• 30 Day Screenplay 16

  Lesson 2 (New Thread)

  Posted by cheryl croasmun on December 9, 2023 at 5:02 pm

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  Tyrone Huff replied 1 year, 6 months ago 3 Members · 2 Replies
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  Caryn Hunt

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  December 9, 2023 at 5:07 pm

  Caryn’s character Profiles Part 1
  What I learned was once I start thinking about the story, it gets pretty fun, pretty fast.

  My protagonist, a down and out detective, is someone who in the past has been a runner but is now ready to be a fighter.
  My antagonist, a prominent local businessman, is a villain and a predator.

  Other characters include:
  Supporting – a political operative
  Minor – an ex-partner; a part-time office manager
  Background – various henchmen

  Genre: Drama

  Role in the story: Marley is a down on her luck detective barely scraping by working on fringe cases.
  Age/description: Woman; 30s; athletic build; half-Irish
  Internal journey:
  External journey:
  Motivation: Marley wants safety. She needs redemption.
  Wound: took the blame for some shady cop shit, got busted back down. Did her time. As soon as she became detective again, she quit. Went private eye.
  Mission/Agenda: The mission is a case, but the agenda is putting things right.
  Secret: her own corrupt action in the past.
  What makes them special: She can’t live with herself not being brave.
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  Tyrone Huff

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  December 12, 2023 at 3:39 am

  Tyrone’s Character Profile part 1,

  Protagonist:

  Malika is a dreamer: Malika best fits the Dreamer character type. She starts with idealistic views about using history to improve society and faces harsh realities about racism and injustice. Her journey involves actively transforming these ideals into concrete actions to confront and change the community’s entrenched racial issues. This blend of vision and action defines her as a Dreamer, inspiring change in her world.

  Antagonist:

  Lydia, as the antagonist, fits the Villain type. She directly opposes Malika’s goals, embodying the resistance to change and the denial of the town’s dark past that Malika is trying to confront. Lydia’s role challenges Malika’s ideals and forces her to confront the town’s reluctance to face uncomfortable truths, making her a key obstacle in Malika’s journey.

  Major Antagonistic Force:

  Jim Crow Monster: A supernatural entity and the manifestation of the town’s dark, racist past. This creature serves as the primary source of horror in the story, directly challenging Malika and embodying the thematic elements of racial tension and historical injustice. Its presence is a constant threat and a catalyst for the unfolding events, making it a crucial figure that drives the narrative forward.

  Supporting Characters:

  • Elijah: Malika’s supportive colleague at the museum, who shares her passion for history and provides moral support.

  • Mara: A local journalist interested in Malika’s work, who gradually becomes her ally in uncovering the town’s past.

  • Professor Daniels: An empathetic history professor at the local college, offering insights that help Malika in her quest.

  Minor Roles:

  • Mayor Thompson: Represents the town’s leadership, seen in meetings and events, hesitant about Malika’s revelations.

  • Mr. Jenkins: Elderly town resident, provides key historical insights in a couple of scenes.

  • Tina: Museum receptionist, interacts with Malika occasionally, offering a glimpse into the town’s everyday life.

  Background Characters:

  • Museum Visitors: Various people who visit the museum, reacting to the exhibits and the unfolding events.

  • Town Residents: Seen in public spaces, their reactions and interactions provide a sense of the town’s atmosphere.

  • College Students: Appear in scenes set on campus or in town, reflecting the younger generation’s perspective on the events.

  Genre: Horror

  Writing this assignment I learned that it is best to get to know your characters before getting into the weeds of the story.

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