• 30 Day Screenplay 18

  Lesson 1

  Posted by cheryl croasmun on May 29, 2024 at 5:08 pm

  Reply to post your assignment.

  David gollob replied 11 months, 1 week ago 3 Members · 2 Replies
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  Nader Khaghani

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  May 31, 2024 at 3:33 pm

  Subject line: Nader Khaghani: Transformational Journey
  Learned: There is an empowerment psychological first that empowers the physical that goes hand in hand. Thanks, Hal. We appreciate you.

  Day 1 Who is your Hero? Eddy and what is their Character Arc that represents a transformation?
  Internal Journey: Empowered: From depression to the flow of creativity again.
  External Journey: Traveling to places enriching the soul for a different perspective
  3. What are the Old Ways and New Ways?
  Old ways: creative, but filled with misgivings
  Of Late: Lost it. Dark amassed
  New ways: Back on the saddle again to capture the light

  • This reply was modified 11 months, 2 weeks ago by  Nader Khaghani.
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  David gollob

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  June 4, 2024 at 8:01 pm

  Title: (nerves of glass) thriller, Market to indie producers with access to $$$ and Lit Managers
  concept/hook: the cure for parkinsons turns into ¨the next cocaine ´ after a cartel boss steals the formula
  tell us what you think is most attractive about your story: it´s never been done before, set in Medellin, Colombia, the script eschews cliches about Escobar´s legacy while thriving in his shadow..,, like the city itself.. The writer has the disease and beats the odds, as does his heroine…

  3. i will target Lit managers first, having ¨met¨¨a few of them online, i have identified some like-minded ones… i want this to be recognized as a major filmscript, from an older writer who will possibly offer 5 more before he croaks….

  4. “What I learned today is…i have what it takes to succeed”

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