Screenwriting Mastery Forums Professional Rewrite Professional Rewrite 73 Day 17: Put Your Description to the Test

  • KAREN GRIFFIN

    Member
    December 9, 2021 at 3:29 am

    INT. LIVING ROOM – LATE AFTERNOON

    A GIRL, five years old, hides on the floor next to a couch of a small Living Room in the dark. She has messy hair and wears a birght, lime green dress with a stain on it.

    FEMALE (V.O.)

    I once had a dream.

    She looks around the side of the couch at the kitchen. LIght hits her face.


    INT. KITCHEN – LATE AFTERNOON (CONTINUOUS)

    A FEW ADULTS sits at a kitchen table, engaged in each other’s company.

    INT. LVING ROOM – LATE AFTERNOON (CONTINUOUS)

    A SNAKE slithers from underneath the couch and heads towards the little girl.

    FEMALE (V.O.)

    Gotta kill the snake.

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