative input (new ideas) at all.
In addition, the AI response didn’t set out the relationship between the main character and characters 3 and 4, it just described each individual character and not the relationship.
It also didn’t provide the answer in a table format that I could use. I had a lot of trial and error (around 20 attempts) to create a prompt trying to get a better analysis of the relationships plus have them provided in table format. I told AI to forget all other questions asked that same day when I asked it to redo a response to an amended prompt, but I still didn’t receive a creative response (new ideas).
From my experience of this assignment, I think AI can provide a relationship table for an existing TV series, but I couldn’t get it to create one from scratch (at least not with the prompt provided).
In case it helps anyone else, I used the following addition to the prompt to get chatgpt to provide a format that I could then use in Word to ‘insert table’, ‘convert text to table’ using ‘separate text at |’:
Font = Arial
Size = 10
The table should take the following form, delineating each cell with the symbol |. Use the | symbol only once for each cell, rather than for each line if the cell entry runs over more than one line:
Main character|Character 2|Character 3|Character 4
Surface|
Common Ground|
Conflict|
History|
Subtext|
Relationship Arc|
Apologies to my fellow course participants, I’m not posting the detail of my assignments because ScreenwritingU Support still haven’t told me how to find out who my followers on the site, I think it’s a bit creepy having anonymous followers on a platform like this. I’ve raised this query on another course too, so approximately 6 times in total over the last 6 months, which is a bit frustrating.
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I had the same kind of experience, Sara. Also, thanks for sharing the revised prompt. I also used the convert tool in Word, but hadn’t considered your solution. That’s great.
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Thanks Peter. I forgot to say that my amendment to the prompt gives me 5 columns, the last of which is completely empty so I just delete it. I can’t work out why it does that, but it’s no big deal as it’s easy to delete once it’s in Word.
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Thanks. Yeah, there are some seriously wonky things with the way ChatGPT handles tables. And it’s hit or miss.
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Paige’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is that the forums don’t accept tables, so a list format is best for here. It was also easier for me to digest AI’s output with a list. Aside from that, I realized that really my character relationships should intersect, and they should fight for or against the same things, so I’m starting to adjust that.
Assignment #1: SUCCESSION / Episodes 1-6
Logan and Kendall:
Surface: CEO-son dynamic.
Common Ground: Ambition to maintain control of Waystar Royco, shared business interests.
Relationship Conflict: Power struggle, trust issues. Competition with each other.
Relationship History: Father-son relationship with a long-standing CEO-son dynamic.
Relationship Subtext: Kendall’s past drug addiction, ongoing struggle for validation.
Relationship Arc: Ongoing power struggle and influence, evolving dynamics with his children.
Logan and Roman:
Surface: Playful dynamic, perceived lack of seriousness.
Common Ground: Shared family background, playfulness.
Relationship Conflict: Sibling rivalry, disagreements over family loyalty.
Relationship History: Sibling rivalry, growing up together.
Relationship Subtext: Roman’s humor and irreverence as a defense mechanism.
Relationship Arc: Shifting from jesting to a more serious role, recognition within the family.
Logan and Shiv:
Surface: Political consultant, desire for independence.
Common Ground: Political aspirations, desire for independence, shared family background.
Relationship Conflict: Disagreements over family loyalty and corporate direction.
Relationship History: Sibling rivalry, shared upbringing.
Relationship Subtext: Shiv’s political ambitions, desire for recognition.
Relationship Arc: Navigating loyalty to the family and corporate decisions.
Assignment #2: ZEROES
Zara and MC:
Surface: Mutual respect and growing tension, unspoken competition for Isaac.
Common Ground: Share a strong desire for a way to escape the spaceport and create a better future for themselves.
Relationship Conflict: Power struggle over the Zeroes, differing ideas on how to achieve their goal. Zara’s engineering expertise challenges MC’s authority, and the tension between them threatens the group’s unity.
Relationship History: Their history evolves with their power struggle and their desire to find a way out.
Relationship Subtext: Mutual admiration, competition, and distrust.
Relationship Arc: Allies with shared goals to rivals with differing ideas on how to achieve those goals.
Zara and Isaac:
Surface: Mentors for each in their area of expertise, growing affection.
Common Ground: Love of all things Earth used to be, a shared desire for better lives for themselves.
Relationship Conflict: Zara’s pragmatic approach vs. his idealism.
Relationship History: Their history evolves as they push and pull each other with their emotions.
Relationship Subtext: Deep emotional connection that is tested by the power struggle over how to reach their shared goals.
Relationship Arc: Their bond is tested, but their shared goal keeps them united…until his death?
MC and Isaac:
Surface: Younger sister-older brother and protector dynamic. She does his support and guidance.
Common Ground: Dedicated to the well-being and survival of the Zeroes.
Relationship Conflict: Isaac’s protective nature and leadership can sometimes stifle MC’s desire for recognition and independence. Their roles within the Zeroes lead to disagreements.
Relationship History: Have a deep and enduring sibling bond, as they have had to rely on each other since birth within settlement and the challenges it holds.
Relationship Subtext: Sibling rivalry, differing approaches to leadership and resistance.
Relationship Arc: Mix of support and tension. Their commitment to the Zeroes keeps them connected, but their differences create conflict.
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BWTV AI Mod 1 Lesson 6: Character Relationship Map
Deanne’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this lesson = to look at each ancillary character from focus character’s POV
Assignment 1 Example Show SUCCESSION relationship map
Greg Hirsch: Relationship with Logan, Tom, Marianne
Greg Logan Tom Marianne
surface Uncle Extended Family Mom
Common ground family family family
conflict Kitten/porcupine Can’t stand up to him Wants Greg to fledge
history Absence of contact Just met she’s his mother
subtext Wants in on company Tom wants in on family Wants Logan to set him up
arc Disinterest/forgotten Butt of jokes/ buddy Disappointment/hope
Assignment 2 My Show Relationship Maps
TANDY Dieter Lee Bronwen Jorge
surface School board/principal Business across street Works at cafe Mows her yard
in common Health of town Town, school Café, town Yard, town
conflict curriculum Land, racism Too wishy washy How to mow
history Voted to hire Dieter Knew Uncle Ned Lured her to job As employer
subtext Wants vote validated Knows where Ned is Trying to save her Suspects he spies
arc Prove yourself /co-conspirator Suspicion /war Unimpressed/proud of her All business/
co-conspiratorDIETER Tandy Lee Bronwen Jorge
surface Principal/school board Kid in school Kid in school Mows his lawn
in common Health of town, schools Town, kid Town, kid Health of town
conflict curriculum racism truancies Noisy leaf blower
history Got job because of her Just met Kid in trouble As employer
subtext Needs her respect Racist vibes Kid needs mentor Join forces
arc Prickly/friends/Co-conspirator Dislike / war Annoyance/empathy All business /
co-conspiratorLEE Tandy Dieter Bronwen Jorge
surface Neighbor business Kid’s principal Friend’s wife Trims shrubs
in common town town, kid Town, friend town
conflict Land, kids, country Kid, country She’s married country
history Years in same town Just met Just met Just met
subtext Jap Black Entertainment Mexican
arc Dislike / war Dislike / war Lust / war War / war
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What I learned: Characters interactions push and pull each other in new directions, open wounds, cause conflict and distress, and sometimes joy – if that’s your genre. Character interactions and relationships – both positive and negative – create the story, give meaning and catharsis. No character is an island.
Eric with Captain
- Surface: Sailor / Captain
- Common
Ground: Cross the North Atlantic
quickly and safely from Hamburg to Quebec City and return before winter. - Conflict: Captain requires all sailors to crew the
return voyage and not get paid until they return to Hamburg. Eric pretends to agree but he cannot
return because he is wanted by the police for murder. He will jump ship
and remain in the New World, leaving the Captain short crew for the
dangerous return voyage. Eric will steal valuable cargo to finance his new
adventures. - History:
Eric is skilled sailor; he takes on the identity of another man who has
contracted for the crew position on a ship that leaves very soon, giving
Eric a chance to escape the police. He deceives the Captain into thinking
he’s the sailor he hired – a man with good references. - Subtext:
Eric is charming and charismatic. He can con most people to get what he
wants. He will kill when necessary. The captain is charmed by him; deceived. - Relationship
Arc: Eric starts as a member of the
crew, gains the Captains trust and access to the navigational charts and
control of the watch schedule. Eric also charms the crew and avoids
raising jealousy of the Captain’s favoritism. Eric jumps ship with
valuable cargo just short of Quebec City, sets the ship to run aground,
giving him a 10 hour head start. He takes off to the west, set on his ambition
to start a new life and escape law enforcement from Europe or the Captain’s
ire. Eric and the Captain start as employer / employee, to favorite and
like a son, to betrayed and robbed, the Captain’s furious rage — he will
exact revenge. After several years and Eric has established his criminal
enterprises and started a family, the Captain will surprisingly find him
and challenge his life.
Eric with Joe:
- Surface:
Crew members on sailing ship crossing North Atlantic Sept 1870 - Common
Ground: Sailors, headed for the New
World, but contracted to crew the return voyage. Secretly, each wants to stay in the New
World and break the contract with the Captain. - Conflict: Eric is fiercely independent; a loner;
self-reliant. Joe wants to be partners with him because he’s smart and
clever and will make a good life in America. - History: Just met on this voyage to Quebec City
from Hamburg. - Subtext: Eric
has no need for a partner but he might use Joe for some benefit so leads
him on in friendship. Joe is fascinated by Eric and wants to be partners
in crime or whatever Eric has in mind. Joe can sense that Eric is a
criminal, despite his charming exterior. Joe suspects that Eric is not the
sailor he is pretending to be and wonders what happened to the other guy. - Relationship
Arc: Crew members on the ship
sailing from Hamburg to Quebec City Sept 1870 – become friends – Eric jumps
ship, betraying the Captain and the crew – Joe pretends outrage and volunteers
to hunt down Eric and get justice. But actually, Joe wants to find Eric
and join him. Joe learns these skills of deception from Eric.
Captain with Eric
- Surface:
Employer as Captain of sailing ship. Eric as crew who has agreed to crew
the return voyage across the North Atlantic. They must hurry to get back
before winter. - Common
Ground: Safely and quickly cross the North Atlantic from Hamburg to Quebec
City and return. - Conflict:
Eric pretends to agree but secretly plans to jump ship and not return to
Hamburg. - History:
The Captain thinks he has hired a sailor with good references, but Eric has
secretly taken his place. The Captain doesn’t really know him at all and
trusts him too much, is fooled by his charm and charisma. - Subtext: Eric has no intention of honoring the
contract to return, yet he is charming and gains favor with the Captain. Because
of the references for the other sailor, the Captain readily trusts him.
Yet, Eric is not that man at all. Eric laughs at how easy it was to charm
the Captain. Unscrupulous. He gains knowledge of the valuable cargo and
the gold necklace hidden in the Captain’s cabin. - Relationship
Arc: Captain thinks Eric is the
sailor with good references; he is easily beguiled by his charm. During
the voyage, the captain starts to feel about Eric like a son. When he is
betrayed and robbed he is enraged. He recruits one sailor to stay behind
in Quebec City and hunt down Eric and exact justice and retrieve the
stolen gold. The Captain will return to Quebec City in the Spring, intending
to get revenge on Eric. It will take him years to find him and his
criminal empire on the Great Lakes.
The Captain and Joe
- Surface: Captain and sailor
- Common
Ground: Cross the North Atlantic safely and quickly. - Conflict: Captain expects Joe to honor his
contract to crew the return to Hamburg. Joe pretends to honor the agreement, but
secretly wants to stay in the New World, but he doesn’t have a plan. - History: Captain and Joe have sailed together
before. Joe is known as a so-so sailor at the Hamburg docks. - Subtext:
Captain needs Joe to return to Hamburg. The North Atlantic can become
treacherous is ice starts to form, the weather worsen with increasing cold
and strong winds. Finding crew to return to Europe in Quebec City would be
difficult. (Dilemma) After Eric’s
betrayal, the Captain has to trust Joe to be the one to stay behind and
seek justice. - Relationship
Arc: Captain / Sailor crew –
trusted crew member – Joe will stay behind to hunt down Eric – Captain finances
Joe’s expenses for the winter on the St. Lawrence River with the urgency
to find Eric, exact justice and retrieve the gold. Captain trusts Joe to
do this because Joe puts on a show of outrage that Eric would betray the
entire crew by not honoring his contract to return to Hamburg.
Joe with Eric:
- Surface:
Sailors – fellow crew members - Common
Ground: Cross the North Atlantic quickly and safely. Return to Hamburg.
Secretly, each of them really wants to stay in New World and not return,
but they won’t get paid until they return to Hamburg. They signed a
contract, they made an agreement. Joe feels conflicted about breaking it,
but Eric has no qualms. - Conflict: Joe is basically honest. Eric is
basically a pirate, thief and murderer. - History: They just met on the voyage.
- Subtext: Joe admires Eric’s charm and charisma.
He senses that Eric is much more than he shows = not as honest and
friendly as he pretends. Joe finds this intriguing. Eric is uncomfortable being admired. He
is self-reliant, secretive, a loner, independent and has never had close
relationships with others. Joe’s friendliness may come in handy, but is
uncomfortable for Eric. - Relationship
Arc: Fellow crew members – friends – Eric betrays the crew – Joe volunteers
to hunt him – Eric will find Joe following him and confront – they will
become partners in crime – Joe will also betray the Captain.
Joe with the Captain:
- Surface: Captain / Sailor
- Common
Ground: Cross the North Atlantic quickly and safely and return to Hamburg - Conflict: Captain had all sign contract for the
return voyage. Joe wants to stay in New World; he doesn’t have a plan to
get out of the contract. - History:
The Captain and Joe have sailed together before. Joe is a so-so sailor but
basically trustworthy. Joe likes this Captain; he’s fair and pays what he
says. - Subtext:
Joe trusts this Captain. He’s dismayed at how easily the Captain trust
Eric. Joe suspects that Eric is not the sailor the Captain originally
hired but he likes Eric so he doesn’t say anything. -
Relationship
Arc: Joe and Captain start as Sailor /
Captain – Joe indifferent but appears to be a trustworthy sailor – Joe pretends
outrage when Eric jumps ship – volunteers to hunt down Eric – lies to Captain
that he will bring justice – (deception skills he learned from Eric) – Joe betrays
the Captain – finds Eric to join him.
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LESSON 6: Natalie’s Character Relationship Map
WIL: Character Relationship Map renders more depth into character relationship. The AI is still pleasantly keeping up with my story.
GOT: TYRION LANNISTER
Tyrion Lannister and Jon Snow:
Surface: Mutual respect and camaraderie as fellow members of the Night’s Watch.
Common Ground: Both feel like outsiders in their respective families and share a sense of honor and duty.
Conflict: Initially, Tyrion’s wit and Jon’s sense of duty clash, but they eventually find a mutual understanding.
History: They first meet at Winterfell when Tyrion visits as part of the royal procession. They later serve together at Castle Black.
Subtext: Both struggle with their identities and wrestle with their family legacies.
Relationship Arc: Starts as a tentative alliance, evolves into a genuine friendship built on trust and shared experiences.
Tyrion Lannister and Daenerys Targaryen:
Surface: Advisor and Hand of the Queen to Daenerys Targaryen, providing strategic counsel.
Common Ground: Both are outsiders with a desire to reclaim their birthright and prove themselves as leaders.
Conflict: Tyrion’s pragmatism sometimes clashes with Daenerys’s more idealistic approach to ruling.
History: Tyrion pledges his allegiance to Daenerys after fleeing Westeros. He becomes one of her most trusted advisors.
Subtext: Tyrion sees potential in Daenerys to be a just ruler, while Daenerys values Tyrion’s intellect and experience.
Relationship Arc: Begins as a transactional alliance, grows into a genuine bond of mutual respect and reliance on each other’s strengths.
Tyrion Lannister and Cersei Lannister:
Surface: Sibling rivalry and deep-seated animosity due to Tyrion being blamed for their mother’s death during childbirth.
Common Ground: Both are members of House Lannister, though they rarely see eye to eye on family matters.
Conflict: Cersei harbors intense hatred and resentment towards Tyrion, often plotting against him.
History: From childhood, Cersei has held Tyrion in contempt, viewing him as a stain on the Lannister name.
Subtext: Cersei’s disdain for Tyrion is rooted in her belief that he is responsible for their mother’s death.
Relationship Arc: Marked by a longstanding feud, it remains antagonistic and devoid of trust or affection.
Tyrion Lannister and Jaime Lannister:
Surface: Brotherly camaraderie and mutual affection.
Common Ground: They share a close bond as brothers and often find themselves aligned in family matters.
Conflict: While they care for each other deeply, they sometimes differ on matters of morality and honor.
History: Tyrion and Jaime have a history of mutual support and understanding, with Jaime often standing up for Tyrion within the family.
Subtext: Despite their differences, there is a profound love and loyalty between them.
Relationship Arc: Begins with a strong foundation of brotherly love, further tested by the complex dynamics of their family, but remains a steadfast bond.
ASSIGNMENT 2: My Show — Sola, Protagonist
Sola and Polly:
Surface: Childhood friends, united by a shared sense of adventure and curiosity.
Common Ground: Both harbor a deep fascination for Hawaiian mythology and its intersection with the divine world.
Conflict: Polly’s occasional jealousy towards Sola’s ancestry can lead to strained moments.
History: Grew up together forming an unbreakable bond.
Subtext: Polly’s admiration for Sola’s heritage is sometimes overshadowed by her own insecurities.
Relationship Arc: Evolves from childhood friends to indispensable allies in the quest to unite the gods, but not without ups and downs, betrayals and heartbreaks.
Sola and Kama:
Surface: Initially, a mysterious guide enlisted to bring Sola to the Island of Gods for protection.
Common Ground: Both driven by curiosity and desire to protect the balance between mortal and divine realms.
Conflict: Kama’s overconfidence and penchant for trickery can sometimes clash with Sola’s earnestness.
History: Kama’s initial trick on Ku leads to his servitude and eventually dual role in Sola’s journey.
Subtext: Kama’s fear for his own security and hidden sense of responsibility towards Sola often clashes in crucial moments.
Relationship Arc: Develops from a contractual duty to a deep bond forged through shared trials.
Sola and Anteros:
Surface: Sola’s protector, initially tasked by Hecate with watching over her due to her role in the war.
Common Ground: Both share a desire to find Sola’s mother, break Zeus’s curse, and restore Hawaiian gods’ power.
Conflict: Anteros’s inner turmoil, personal agenda, and guilt over past decisions may create moments of tension.
History: Anteros’s curse stems from his tragic love story intertwined with Hawaiian goddess Laka, Sola’s mother.
Subtext: Sola’s innate ability to heal Anteros’s emotional wounds becomes a pivotal element.
Relationship Arc: Evolves from a sense of duty to a profound connection forged through adversity.
Sola and Hecate:
Surface: Initially, an oblivious orphan teen whose curiosity leads to crossing path with Hecate
Common Ground: Both harbor a desire to challenge the established order of the gods.
Conflict: Hecate’s hidden agenda and manipulative nature may clash with Sola’s earnestness.
History: Their alliance emerges from a shared goal of challenging Zeus’s dominion, both for their own cause.
Subtext: Hecate’s feminist ideals and thirst for power add layers of complexity to their dynamic.
Relationship Arc: Begins as an alliance of convenience, but twists and turns may redefine their dynamic.
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MR ROBOT
Elliot / Angela
Surface: Work together at Allsafe
Common Ground: Lost a parent to Evil Corp’s evil and believe they should be stopped
Conflict: Elliot wants to be more than friends
History: Friends since childhood
Subtext: Elliot loves her, they both are struggling with grief and anger over losing a parent and hold a sense that they must avenge that death
Relationship Arc: From Angela working on her personal goals to both wanting to actively take Evil Corp down
Elliot/ Mr Robot
Surface: Both part of F-Society
Common Ground: Both believe that Evil Corp should be stopped
Conflict: Mr Robot does not exhibit fear, Elliot feels fear and doubt about the plan
History: Mr Robot is more recent in Elliot’s life and drew him into the F-society crew
Subtext: Who is Mr Robot and how does he always show up magically and find Elliot at random places and times?
Relationship Arc: From Elliot rejecting him to Elliot needing him like a big brother
Elliot/Tyrell
Surface: Connected via Allsafe when Evil Corp was a client
Common Ground: See behind the veil of what Evil Corp is doing
Conflict: Elliot thinks Evil Corp is wrong, Tyrell thinks Evil is his right. Tyrell knows Elliot set up Terry Colby
History: Tyrell challenges Elliot and invited him to join E Corp, then lets him know he knows that Elliot framed Terry Colby
Subtext: He could really hurt Elliot
Relationship Arc: From corporate politeness to the raw underside getting exposed
MY STORY
Delphine/Jeriko
Surface: Co-leaders of The OvertakersCommon Ground: Want to awaken humanity
Conflict: She wants more stability from him, they are in love but their own inner wounds get in the way. Also conflict about how to train students, when to push and when to be gentle etc
History: They met online but Jeriko’s screen name was Skywalker and he didn’t divulge his true identity. Also have past life connections
Subtext: Jealousy about their connections with others, racial issues
Relationship Arc: From Delphine not knowing who Skywalker is to discovering he is Jeriko and joining him and The Overtakers
Delphine/Dr Jacobs
Surface: Delphine’s tormentor
Common Ground: Intellectual debates
Conflict: He is manipulating her from the dream realm
History: Did he have something to do with her father’s disappearance? Did he manipulate her mother, the Senator? Is there a past life issue?
Subtext: He is actually in love with her but can’t admit it to himself since she should be “beneath” him in his mind
Relationship Arc: From strangers to weird adversaries?
Delphine/Three Sisters
Surface: Delphine’s spirit guidesCommon Ground: To help Delphine develop her powers and compete her mission
Conflict: They are secretly Dr Jacobs’ sisters and know what he is up to, so they need Delphine to help them dismantle his plans without her knowing so much that she will get scared and
History: they have been visiting her for her entire lifetime
Subtext: They care about her but can’t let her know what they are really up to so she won’t blow her – and their – cover
Relationship Arc: From weird but hide-able spiritual guides to beings who are pushing Delphine to do the impossible and take huge risks and leaps….from weird but benign to scary challengers
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Pat’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is there’s a lot of resistance to approaching characters in this fashion. I’m not accustomed to going so deep this early in the process. I really don’t think this format is my cup of tea, but its interesting. I did have an Ah-Ha moment from the last lesson. AI was giving me very generic and repetitive answers to the prompts so I’m going to experiment with changing up my logline concept to see if that makes a difference.
Relationship Map for Wednesday
Wednesday/Enid/Tyler/Eugene
Surface – roommates/information source/diversion help
Common ground – alienated from family/loners/follow their own agenda
Conflict – Enid’s a girly girl, Wednesday saturnine/Wednesday has little regard for Tyler’s feelings, he hates being in the dark/Eugene won’t be left behind, takes risks he’s not qualified for
History – Wednesday rejected Enid’s initial overtures, is drawn into actions by Enid’s insistence/Wednesday used Tyler as an informant, slowly acclimating to being friends/Eugene was a convenient dodge, became an inventive ally
Subtext – BFFs? Perish the thought, but Enid keeps pushing/Wednesday denies a subliminal attraction/Feels responsible towards him as an unsophisticated patsy
Relationship arc – From ignoring Enid’s bubbly nature to tolerating her/from useful insider to a possible friendship/ She underestimated his newfound confidence, now seeks to protect him.
A Devil’s Bargain Relationship Map
Selene/Eli/ Arthur/Marshall
Surface – Investigator ally/Business adversary/Rivals for control of the city
Common Ground – Burned by corrupt politics, protective of family/real estate expansion and exclusivity/religion
Conflict – Eli won’t break laws without good reason. Selene impatient for answers/Arthur wants to restrict vampires with redlining districts, undermines Selene’s effort to expand/Heads the campaign to get rid of vampires
History – Wary of each other, trust comes slowly. Selene helps with Roger/Arthur secretly undermined vampire civil rights/Someone in Marshall’s family became a vampire, was destroyed and now he’s out to destroy them in turn
Subtext – Both outcasts by their strong values/Selene enjoys the gamesmanship/She had a direct hand in Marshall’s ancestor’s problems
Relationship arc – from wary loners to a team ready to take down the drug runners, whatever it takes/competitors to business partners/no love lost on either side, it’s a fight to the death
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Eric’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is how characters interact with each other based on aspects of their personalities, insecurities, connection and backgrounds.
Character Relationship between Stanley and Frank
Common Ground: Went to College Together
Relationship Conflict: Frank’s recklessness frustrates Stanley’s Cautiousness
Relationship History: Longtime Acquaintances, not very close until now.
Relationship Subtext: Stanley Admires Frank’s Boldness
Relationship Arc: Frank learns to respect Stanley’s Cautiousness, Stanley, Frank’s Boldness
Character Relationship between Stanley and Jerry
Common Ground: Disdain for Inauthenticity
Relationship Conflict: Jerry’s Openness about schemes irk Stanley
Relationship History: Met playing Pickleball, bonded over love of sports
Relationship Subtext: Jerry relishes having new fodder for humor
Relationship Arc: Stanley embraces Jerry’s sense of humor but thinks he talks too much
Character Relationship between Stanley and Ming
Common Ground: Both lived in Hong Kong decades back
Relationship Conflict: Ming’s secretive nature drives Stanley’s need to know attitude crazy.
Relationship History: Met playing Blackjack at local casino
Relationship Subtext: Ming thinks Stanley’s too outspoken. Ming’s too quiet for Stanley.
Relationship Arc: They build trust through scheming together.
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What I learned doing this assignment is: how time consuming, but fun, it is to challenge AI. When I first got my AI-Chart it was all mixed up. It still is not perfect, but then neither am I. I think I’m starting to learn how to talk AI.
Subject line: Martha’s Show Relationship Map – Lesson 6
ASSIGNMENT 1:
Watch the next episode of your Example Show and focus on ONE of the main characters and how they interact with others. Notice how much you discover that could go into their Relationship Map.
SAM NELSON – Corporate Negotiator – one of main characters interacting with:
STUART:
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- Surface: Competitors – hijacker/passenger
- Common Ground: Keep passengers
calm- Conflict: Control of plane and
passengers- History: Unknown until this
flight- Subtext: Schemes to control Sam
- Relationship Arc: Fierce
competitors – may not changeLEWIS:
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- Surface: Competitors – hijacker/passenger
- Common Ground: Goal – to get
medical help- Conflict: Physical conflicts
- History: Unknown until this
flight- Subtext: Suspicious, but Lewis
forced to trust Sam- Relationship Arc: Believes in
Sam – needs helpMARSHA:
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- Surface: Were married; now just
friends- Common Ground: Their son, Kai
- Conflict: His ex-wife is now in
new relationship- History: Once they were
married; now have son- Subtext: May still love Sam
- Relationship Arc: From married
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ASSIGNMENT 2:
1. Create a Relationship Map for THREE lead characters from YOUR SHOW IDEA.
2. Using the Relationship map pick a main character and with each character he or she is in relationship with, give us the 6 relationship experiences listed below:
LEXI: 38-year-old tech-savvy ex-grants manager – main character
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- Surface: Enthusiastic about
technology passion for uncovering the truth- Common Ground: Passion for
uncovering the truth- Conflict: Trust issues due to
past betrayal related to the conspiracy- History: Former colleagues
turned adversaries in the conspiracy- Subtext: Unresolved romantic tension,
complicated by trust issues- Relationship Arc: Redemption
arc for trust and emotional connection3. Do the same process for the second lead character and the third lead character.
MIA:
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- Surface: Former colleague and
confidant- Common Ground: Searching for
answers to digital conspiracy- Conflict: Competitive
- History: Mia has always been
jealous of Lexi- Subtext: Unexpressed admiration
- Relationship Arc: From
believing in each other – to suspicious – to ?ELI:
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- Surface: Ally / Adversary
- Common Ground: Intelligent and
Resourceful- Conflict: Rival Investigator
- History: Underlying secrets /
betrayal- Subtext: Eli is actually an AI
infiltrator- Relationship Arc: From complete
trust to an empty relationship4. Using prompts, fill in your format/genre, concept, and characters in AI.
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Janeen’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned from this assignment is that my characters and their interrelationships are beginning to grow and so are plot lines.
My show: The Morning Show
Relationship map for Alex
Alex and Bradley
- Surface: Friends when on air, distrust when not
- Common Ground: Both are trying to make the show succeed
- Conflict: Alex doesn’t trust Bradley so alternately is her friend or her domineering “boss”
- History: Alex picked Bradley for the role simply to exercise power. Bradley took the role because it would get her money
- Subtext: Alex envies Bradley for her youth and lack of show history
- Relationship Arc: Alex goes from big sister to Bradley to relying on her like a trusted friend.
Alex and Chuck
- Surface: Alex treats Chuck like a peon, yet knows he is looking out for her
- Common Ground: Both want to retain their jobs.
- Conflict: Chuck is more in bed (and in tune with) the show execs so while he understands Alex, he wants to keep her under control as his execs demand
- History: They’ve been on the show together for years and Chuck has always tried to smooth over things to keep Alex in line
- Subtext: Chuck is Alex’s whipping boy
- Relationship Arc: As his own job longevity is dwindling, Alex becomes more his boss than someone he dictates to. She seems more in control of the show than he does.
Alex and Cory
- Surface: Alex pretends to take orders from Cory then does her own thing
- Common Ground: To keep the morning show on top snd to keep their jobs
- Conflict: Alex refuses to take orders for the newcomer and he refuses to knuckle under to her
- History: He’s new, she’s a long timer on the show and now he’s trying to make his mark and save his job.
- Subtext: She’s more powerful than he is
- Relationship Arc: Alex is learning that he will cover for her in order to keep his job and she is finding that useful. They are beginning to support each other simply by “just going with it” when one of them makes a rash decision.
Assignment 2: My show
Adrianna — 30-something frustrated stay-at-home mom and inventor/prototyper.
Zane — 20-something construction company owner (following parents’ demise) who is a hacker for the government on the sly.
Adrianna and Zane:
Surface: Zane relies on Adrianna’s prototyping capability and they are friends even though she is older than him. She is wary of him because he is a hacking criminal (arrested in college) but she relies on him for computer help.
Common Ground: Both want to make a killing with their inventions/products and are disappointed when they are stolen.
Conflict: Zane’s construction company wants to take down her dad’s old store to increase the size of the fire station next to it.
History: She babysat Zane when she was in high school so always feels she has the right/ability to tell him what to do.
Subtext: She thinks he’s a wayward kid and treats him like he needs supervision while he thinks she’s trying to keep him under her thumb.
Relationship Arc: They go from enthusiastic product producers to angry/bitter enemies where the old store is concerned and suspicion about Zane’s out of town trips and motivations. His hostility toward her “advice” makes her more suspicious of his motivations given his criminal history.
Adrianna and Bettina:
Surface: They have been friends since early childhood and were classmates throughout school. They are friendly, but not as close as they used to be. Things cooled when Bettina took over the bank.
Common Ground: They have town history and an enduring, lifelong friendship that would be difficult to break. They may fight, but they know each other so well and have so much shared history that their friendship always returns.
Conflict: Bettina doesn’t support Adrianna about the store (Zane’s taking it to be the fire department addition) and funds the new building against Adrianna’s wishes. Adrianna is sick of Bettina’s bad choices in men and subsequent surprise/heartbreak when they dump her.
History: They have shared history and sometimes conflicting reminiscences about their mutual history.
Subtext: Bettina feels like a failure and envies Adrianna. Adrianna pities Bettina about her poor radar about men, but envies her the financial and social freedom she has.
Relationship Arc: They have spats and suspicions over lots of things, but the friendship always comes back because it is so deep.
Adrianna and Sabra:
Surface: Casual to cool friendship. Great collaboration on new products — Sabra dreams them up and Adrianna makes them real.
Common Ground: Love and support the home town and the excitement of the products they come up with.
Conflict: Disagree about who is the inventor — the idea person or the one who works out the bugs and prototypes them.
History: Sabra spread rumors about Adrianna’s husband’s accident even though she knew nothing. Adrianna suspects Sabra of having had a crush on her husband before his accident.
Subtext: Adrianna doesn’t trust Sabra around her husband or her children who Sabra seems to like a little too much. Sabra is envious of Adrianna’s loving family life.
Relationship Arc: They go from enthusiastic co-workers on the inventions to bickering about who gets credit for “inventing things”, jealousy over Adrianna’s family life, bad credit for Adrianna’s struggling family and Adrianna’s resentment of Sabra’s constant rumor mongering.
Adrianna and Binley:
Surface: Adrianna and Binley collaborate on the science of their inventions and love the thrill of creating something new. They are good friends and great coworkers.
Common Ground: They both love the science and nuances of inventing/developing new products.
Conflict: Binley bankrolls the products minimally, but doesn’t share more about his apparent wealth. After all, he’s just a science teacher. He suspects Adrianna of leaking the designs to the university group since she has them and developed them for her CNC equipment and 3D printer.
History: Adrianna and her husband welcomed him to town when he came and she bonded with him while her husband resented the newcomer and it is a constant source of marital bickering.
Subtext: Adrianna has a crush on Binley, but he has no interest in her at all. He treats her like a coworker, not a personal friend. Her work husband only. He thinks of her as a production worker rather than an engineer/scientist, so sees her as an underling rather than equal.
Relationship Arc: As Adrianna’s crush grows and her bickering with her husband about him increases, Adrianna tries to get closer to him and he becomes colder and more domineering as she confides her money trouble to him and he feels guilty because he can’t help her. Her husband also threatens him so he tries to cool the relationship while still needing to work with her on the products.
Zane and Bettina:
Surface: Friendly, businesslike
Common Ground: Both are in their hometown. Bettina is aware he is losing bids at the company and floats him loans now and then.
Conflict: Zane wants a bigger loan for a project, but Bettina doesn’t have it to give. Zane has hacked into the bank and knows she doesn’t have authorization to make the loans.
History: In high school, Bettina had a thing for Zane’s dad. He vaguely remember a time when she was at the house and when he saw her, his dad rushed her out of the house.
Subtext: Zane always has something on Bettina. She is intimidated by this twerp, but also knows his business is flailing.
Relationship Arc: Bettina and Zane go from enthusiasm for the products to suspicion about each other’s motives and honesty.
Zane and Sabra:
Surface: Enthusiasm for the products and each other’s roles in making the inventions a reality.
Common Ground: Both are running businesses at a young age although Sabra is only a manager while Zane is an owner. Both have issues with suppliers, etc. that they commiserate on.
Conflict: Sabra suspects Zane of betraying the group and making a profit off it. He resents her for all of the rumors about his company, his management ability and blabbing about their inventions.
History: Sabra dated Zane in late high school. He was too immature for her, but she fed his ego. He still thinks about their hot times together and she would rather forget since his arrest for hacking.
Subtext: He thinks she’s hot. She thinks he is too, but doesn’t trust him farther than she can throw him.
Relationship Arc: They go from happy teammates to lusting after each other, to suspecting each other of treachery.
Zane and Binley:
Surface: Cordial, but cold. Like to joke around and one-up each other with humor.
Common Ground: Same age and on the hunt for success and women. Both have something to hide or that they wish would be forgotten. Both hate Sabra’s rumor mongering.
Conflict: Each suspects the other of the sabotage/sale of their ideas/products. Binley because of Zane’s illegal hacking and Zane because of Binley’s money from “nowhere”
History: Binley has heard from his basketball-on-the-park-court buds that Zane doesn’t know what he’s doing with the business. Zane is initially impressed with Binley’s knowledge and enthusiasm.
Subtext: Mutual distrust, always in competition for something — anything from who is funniest, most attractive to women, most successful, etc. A couple of roosters.
Relationship Arc: They go from initial friendship to deep suspicion.
Bettina and Sabra:
Surface: Enthusiasm for the project, but Bettina gets cold whenever Sabra starts gossiping
Common Ground: They both want the projects/inventions to succeed and make them all a lot of money.
Conflict: Bettina knows that Sabra gossips about her. Sabra wants a loan to buy out the absentee owners, but Bettina won’t fund her.
History: Sabra gossiped about all of Bettina’s exes making it known to everyone and clear to Bettina that the men were only after her family’s money.
Subtext: Bettina would like to see Sabra get a little of the payback she’s owed in the gossip department. Sabra wants to suck up just enough to get her loan.
Relationship Arc: They are both enthusiastic supporters of the project, but that deteriorates as the rumors grow, the products are beaten to market and a leak becomes obvious.
Bettina and Binley:
Surface: Binley talks money with Bettina, but she tries to dodge the subject saying it’s not appropriate for her bank to fund a business she’s involved in. It would look like a conflict of interest.
Common Ground: They both want what’s best for the business and both understand business and money matters well.
Conflict: Binley wants her to step up and fund the projects and she keeps saying now. She wonders where his money is coming from and why it’s not in her bank.
History: Bettina was drawn to Binley originally, but his constant talk of money has made her wary of him. He’s just after her money too.
Subtext: Binley wants Bettina, but she is hot and cold. Double entendres fly, but are then coldly shut down when Bettina realizes that she might be slipping into another relationship with a greedy man.
Relationship Arc: They go from initial attraction to more distance with Binley hurt, Bettina suspicious and both drawn to each other. They become the will they or won’t they couple.
Sabra and Binley:
Surface: Pleasant chatter, mutual respect, no depth of relationship
Common Ground: They both want the products to succeed. Both want the town to do better.
Conflict: Sabra gossips way to much for Binley’s taste. Binley won’t give Sabra any of his history or info on his family.
History: Sabra initially came on to Binley and he shut her down hard due to her constant questions and constant gossip.
Subtext: She is hot for him, he is no longer hot for her. He wants someone else.
Relationship Arc: They initially flirt a little, but gradually things cool until Sabra is suspicious of his funding and his continued outsider, mysterious source of money.
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Lesson 8 of 74 BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 6: Build Your Character Relationship Map
*ASSIGNMENT 2: Mary J. Andrews The Wordweavers: Ink & Code relationship map completedCharacter Relationships for Elisabeth Langston
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