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Day 13 Assignment
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Andrea: New Max Interest Techniques
Scene: C, S, & L first encounter the OM
Essense: The three think they have finally found someone who can help, but the OM only illuminates how serious the situation really is.
2 or More Interest Techniques for rewrite
– Hook is revealed — reveals the reality and challenge they face
– Something unseen is controlling their future — someone more powerful than they are means them harm.
– Anticipatory Dialog—the OM’s guidance suggests serious trouble ahead, but they have the resources that can help them overcome it.
Rewrite:
Keeping personal for now.
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