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BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 11: Editing Your TV Pitch Bible
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Jeffrey Alan Chase’s Edited TV Pitch Bible
What I learned doing this assignment is that by going back over my bible/deck starting at the end, middle and beginning and then sideways, and skipping around I found a number of areas I could improve. All in all, I’m very happy with my pitch bible/deck.
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BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 11: Editing Your TV Pitch Bible
Sylvia’s Edited TV Pitch Bible
What I learned doing this assignment is continued cleaning up and writing engaging material. I still think it needs work but, it’s getting better all the time.
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Barbe’s Edited Pitch Bible
What I learned from this assignment is that every word better count! I found the Studio Binder TV Series Bible template. As I filled it in, I realized that much of my original bible text had to be edited significantly to fit in the space provided. That meant that the text had to be super intriguing, evocative – and precise. I used all of the techniques in this lesson – and will continue to use them until I am satisfied that I have done everything to make it the best bible I can create!
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Pat’s Edited TV Pitch Bible
What I learned doing this assignment is I may not have enough twists and turns in seasons 3 and 4 as it seems I’m repeating information seen in the first year. This is coming together but it’s work. I found in asking AI to generate character and episode descriptions that it went for a pretentious, flowery tone that didn’t match my voice. Some of the words were useful, but altogether it came across as frou-frou.
I’m still working through the summaries to get away from book reporting and hitting the high points. After all this I’m not even sure I’m in love with this story. Could be my bias against serial style shows. It certainly takes a more clever mind than mine to keep track of the impending ins and outs and shadings that leave plot points open for the next layer to be peeled back.
But I am grateful for the exercise. Getting this kind of bible together is worth the price of admission.
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