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Day 11 Assignment
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Inherently Dramatic Character Profiles – Before and After
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Description – original: A young boy who finds himself at the center of a terrorist conspiracy, must outrun and outwit a powerful adversary.
Description New—When everyone he cares about is threatened, a young and insecure boy must draw upon the lessons he’s learned from friends and family to thwart a terrorist.
Traits – original: Loving, Brave, Respectful, Insecure
Traits – new: Loving, Insecure, Resourceful, Loyal
Subtext: What does it mean to be a hero when you’re just an ordinary kid?
Subtext New: Love conquers all—even when you’re just an ordinary kid trying to save the world from a terrorist.
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Description – original: A trusting child has secretly formed a friendship with a supernatural being.
Description new – when a stranger comes to town with ill intent, it is the love and innocence of a child that turns both their lives around.
Traits – original: Secretive, Trusting, Strong, Unforgiving
Traits – new: Vulnerable, Secretive, Independent, Loving
Subtext-original: When a young girl loses her parents in a horrible incident, she forms a connection that may endanger her own life.
Subtext-new: As a young girl grows to womanhood, she comes to understand the incredible gift of strength and love that an enduring friend has given her.
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Description – original: A grieving boy learns to trust and love again.
Description – new: A brokenhearted boy learns to let go of loss in order to love again.
Traits – original: Adventurous, loving, stubborn, grieving
Traits – new: Brokenhearted, Willful, Loyal, Loving
Subtext – original: When a boy and his friends get lost in a dangerous forrest, they must outwit and outrun and adversary.
Subtext – new: When a boy and is friends find themselves the target of an adversary, he learns that he can’t fight her alone — only through loving and trusting each other, can the friends defeat her and return home.
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