Day 27 Assignments

[Joe Donato]

OK I went through the entire outline answering all four questions. That took some time. I think this is the most analytical I’ve ever been to anyone of my scripts. I noticed about halfway through the assignment I found myself thinking “that’s good enough for me”, and I was tempted to quit before the full 4-question analysis of each scene. I was proud of the fact that i didn’t feel the need to cut out any exemperanious scenes. I think I already did that earlier and just didn’t know it. However, it DID give me some new insights and added a few things to some scemes to increase/foucs the drama/tension. I even added some “on the nose” dialogue that I can rewrite later, and I still have 2 placeholders where I know what the scene is about, but not sure if the audience will get it. Glad I had 2 days to do this one. I needed it.

Here’s a link to my new outline with questions answered for each scene.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/g2edtuljze1rzwf/TREK%20-%20MasterOutline.pdf?dl=0