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BWTV-AI Module 4 – Lesson 6: Problem/Solution Grid 1
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I cannot get amazon.com to allow me to the site for the Grid. Is there any other way to do this lesson?
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Hiram Taylor : What I learned is to keep going no matter what. I got hung up for a few days because I could not get on the site to get the Grid. So I did my own. Then when I got the correct prompt to get to the Grid 1 & 2, all I had to do was go back with the grid and use the problems I had already found.
First problem solved: Found best spot to setup that the lead and her coworker are having a secret affair.
Second problem solved: Once I had the set, I added a better pay off where the lead discovers her coworker has been cheating on her with other women in funny, humiliating way for him and it gave their relationship more meaning in the story.
The next problem was now solved when in the plot the co-worker walks in and discovers the lead is having an affair with her boss, the pay-off is stronger. This is the C story, but adds irony to their relationship and reveals who they are which leads to the bigger reveal at the Midpoint when the co-worker is revealed to be lying about everything he has been saying and doing in the entire first half of the story. -
BWTV-AI MODULE 4 – LESSON 6: PROBLEM/SOLUTION GRID 1
Moses Quainoo Completed P/S Grid #1
“What I learned doing this assignment is…?”
ASSIGNMENT
Use the BW TV P/S Grid to solve any problems you can for this draft.
1. Go to the BW TV P/S Grid at this link: https://s3.amazonaws.com/bingeworthytv/BW+PS+Grid+1+Final.pdf
2. Select one thing you are going to improve right now.
3. Using the “Possible Solutions,” brainstorm how you might solve or improve it.
4. Rewrite that part.
5. Repeat steps 2 – 5 as you improve other parts of the pilot.
6. Tell us the problems you solved and/or the scenes you improved, and which solution you used.-
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