Let’s be clear. Early drafts don’t have to be perfect. But the further you get into the writing process, the more important it is that the script deliver on multiple levels. And yet, 90% of scripts submitted to contests and producers are weak in major ways. Don’t let that happen to your script!

In this call, Hal will discuss the missing parts from many scripts, including:

• Three ways to make your journey stronger.
• Building subtext into every scene.
• Making every scene more interesting!
• Big picture improvements that a script more pitchable!

Also, we’ll also talk about the upcoming PROFESSIONAL REWRITE class and how solving simple problems can make a script great!