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Day 15 Assignments
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Lois Finished Wordsmithing!
Reading backwards let me find two things:
I noticed that I had forgotten to have the customer take her purchases when she left the store.
A piece of dialogue that was in my head every time I read it forward, actually was not on the page. Reading backwards let me see the gap. So now it’s on the page.
If you are ready to swap, please email me at reluctantspy@gmail.com
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Lisa Finished word smithing!
What I learned doing this assignment is that you catch new mistakes you didn’t see before when you read it out loud.
I was able to make some more edits and it took some time to do all these steps, but it feels great to know that this Pilot is complete!
I had the word “walks” in there so many times, so it made a big difference to go through and change it to other words and made my script have the tone I desired more and made my characters personalities show a little more.
If you want to swap you can email me at Lisa.molenda@gmail.com
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WORDSMITHING
what a great way to scan ones written work with these set of outlines. I now want to use this method to check my other screenplays!
Because my BWTV is an historical piece, I had to particularly pay attention to common use of language and eliminate them.
the next major one was common words such as “walks” where I found so many other ways of changing this to more appropriate descriptions.
My page count is a little short of what I want, but I am ready to exchange. Please email me at ozmaidprod@bigpond.com
May I also send my Pitch Bible as I need someone to also look at editing down the 5 seasons (it is currently too wordy). THANKS in advance
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