• Andre

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    December 22, 2022 at 3:40 pm

    Andre’s Lesson10-Creating My Outline

    Starting with my 4-Act Structure, using the High-Speed Plug-And-Go process to create a 3-5 page Outline with no dialogue.

    1. Overview:

    a. Title:

    b. Genre:

    c. Logline:

    2. Do Pass 1: 4-Act Structure

    3. Do Pass 2: Add in Character Journeys.

    4. Do Pass 3: Build in Layers and Reveals.

    5. Do Pass 4: Build in the “Infinite Possibilities.”

    6. Add Slug Lines and simple Placeholders.

    in progress…

  • Andre

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    December 28, 2022 at 3:39 pm

    Lesson Step 1:

    Project Title: APT28

    Genre: Action and Suspense.

    Logline: APT28 reportedly compromised the Hillary Clinton campaign, the DNC and Democratic Congressional Campaign Committee in 2016, in an attempt to interfere with the US Presidential election.

    Project Title: “ΩmegaMAN”

    Genre: Action.

    Logline: ΩmegaMAN: The conscious evolutionary noetic experiment, known as Man. Apollo14-Edgar D Mitchell VHP Story.

    Project Title: The Triple Helix.

    Genre: Monster / Horror.

    Logline: Abortion. A T C G |10 5 6 5 + ATCCCG
    | 10 5 6 6 6 5.

    Next Step, Step 2…

  • Andre

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    December 28, 2022 at 3:53 pm

    Step 2, 4-Act Structure, 1st Pass – Omega Man

    Project Title: “ΩmegaMAN”

    Genre: Action .

    Logline: ΩmegaMAN: The conscious evolutionary noetic experiment, known as Man. Apollo14-Edgar D Mitchell A Veterans History Project.

    Act
    1: 25-30 pages – Introduce Characters and Set up the first Turning Point
    /Conflict.

    Opening Shot: Introduce us to the lead characters in action. Show us what their life is like at the beginning and lure us into the story. (Who, What, Where, Why)

    February 05, 1971.

    240,000 miles Up, in Space.

    Serving as Antares Lunar Module Pilot, is our Protagonist Dr. EDGAR D. MITCHELL; a pragmatic Test Pilot, Engineer, and Scientist, becomes (6) Sixth-Man to explore the surface of the Moon!

    Along for the ride are Alan B. Shepard Jr. and Stu Roosa

    Stark juxtaposition- 240,000 miles below, PEOPLE of EARTH fight Wars.

    They commit senseless and meaningless murder; and other crimes- lying, cheating.

    They struggle for power and status above one another.

    They abuse the environment by polluting the water and air, wasting natural resources, and ravage the land- acting out of lust and greed; hurting others through intolerance, bigotry, prejudice, and all the things that add up to man’s inhumanity to man.

    [Begin Open Credits].

    Hook:

    Ωmega. Human Consciousness
    (noetics Omega Ω), from Space, Evolutionary Experiments conducted in Space, aboard
    Antares Lunar Module- to the Moon, on the Moons’ Surface, and back.

    Main Conflict:

    “If we continue without change and without growth in our basic thinking and behavior, we will, despite spectacular technological feats, eventually end the evolutionary experiment known as man.”

    Inciting Incident: This is the call
    to go on the journey. It creates the opportunity to live outside the box and
    change their life.

    Opening Title Sequence timed with Inciting Incident- As The Apollo14 Crew conduct research, Inner-and outer-space research converge!

    The result is an expansion of awareness and a step toward developing higher CONSCIOUSNESS in the human race.

    Turning Point: A major twist. The characters are locked in the journey. There is no going back from here.

    During the voyage, a test in Extrasensory Perception (ESP), attempting to send information telepathically to four receivers on earth as Inner-and outer-space research converge! The Crew conduct research.

    Act
    2: 20-30 pages – Shift. Conflict in
    Full Swing. Challenge the Character’s Reality.

    A.
    The act of leaving
    the planet
    is one of the pivotal moments in Human History, because it
    represents a radical change in the course of progress and offers a new
    perspective of civilization.

    B. Sending information telepathically to four receivers on earth.

    C. The Crew conduct research

    Main Conflict:

    “If we continue without change and without growth in our basic thinking and behavior, we will, despite spectacular technological feats, eventually end the evolutionary experiment known as man.”

    Safely landing on the surface of the moon.

    Reaction: They are now outside the box. It is uncomfortable, maybe unbearable. But the Hero can’t go back. They must move forward in some way.

    A. On the surface of the Moon.

    The Plan: They try the first plan that comes to mind… which will quickly fail.

    B. Conduct research.

    On the threshold of rediscovering and redefining those concepts and insights through the objective, rational, experimental efforts of science.

    The proper direction of sophisticated instrumentation and laboratory techniques can be the means whereby the Physical and Meta-Physical Realms are shown to be different aspects of the same reality.

    Science conducted: In addition to their lunar studies, the Apollo 14 crew performed several experiments intended to explore various aspects of the space environment.

    These experiments were performed primarily during the journeys to and from the Moon, and on lunar surface.

    i. On the Moon: Bistatic Radar Experiment. Measured scattering of radar waves from the lunar surface.

    ii. Lunar Orbit. S-Band Transponder Experiment. Measured regional variations in the Moon’s gravitational acceleration.

    iii. The Window Meteoroid experiment studied impacts on the windows of the Apollo 14 Command Module to obtain information about the size distribution of very small micrometeorites. https://www.lpi.usra.edu/lunar/missions/apollo/apollo_14/experiments/

    iv. The Composite Casting Experiment studied the solidification of immiscible compositions in microgravity. https://www.lpi.usra.edu/lunar/missions/apollo/apollo_14/experiments/

    v. The Electrophoresis Demonstration studied the separation of organic molecules in an electric field. https://www.lpi.usra.edu/lunar/missions/apollo/apollo_14/experiments/

    vi. The Heat Flow and Convection Demonstration studied convective flow and heat transport driven by surface tension. https://www.lpi.usra.edu/lunar/missions/apollo/apollo_14/experiments/

    vii. The Liquid Transfer Demonstration studied how different types of tank design influenced the pumping of liquids between tanks in microgravity. https://www.lpi.usra.edu/lunar/missions/apollo/apollo_14/experiments/

    viii. The Light Flashes Experiment studied light flashes seen by the crew that are related to charged particles in space. https://www.lpi.usra.edu/lunar/missions/apollo/apollo_14/experiments/

    Turning Point 2: MIDPOINT: A twist that SHIFTS our reality in this story. The journey is still moving in the same direction, but the meaning has changed in a big way. Whatever SHIFT I choose, IT completely disrupts the Hero’s reality.

    A. Omega (Ω). “My real interest is-and has been for many years-to understand the nature of consciousness and the relationship of body to mind.” Omega (Ω) symbol for consciousness and noetics.

    B. Paraphysics, a new field within noetics that extends the laws and methods of physics in an attempt to explain some paranormal phenomena (chpt18).

    Some of the factors that paraphysics has found necessary to consider are: Effects of Geomagnetism, Phases of the moon. Solar radiation on living systems.

    Act 3: 20-30 pages – The Conflict escalates, but the MidPoint changes the meaning. This is important part of Hero’s transformation.

    Main Conflict:

    A.
    Human Consciousness, as real, if real, is it singular
    experience or plural collective?

    B. “If we continue without change and without growth in our basic thinking and behavior, we will, despite spectacular technological feats, eventually end the evolutionary experiment known as man.”

    C.
    Exobiology. If life has existed
    elsewhere in the universe for periods significantly longer than has Homo
    sapiens
    , how much more evolved in consciousness might such life form be?

    Exobiology-the study of the possibility of extraterrestrial life. The
    evidence of exobiology leads some scientists to wonder.

    New Plan, MidPoint changes the meaning: Now, the hero creates a new plan and pursues it. With that, they embrace the need to change.

    This could involve training sequences, bringing on new partners, or taking actions they never would have taken during the first half of the movie.

    Story effects of noetics and other experiments.

    Edgar Mitchell —–add—–

    Stu Roosa —–add—–

    Alan Shepard

    Turning Point: The “All is lost” or “lowest of the lows” moments where everything has failed.

    Story Turning Point (effects of noetics and other experiments).

    Edgar Mitchell Turning Point.

    Stu Roosa Turning Point.

    Alan Shepard Turning Point.

    Act 4: 25 pages – The ultimate expression of the Conflict and Resolution! Test the Change in This Character!

    Main Conflict:

    “If we continue without change and without growth in our basic thinking and behavior, we will, despite spectacular technological feats, eventually end the evolutionary experiment known as man.”

    Climax: The ultimate expression of the conflict. Face to face with Antagonist for the ultimate fight. This is an impossible situation that the Hero can only win with the change they have made in their lives.

    A. Story climax- The evolutionary Experiment known as Man.

    A. Edgar Mitchell character—-

    B. Stu Roosa—

    C. Alan Shepard—

    D. How did they as a team evolve conscious?

    Resolution: The change has been made or tested. We now see the new status quo of the Hero.

    B. How did they as a team become conscious?

    C. Safely depart Moon, inter-module link up, HOW?

    D. Only to “Safely” return to war torn violence filled earth.

    Closing Shot:

    A.
    Match opening shot.
    Edgar Mitchell on war torn, violence filled earth, with other Humans; amongst the
    fresh air, and the feel of the warmth of sun on Ones skin. (Exposure to
    elements is Key Issue throughout movie).

    [Roll End Credits- Omega Man].

    Working on remaining projects…

  • Andre

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    December 28, 2022 at 11:32 pm

    Step 2, Pass 1 4 Act Structure APT28 (plug in lesson 7)

    Hook: APT28 reportedly compromised the Hillary Clinton campaign, the DNC, AND the Democratic Congressional Campaign Committee, in 2016, in an attempt to interfere with the US Presidential election.


    Concept: A Threat Group has been attributed to Russia’s General Staff Main Intelligence Directorate GRU 85<sup>th</sup> Main Special Service Center military unit 26165 “APT28”.


    Main Conflict: cyber terror

    Act1:

    <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Opening: Computer COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST discovers file titled Apt28. COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST lives in Apt28.

    o COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST —-

    o GRU unit26165, “APT28”

    o GRU unit74455, “Team Sandworm”.

    Inciting Incident: COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST finds/locates file.

    o COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST finds/locates file while practicing for an online security certification.

    o MITRE>ATT&CK>HOME>GROUP>APT28

    Turning Point:

    Act2:

    New Plan:

    o COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST —–

    o WADA- World Anti-Doping Agency.

    o US Anti-Doping Agency.

    Plan in Action:

    o COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST —–

    o Cyber Operations (including close access operations), conducted between 2014-2018

    Mid-Point Turning Point:

    o A Nuclear facility.

    Act3:

    Rethink everything:

    o COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST —–

    o OPCW- Organization for the Prohibition of Chemical Weapons.

    o Spiez Swiss Chemical Lab


    New Plan:

    o COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST —–


    Turning Point / Huge failure / Major shift

    Act4:

    Final Plan:

    o Hillary Clinton Campaign.

    o US Presidential election.

    · Climax / Ultimate expression of conflict

    o COLLEGE STUDENT PROTAGONIST learns of this through research assignment in AI.


    Resolution:

    2018, the US indicts five GRU unit 26165 officers, associated with APT28, for cyber operations (including close access operations), conducted between 2014-2018.

  • Andre

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    January 19, 2023 at 5:26 pm

    Andre’s Lesson10-Creating My Outline for Contained movie The Triple Helix. (It’s time to turn this rough draft in).

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    Lesson10-Creating My Outline

    Outline 1<sup>st</sup> Pass

    “The Triple Helix”

    Pass 1: 4-Act Structure.

    Overview: Contained
    movie.

    Project Title: TheTripleHelix

    Genre: Monster / Horror.

    Logline: Life eternal. Abortion. The lucky ones died before the pandemic. [ATCG 10 5 6 5] + [ATCCCG 10 5 6 6 6 5].

    Concept: Writing
    the movie that scares Me. Why does it scare me? Because it may be a
    documentary, and not a movie.

    Utilizing
    the Urantia Book as a backdrop+Andres Creative Writing

    What
    the story is about…a contained movie about

    Life. Abortion. A contained movie about Life, about abortion (the intentional ending miscarriage of life), and the ramifications of.

    About 3000 b.c. the concept of God had grown very hazy in the minds of men. Revealed Truth was threatened with extinction during the millenniums which followed the miscarriage of the Adamic mission on Urantia.

    Though making progress intellectually, the HUMAN RACES were slowly losing ground spiritually; 93:1.1 (1014.3).

    Main Conflict: Life eternal. Intentional Abortion. What if the Lucerferian
    agenda continued?

    <br clear=”all”>

    Act
    1: 25-30 pages – Introduce
    Characters and Set up the first Turning Point/Conflict.

    Opening
    Shot-

    -During Our Opening Title Sequence, Our Beta PROTAGONIST is aborted. Setting the stage for all hell to reign on-screen, without our protagonist who may be reborn in the end, IF We make it…

    – But not often do these world princes fail in the missions

    of organizing and administering the inhabited spheres, and their success greatly facilitates the subsequent missions of the Material Sons, who come to engraft the higher forms of creature life on the primitive men of the worlds.

    Their rule also does much to prepare the planets for the Paradise Sons of God, who subsequently come to judge the worlds and to inaugurate successive dispensations.

    – His physical body, while resembling that of the human male, was in reality on the order of those especially constructed bodies used by the one hundred materialized members of Prince Caligastia’s staff except that it did not carry the life plasm of any human race.

    Inciting
    Incident-

    – But this war in heaven was very terrible and very real.

    – While displaying none of the barbarities so characteristic of physical warfare on the immature worlds, this conflict was far more deadly; material life is in jeopardy in material combat, but the war in heaven was fought in terms of life eternal.

    – Containment lockdown of 2020 and subsequent years that followed, was the perfect wet-storm rehearsal, for what is to come next…

    Hope/fear-

    – About 3000 b.c. the concept of God has grown very hazy in the minds of men/women.

    -Revealed truth is threatened with extinction during the millenniums which followed the miscarriage of the Adamic mission on Urantia/Earth.

    – Though making progress Intellectually, the HUMAN RACES are slowly losing ground spiritually).

    Turning Point-

    – Is this a movie, or a documentary? Blur the line between movie and documentary.

    Hook:

    – [ATCG 10 5 6 5] + [ATCCCG 10 5 6 6 6 5].

    A. Material life is in jeopardy in material combat, but the war in heaven was fought in terms of life eternal.

    <br clear=”all”>

    Act
    2: 20-30 pages – Shift. Conflict in Full Swing. Challenge the Character’s
    Reality.

    New
    Plan-They try the first
    plan that comes to mind… which will quickly fail.


    Bring over the souls. With enough
    Adrenochrome, the Living ANTI-MATTER can be realized.

    Theme
    music: How Villains are Made -Madalen Duke to Unholy Sam Shepard.

    Plan in Action-


    A FINGER on Pulse,
    reading heartbeat. Close Up. A FINGER on Pulse, reading heartbeat. Souls
    needed.

    Mid-Point
    Turning Point- (major plot twist, no going back)

    – (Hope/fear). Twins, Triplets and more pregnancies into abortions.

    – Time is running out! What if the Lucerferian agenda continues?

    Main
    Conflict:


    Writing the movie that scares Me. Why does it scare me?
    Because it may be a documentary, and not a movie.


    Urantia Book+Andres Creative Writing+What if the Lucerferian
    agenda continued?

    Reaction: They are now outside the box. It is uncomfortable, maybe unbearable. But the Hero can’t go back. They must move forward in some way.

    1. A FINGER on Pulse, reading heartbeat.

    The Plan: Tie into Act3…They try the first plan that comes to mind… which will quickly fail.

    1. Bring over the souls. With enough Adrenochrome, the Living ANTI-MATTER can be realized.

    2. Theme music: How Villains are Made -Madalen Duke to Unholy Sam Shepard.

    Turning Point 2: MIDPOINT: A twist that shifts our reality in this story. The journey is still moving in the same direction, but the meaning has changed in a big way.

    Whatever shift I choose, it completely disrupts the Hero’s reality.

    1. The abortion clinic is the White House.

    2. Half to two-thirds SANs dead! Relationships are illusory and transitory, temporary in human nature.

    3. All hope is gone.

    a. We learn of the inversion.

    <br clear=”all”>

    Act
    3: 20-30 pages – The conflict
    escalates, but the Midpoint changes the meaning.

    Rethink
    everything.

    1. …From ACT2 tie in, Inversion. Hope/fear. Abortions are final. What is done, is done.

    2. Eyes. Sclera. Vision inverted brain neurology. Lighting. Depth of field.

    New
    Plan


    Hope/fear Double
    Helix to Triple Helix, Cytosine, from ATCG 10 5 6 5 to ATCCCG
    | 10 5 6 6 6 5.

    – Turning Point: Huge failure / Major shift. (major plot twist, no going back) (Hope/Fear):

    – FLATLINE. The FINGER reading the heartbeat Pulse reads-FLATLINE.

    – Something ELSE is born.

    – Cheap overhead fluorescent lighting alternative. But what to do with the leftovers? Recycling use?

    Main Conflict:

    The movie is about and focuses on the spiritual —- when an intentional abortion is performed, and the aborted fetuses are used for various purposes, especially financial. In God We Trust? what could possibly go wrong with profit driven medicine, with Gods name on it? This movie explores that possibility…probability. The movie that scares me. [creating the devil as pots & vp of senate- all powerful.]

    Writing the movie that scares Me. Why does it scare me? Because it may be a documentary, and not a movie. Urantia Book+Andres Creative Writing+What if the Lucerferian agenda continued?

    Abortions are final. What is done, is done.

    New Plan: Now, the hero creates a new plan and pursues it. With that, they embrace the need to change. This could involve training sequences, bringing on new partners, or taking actions they never would have taken during the first half of the movie.

    – Within the Contained environment, Asclepius continues to work for Zeus in bringing souls over, fearful of lighting, Asclepius works in an abortion clinic, aborting souls, for a nefarious purpose, gathering the energy of the anguish from the abortion, and merging that anguish with anti-matter, material generated from particle accelerator.

    – A particle accelerator built underneath the abortion clinic and nursery. The covid, along with focus on chanting BLM, BLACK, conjured DARK ENERGY, especially with black lives matter, brought about the necessary fear!

    – The black community is used to harness support for black life, while that energy was also being harnessed to create a dark void of living anti matter, positioned to be potus the American president, all powerful and aligned with and born of evil, a “black life” that matters, black as in void, and all powerful.

    Turning Point: The “All is lost” or “lowest of the lows” moments where everything has failed.

    1. FLATLINE. The FINGER reading the heartbeat Pulse reads-FLATLINE.

    2. Something ELSE is born.

    a. Cheap overhead fluorescent lighting alternative. But what to do with the leftovers? Recycling use?

    <br clear=”all”>

    Act
    4: 25 pages – The
    Planetary Prince The ultimate expression of the Conflict and Resolution!
    Test the Change in This Character!

    A. Final
    Plan.

    B. Climax
    / Ultimate expression of conflict (Hope/fear)

    – The very first divine revelation of epochal significance to visit our planet 500,000 years ago. -also known as the Planetary Prince of Urantia, is been born.

    C. Resolution

    – In God We Trust has been eliminated; new currency is that of blood of Antagonist, 1056665, For the love of money.

    D. Closing
    Shot


    The CEMETARY adorned
    with a MARBLE STATUTE WITH TWO FIGURES, ONE WITH A TAIL, with now 23 FRESHLY
    (albeit tiny) DUG GRAVESITES, a TOUR of PREGNANT WOMEN visiting what could be
    the White House.


    Visitor Logs…

    – Within the clinic walls, clear sky full moon, our Protagonist is Born, as the Antagonist dies. Out of two negatives merging, not colliding, our ALPHA MALE PROTAGONIST is born, full moon under soft lights, not cheap overhead fluorescent lighting.

    – So too is HIS Twin, HER physical body, while resembling that of the human female, was in reality on the order of those especially constructed bodies used by the one hundred materialized members of Prince Caligastia’s staff, with the exception that it did carry the life plasm of the human race. Yes, a female by the name GABRIEL.

    – [Roll End Title Sequence] of a conception; Our Protagonist Adrenochrome the totality of absolute Fear is being conceived, triple helix 10 5 6 6 6 5, no sclera, no body hair, shadowy dimension that does not reflect light, but absorbs them.

    1. Were you scared? Are you scared?

    Pass 2: Add in
    Characters Journeys

    Pass 3: Build in Layers
    and Reveals

    Pass 4: Build in
    Infinite Possibilities

    Lesson
    11: outline Part 2-

    Pass 5: Build Character
    Depth.

    Pass 6: Add Setups for
    Major Events

    Pass 7: Read and edit
    for Flow and Clarity. Does it work well and read well?


    Note: I know there are holes, it is time to get to Pass #2.

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