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Day 12 Assignments
Posted by cheryl croasmun on February 14, 2022 at 7:13 amReply to post your assignment.
Linda Anderson replied 3 years, 1 month ago 8 Members · 17 Replies -
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Jay here – I’m not ready to exchange yet but will be by tomorrow morning.
Diana – would you be interested in being partners?
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Sure. Send me your outline: diana@bluedragonconsulting.com. I’ll send you mine when I receive your email.
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Hi Don,
I tried emailing you but it bounced back. I just saw this message and would be more than happy to take a look at your outline. My email is rmiller0911@gmail.com. If you still need feedback send your outline over whenever you’re ready.
Renee
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Renee – looks like you and I are the only ones ready to exchange, so would you like to partner up?
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Wendell – let’s exchange! I’m not sure how you send a PM in this forum, so you can go ahead and email me at rmiller0911@gmail.com
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By the way… if anyone attended the free call (precursor to this class) – do you remember Hal mentioning that we’d learn a new method he developed for creating titles? I emailed Cheryl about this but have not received a response.
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Diana, I would really love to read yours! Such a fun concept. Let’s trade?!
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HI Everyone!
I am a bit behind, and will be ready to exchange this weekend. I would LOVE to offer feedback, so please feel free to email me at heather.esancy@gmail.com.
Thanks!
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I have a first act….very draft…scene descriptions and some dialogue…main plot points…so setting up…for what’s to come…
Working Title: Cold Castle/The Ancestors
Genre: Drama Horror Mystery
Working Logline: When a couple on a romantic vacation become trapped in a Castle full of ghosts they are forced to negotiate a risky escape that threatens their future together.
I’m originally from Scotland, I’ve spent the last 15 years living in Canada, but I recently returned to Scotland for my job in Edinburgh, so I’ve been inspired to write this movie.
Send me a private message if you want to pair up.
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Linda’s Ready to Exchange Feedback Version 1
I’m behind the rest of the class, but if anyone else is still out there and wants to exchange feedback on our outlines, please reply to me at lindaander@aol.com.
LOGLINE: <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>In 2004, a young military chaplain, on his
first tour of duty in Iraq, persuades his war-hardened commander to let him and
two others stay behind when their bombed-out base is evacuated, even though he’s
risking all their lives to fulfill a sacred promise to 20 fallen soldiers.
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