• Cathryn Atkinson

    Member
    October 31, 2022 at 5:16 am

    Cathryn Atkinson has completed the BW Framework!

    ***I’ve pulled the important details together and would like Dimitri to assess it. How do I do this?

    Nevermind, I found it — I’ll try to send on Monday.

    What I learned doing this process is how to pull together a package of details for the next steps in the process. Very time consuming but so worth it!

    Thanks, Cathryn

  • Jack Young

    Member
    October 31, 2022 at 4:34 pm

    I, like Cathryn, tried several times to use the links to pay and order the evaluation and couldn’t. I also don’t see where we post Module 2 assignment 1 (Bible info).

    Jack Young

  • Cathryn Atkinson

    Member
    November 1, 2022 at 6:15 pm

    Yes, had no luck finding a link to send to Dimitri. I’ve messaged you on FB

  • Jack Young

    Member
    November 2, 2022 at 8:02 pm

    I completed the framework.

    Cheryl, I cannot access the second page of assignments for posting the next module’s assignments. I get the following error, “<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Looks like you got lost!”

    <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Thanks,

    <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>Jack Young

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  • Madeleine Vessel

    Member
    November 3, 2022 at 7:26 pm

    Madeleine Vessel has completed the BW Framework!

    What I learned doing this process is that by creating a BW Framework, I am making decisions about what makes the show great. The BW Framework I created is already a great instant reference source moving forward.

    Yay!

  • Eric Humble

    Member
    November 5, 2022 at 9:45 pm

    Eric Humble has completed his BW Framework!

    What I learned doing this assignment is: I had more difficulty with this assignment than I initially thought I would, mostly because I tend to overwrite things and had to really work on figuring out the essence of each decision to get it to a manageable length based on the big picture. (It also took me awhile since I’m still working on two separate TV shows.). I was amazed at how many decisions we’ve made so far when I laid them out on the chart! This process also allowed me to have some huge breakthroughs, including possibly changing the concept of one of the shows to elevate it to something with a more interesting and more concise Big Hook… something I wouldn’t have been able to see had I not laid all the information out in front of me in the chart. As such, I’ll be doing some major updates to this document, but I’m really excited by the level I’ve been able to bring that concept. Can’t wait to take all this to Module Two!

  • Rafał Wieczyński

    Member
    November 11, 2022 at 1:23 pm

    Rafal is ready for feedback!

    What I learned doing this process is compress my description. I noticed use of many annecessary words that make the recap process foggy.

    I also had few breakthroughs – eg. I gave the enemies positive motivations to make the conflict more interesting. I also clarified some few contradictions that I discovered doing this assignment.

  • David Quinn

    Member
    November 11, 2022 at 1:36 pm

    Accidentally posted this in Lesson 12 Assignments yesterday, when it goes here… sorry.

    Completed my BWF!

    What I learned doing this assignment was an exercise at getting to know (and work through) my own resistance. In both the concept and open layers sections, even though I had assignment text to work with, I continuously had to set aside doubt. There’s more than one way to get it done! Write now, fix later!

    I also still don’t have a title that distills my concept as well as “Breaking Bad,” but I declare myself open to letting my creativity find this for me… thx

  • George Petersen

    Member
    November 11, 2022 at 8:48 pm

    George Petersen HAS COMPLETED THE BW FRAMEWORK!

    What I learned doing this process is the importance of working on the elements of story individually. I think it would have been too much to try to assemble a framework all at once.

  • Eloise Healey

    Member
    December 20, 2022 at 11:12 am

    Eloise Healey has is ready for feedback!

    What I learned from this is one, strong twist or reveal is better than a bunch of little ones. Less words = more clarity!

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