Day 11: Time to exchange feedback.

[Eclipse Neilson]

I am exchanging with Rene and will be away next week.

[Renee Brown]

I’ll be ready for feedback in the AM. (Sun. 8/14)

My Drama features two star-crossed lovers who reunite decades later in a small Montana town that holds big hearted secrets.

Let’s do this. Renee Brown

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[Ian Greenham]

I’m ready for feedback. My drama features identical twin sisters who don’t discover one another until they’re in their early 30s.

[Tom Wilson]

Hi, Ian:

Can we exchange outlines? I would appreciate feedback on my Drama – Thriller.

Please send your outline to me.

I will reply with a copy of mine.

I look forward to seeing your outline!,
Tom, wilsontomj@gmail.com

[Ian Greenham]

I’m ready for feedback. My drama features identical twin sisters who don’t discover one another until they’re in their early 30s – one imprisoned for a murder she claims she did not commit, asked to give a bone marrow transplant for the other who’s a defense attorney diagnosed with leukemia.

[Claudia Wolfkind]

Hi Ian,

I got your request, let’s exchange! My email is sunnyswindow@yahoo.com

[Bill kellas]

Bill Kellas I’m ready for feedback I have twin brothers who change the world. Action thriller

[Tracy Lawson]

I’m ready for feedback! I tried to reach out using the directions in our assignment and can’t send anyone a message. Could someone please post how or contact me?

Revolutionary Anna is a period drama based on actual events. A woman bringing supplies to her husband at Valley Forge agrees to carry an urgent message from a congressman to General Washington. Now an assassin is hunting her, trying to get the message back.

Edit: I tried to follow the directions in the class assignment to connect with someone. I clicked on photos and names, and I can’t send any of you messages, not even Cheryl.

• This reply was modified 2 years, 9 months ago by  Tracy Lawson. Reason: I can't follow the directions given in the class assignment
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[Renee Brown]

Hey Tracy,

I just sent you a private message with my email. Check the top right of your tool bar for the message icon.

Renee

[Tom Wilson]

Hi, Tracy:

Can we exchange outlines? I would appreciate feedback on my Drama – Thriller.

Please send your outline to me.

I will reply with a copy of mine.

I look forward to seeing your outline!,
Tom, wilsontomj@gmail.com

[Bill kellas]

Send your email to lbkellas@sbcglobal.net if you want to exchange outlines

[Rebecca Sukle]

I am ready to exchange feedback. Concept: To prevent coal and iron police from massacring men, women, and children working a picket line, a WWI Silver Star recipient must, without detection, execute the rabid commander who violently dominates their community.

[Tracy Lawson]

Ian Greenham and I exchanged feedback.

Farrin Rosenthal and I have agreed to exchange feedback.

[Lori Lance]

I’m ready to exchange feedback. A have a family comedy called New Mom. When a family hires an AI to help when the mom’s away for work, the AI decides to take the mom’s place permanently.

[Bill kellas]

Lori I would be interested in an exchange as we both are using AI in our story . I need a different take on my work and having raised a family yours interested me

[Lori Lance]

Bill, I would be happy to exchange outlines. I sent a connection request so we can exchange emails. Thanks.

[Claudia Wolfkind]

Hi Lori,

I got your request. I would love to exchange with you, sunnyswindow@yahoo.com

[Jeff Chase]

Hi, Lori. I’ve been out of town and don’t know if you’re are busy with requests. I’d love to exchange if you have time. You can email me at jeff@chaseinternet.com and I’ll respond with my outline.

Take care.

Jeff

[Bill kellas]

Bill Kellas I have and action thriller called Satans Sons Secrets about twins that become warriors one a transhuman the other spiritual . They battle for the future of the world,I’m ready for feed back

[Robert Smith]

Hello, dear Colleagues and Friends:

I am Robert “Bob” Smith. I am ready to exchange outlines and supportive feedback.

My project is “Angels in Gangland” an adaptation of my award winning stage play of the same title. Genre: Gangster Comedy.

Concept: A slain mobster cannot get into the world to come because of his life of crime, his only hope is to return to gangland and persuade his killer to do as he should have done, namely, quit the mob, flip, and enter the Witness Protection Program. THINK: “The Sopranos” meets “It’s a Wonderful Life” with a Jewish twist.

I look forward to partnering.

All the Best,

Bob

Robert Russell Smith

RobertRSmith4646@comcast.net.

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[Farrin Rosenthal]

Hi Bob,

I would be happy to exchange outlines with you. I’ll send you an email. Thank you!

Sincerely,

Farrin

[Robert Smith]

Thank you, Farrin, I rec’d your email and outline and just replied with my own. Any problems opening it, please let me know.

Bob

[Rebecca Sukle]

Hi Robert,

Would you exchange feedback with me. Concept: To prevent coal and iron police from massacring men, women, and children working a picket line, a WWI Silver Star recipient must, without detection, execute the rabid commander who violently dominates their community.

Thank you,

Rebecca Sukle

[Robert Smith]

Hi, Rebecca.

Very glad to exchange with you.

Many thanks for asking.

Bob

Robert Russell Smith

RobertRSmith4646@comcast.net

[Jeff Chase]

Robert,

Jeff Chase here. I sent you an email today. Ready for an exchange?

Take care.

Jeff

[Robert Smith]

My sincere apologies, Jeff. I totally missed your email and your post here until Cheryl reminded me. Please send me the email again.

Best Always,

Bob

[Jeff Chase]

Robert,

Just sent you my outline. Looking forward to reading yours.

Take care.

Jeff

[Claudia Wolfkind]

I’m ready for feedback!

My Romantic Comedy “CLEAN SWEEP”: After her father suffers a heart attack a wannabe Martha Stewart germaphobe must take over her family’s cleaning business, along the way she meets the love of her life, not knowing he’s the world’s worst slob.

[Ian Greenham]

Claudia,

I’d be happy to exchange if you like. My Drama is entitled “Sister in Time”. It’s about two identical twin sisters who don’t discover one another until they’re in their early 30s, one an attorney, one a former nurse in prison for a murder she claims she did not commit.

Ian Greenham; greenhamian@aol.com

[Rebecca Sukle]

Hi Claudia,

I would like to exchange feedback.

[Claudia Wolfkind]

Hi Rebecca,

Hal told us not to exchange with more than one person. I didn’t hear that until I exchanged with 2 people. I’m not sure if we are allowed to exchange again until the next round. I didn’t catch today’s call as I work on Saturdays.

[Joseph McGloin]

Hi Claudia,

I also have a Romcom and would like to exchange

[Erik Wooten]

Anyone care to exchange outlines with me? I am writing the one about the two orphans hiding out in the world’s biggest shopping mall, a family comedy-drama, so if you like this genre, maybe you’d want to exchange.

Any takers? Thanks!

-Erik

[Lori Lance]

I have a family comedy also and would be happy to exchange feedback. Please message me with your email. Thanks.

[Erik Wooten]

Thanks Lori. I am guessing you got my message back to you….

[Claudia Wolfkind]

Hi Lori,

I got your request, would also love to exchange with you. My email is sunnyswindow@yahoo.com

[Claudia Wolfkind]

Hi Erik, I would love to exchange with you. I have a romantic comedy. I love family pics. You can email me at sunnyswindow@yahoo.com

• This reply was modified 2 years, 9 months ago by  Claudia Wolfkind.

[Erik Wooten]

OK, thanks! And if we want to use the messaging I guess we have to do the connection request first.

[Claudia Wolfkind]

LOL, sorry Erik, I didn’t see that until just now, and I accepted. You can send your outline to me at: sunnyswindow@yahoo.com

[CJ Knapp]

Hi – I am ready to exchange! I have a thriller:

Title: MEMORY HUNTERS

Concept:

In a future with technology to retrieve memories, a Memory Retrevalist, caught in the mind of a psychopath struggles to find a way out before he destroys her mind and kills her.

[Robert Smith]

Wow, CJ, that’s a powerful concept there. It reminds me of Curt Siodmak’s Donovan’s Brain and Hauser’s Memory. Siodmak also wrote the original 1940 “The Wolf Man”.

I look forward to reading your outline. Please send it to me and I’ll reply with mine.

Many thanks.

Best Always,

Bob

Robert Russell Smith

RobertRSmith4646@comcast.net.

[CJ Knapp]

Just sent it!

[CJ Knapp]

Hi Robert – just checking to make sure you got my outline and to see if you have sent yours yet?

thanks!

[Leona Heraty]

Hello! I have a family sci-fi comedy and would love to exchange feedback. Thanks! 😎

[Lori Lance]

Hi Leona,

I’d like to exchange outlines.

Lori

[Leona Heraty]

Hi Lori,

That’s great! I’ll send you an IM with my email.

[Leona Heraty]

Hi Lori,
I can’t figure out how to do the IM. My email is heraty.leona@gmail.com.

[Lori Lance]

Okay, thanks.

[Leona Heraty]

What’s your email? Also, on the outlines, are we supposed to keep in the Scene Arc, Essence, etc and Beginning, Middle and End?

[Lori Lance]

lori.lance@comcast.net

The last lesson asked for the beginning, middle, and end of each scene, so I kept those in my outline, but it’s up to you if you want to keep those.

[Leona Heraty]

OK. Are you also including the Scene Arc, Essence, etc?

[Bobby Sacher]

I am NOT done with Lesson 10, but following my self/Hal-imposed deadline, I am ready to exchange feedback with anyone willing to slog through One Act of Beginning/Middle/End, and Three Acts of “Scene Arc/Essence/etc”!

Title: JASON VS THE ZOMBIES

Genre: Horror/Comedy

Log Line: A tormented, aspiring serial killer has to join forces with the bullies who were his intended victims when their cabin is attacked by Civil War zombies.

[Leona Heraty]

Oops, I don’t know how to delete this post.

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[Micki Hess]

I am ready for exchange for my outline.

Thank you in advance.

Title: FIREWORKS

Genre: COMEDY

Concept:

A worn-out family who are fed-up with the sisters’ feud; so they plan to lock them up until the feud is over during the holiday.

[Linda Anderson]

Hi Michale,

I’d like to exchange feedback with you for “Fireworks.” The description of my entry for “Ticket to Live” is below yours on this forum. I can’t figure out how to PM you. So my email is lindaander@aol.com.

If you’re interested, just send me an email. Thanks.

Linda Anderson

[Micki Hess]

Yes I would like to exchange with you, Linda.

Mine is authormicki@gmail.com

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[Linda Anderson]

Linda Anderson’s Outline Exchange 1

Linda and Michale are exchanging feedback, as of 8-18-22.

Linda and Sandra Nelles are exchanging feedback, as of 8-18-22.

Title: Ticket to Live

Genre: Buddy-Movie Drama

Concept: Based on a bestselling memoir—an ex-cop with PTSD faces the greatest danger of his life after he rescues an abandoned dog who faces being euthanized. In their dual healing journey, they come together at exactly the right time for miracles to occur.

[Linda Anderson]

Linda Anderson’s Outline Exchange 1 (in the first line)

I am ready to exchange feedback. Thank you.

Title: Ticket to Live

Genre: Buddy-Movie Drama

Concept: Based on a bestselling memoir—an ex-cop with PTSD faces the greatest danger of his life after he rescues an abandoned dog who faces being euthanized. In their dual healing journey, they come together at exactly the right time for miracles to occur.

[Sandra Nelles]

Hi Linda,

I would like to exchange outlines with you. I have a drama, titled Smugglers Journey. Concept: The adventures of a young sea captain lured into the dangerous world of crude oil smuggling, where he faces a firing squad if captured. Thank you, Sandra. My email is s.nelles@att.net

[Joseph McGloin]

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Concept:

A future female president has a guardian angel who
abandons his mission when he falls in love with her.

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[Rebecca Sukle]

Hi Joseph,

I would like to exchange feedback with you. Mine is an action/drama Ragman’s War.

[Joseph McGloin]

Ok Rebecca. My email is josephmcgloin2@gmail.com. When I receive yours I will send you my Pdf. ok?

[Eclipse Neilson]

I will be away until Thursday but will be looking for exchanges. I do need some feedback. Tom is one but to make up i will need more. My script is a scy-fi mystical drama – THE NUN AND THE WITCH.

Email address: eclipsfey@aol.com

Genre: sci-fi, mystical drama

Concept: When a dedicated nun destined to become a saint, bonds with a witchy type healer to achieve a sacred task from their past life together – all hell breaks out in the village

[Rebecca Sukle]

I am ready to exchange feedback on Version 3 of Ragman’s War.

[Pat Fitzgerald]

Hi Rebecca, If you’re willing to have a look at my rom com, I’d like to give feedback to Ragman’s War. I sent you a connection request. My concept info is at the very bottom of all these messages.

[Claudia Wolfkind]

I’ve exchanged with Lori and Ian and we have given feedback. I missed the “only exchange with one person at a time” note in the email, the Mastery call evidently reiterated this, but it hasn’t been posted yet for those of us who aren’t available on Saturdays.

[Jeff Chase]

Jeff Chase here.

Back in town and ready to exchange for the first time.

Genre: Thriller (Antagonist driven)

Title: Shards

Logline: A woman with no childhood memory is involved in a cat and mouse game with a cunning hypnotist not knowing the man is responsible for both her amnesia and the death of her treasure hunter father.

[Farrin Rosenthal]

Hi Jeff,

I’m looking for a new round of feedback for my thriller, “Trapped” and would like to exchange with you if you’d like. Thank you.

[Jeff Chase]

Hi Farrin,

I’m making some changes to my outline. Should be done Weds or early thursday. I’d love to exchange. My email is jeff@chaseinternet.com. Send me yours if that works for you.

[Farrin Rosenthal]

Sounds great, will email you, thanks, Jeff!

[Bill kellas]

Farrin I have an action thriller and would like t§§o exchange bill Kellas

[Farrin Rosenthal]

Hi Bill,

Let’s do it! Email me at write4film@aol.com, thanks!

[Pat Fitzgerald]

I’m ready to exchange feedback for my rom com, The Home Strip

Concept: Planning to bilk a geezer out of his money, an aging stripper takes her act into an assisted living home, only to find true love for the first time.

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[Leona Heraty]

Hi Pat. I would love to exchange outlines with you!

Lori Lance gave me some excellent feedback on the first round, so I’d love your feedback on round 2.

I’m writing a family comedy. Your concept sounds like a lot of fun! My email is heraty.leona@gmail.com.😎

[Pat Fitzgerald]

Yes, let’s exchange outline. I haven’t gotten any feedback as yet, so I’m anxious to get the process started. My email is: peggi_oh@yahoo.com

[Joseph McGloin]

Hi Pat,

I also have a RomCom and would like to exchange feedback. And I responded to your connection request so will watch my gmail for a next step. I haven’t connected with a fellow SU student through that process yet.

Joe

[Pat Fitzgerald]

I had one exchange request ahead of yours, so I’m going with that one first. When I’m finished with it, I would love to contact you again so we can give each other feedback. I hope that’s okay.

[Joseph McGloin]

Sounds good, Pat.

[Bobby Sacher]

Ready to exchange feedback on my script. Details below – PM me if you’re interested.

Bobby

Title: JASON VS THE ZOMBIES

Genre: Horror/Comedy

Log Line: A tormented, aspiring serial killer has to join forces with the bullies who were his intended victims when their cabin is attacked by Civil War zombies.

[Jane Turville]

Hi Bobby, I’d be happy to exchange feedback with you. My project won’t be ready until this evening. If you would like to send me your outline for review, I’m at jcturville@gmail.com. Looking forward to reading!!

[Bobby Sacher]

Jane,

Sounds great! And don’t worry about wonky – is what it is at this point, right? I’ll send you my pdf now (a bit long – no idea how to get a full outline with beginning/middle/end of each scene into 5 pages or so, at least not using Final Draft format!)

Bobby

[Jane Turville]

Hi Bobby, I just sent you my outline and the notes I had for your outline. REALLY enjoyed reading your outline. So much action!! It really moves! Let’s keep swapping back and forth when we have to exchange. I’d love to see how your story moves along.

[Jane Turville]

Hi, Jane here. I’ll be ready to exchange feedback this evening (Wednesday, August 24). I haven’t been able to do lessons 9 and 10 for my entire outline so it’s a little mismatched and wonky! But if you’re game to exchange feedback, I’d love to hear from you.

My Project:

Title: Not a Clue!

Concept: In this parody on tea cozy murder mysteries, a Poirot-like character and a Miss Marple-like character compete to prove which of them is the greatest detective only to discover that a murder has happened and that one of them is the next victim.

Genre: Parody of a Tea-Cozy Murder Mystery

[Bobby Sacher]

Sounds like a ball, Jane! Can’t wait to read it

Bobby

[Terrie Cooper Lee]

I’d like to exchange feedback with someone. This will be my first round feedback (thanks Covid!).

Genre: Rom-com

Title: You Gotta’ Be Ex-ing.

Contact me here, I’m at writernm@yahoo.com

Concept: A US Marshall is charged with getting a conspiracy theorist into witness protection, but it’s her ex and his crazy theories are true.

• This reply was modified 2 years, 9 months ago by  Terrie Cooper Lee. Reason: forgot to list my concept

[Pat Fitzgerald]

Hi Teresa, I’d like to exchange feedback with you. I also have a rom- com.

Concept: Planning to bilk a geezer out of his money an aging stripper takes her act into an assisted living home, only to find true love.

My email is: peggi_oh@yahoo.com.

Feel free to send me your outline, and I’ll get mine to you.

[Jacqueline Murphy]

I’m ready to exchange feedback. I’m working on a film called “Sorceress of Hollywood” a drama thriller with fantasy elements.

Concept: A failed Actress meets a handsome devil who “time travels” her to 1940’s Hollywood as a movie star but she stumbles on her families genetic trait that allows her to create magic, time travel and make changes in time!

You can email me at jacquelinemurphy13@me.com.

Look forward do hearing from you! Jacqueline

• This reply was modified 2 years, 9 months ago by  Jacqueline Murphy.

[Terrie Cooper Lee]

Jacqueline – if you are up for exchanging I’d appreciate some feedback. Since it’s late I’ll go ahead and email mine to you.

• This reply was modified 2 years, 9 months ago by  Terrie Cooper Lee.
• This reply was modified 2 years, 9 months ago by  Terrie Cooper Lee.

[Robert Smith]

Dear Jacqueline:

I write this with apologies. I know you sent me an email with an outline attached earlier today. It is no longer in my inbox and isn’t in trash or spam. Please re-send your email to me at RobertRSmith4646@comcast.net.

Thank you so much, including for your patience.

Best Always,

Bob

Robert Russell Smith

[Claudia Wolfkind]

Question about the outline. I’m working on my outline for the second round of exchanges… are we supposed to have the beginning/middle/ending in the outline or leave it out? The description after each slug line states what’s in these so it seems redundant.

[Eclipse Neilson]

I am back and will be exchanging with Jacqueline Murphy next.

[Pat Fitzgerald]

I am ready for another round of feedback for my rom-com, The Home Strip.

Concept: Planning to bilk a geezer out of his money an aging stripper takes her act into an assisted living home, only to find true love for the very first time.

Anyone who is interested can contact me at: peggi_oh@yahoo.com.

Update: An exchange has been made.

• This reply was modified 2 years, 9 months ago by  Pat Fitzgerald.

[Jane Turville]

Hi Pat, I’m looking to exchange for feedback. I have loved your concept from the start and would love to read your outline. Here’s the scoop on my project:

Title: Not a Clue!

Concept: In this parody on tea cozy murder mysteries, a Poirot-like character and a Miss Marple-like character compete to prove which of them is the greatest detective only to discover that a murder has happened and that one of them is the next victim.

Genre: Parody of a Tea-Cozy Murder Mystery

If you’re interested in exchanging, please send me an email at jcturville@gmail.com.

[Pat Fitzgerald]

Thanks Jane! I sent you an email.

[Farrin Rosenthal]

Hi all,

I’m looking to do one more feedback exchange on my thriller outline.

Please contact me here or by email if you would like to exchange outlines. Thank you.

Title: TRAPPED

Written By: Farrin Rosenthal

Email: write4film@aol.com

Genre: Thriller

Concept: Claustrophobic and trapped in an underwater grave for stealing $3.6 billion in Bitcoin from the Russian mob, a Los Angeles retail store manager has just 60 minutes to prove his innocence and save his family.

[Jamie Handley]

I am exchanging feedback with Kristin Donnan. We have agreed to give feedback with each other.

If anyone is available to give additional feedback this late I would appreciate it. My story is as follows:

Genre – DRAMA –

Title – WITHOUT RECOURSE – Inspired by a True Story

Concept – Two women battle with the FDA, AMA and Justice System when one has a life threatening medical condition and her doctor and attorney are part of the Medical Mafia.

Sorry so late but I had to change how to tell the story when I needed copyright permission and some Fair Use issues. Publisher agreed finally and talk about quick writing…well, it’s rough and I need to work on it a lot more but the skeleton is done. Thanks, Jamie

[Laura Koons]

Hi Jamie,

I’m available to give you additional feedback for your story WITHOUT RECOURSE.

Please feel free to email: LadyLauraKoons@gmail.com

Thank you,

Laura Koons

[Claudia Wolfkind]

I’ve exchanged twice. Awaiting feedback from my second outline share.

[Pat Fitzgerald]

Hi Claudia, If you’re interested in doing another exchange for feedback I’d love to see your outline. I send you an invitation to connect, or you can email me at: peggi_oh@yahoo.com.

I have a rom com. The concept is: Planning to bilk a geezer out of his money an aging stripper takes her act into an assisted living facility, where she finds true love.

[Eclipse Neilson]

I have exchanged twice and waiting for my third one’s feedback. The first two were incredibly helpful.

[Andrew Kelm]

Andrew Kelm’s Outline Exchange 1

Finally ready! Please let me know if you would like to do an exchange.

[Gisele FRAZEUR]

Andrew – –

I have just now finished up myself. I would love to exchange feedback if you are interested.

Thanks,

Gisele

[Andrew Kelm]

excellent! My email is ndrwkelm@gmail.com. Send me your script and I will reply with mine. Thanks!

[Gisele FRAZEUR]

On the way now – – from: doglover3@centurylink.net

[Tom Wilson]

Feedback available:

My revised outline needs your input. Please send your Outline PDF to wilsontomj@gmail.com and I will reply with mine.

Thanks,
Tom

[Farrin Rosenthal]

Hi Tom,

Just sent you my outline. Thank you.

Sincerely,

Farrin

[Valeriya Ordinartseva]

Hi!

Catching up here. My outlines will be ready for feedback in five days. If you could benefit from having the same deadline, let’s exchange then! valeriya.ordinartseva@gmail.com

Concept 1

Horror Thriller

Following her therapist’s advice, a woman asks her “monster-under-the-bed” to come out into the light where she can deal with it… but the monster has other ideas.

Concept 2

Sci-Fi Thriller

Robots became too human and people start a dehumanization program to get rid of them. Can a girl brought up by a robot prove that she isn’t one before she and her robot get killed?

[Farrin Rosenthal]

Hi Valeriya,

I really like your horror thriller concept! Are you adding humor to it? Can easily be a horror-comedy, but might be better to market it as a horror-thriller, as labeling something a horror-comedy seems harder to sell. Anyway, the setup lends itself to funny moments. Would love to read your outline when ready.

Sincerely,

Farrin

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[Valeriya Ordinartseva]

Hi Farrin! Just saw your comment!!! Thank you!

Horror is a foreign land for me, let alone comedy horror)))) venturing out of my comfort zone one step at a time.

Let’s exchange if you are still up to it!

anoikto@mail.ru

[Peter Symons]

Talk about late to the party…

Recovering from COVID. Anyone want to exchange feedback?

[Farrin Rosenthal]

Hi Peter,

I hope you are feeling better. I’ve started writing my first draft but would still like to exchange outlines with you if you’re looking for feedback. You can email me at write4film@aol.com Thanks.

[Peter Symons]

Hey Farrin,

thanks! I’ll send my outline today.

[Linda Kish]

I’m quite late to the party, but would be great to exchange outlines if anyone is still interested.

Title: Rise of the Falcon

Genre: Action Thriller

Concept: Born into the cartel, all he’s ever wanted is freedom. Now’s his chance – the head of the cartel is dying and puts his succession up for competition. But can this low-level worker win against ruthless heavyweights who are coming after his family, a point system that rewards heinous crimes, and morals that he swore he’d never cross?

[Valeriya Ordinartseva]

Hi Linda! I’d be happy to exchange! Please send your outline to valeriya.ordinartseva@gmail.com

[Jamie Handley]

I exchanged feedback from Kristine Donnan on 8/27/22 and from Terri Cooper Lee 8/29/22

[Jamie Handley]

I have given both Terrie Cooper and Kristine Donnan on 9/20/22 my rough outline as they have offered and extended their help knowing my situation. They both give very different feedback, both are good.

[Jamie Handley]

Terrie Cooper and Kristine Donnan are giving me feedback.

[Teresa Rodriguez]

I am getting feedback from Eclipse Neilson! : )

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[Valeriya Ordinartseva]

Exchanged feedback with Farrin!

Looking for partners to exchange next.

[Joaquin Gray]

Anyone available to give me feedback?

[Valeriya Ordinartseva]

I am! valeriya.ordinartseva@gmail.com

[Nat Melvin]

Anyone wants to swap outline for a feedback?

Genre: Mystery Thriller Drama

Concept: Hot on a trail of bizarre murders, an amnesiac survivor of a mysterious cult must relive her traumatic experience by following clues drawn under hypnosis to save her missing daughter from a sacrifice.

[Valeriya Ordinartseva]

I do! valeriya.ordinartseva@gmail.com