• Module 5

  BWTV: Lesson 9: Great Pitch 4: Phone Pitches Without Pain!

  Posted by cheryl croasmun on December 29, 2023 at 4:03 pm

  Post your assignments here…

  Lloyd Shellenberger replied 1 year, 4 months ago 2 Members · 1 Reply
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  Lloyd Shellenberger

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  February 16, 2024 at 7:37 pm

  Module 5 Lesson 9

  Benjamin Greene: Lloyd’s Phone Pitch

  Working hard every day to become the best writer I can be and as a result I do become the best writer in Hollywood.

  “What I learned from this lesson is…how to keep things short, concise and to the point rather than talk myself out of a sale.

  Hello,

  I am a retired AFN broadcast journalist and Special Operations soldier who covered the Iraq and Afghanistan wars and I have actual war time experience. I am also an accredited executive producer as well. My videos and footage have appeared in several documentaries, including Operation Homecoming, nominated for an Academy award. The story you are about to hear is inspired by the life of a Special Operations soldier.

  Colonel Benjamin Greene, a former CIA assassin turned Special Operations Commander and his crew are brutally recruited into a Top-Secret Pentagon Agency whose whole mission is make sure the nation’s secrets stay secret. In addition, retirement from the Puzzle Works is not an option, you are “Amended”.

  The budget is between 2.94 and 4.38 million. I see John Hamm, Bradley Cooper as the protagonist.

  This is currently with Joe Mehri, a prolific filmmaker in his own right.

  Your company has produced great movies and TV with a kind of quality and production value I admire.

  The teaser begins with Colonel Greene and his crew shutting down a government sponsored drug house. This sets the tone for an action-packed series. 4 years later, Greene and his crew are assigned the task of shutting down a military drug operation on Fort Bragg. The pilot ends with Colonel Greene and his crew successfully completing the mission but they face internal and external betrayals. There are over 35 open loops and more than a dozen mysteries to keep the audience guessing. Can Greene and his unit escape the clutches of the Puzzle Works, or will they be Amended?

  • This reply was modified 1 year, 4 months ago by  Lloyd Shellenberger.
  • This reply was modified 1 year, 4 months ago by  Lloyd Shellenberger.

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