Screenwriting Mastery Forums Professional Rewrite Professional Rewrite 73 Day 18: Exchange Scripts for Feedback

  • Mary Andrews

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    December 10, 2021 at 11:38 pm

    Mary J. Andrews,

    The Fireborn Chronicles Paranormal Science Fiction Television Pilot (60 pages)

    LOG LINE:

    In a star-faring distant future, The Universal Government’s three man Special Ops Team, in search of a psychic terrorist ring, must rescue their psi-jacker, a surgically blinded slave girl with extraordinary powers, and coerce her to help them

    I work in Final Draft 9, but suspect PDF would be easiest to share.

    My email address is Author.Mary.Andrews@gmail.com

    This is my very first script and I would appreciate any/all feedback possible. I will gladly reciprocate to the best of my abilities.

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