• Christina Parker

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    May 24, 2021 at 3:07 am

    Christina Parker Elevated Scene Structures

    What I’ve learned about the lesson is that this was difficult for me as this script’s scenes have been revised and revised countless times and I struggled to elevate them with deeper meaning, more than I already have done so far. By going through each scene with it in mind, I found improvements in 2 scenes.

    This scene only had Connor riding home and waving to Earl & Sam. I’ve given it deeper meaning by including a flash of a traumatic event that has a surprise element that will become more evident in later episodes.

    EXT. STREET – CONTINUOUS

    Connor rides his bike. He waves to two old men known as EARL & SAM, sitting on the porch, they wave back.

    He steadies the bike and lets go of the handlebars, spreading his arms wide and closing his eyes. He sees in his mind the sky and clouds floating by, he’s flying.

    Suddenly, the scene changes to a door violently closing and darkness. He opens his eyes his hands grasp the bars, disturbed.

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