BWTV: Lesson 7. Great Pitch 2: Compelling Query Letters

[Lloyd Shellenberger]

Lloyd’s Inquiry letter

Vision Working hard every day to become the best writer I can and as a result I do become the best writer in Hollywood.

What I learned from this assignment is… how to use professional inquiries to get script requests.

Imagine if soldiers or military personnel you know are recruited into the spy game by a Top-Secret Pentagon agency whose only rules are kill or be killed. How would you handle it knowing there is no retirement only amendment?

Benjamin Greene takes this reality one step further as Greene and his crew are assigned increasingly more difficult Special Operations assignments over a five-year period designed to hide the government’s truths while others seek to expose it.

Are these increasingly impossible assignments a setup for failure? Who lives, who dies? There are over 35 open loops, and more than a dozen mysteries hidden in the story line designed to keep the audience guessing.

Benjamin Greene exposes the secret world of special operations in a way never before seen. As time runs out, Colonel Greene and his crew must find an exit strategy before The Puzzle works “Amends” them.

From the mind of Staff Sergeant Lloyd Shellenberger, a former Psychological Operations Specialist with several tours under his belt this is a timely and entertaining series. Lloyd Shellenberger is also a film and television screenwriter, and independent producer. His perspective isn’t from the sidelines, he has actual war time experience.

REQUEST
If you like the concept, I’d be happy to send you the TV and Streaming pilot.

CONTACT INFO
Lloyd Shellenberger
1306 North Columbus Ave. Suite 215

Glendale, CA 91202
747-210-1983

lloydshellenberger@yahoo.com

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