-
BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 1: What Makes a Great TV Pitch Bible?
Post your assignments here
-
6 Replies
-
MODULE 2 – LESSON 1: WHAT MAKES A GREAT TV PITCH BIBLE?
Moses Quainoo
“What I learned doing this assignment is…?”
ASSIGNMENT:
Present your Concept and World.
1. Present your Concept.
Concept = SKYY LAR, a feral pigeon injured by human negligence, collaborates with a compassionate girl EMMA, in London to spark a worldwide bird rebellion against environmental destruction, focusing on the beauty industry’s influence.
- A. Engaging and highly proactive hero or group…
- B. …up against a major conflict…
- C. …goes on unique transformational journey…
- D. …Into an intriguing world.
SKYY LAR
· A. A feral pigeon teams up with a compassionate girl.
· B. …It/They ignite a global bird rebellion…
· C. …Focuses on environmental destruction…
· D. …Targets the beauty industry’s influence.
2. Tell us about the Intriguing World of the SKYY LAR TV show.
EcoHaven: A Dynamic Urban Sanctuary
EcoHaven is a unique sub-world in London that highlights how the Beauty Industry affects the environment and its inhabitants. The sanctuary-like space combines nature, technology, and community in the city’s heart.
- Unique Sub-World: Ecological Haven. A holy and imaginative place in London
where urban wildlife can relate to the environment.- Previously
unexplored:- The unknown: The true scale of the Beauty Industry’s influence and extent
of environmental harm.- The unseen: Technological advancing.
- Unheard of
Dangers: Catastrophes in the Environment.- Reason to
explore it: Make people aware.· EcoHaven, located in London’s heart, combines nature, technology, and community to disrupt the beauty industry’s power.
· This vibrant sub-world, a haven for urban wildlife, becomes a battleground for a daring rebellion, blending the struggle for the environment’s dynamic spirit.
· The stories of resilience, hope, and the shared fight for a greener future are etched in every alley and rooftop of EcoHaven, making it not only a physical place but also a powerful movement.
3. Use this Prompt to have AI brainstorm ways to express your Concept and Intriguing World.
PROMPT: Elevate Concept and Intriguing World
I’m going to give you the [Concept] and [Intriguing World] for my [Format/Genre] TV Series. Can you brainstorm the concept in 25 words or less, and the Intriguing world to be a maximum of 3 concise sentences in a paragraph that together describe the world in a way that is intriguing and my [Audience] will love it?
1. Please give me ideas that could make them more interesting and intriguing.
2. Please rewrite the concept and intriguing world in whatever way you think could cause a TV Producer to want to make the show.
Format/Genre = 1 hour Drama/Family/Animation
Audience = Kids, children, fathers, mothers, teachers, uncles, aunties, bored adults.
Concept = SKYY LAR, a feral pigeon injured by human negligence, collaborates with a compassionate girl EMMA, in London to ignite a worldwide bird rebellion against environmental destruction, focusing on the beauty industry’s influence.
Intriguing World = EcoHaven is a unique sub-world in London that highlights how the beauty industry affects the environment and its inhabitants. The sanctuary-like space combines nature, technology, and community in the city’s heart.
Concept (25 words or less): A wounded pigeon, SKYY LAR, and a determined girl, EMMA, unite to lead a bird rebellion against environmental harm caused by London’s beauty industry.
Intriguing World (3 sentences): EcoHaven, nestled in London’s bustling heart, emerges as a sanctuary where nature, technology, and community intertwine, challenging the beauty industry’s unchecked influence. This vibrant sub-world, a haven for urban wildlife, becomes a battleground for a daring rebellion, blending the struggle for environmental preservation with the city’s dynamic spirit. Here, every alley and rooftop tells a story of resilience, hope, and the collective fight for a greener tomorrow, making EcoHaven not just a place, but a movement.
Ideas to Enhance Intrigue:
1. Introduce a Secret Society: Within EcoHaven, a secret society of animals and humans works covertly to expose and combat the beauty industry’s dark secrets, adding layers of mystery and intrigue.
2. Magical Elements: Incorporate magical elements that are natural parts of the urban ecosystem, such as plants with healing properties or animals with special abilities, deepening the world’s enchantment.
3. Technological Innovations for Environmental Conservation: Feature cutting-edge, fictional technology developed by EcoHaven’s inhabitants, focusing on sustainable living and environmental restoration, showcasing a hopeful future.
4. Dynamic EcoHaven Landscapes: Describe EcoHaven’s shifting landscapes that react to the emotional and physical state of its inhabitants, making the environment an active character in the narrative.
5. Cross-Species Communication: Develop a unique communication system between humans and animals, emphasizing collaboration and understanding across species, enriching character interactions and plot developments.
Rewritten Concept and World for TV Producers:
Concept: In the heart of London, SKYY LAR, a resourceful pigeon with a painful past, and EMMA, a young environmental crusader, spark an unprecedented rebellion against the beauty industry’s eco-destructive practices, blending adventure with a critical message of conservation.
Intriguing World: EcoHaven: London’s hidden gem, where verdant wilderness meets urban innovation, serving as the epicenter of a daring eco-rebellion. This captivating sub-world, alive with magic, technology, and a unique alliance between species, offers a compelling vision of harmony and activism. EcoHaven isn’t just a setting; it’s a symbol of hope, a challenge to the status quo, and the heart of a story that promises to enchant and inspire audiences across generations, making it an irresistible pitch for any producer looking to blend environmentalism with enchantment.
-
This reply was modified 1 year, 2 months ago by Moses Quainoo.
-
JP Serra’s Intriguing Concept and World
What I learned doing this assignment is that finding a unique subworld worth exploring is of utmost importance for seeing our show produced and aired on TV.
Present your Concept.
- A. Engaging and highly proactive hero or group… A risk-averse builder, a misfit archer, and a fiery barbarian
- B. …up against a major conflict… embark on a perilous quest to prevent an evil witch from taking over their village
- C. …goes on unique transformational journey… discovering that true strength lies in unity, not just in the weapons they wield
- D. …Into an intriguing world. in a realm where sorcery clashes with the steel of swords.
2. Tell us the Intriguing World of this show.
- Unique Sub-World: A peaceful village where builders, archers, barbarians, giants and miners have really specific roles. A stronghold where a witch hungry for power has built an impressive army of goblins and skeletons.
- Previously unexplored: All babies are created by a wizard who is using purple elixir.
- The unknown: A dark elixir seeps from the ground in the peaceful village. What kind of creatures could be created from that?
- The unseen: Both Greenwood village and the witch’s fortress are coming up with new weapons and siding with new allies.
- Unheard of Dangers: The miners of the village are abducted, one by one. The reasons are unknown.
- Reason to explore it: The builder, the archer and the barbarian won’t have a choice to leave their beloved village to protect it.
Run the prompt through AI
Ideas to Enhance Intrigue and Interest
- Expand the Concept of Magic and Technology: Introduce an underlying conflict between ancient magic and emerging technology, where characters must navigate the complexities of both to succeed in their quest.
- Diverse Character Backstories: Give each main character a rich, unique backstory that intertwines with the main plot, revealing hidden motives, secrets, and strengths that add layers to the adventure.
- Moral Ambiguities: Incorporate themes of moral ambiguity, where the line between hero and villain blurs, challenging characters and audiences to reconsider their perceptions of right and wrong.
- Dynamic World Building: Create a world that evolves over the course of the series, with political upheavals, shifting alliances, and the discovery of new, uncharted territories that expand the lore of Greenwood Village.
- Incorporate Humor in Unexpected Ways: Use humor not just in dialogue but in the world itself—quirky magic spells, bizarre creatures, and comedic cultural misunderstandings that bridge the gap between the fantastical and the relatable.
Revised Concept and Intriguing World
Concept: A simple builder’s life in a mystical realm turns chaotic when he uncovers a plot to conquer his village, joining forces with an eccentric archer and a fierce barbarian to infiltrate and thwart a witch’s legion from within, blending humor with fantasy in a tale of unlikely heroes and adventures.
Intriguing World: Greenwood Village, a land teeming with magic and mystery, serves as the battleground for an epic struggle between light and shadow. Here, barbarians with hearts of gold, cunning wizards, and creatures of legend engage in a delicate dance of power over an elixir that could alter the fate of the world. Amidst the clash of steel and sorcery, our heroes navigate a labyrinth of alliances and deceptions, where the true enemy might just be the folly of their own misadventures.
-
This reply was modified 1 year, 2 months ago by Jean-Pierre Serra.
-
Marie’s intriguing Concept and World
What I learned doing this assignment is the concept of intriguing world and its importance and the incredible efficiency of AI when it is about giving a more precise and concise exposition of what I wrote!
Present your concept:
A. Engaging and highly proactive hero… Emily Rudge, a skilled romance serial writer for a well-known lady’s magazine
B. …up against a major conflict… afraid of love and pressured to marry in the boring status of women in a quaint British town
C. …goes on a unique transformational journey… finds herself caught into marrying a fantasist adventurer
D. Into an intriguing world… and going on a globe-trotting adventure in a quest for freedom and equality around the world before feminism.
Hook 1: What if a romance writer used her talent to avoid love?
Hook 2: How the British daughter of an archdeacon explores the freedom of early feminism in the new world?
Unique Sub-World: the seeds of the feminism movement.
Previously unexplored: The triggers that will lead to the birth of feminism.
The unknown: How a couple can explore gendre equality in a society where it’s not the norm.
The unseen: The Church of England’s narrow views, the French emigrés restoring needs – both obsessed with reputation.
Unheard of dangers: Being different is not tolerable.
Reason to explore it: fearing the worst life for a women, searching for the best.
Ideas for Enhancement
1. Deepen Character Complexity: Emily Rudge could have a hidden past or a secret that not only influences her fear of love but also adds depth to her character. Perhaps she’s witnessed a tragic love story that has left her scarred.
2. Amplify Conflict: Intensify the societal pressure on Emily to marry by introducing a specific, looming deadline (an arranged marriage, a family debt, etc.) and a formidable antagonist who embodies the societal expectations she’s fighting against.
3. Enrich the Transformational Journey: Emily’s journey could involve her secretly publishing controversial articles under a pseudonym, challenging societal norms, and becoming a symbol of change, which complicates her personal quest.
4. Expand the World: The global adventure could introduce mythical or magical elements tied to the concept of equality and freedom, making the quest not just physical but also a spiritual or mystical journey.
5. Incorporate Historical Figures: Include encounters with historical figures who were ahead of their time in terms of gender equality, offering inspiration and challenging Emily’s views.
6. Elevate the Stakes: The consequences of Emily’s quest could extend beyond her personal freedom, impacting the wider movement for women’s rights, making her journey pivotal to the historical development of feminism.
Rewritten Concept and World
Concept (25 words): Emily Rudge, a secret romance novelist, afraid of love and its constraint, embarks on a daring global quest with a fantastical adventurer to challenge societal norms and discover true freedom.
Intriguing World (3 sentences): In a world on the brink of change, Emily Rudge’s journey from a constrained British town to exotic lands reveals the untold stories of early feminists. Alongside her enigmatic partner, she uncovers mystical secrets that blur the lines between myth and the emerging quest for gender equality. Their adventures not only defy the rigid societal norms of their time but also sow the seeds for a future where freedom and equality begin to blossom.
Enhanced Pitch to TV Producers
Elevated Pitch: Imagine a series where the pen is mightier than the sword, and a woman’s quest for self-discovery ignites the flames of change across the globe. “Emily Rudge’s Odyssey” is not just a story; it’s a journey through the hidden corners of history, where magic and myth meet the early whispers of feminism. As Emily transforms from a reclusive writer to a daring advocate for equality, her adventures with a mysterious adventurer uncover secrets that challenge everything we know about the past. This is a tale of love, rebellion, and the unseen forces that shaped the world before feminism was a whisper on the wind. Join us in bringing to life a series that promises not just to entertain but to inspire a conversation about freedom, equality, and the power of one woman’s pen to rewrite history.
-
BWTV-AI MODULE 2 -LESSON 1
WHAT MAKES a great TV Pitch Bible?
I, Sunil Batra, learned that if we concise each episode of entire show.it created Tv pitch bible.
Genre – religion. ½ hours 6 shows
Audience – all
Concept.
Harry’s world is melting pot of cultures with influences from India, the USA Iran, Jewish and China the tapestry of traditions, belief, and practices that harry encounter and navigate throughout his journey till it prove by per, his roommate, that God is one.
-
New Concept: An Afghan scientist marries a U.S. general running for President in exchange for a PhD, while her homeland crumbles under Taliban control.
New Intriguing World: In the wake of the U.S. troop withdrawal, Afghanistan descends into chaos. The Afghan Army disintegrates, leaving terrified citizens to defend themselves in brutal firefights with the Taliban. The once thriving cities are now wastelands, where marauding Taliban forces mercilessly butcher men, women, and children, creating a constant sense of dread and hopelessness. Amid this relentless violence, a lone scientist’s mission to cure a deadly disease intertwines with the fate of a collapsing nation, amplifying the stakes of every choice she makes.
This world offers a high-stakes environment filled with tension and human drama that will captivate a wide-ranging audience, blending personal sacrifice with geopolitical intrigue. -
Tom’s Intriguing Concept and World
Doing this assignment, I learned it’s fun to put the characters in adverse situations and see how they react and do what they have to, to reach their goals.The Show’s Concept: What if a general abruptly pulls U.S. troops from Afghanistan so he can run for President? What if a popular Afghan scientist needs a PhD to find a cure for a disease killing her people? Solution: The general gets her into a PhD program. She marries him so US voters will forget he abandoned the Afghans to the cutthroat Taliban, and vote him into the White House.
The Show’s World: In war torn Afghanistan, a popular scientist secretly teaches science to girls which the Taliban forbids. After hours she seeks a cure to a disease ravaging her people including her mother. The general commanding U.S. forces in Afghanistan abruptly pulls U.S. troops out so he can run for President. The general returns to the U.S. with the scientist and hits the Presidential campaign trail. He agrees to put the scientist on a PhD path if she marries him so voters forget he abandoned the Afghans to the cutthroat Taliban and vote him into the White House. The scientist pursues a PhD at UC Berkeley. She teaches medical students during the day and at night in the lab seeks a cure for the disease. When U.S. troops were withdrawn, the scientist’s brother who is an Afghan army officer is captured by the Taliban. He convinces them to help him assassinate the general for deserting the Afghans. He plans to launch a Sword missile that will kill the general during his inauguration on the Capitol steps. He risks killing his sister who stands near the general during his swearing in.
Log in to reply.