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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Exchange Feedback.
EXCHANGE FEEDBACK
This week, we’ll go over the Feedback process so you can exchange feedback.
If you are behind, just get your outline ready for an exchange and make the exchange when you are ready.
To partner up, please tell us your Name, Genre, and Title in this top. Then take these steps:
1. Pick a partner and confirm that you’ll be partners. Let us know in this topic.
2. Send a Private Message to each other.
3. Exchange email / phone numbers in the PM.
4. Send your partner your completed outline as a .pdf. At the top of the first page, provide the following info:
Title:
Genre:
Written by:
Contact Info:5. Exchange feedback and rewrite your outline.
Have fun with this!
Hal
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HOW TO GIVE FEEDBACK
DO THE FEEDBACK IN ROUNDS
Follow this plan:
1. Post and find a partner. PM each other.
2. Exchange feedback.
3. REWRITE your outline.
4. Repeat steps 1 – 3 until your outline shines.
Please don’t try to get feedback from multiple people before rewriting. If you do it in the above order, you’ll be handing a better outline to the next person for feedback. Because of that, your outline improves and the feedback quality improves.
WHEN YOU GIVE FEEDBACK
Please be encouraging. Point out what works. If you see something that doesn’t work, provide useful ideas for improvement.
Please base your feedback upon the skills in the Skill Mastery Sheet. Do not go outside of this program’s skills.
Remember that this is an outline, so it is not supposed to include the details of a script, but to give us a clear picture of how the thriller progresses. If something was confusing, let the writer know the exact place it confused. Tell them the paragraph number and the specific thing that confused you. If you have a suggestion for how to improve it, let them know.
WHEN YOU RECEIVE FEEDBACK
Getting feedback gives you one person’s experience of reading your Thriller outline. The purpose is to find a way to improve your outline.
– Look through the outline for comments that are useful.
– Only make changes you agree will improve your outline.
– If any feedback doesn’t work for you, disregard it.
– Use the ratings just to get a feel for their emotional experience.
In general, use what will improve your outline; disregard everything else. Then move forward.
NOTE: If someone gives you abusive feedback, please report it.
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This discussion was modified 1 year, 3 months ago by
cheryl croasmun.
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Margaret – Exchange Feedback
Title: Echoes of Masada
Genre: Sci-Fi Drama
Since I have a membership in Hal’s A.I. Feedback and it provides feedback specifically for the structure of a TV Series Episode, I am going to use it for my first round of feedback. I’ll be back for 2nd round!
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I would be happy to exchange feedback on my fantasy. Just email your pdf to prismartsllc@gmail.com. Thank you!
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Hi Lenore! I would be delighted to read your comedy if you want to exchange for feedback.
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Exchange Feedback:
Kimbal
INDIA SLATE
Adventure Drama
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I’ll exchange feedback with you, Kimbal. My address is prismartsllc@gmail.com
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Hi Kimbal,
I have a SCI-FI drama called Echoes of Masada. If you would like to exchange, please email your outline to silebi@hotmail.com and I will send you mine. Thank you. Margaret
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I’m ready to exchange. I have a Christian Thriller titled, The Backpack. Jeff@chaseinternet.com
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Hi everyone, I will probably use the AI feedback for the first pass since I’m late to do this before the next module begins. But I’m happy to do so if you’re okay with an exchange after that. Let me know.
Title: Hawala Heist
Written By: Sunil R Pappu
Format/Genre: One-Hour Heist Thriller Series
Show Concept: A rookie RAW agent joins a crew of international thieves to penetrate an underground banking network to retrieve a ledger that can crash the financial world.
Pilot Logline: Rookie agent, Priya joins a heist team to decode messages to stop a terror attack that is used as a distraction for the sale of a ledger on the Hawala market.
Contact Info: sunilrappu@gmail.com
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This reply was modified 1 year, 3 months ago by Sunil Pappu.
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Ready to exchange feedback on The Layers Within if someone else is. jerryr48@gmail.com
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Hi Jerry,
If you’re still looking for a partner, I’ll exchange feedback with you.
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Hi Everyone,
If anyone would like to exchange feedback, I’m happy to do so.
Please email me @ GJDBetts@yahoo.com
Thanks! ~ Gayla
TITLE: Starlight Café
Format/Genre: One Hour Fantasy Series
Concept: A young woman discovering her magical abilities must navigate a portal to her mysterious past or risk destroying humanity.
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This reply was modified 1 year, 2 months ago by Gayla Betts.
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Hi, I’m Pat Semler ready for feedback.
Genre: Supernatural Thriller
Title : A Devil’s Bargain
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Thanks for the great notes, Gayla. I hope my notes to you helped elevate Starlight Cafe to even greater heights. Such a fun project.
Pat
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Oh, yaay. Thank YOU for your notes – super helpful especially in finding the trees in the forest. (If that makes sense!)
Excited to see your project go forward as well. Thanks again ~ G
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