BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 1: What Makes a Great TV Pitch Bible?

[Moses Quainoo]

MODULE 2 – LESSON 1: WHAT MAKES A GREAT TV PITCH BIBLE?

Moses Quainoo

“What I learned doing this assignment is…?”

ASSIGNMENT:

Present your Concept and World.

1. Present your Concept.

Concept = SKYY LAR, a feral pigeon injured by human negligence, collaborates with a compassionate girl EMMA, in London to spark a worldwide bird rebellion against environmental destruction, focusing on the beauty industry’s influence.

[Jean-Pierre Serra]

JP Serra’s Intriguing Concept and World

What I learned doing this assignment is that finding a unique subworld worth exploring is of utmost importance for seeing our show produced and aired on TV.

Present your Concept.

[Marie Sanderson Jordan]

Marie’s intriguing Concept and World

What I learned doing this assignment is the concept of intriguing world and its importance and the incredible efficiency of AI when it is about giving a more precise and concise exposition of what I wrote!

Present your concept:

A. Engaging and highly proactive hero… Emily Rudge, a skilled romance serial writer for a well-known lady’s magazine

B. …up against a major conflict… afraid of love and pressured to marry in the boring status of women in a quaint British town

C. …goes on a unique transformational journey… finds herself caught into marrying a fantasist adventurer

D. Into an intriguing world… and going on a globe-trotting adventure in a quest for freedom and equality around the world before feminism.

Hook 1: What if a romance writer used her talent to avoid love?

Hook 2: How the British daughter of an archdeacon explores the freedom of early feminism in the new world?

Unique Sub-World: the seeds of the feminism movement.

Previously unexplored: The triggers that will lead to the birth of feminism.

The unknown: How a couple can explore gendre equality in a society where it’s not the norm.

The unseen: The Church of England’s narrow views, the French emigrés restoring needs – both obsessed with reputation.

Unheard of dangers: Being different is not tolerable.

Reason to explore it: fearing the worst life for a women, searching for the best.

Ideas for Enhancement

1. Deepen Character Complexity: Emily Rudge could have a hidden past or a secret that not only influences her fear of love but also adds depth to her character. Perhaps she’s witnessed a tragic love story that has left her scarred.

2. Amplify Conflict: Intensify the societal pressure on Emily to marry by introducing a specific, looming deadline (an arranged marriage, a family debt, etc.) and a formidable antagonist who embodies the societal expectations she’s fighting against.

3. Enrich the Transformational Journey: Emily’s journey could involve her secretly publishing controversial articles under a pseudonym, challenging societal norms, and becoming a symbol of change, which complicates her personal quest.

4. Expand the World: The global adventure could introduce mythical or magical elements tied to the concept of equality and freedom, making the quest not just physical but also a spiritual or mystical journey.

5. Incorporate Historical Figures: Include encounters with historical figures who were ahead of their time in terms of gender equality, offering inspiration and challenging Emily’s views.

6. Elevate the Stakes: The consequences of Emily’s quest could extend beyond her personal freedom, impacting the wider movement for women’s rights, making her journey pivotal to the historical development of feminism.

Rewritten Concept and World

Concept (25 words): Emily Rudge, a secret romance novelist, afraid of love and its constraint, embarks on a daring global quest with a fantastical adventurer to challenge societal norms and discover true freedom.

Intriguing World (3 sentences): In a world on the brink of change, Emily Rudge’s journey from a constrained British town to exotic lands reveals the untold stories of early feminists. Alongside her enigmatic partner, she uncovers mystical secrets that blur the lines between myth and the emerging quest for gender equality. Their adventures not only defy the rigid societal norms of their time but also sow the seeds for a future where freedom and equality begin to blossom.

Enhanced Pitch to TV Producers

Elevated Pitch: Imagine a series where the pen is mightier than the sword, and a woman’s quest for self-discovery ignites the flames of change across the globe. “Emily Rudge’s Odyssey” is not just a story; it’s a journey through the hidden corners of history, where magic and myth meet the early whispers of feminism. As Emily transforms from a reclusive writer to a daring advocate for equality, her adventures with a mysterious adventurer uncover secrets that challenge everything we know about the past. This is a tale of love, rebellion, and the unseen forces that shaped the world before feminism was a whisper on the wind. Join us in bringing to life a series that promises not just to entertain but to inspire a conversation about freedom, equality, and the power of one woman’s pen to rewrite history.

[SUNIL BATRA]

BWTV-AI MODULE 2 -LESSON 1

WHAT MAKES a great TV Pitch Bible?

I, Sunil Batra, learned that if we concise each episode of entire show.it created Tv pitch bible.

Genre – religion. ½ hours 6 shows

Audience – all

Concept.

Harry’s world is melting pot of cultures with influences from India, the USA Iran, Jewish and China the tapestry of traditions, belief, and practices that harry encounter and navigate throughout his journey till it prove by per, his roommate, that God is one.

[Tom Wilson]

New Concept: An Afghan scientist marries a U.S. general running for President in exchange for a PhD, while her homeland crumbles under Taliban control.
New Intriguing World: In the wake of the U.S. troop withdrawal, Afghanistan descends into chaos. The Afghan Army disintegrates, leaving terrified citizens to defend themselves in brutal firefights with the Taliban. The once thriving cities are now wastelands, where marauding Taliban forces mercilessly butcher men, women, and children, creating a constant sense of dread and hopelessness. Amid this relentless violence, a lone scientist’s mission to cure a deadly disease intertwines with the fate of a collapsing nation, amplifying the stakes of every choice she makes.
This world offers a high-stakes environment filled with tension and human drama that will captivate a wide-ranging audience, blending personal sacrifice with geopolitical intrigue.

[Tom Wilson]

Tom’s Intriguing Concept and World
Doing this assignment, I learned it’s fun to put the characters in adverse situations and see how they react and do what they have to, to reach their goals.

The Show’s Concept: What if a general abruptly pulls U.S. troops from Afghanistan so he can run for President? What if a popular Afghan scientist needs a PhD to find a cure for a disease killing her people? Solution: The general gets her into a PhD program. She marries him so US voters will forget he abandoned the Afghans to the cutthroat Taliban, and vote him into the White House.

The Show’s World: In war torn Afghanistan, a popular scientist secretly teaches science to girls which the Taliban forbids. After hours she seeks a cure to a disease ravaging her people including her mother. The general commanding U.S. forces in Afghanistan abruptly pulls U.S. troops out so he can run for President. The general returns to the U.S. with the scientist and hits the Presidential campaign trail. He agrees to put the scientist on a PhD path if she marries him so voters forget he abandoned the Afghans to the cutthroat Taliban and vote him into the White House. The scientist pursues a PhD at UC Berkeley. She teaches medical students during the day and at night in the lab seeks a cure for the disease. When U.S. troops were withdrawn, the scientist’s brother who is an Afghan army officer is captured by the Taliban. He convinces them to help him assassinate the general for deserting the Afghans. He plans to launch a Sword missile that will kill the general during his inauguration on the Capitol steps. He risks killing his sister who stands near the general during his swearing in.