• Wendell Yacur

    Member
    March 8, 2022 at 9:11 pm

    Jay here – I’m not ready to exchange yet but will be by tomorrow morning.

    Diana – would you be interested in being partners?

  • Renee Miller

    Member
    March 9, 2022 at 4:35 pm

    I’m ready to exchange if anyone is interested. – Renee

    • Don Ammon

      Member
      March 10, 2022 at 9:40 pm

      Hi Renee. I’m ready to exchange. You can send yours to donniedammit@yahoo.com

      • Renee Miller

        Member
        March 16, 2022 at 3:07 pm

        Hi Don,

        I tried emailing you but it bounced back. I just saw this message and would be more than happy to take a look at your outline. My email is rmiller0911@gmail.com. If you still need feedback send your outline over whenever you’re ready.

        Renee

  • Wendell Yacur

    Member
    March 9, 2022 at 11:59 pm

    Renee – looks like you and I are the only ones ready to exchange, so would you like to partner up?

    • Renee Miller

      Member
      March 10, 2022 at 4:29 pm

      Wendell – let’s exchange! I’m not sure how you send a PM in this forum, so you can go ahead and email me at rmiller0911@gmail.com

      • Wendell Yacur

        Member
        March 10, 2022 at 7:27 pm

        Awesome, thanks!

    • Don Ammon

      Member
      March 10, 2022 at 9:42 pm

      Hi Wendell. I’m ready to exchange if you’d like to send yours to donnedammit@yahoo.com

  • Wendell Yacur

    Member
    March 10, 2022 at 12:14 am

    By the way… if anyone attended the free call (precursor to this class) – do you remember Hal mentioning that we’d learn a new method he developed for creating titles? I emailed Cheryl about this but have not received a response.

  • Diana Ceres

    Member
    March 10, 2022 at 6:58 pm

    I will be ready to exchange this weekend.

    Diana

  • Don Ammon

    Member
    March 10, 2022 at 7:16 pm

    I am ready to exchange if anyone wants to partner up.

  • Heather Esancy

    Member
    March 11, 2022 at 3:51 am

    HI Everyone!

    I am a bit behind, and will be ready to exchange this weekend. I would LOVE to offer feedback, so please feel free to email me at heather.esancy@gmail.com.

    Thanks!

  • Barbara Gilmore

    Member
    March 13, 2022 at 11:57 am

    I have a first act….very draft…scene descriptions and some dialogue…main plot points…so setting up…for what’s to come…

    Working Title: Cold Castle/The Ancestors

    Genre: Drama Horror Mystery

    Working Logline: When a couple on a romantic vacation become trapped in a Castle full of ghosts they are forced to negotiate a risky escape that threatens their future together.

    I’m originally from Scotland, I’ve spent the last 15 years living in Canada, but I recently returned to Scotland for my job in Edinburgh, so I’ve been inspired to write this movie.

    Send me a private message if you want to pair up.

  • Linda Anderson

    Member
    March 22, 2022 at 10:27 pm

    Linda’s Ready to Exchange Feedback Version 1

    I’m behind the rest of the class, but if anyone else is still out there and wants to exchange feedback on our outlines, please reply to me at lindaander@aol.com.

    LOGLINE: <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>In 2004, a young military chaplain, on his
    first tour of duty in Iraq, persuades his war-hardened commander to let him and
    two others stay behind when their bombed-out base is evacuated, even though he’s
    risking all their lives to fulfill a sacred promise to 20 fallen soldiers.

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