BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 11: Editing Your TV Pitch Bible

[Jean-Pierre Serra]

JP Serra’s Edited TV Pitch Bible

What I learned doing this assignment is that no matter how many times we reread our bibles, there are issues we won’t be able to see. I find that making someone else read it and be open to feedback can greatly improve our pitch bible.

That final step transformed my document. What was once merely great has been elevated to perfection.

[Moses Quainoo]

BWTV-AI MODULE 2 – LESSON 11: EDITING YOUR TV PITCH BIBLE

Moses Quainoo

“What I learned doing this assignment is…?”

Edited TV Pitch Bible

ASSIGNMENT

Go through these editing steps to make sure your TV Pitch Bible is a quick read, presents absolute clarity, and is highly compelling.

1. Make Sure All Formatting Works

Needs white space. (Big blocks of type).

Consistent fonts and type sizes.

Consistent titles that line up and are done the same way.

Consistent punctuation that is meaningful.

Quotes, all caps, and underlining are used sparingly and purposefully.

2. Discover Problem Areas and Solve Them

Fluff/Meaningless.

Confusing.

Not intriguing.

Overwritten.

Cliches.

3. Identify Areas to Elevate and Improve Them

Intriguing, but could be more interesting.

Doesn’t propel us into the future of the series.

Needs more powerful set up or payoff.

CURRENT TV Pitch Bible DRAFT:

TITLE: SKYY LAR

GENRE: Drama/Family/Animation

FORMAT: 1 hour

CONCEPT: SKYY LAR, a feral pigeon injured by human negligence, collaborates with a compassionate girl, EMMA, in London to ignite a worldwide bird rebellion against environmental destruction, focusing on the Beauty Industry’s influence.

INTRIGUING WORLD: EcoHaven: A Dynamic Urban Sanctuary

EcoHaven is a unique sub-world in London that highlights how the Beauty Industry affects the environment and its inhabitants. The sanctuary-like space combines nature, technology, and community in the city’s heart.

SHOW SUMMARY:

PILOT AS INCITING INCIDENT

ROUGH DRAFT 1:

“Can SKYY LAR, a pigeon with a new prosthetic leg, turn personal adversity into a powerful force for environmental change?”

Squadron leader SKYY LAR lives the ordinary life of a feral pigeon. It strategically mentors and educates five hundred young pigeons on surviving in urban environments.

However, when SKYY LAR heads to Dalston Market to seek sustenance, its life takes a different turn.

SKYY LAR’s world turns upside down when its feet become trapped in synthetic waste and struggle to escape.

Three seasons pass before passersby seem to care.

Everything shifts when a five-year-old girl arrives at the scene on her three-wheel scooter ahead of her mother, who pushes a pram with her baby brother. EMMA and her family were entering the Shopping Mall from the Lower Ground Car Park walkway.

What makes the Mall’s walkway the preferred choice? It is the corridor where the pigeon could express its hardship to customers.

SKYY LAR is in distress, tied up, and unable to move in the corridor. It is challenging to handle the situation and change mentally and emotionally. EMMA has participated in an environmental project at school to realize SKYY LAR’s state.

SKYY LAR mistrusts humans, and when EMMA approaches, it flies and lands in short bursts.

EMMA draws her mother’s attention, gathers grain hidden beneath the pushchair, and reaches for SKYY LAR. Gradually, it pecks the grains. EMMA catches SKYY LAR, and her mother retrieves a pair of scissors from a kit for EMMA to de-string SKYY LAR.

SKYY LAR is currently building trust with humans.

SKYY LAR’s left leg is severely injured by the synthetic material, leaving it impossible to save. EMMA tries to imitate SKYY LAR by hopping on one leg but confesses her inability. What is SKYY LAR going to do?

SKYY LAR seeks healing and adaptation after the injury. How can EMMA assist SKYY LAR?

EMMA brings SKYY LAR to her house to care for and watch its movements. She then introduces it to her bedroom workshop, which is filled with toys, eco-friendly fabrications, and inventions. She creates a false leg to help SKYY LAR move past barriers. EMMA’s solution presents a new challenge for SKYY LAR during take-off.

SKYY LAR forms a bond with EMMA. SKYY LAR relearns basic movements after two weeks and flying and landing techniques adaptation through trial and error. EMMA explores the origin of synthetic waste and its impact on city wildlife, while SKYY LAR takes a freedom flight above the London Eye.

TEASER START

But the peace doesn’t last as a Peregrine Falcon ambushes SKYY LAR from above and behind. SKYY LAR engages in a fierce battle with the mighty bird. Surrounded by skyscrapers and bustling streets, two birds engage in a dramatic aerial battle. While the fight escalates, the birds maneuver through the intricate cityscape, avoiding obstacles and spectators.

SKYY LAR is a resilient and strategic thinker despite being physically inferior, thrusts the prosthetic into the Falcon’s eyes as it tumbles into freefall. SKYY LAR’s left foot holds excellent value.

The clash intensifies as the Falcon chases or darts after SKYY LAR and cannot see the approaching traffic. A car hits the Falcon.

TEASER ENDS

Following the terrifying ordeal, SKYY LAR returns to its original roost under a train bridge, and RAPHAEL tells SKYY LAR that it rented out the place in its absence. SKYY LAR expresses curiosity about everything that occurred while he was gone.

Then a female pigeon, RAPHAEL’s girlfriend, emerges and flies away.

Word travels among the bird community and beyond that Squaddie SKYY LAR returned alive with a Marvel prosthetic.

Numerous birds gathered to express their concern and well wishes. SKYY LAR’s entire squadron visited their leader, and visitors and different pigeon species arrived, too.

SKYY LAR expresses a solid commitment to preserving their habitat.

RAVEN, a visitor, arrives from Ramsey Island, off Pembrokeshire Coast. A distinct cue marks RAVEN’S arrival: the left eye is cobalt blue, and the right eye and crook are Brunello red.

RAVEN is always seen with a crook, symbolizing its leadership and guidance among birds.

RAVEN shows seasoned behavior toward SKYY LAR and says it cannot travel to London, catch its face, and then abruptly return. RAVEN shows concern about SKYY LAR’S welfare and the prosthetic and will spend the weekend with them.

RAVEN sees how SKYY LAR adapts to its new prosthetic leg and navigates its environment. It provides insights into SKYY LAR’S resilience, determination, and potential to overcome personal and collective challenges.

RAVEN shares tales of environmental degradation from the outside, which educates SKYY LAR on the broader environmental issues.

RAVEN monitors SKYY LAR’s interactions with other birds to gauge its leadership qualities, decision-making skills, and ability to inspire and unite different groups.

RAVEN proposed that SKYY LAR form a coalition of birds against environmental harm. The crook is a physical support and a metaphorical shepherd’s staff, guiding the avian community. RAVEN’s immediate interest in SKYY LAR’s welfare and the prosthetic leg and shares harrowing tales of environmental destruction seen in its travels.

At dawn on Monday, overlooking the city from a high vantage point, when the city’s noise is lowest, RAVEN proposes SKYY LAR form a coalition of birds against environmental harm. The offer aligns with SKYLAR’s core motivations of community protection and wisdom sharing.

Maybe it’s all wrong because SKYY LAR, an injured pigeon, is rising to prominence. How could this be?

Next, an informant reveals that a chemical leaked into a river nearby, along with secret meetings to promote harmful activities.

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SUMMARY

CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS

CHARACTER DESCRIPTION 1: SKYY LAR.

An unlikely two-year-old pigeon with a prosthetic left leg is on a mission to lead a global bird revolt against environmental destruction caused by the Beauty Industry.

However, the action served as the driving force for change, uniting birds and humans in the fight for environmental conservation.

The bird possesses resilience, intelligence, and a deep bond with nature. Surviving a lethal encounter with pollution sparked its commitment to the cause.

Displaying an uncanny ability to strategize and communicate with birds and humans, the pigeon prompts questions about its origins and how humans shaped its intelligence.

It carries out bold missions against the Beauty Industry, occasionally endangering its supporters for the greater good, and its battle for survival clashes with human activities, even those of well-meaning allies.

Its commitment frequently conflicts with the Beauty Industry’s goals and human’ urban development plans, even within its rebel group, where differing opinions on coexistence and strategies arise.

The pigeon’s unpredictability comes from innovative and risky strategies and emotional responses to challenges and betrayals.

SKYY LAR often clashes with the Beauty Industry and urban development plans, even within its rebel faction, with differing views on coexistence and strategies.

It shares a deep bond with a human ally and declares a truce at the peak of the rebellion.

CHARACTER DESCRIPTION 2: EMMA

A five-year-old compassionate girl who becomes an integral ally to the pigeon in their quest against environmental destruction, targeting the Beauty Industry’s negative impact.

She is a bridge between humans and birds, bringing a unique human perspective to the rebellion and leveraging her creativity and compassion to support their cause.

EMMA is empathetic, resourceful, and determined. She is personally awakened to environmental activism, spurred by her discovery of her family’s indirect involvement in the Beauty Industry’s harmful practices.

EMMA’s inner conflict and covert efforts against the Beauty Industry risk her family relationships and personal safety. Her support for SKYY LAR and the rebellion drives much of the conflict within the human sphere, challenging societal norms and family loyalties.

EMMA fights against the industry her family benefits from, making her an adversary to her kin for the more significant environmental cause.

EMMA’s environmental activism conflicts with her family’s business interests and the broader societal indifference to environmental issues, placing her in a precarious position between her convictions and familial obligations.

EMMA’s unpredictability lies in her dual life as a pupil and a covert activist. She navigates her family dynamics while undermining the beauty industry’s environmental transgressions.

EMMA’s relationship with SKYY LAR highlights the potential for a cross-species alliance and mutual growth. As her secret life unfolds, her interactions with her family complicate her character.

CHARACTER DESCRIPTION 3: DR. AVA GREEN

A fifty-six-years old innovative scientist dedicated to developing cutting-edge environmental technologies that target the detrimental effects of the beauty industry and other pollutants.

He plays a vital ally to pigeons and their human counterparts, offering scientific expertise and innovations to fight environmental destruction.

DR. AVA GREEN is brilliant, conflicted, and committed to environmental preservation. His past involvement with the beauty industry, which he now opposes, adds layers of complexity to his character.

DR. AVA GREEN’s intrigue stems from his transition from the beauty industry to environmental activism. The conflict arises from his struggle to align his past actions with his current mission, causing skepticism about his true intentions.

DR. AVA GREEN goes from causing environmental harm to becoming a prominent advocate against it, playing a crucial role as an ally to pigeons and their human supporters, providing scientific knowledge and innovations to combat environmental destruction.

DR. AVA GREEN’s devotion to preserving the environment causes tension with former colleagues, the beauty industry, and certain factions within the environmental movement who doubt his intentions and approaches.

Their relationship is complicated, with him serving as a mentor and collaborator to EMMA. At the same time, his past connects him to SKYY LAR’s struggle, resulting in an alliance full of tension and mutual distrust that changes over time.

His ability to use unconventional and sometimes questionable tactics to pursue his objectives makes him unpredictable, often surprising friends and foes.

CHARACTER DESCRIPTION 2: RAPHAEL AYISA

A two-year-old English Trumpeter pigeon known for his unique looks and cleverness, he must balance loyalty to his avian brethren and human allies in the rebellion in a complex world.

Acting as the Doubtful Participant, he finds himself frequently torn between loyalties and strategies in the rebellion against environmental destruction.

RAPHAEL is known for his sharp wit, deep loyalty, and pragmatic survival skills. The mystery surrounding his past involves unique encounters in human and avian realms.

RAPHAEL’s character is shrouded in intrigue due to his dual loyalties and secretive actions. His true intentions and covert missions remain unclear, causing speculation and conflict among allies and enemies.

RAPHAEL serves as a mediator and could be a double agent, seeking peace and safety for all, yet his actions may cause division and distrust.

RAPHAEL is caught in a balancing act between supporting SKYY LAR’s rebellion and maintaining relationships with its opponents, leading to conflicts with different characters.

RAPHAEL and SKYY LAR have a unique relationship characterized by respect, skepticism, and a shared understanding of their burdens. His relationships with characters like EMMA and DR. AVA GREEN, especially within the human world, bring depth to his role in the story.

His next move is always a mystery because of his ever-changing allegiances and strategies, leaving everyone guessing.

CHARACTER DESCRIPTION 2: RAVEN

A seasoned seven-year-old bird with a blue-black body and white breast. The pigeon’s mentor has a Cobalt blue left eye that predicts exceptional events and a Brunello red right eye that foresees danger. The bird is always carrying a crook.
The Protector of Secrets, Mystic Bridge, and Mastermind suggest the pigeon join a coalition of birds against environmental harm.
The RAVEN wants to keep everything he knows private, causing allies to feel mistrustful and frustrated.
Its insistence on ancient methods and wisdom clashes with more modern scientific approaches favored by their allied Scientist.
The bird symbolizes timeless wisdom, yet must adapt to survive in a changing world. It is the connection between ancient avian wisdom and the present environmental challenge. It assists him in rebelling and gaining a profound understanding of the avian and human realms and their interplay with ecological concerns.

RAVEN holds secrets about the natural world and the ancient relationship between birds and humans. His life is proof of survival and adaptation throughout generations of environmental change.

The combination of RAVEN’s secretive nature and ancient knowledge is intriguing. His background and wisdom remain enigmatic, fueling speculation about his past deeds and actual capabilities.

RAVEN preserves traditional wisdom while tackling modern challenges. The ancient wisdom he possesses, meant to provide protection, occasionally conflicts with the contemporary strategies of the rebellion.

The clash between his adherence to ancient avian customs and the modern methods of certain rebels causes tension and strategic dilemmas in the group.

RAVEN and SKYY LAR have a deep mentor-mentee bond filled with respect and growth. Through RAVEN’s interactions with characters like EMMA and DR. AVA GREEN, we witness the intricate balance between ancient wisdom and modern environmental activism.

RAVEN’s unpredictable nature stems from his ability to surprise friends and foes with unconventional strategies derived from his vast knowledge, making him a wildcard in the rebellion’s efforts.

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SEASON 01 EPISODE 01-08 Episode 1: The Awakening

SKYY LAR battles a Peregrine Falcon, highlighting urban wildlife’s unseen struggles. EMMA finds SKYY LAR injured and fabricates a prosthetic, altering their views on humans. Their bond lays the foundation for future activism against environmental harm.

Episode 2: The Coalition

Urban birds unite under SKYY LAR’s leadership despite initial skepticism. A toxic spill catalyzes their cause, and DR. AVA GREEN enhances their efforts. A discovered plan for an environmental protest raises the stakes.

Episode 3: Shadows of Industry

The group, leveraging DR. AVA GREEN’s insights, embarks on a mission to expose the beauty industry’s environmental impact. Their successful infiltration exposes industry practices. A whistleblower’s contact promises more revelations.

Episode 4: The Catalyst

A social media campaign and public demonstration amplify their environmental cause, facing the beauty industry’s countermeasures. Unexpected support hints at a broader network of allies, deepening the intrigue.

Episode 5: Echoes of Truth

Inspired by the history of environmental activism, SKYY LAR leads a united front of animals and humans, testing their resolve. National attention pressures the beauty industry, leading to a significant scheduled event.

Episode 6: The Gathering Storm

As tensions mount, the coalition prepares for a crucial showdown, navigating traps and misinformation. A tense standoff brings global attention and public outrage, hinting at a deeper global conspiracy.

Episode 7: Winds of Change

Reflecting on their impact, the coalition faces internal and external pressures, celebrating victories while bracing for future threats—an attack on their base signals serious opposition.

Episode 8: The Horizon Ahead

Recovering from an attack, the group commits to a global campaign, forming a worldwide alliance. Launching an international initiative, they face a powerful entity, hinting at extensive environmental negligence.

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5 SEASONS DESCRIPTIONS

Season 1: Rise of EcoHAVEN

In the heart of London, SKYY LAR, a pigeon injured by synthetic waste, and EMMA, a compassionate girl, ignite a rebellion against the beauty industry’s environmental havoc. This season tracks their journey to unite urban birds and allies, exposing the industry’s harmful practices. As they uncover a deeper conspiracy, the season ends with a revelation of a global environmental threat, setting the stage for a more significant battle.

Season 2: Coalition Under Fire

The rebellion stumbles upon a secret coalition backing the beauty industry’s exploitation of natural resources. SKYY LAR, EMMA, and their growing band of allies delve into the coalition’s sinister motives, facing betrayal from within. Their quest to dismantle this coalition reveals a complex web of global environmental manipulation. The season concludes with the alarming discovery of an even more extensive network aiming to control the planet’s ecological future.

Season 3: Shadows Within

The rebellion seeks solutions and begins a quest for ancient wisdom rumored to reverse environmental damage. This season combines thrilling adventures with charisma as the characters decode ancient texts and technologies. Their journey is fraught with challenges from a global network determined to erase this knowledge. A cliffhanger reveals a missing artifact crucial for Earth’s salvation, sparking an international hunt.

Season 4: Unveiling the Conspiracy

With the planet on the brink, the rebellion races against time to activate powerful ancient technology. This season is a dramatic fusion of action and discovery, showcasing humanity’s and avians’ united effort to thwart the global network’s destructive agenda. The activation triggers unexpected changes, reshaping life on Earth and revealing the true potential of harmony between nature and human civilization.

Season 5: The Final Fight

After the awakening, a new world emerges, where humans and birds strive to coexist and rebuild in harmony with nature. This final season explores the challenges and triumphs of this new society, navigating mistrust, cultural shifts, and the mysteries of ancient technology. The series culminates in a profound realization: the ancient wisdom was a preparation for a future where all Earth’s inhabitants coexist as equals, hinting at the next evolutionary leap.

• This reply was modified 1 year, 1 month ago by  Moses Quainoo.

[Marie Jordan]

Marie’s Edited TV Pitch Bible

What I learned doing this assignment is that the process of editing my TV Pitch Bible brought clarity, essence. I gave more importance to one character and I changed his journey for more interaction.

[Hiram Taylor]

MODULE 2 – LESSON 11

EDITING YOUR BIBLE:

Hiram Taylor: What I learned in this lesson: The processes really helped clarify the Bible. I realized “concise and clear” are the two magic words. Cutting what I thought were needed descriptions and over-wording left me with the barebones which is all that is needed in a Bible.

CONCEPT:

A skeptical reporter witnesses a terrifying phenomenon at a cult leader’s event. People in the audience suddenly transform into pure light and vanish. What happened? Where did they go? To get to the truth the two women embark on a terrifying journey into the unknown 4th Dimension.

TITLE:

BEYOND THE <b style=”background-color: var(–bb-content-background-color); font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit; color: var(–bb-body-text-color);”>4th DIMENSION

<b style=”background-color: var(–bb-content-background-color); font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit; color: var(–bb-body-text-color);”>

FORMAT/ GENRE = One hour TV series episode/ Horror<div>

WORLD = The 4th dimension, a realm of swirling colors, impossible geometries, and secrets older than time, where lost souls fight vicious demons or get devoured by the Soul Eater.

SHOW SUMMARY:

Lily Wright, a reporter, investigates a charismatic cult leader, Rivina Swift whose followers are vanishing. Lily expects a con, but the truth is far more terrifying.

People are transforming into light bodies and disappearing.

Beneath Rivina’s church lurks a hidden Light Gate leading to the 4th dimension. This dimension is a twisted labyrinth, and souls who enter don’t come back… or at least not whole.

The missing people are trapped in a horrifying alternate reality.

Lily and Rivina enter the Light Gate and become trapped in the 4th Dimension. They face monstrous entities before discovering a dark secret – a malevolent force is devouring the souls of the missing earthlings.

But, some evil on Earth is supplying the souls. Why?

Can Lily and Rivina find a way back to the Third Dimension and expose the truth?

Can they escape before the monster feeds on their light?

Main Character Descriptions:

LILY: Protagonist (Investigative journalist, determined)

RIVINA: Channeler (Knowledge of spiritual realms, haunted by visions)

MADAM ROSA: Antagonist (Witch, shadowy manipulator)

JANET: Madam’s Helper (Trickster, Liar, Lily’s rival and boss.)

Secondary Characters:

RAYMOND: Rivina’s husband, disappeared into the light but is more than he seems.

ERIC: Lily’s boyfriend. sacrificed himself to save Lily or is he tricking her to follow him?

PHIL:: CEO of the News Channel. He does not believe any of this nonsense exists.

THE SOUL EATER – an evil entity in the 4th Dimension.

Background Characters:

Demons, Monsters, Church members, police, and newsroom staff.

DETAILED MAIN CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS:

KEY INGREDIENTS:

LILY

ROLE IN SHOW: The Protagonist, a news reporter, skeptical of religious dogma, determined.

UNIQUE PURPOSE: Expose, and discover the truth behind the light transformations.

EXPERTISE: Investigative journalism, tenacity, critical thinking.

INTRIGUE: Secretly harbors past trauma involving escaping a religious cult.

UNPREDICTABLE: Will take reckless risks. Puts herself and others in danger.

MORAL ISSUES: Hates all religions, and their leaders. Doubts there is a God.

EMPATHETIC: A good person. Fights evil. Has deep emotional feelings for people.

RIVINA

ROLE IN SHOW: Channeler. Her voice turns people into light and they disappear. Seeks truth.

UNIQUE PURPOSE:: Knowledge of spiritual realms, communication skills with dead people.

EXPERTISE: Degree in religion, New Age Thinker, speaks with higher level spirit beings.

INTRIGUE:: Fears consequences of revealing the truths about light and dark.

UNPREDICTABLE: Tries to help people instead she makes them vanish.

MORAL ISSUES: She struggles with guilt, and feels responsible for the disappearances.

EMPATHETIC: Her genuine desire to help people and her vulnerability about power.

MADAM ROSA

ROLE IN SHOW: Antagonist, shadowy manipular. Sweet old lady, really a witch.

UNIQUE PURPOSE: Controlling the transformations for her gain.

EXPERTISE: Occult practices, dark magic. manipulating people and information.

INTRIGUE: Hides a tragic past that fuels her obsessions with youth and death.

UNPREDICTABLE: Will resort to any means necessary to protect her agenda.

MORAL ISSUES: Has no qualms about exploiting and killing others for power.

EMPATHETIC: We admire her determination to win at any cost.

JANET

ROLE IN SHOW: Antagonist helper. Trickster. Liar, Game player, witch.

UNIQUE PURPOSE: Twarts Lily, Confuses Rivina, Helps Madam Rosa

EXPERTISE: Manipulating people and situations with magic

UNPREDICTABLE: Contradicts, Confuses things, Misrepresents truth/lies

MORAL ISSUE: Afraid the Darkside might devour her.

EMPATHETIC: Clever, her wisecracks are funny. Creates drama with covert humor.

EPISODE DESCRIPTIONS

SEASON ONE – AGE OF LIGHT

Episode 1: Razor Blade Teeth

Lily, a truth-seeking reporter, exposes a fake healer, Madam Rosa who demands revenge. Her next investigation reveals a channeler whose audience vanishes into light. Lily is thrust into a terrifying mystery.

Episode 2: Dead People Talk

Lily delves into Rivina’s past and uncovers a sinister secret about Raymond, Rivina’s husband. Meanwhile, a power struggle erupts as Lily’s colleague, Janet, betrays her to their boss and Lily gets fired. Janet and Madam Rosa are revealed as witches who fear Rivina’s connection to the light.

Episode 3: Gone In a Flash

Lily and Rivina team up with Lily’s tech-savvy boyfriend, Eric. He vanishes during light transmission, leaving cryptic messages about an abandoned church. Lily experiences a terrifying vision. Madam Rosa performs a ritual that makes her younger.

Episode 4: Best Left Unknown

Following leads from an online forum, Lily and Rivina discover a chilling pattern: disappearances linked to light events have occurred in their city for years. In photos from each decade, a single face appears – a youthful Madam Rosa.

Episode 5: Abandon All Hope

Haunted by ghostly messages from Eric, Lily seeks answers from Rivina’s channeling. Eric’s spirit reveals a horrifying truth – he is trapped in a dark dimension beyond the light. Meanwhile, Madam Rosa hatches a risky plan to get rid of Lily and Ravina forever.

Episode 6: Devoured Souls

Unmasking Madam Rosa’s connection to the phenomenon, Lily relishes a relentless pursuit. A desperate Rivina channels Raymond, but his message confuses her. Janet, revealed as a double agent, is captured by Lily.

Episode 7: Descent into Madness

Forced to work with the treacherous Janet, Lily locates a hidden entrance beneath Rivina’s church. Janet makes a desperate deal with an evil entity, meeting a horrifying death. Rivina, drawn by a mysterious voice, disappears into the shadows. Lily is lost in the darkness.

Episode 8 (Season Finale): The Soul Eater

Lily finds Rivina transfixed before a swirling machine of light. In a vision, Rivina has learned about The Soul Eater’s agenda to devour every soul on earth. Together, they decide to confront the truth and step toward the light. But the machine shuts down. Can they find a way to activate it and escape the lurking darkness? A beam of light absorbs them and they dissolve into light.

5 SEASON DESCRIPTIONS</div><div>

Season 1: Vanishing Act

• Beginning: A string of disappearances plagues the city, all linked to a religious group led by Rivina Swift. Lily investigates, uncovering reports of people transforming into light before vanishing.

• Conflict: Lily suspects Rivina is a fraud, while Rivina fears a dark force is consuming those who reach the light. They reluctantly team up to investigate.

• Intrigue: Lily discovers a hidden chamber beneath Rivina’s church. Inside, a strange artifact glows faintly. The “Light Gate” propels people into the 4th dimension.

• Ending: As Lily touches the artifact, she and Rivina are pulled into the swirling vortex of the 4th dimension.

Season 2: Twisted Dimensions

• Beginning: Disoriented and afraid, Lily and Rivina find themselves in a mind-bending landscape with impossible geometries. They encounter fleeting glimpses of the vanished light beings, trapped and confused.

• Conflict: The 4th dimension itself is in danger, as impossible physics and shifting landscapes threaten to tear it apart. They encounter a soulless Janet, a shadow of herself. She mocks them and reveals Madam Rosa is using the Soul Eaters energy to stay young.

• Major Layer Exposed: Lily learns of Madam Rosa’s dark magic, suspecting she manipulated the Light Gate for personal gain.

• Exploring More Dangerous Ground: The hunt for a way back leads them to a desolate wasteland teeming with monstrous entities, drawn to the light within Lily and Janet..

• Ending: Facing a monstrous entity, Rivina discovers she can channel a protective light shield. They barely escape back through the Light Gate, leaving Janet trapped in the 4th dimension with the other lost souls.

Season 3: Evil is Real

• Beginning: Back in the 3rd dimension, Lily and Rivina struggle to explain their ordeal. No one believes them. Lily exposes Madam Rosa’s connection to the disappearances, but without proof, Madam Rosa triumphs again.

• Conflict: Madam Rosa, furious at Janet’s failure, uses her dark magic to discredit and silence Lily. Rivina’s visions intensify, revealing glimpses of a soul-devouring entity behind the Light Gate.

• Opponent: Madam Rosa emerges as the true antagonist, using her coven’s dark magic to gain power from the stolen light, she is supplying souls to the Soul Eater.

• Bigger Arena: The conflict spills beyond the city as Madam Rosa’s influence grows, drawing other covens into her scheme. She uses the media to push her powers to new heights.

• Ending: Through Rivina’s visions, they discover a hidden ritual to sever the connection between the Light Gate and the Soul Eater entity. They infiltrate Madam Rosa’s coven, a dark and opulent space. They are captured and led before the coven.

Season 4: A Parasite Feeding Frenzy

• Beginning: The infiltration is tense and perilous. They face trials within the coven, using their wits and Rivina’s growing channeling abilities to survive.

• Conflict: Lily uncovers Madam Rosa’s tragic past, a betrayal that fueled her desire for power. Rivina confronts the moral implications of manipulating the light beings.

• Major Layer Exposed: It’s revealed the entity is a parasitic being feeding on the souls within the stolen light. Both the stolen light and the entity threaten to engulf the world.

• Bigger Challenge: The ritual to sever the connection requires Rivina to channel an immense amount of light, potentially sacrificing herself.

• Ending: In a dramatic climax, Rivina performs the ritual, severing the connection. The stolen light beings are freed, returning as wispy figures without a soul. Lily and Rivina escape as Madam Rosa ages into an extremely old wrinkled face crone.

Season 5: Escape to the 5th Dimension

• Beginning: The freed light beings fade, hinting at an uncertain fate. Guilt hangs heavy on Rivina. Madam Rosa, stripped of her power, is a broken shell. The world is safe, but the experience has changed everyone forever.

• Conflict: The Soul Eater entity, is weakened but not destroyed and it, seeks a new way to consume souls. Lily and Rivina, haunted by the whispers of the soulless light beings, grapple with their purpose. They decide to go back into the light, travel to the 4th Dimension and destroy the Soul Eater.

• Exploring More Dangerous Ground: Lily and Rivina battle the Soul Eater determined to destroy it. When they do it turns back into Raymond, Rivina’s husband. They are trapped in the 4th Dimension. There is no way to go home as themselves

• Reincarnation: Lily and Rivina, enter the realm of the Wheel of Destiny, where each soul is judged. Once in the line, no one exits. When Raymond tries to escape he is pulled to the head of the line screaming and judged. All march towards their destiny. Lily and Rivina are next in line.

Transcendence: Through their encounters with the soul eater and the challenges of the 4th dimension, Lily and Rivina have experienced a form of enlightenment and transformation.. They transcend the limitations of the 3rd and 4th dimensions, now reaching the 5th dimension, a place of pure consciousness and understanding. They leave everything they know behind and become pure bodies of shimmering light.</div>