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Day 13 Assignments
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Lois Has Great Introductions!
The introductions were solid. But, going through the dialogue again, I found several places where the ideas could be phrased more clearly. So, going through the script, looking for introductions and finding other places to fix worked out well.
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Lisa has Great Introductions
What I learned doing this assignment is that I didn’t have very strong introductions at first. I was glad to be able to improve hem, and since I already have the script written, it was easy to make them more memorable.
I added some irony to a coupe of the characters. There was some irony already there, which I was proud of. I added some more detail when describing the characters, making them have it more personality and intrigue. It was fun!
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World Introductions, I feel I covered this when I re-wrote the descriptions in the previous assignment.
I used IRONY in the scene where Elliot tells his sister, he has some business to attend to and escorts her out of his room. the audience is aware of him narrowly escaping arrest, which they know he is keeping to himself.
I will endeavour to go over these assignments with tidying up the pilot once I feel I have completed filling it out more.
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