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Day 14 Assignments
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Christina Parker – Day 14 Memorable Lines
What I learned from this assignment was that it’s easy to come up with good lines but great lines are a lot more difficult.
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JAK
I didn’t say that, Felicity. You’re insinuating I don’t know what I said? (pause) Janine Delaware is a liar amongst other disgusting things. (pause) So, you believe her over me? (pause) Yeah, and you look like a bag lady.
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JAK
I didn’t say that, Felicity. You’re insinuating I don’t know what I said? (pause) Janine Delaware is a liar amongst other disgusting things. (pause) So, you believe her over me? (pause) I don’t know what makes you so stupid but you should keep it because it’s really working!
I brainstormed over 50 lines that just weren’t good enough. I felt I needed to keep with the theme of stupidity. Not a fashion insult. I’m still
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DANNY (V/O)
It all began on the last day of school.
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DANNY (V/O)
There’s no easy way to say what happened in Creede. But it all started on the last day of school.
Same with this line but I needed to create more intrigue in the voice-over.
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