Day 18 Assignment

[Alan Larson]

Assignment Day 18 – Critique of Each Other’s Scripts

Hi, Erica & Pam,

Congrats on completing all of the other lessons. I think we should all trade critiques with each other, so we each get two critiques.

Erica – I’m ready to exchange whenever you are.

Thanks,

– alan

[Patricia Semler]

That works for me. patriciasemler@gmail.com I have a pdf ready to go. I work on Final Draft so either works for me. I do admit I’m not done with the last scene. Any comments specific to that one is greatly appreciated.

[Alan Larson]

Hi, Pat,

Take your time and finish up your last scene. Erica & I just traded scripts, so once we’ve traded critiques, I’ll email you a note and we can trade scripts. I’ve got Final Draft 12 and it has TRACK CHANGES, so if you send me a Final Draft version, I can make comments directly on your screenplay. I’ll send you an FDX file as well.

Thanks!

– alan

[Alan Larson]

Hi, Erica and Pat,

Thanks so much for your critiques. I really appreciate all of your time and efforts. You’ve both really helped me improve.

Good luck with your scripts!

Thanks again,

alan