Day 2 – What I learned …

[Susan Willard]

Week 4 Day 2: Character Profile in Dialogue —

Scene: “MOLLY’S GAME”

What I learned in rewriting my scene.

In rewriting my scene, I realized that I could improve the
interaction of my characters by bouncing the ideas of the dialogue back
and forth between the characters in a more normal way of talking.
I also noticed that my dialogue needed more meaning, and to come
from a deeper place within each character’s profiled person.