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  DAVID STAMPS PUTS ESSENCE TO WORK

  Posted by David Stamps on March 15, 2021 at 11:17 am

  DAVID STAMPS Puts Essence to Work

  What I learned is that though my writing was above average this essence technique applied to each and every scene has elevated my writing quality tremendously already

  Script I choose: THE BLACK BULLET DICHOTOMY

  Scene 1 Location: CLUB SPOKEN WORLD
  Logline: THIRD ACT/ CASHEW SHOOTS AND KILLS THE POETESS BECAUSE HE’S TRYING TO KILL THE MAD PROFIT
  Essence I’ve discovered: THAT THE POETESS DOESN’T NEED TO DIE TO SHOW THE ESSENCE, INSTEAD SHE’S GRAZED AND THE MAD PROFIT GOES INTO HOW SHE ATTRACTED THAT BULLET AND THAT THAT IS WHAT HE’S THERE TO TALK ABOUT THE PECULIAR RELATIONSHIP THE BLACK MAN IN AMERCIA HAS WITH THE BULLET
  New Logline: THE POETESS JUMPS IN FRONT OF THE MAD PROFIT AND HE SHOWS THROUGH HER EXAMPLE HOW SHE ATTRACTED THE BULLET

  Scene 2 Location: UTOPIA, MISS.
  Logline: IT USED TO JUST BE ABOUT THE ANCESTORS EXPLAINING THE OBVIOUS DICHOTOMY OF THE BLACK BUTTLE
  Essence I’ve discovered: THAT THERE IS A DEEPER ESSENCE WHERE A BLACK MAN IS ALSO VIOLATED IN OTHER WAYS AND I’VE DECIDED TO REPRESENT IN THE SCENE AS WELL
  New Logline: ABOUT THE SPOKEN DICHOTOMY AND THE UNSPOKE N ONE

  Scene 3 Location: UTOPIA, MISS.
  Logline: WHEN THE SLAVER COMES TO SHOOT HIM HE DOESN’T THE SLEEPER LAYS DOWN HIS GUN INSTEAD AND RECEIVES WORD ABOUT HOW TO EXPOSE THE BLACK BULLET DICHOTOMY
  Essence I’ve discovered: HE TELLS HIM THAT HE WILL SURELY DIE THIS DAY BUT IF HE CAN FIND ATONEMENT NOT ONLY WILL HE RETURN TO NON PHYSICAL AND LIVE WELL HE’LL LIVE ON ETERNALLY BECAUSE HE EXPOSED IT.
  New Logline: HIM BEING IN THE SWEET SPOT HE’S ABLE TO RECEIVE THE WORD THAT CLUES HIM INTO HIS IMMORTALITY

  Scene 4 Location: UTOPIA, MISS.
  Logline: THE BELOVED SHOPKEEPER SMACKS THE SHIT OUT OF THE SLEEPER
  Essence I’ve discovered: NORMALLY NON PHYSICAL CAN’T TOUCH YOU BUT IN THIS COMA WE CAN REACH YOU
  New Logline: HE’S IN THE PERFECT CIRCUMSTANCE TO GET HIS BREAKTHROUGH

  Scene 5 Location: PUBLIC ACCESS TV STATION
  Logline: THE BULLET KILLS THE POETESS SHOWING HOW GUNPLAY IS DEADLY
  Essence I’ve discovered: THE BULLET JUST GRAZES THE POETESS AND THE MAD PROFIT SHOWS HOW THE LAW OF ATTRACTION WAS WHAT CAUSED HER TO BE SHOT.
  New Logline: THE LAW OF ATTRACTION IS ALWAYS WORKING TO EXPAND OUR AWARENESS

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