Day 3 Assignments

[Terrell Harris]

Terrell’s Transformational Journey

What I learned doing this assignment is a pathway to an endearing character from a “meh’ character who suddenly became the main character when the main character became the agent of change.

A corporate rich kid must find a new way of being for himself and the mega corporation he will inherit
1. To save the slums his corporation is preparing to eradicate for corporate gains

2. To save the people he’s grown attached outside his social sphere that his corporation is preparing to eradicate for corporate and political gains

John’s old ways
Always gets what he wants
All is sacrificed for the company
All others are not in my social class are beneath me
Playboy
Entitled
If you throw money at it, solves all problems
Hoarding money is the best thing to do with it

family above all else

does not like kids

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John’s new ways
Self sacrificing
Defender of the weak
Wants to help the less fortunate
People before the company

Philanthropist

truth and integrity above all else

kids are ok

[andrea cabanas]

Andrea Cabañas – Transformational Journey

I learned with this assignment that I discovered new flaws & traits in my character that will help the story’s conflict.

1. A talented but insecure woman faces her prejudices and controlling mother to achieve the freedom she needs to be her true self.

2. Old ways:

– Prejudiced, judgemental, fear of taking risks and telling the truth, shopaholic, and submissive.

3. New ways:

– Unprejudiced, confident, and proactive, she’s true to herself, proves she’s worthy to her mother and manages to control her finances better.

[Maria Helena Nascimento]

MARIA HELENA NASCIMENTO – Transformational Journey

Day 3 ASSIGNMENT

“What I learned doing this assignment is…?”

I have learned that is gets more and more complicated to really see my story and my main character. It’s as if I had to prune everything around it to focus on the core. Very interesting.

Tell us your logline for the
transformational journey.

A naïve, fragile young woman, thrown in a wild hippie community led by her estranged father, has to tap her inner strength in order to survive.

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Tell us what you see as the Old Ways.

dominated by her bipolar mother

passive

submissive to her bossy boyfriend

deeply hurt by the absence of her father

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Tell us what you see as the New Ways.

She has to define her limits in order to cope with the lack of boundaries of the community

She deals with her father as an adult.

She becomes independent

[Dietrich Oppeln]

Dietrich von Oppeln: Transformational Journey

What I learned doing this assignment is…?”

The audience needs to connect to the old ways and the new- so they can experience transformation themselves.

Tell us your logline for the transformational journey.

The owner of a big meat company and a young aerial silk acrobat agree to commit suicide together, finally embracing life after having fallen in love with each other.

Tell us what you see as the Old Ways.
This world is a wrotten place. We are too messed up. Let’s leave.

Tell us what you see as the New Ways.
Life is worth living. Love heals.

[Diane Lorene Phelps]

SWUPSP – assign#3

Diane Phelps’ Transformational Journey

Tell us your logline for the transformational journey.

What I learned doing this assignment: I learned that I’m not sure about a few things of my character and I will need to develop the story ideas more.

Logline: A dance prodigy returns home after a injury that sidelines her dreams she becomes a hermit while running her dads coffee shop falls in love with the antique dealer as she plans the Christmas dance event.

Lead character with an issue; Sami 30s, A dance prodigy with a bright future life in the big city and the world is her oyster.

Journey; looking and Learn for and about love through helping others learn to express themselves with dance.

Transformation; Okay to not see your dream and start over in a small town, with people who love you.

[Bob Hucul]

Bob’s Transformational Journey

What I learned was how important the characters transformational journey is to the overall story structure and the ride the audience will take to experience the shift.

Log Line for the Transformation Journey

A self-centered professional basketball mascot with a taste for the “good life and fast lane” is faced with retirement after he loses his temper with a fan on national television and shoots him close range with a shirt gun. To repair his public persona and get his job back he is forced into leading a state-run pilot program to retrain unemployed individuals to become mascots to help stimulate local small businesses. The mascot program brings an unexpected purpose to his life as he learns the value of being part of a team and helping others.

Old Ways

His main moto: Mascot starts with M and that stands for ME

The Hockey game is about him not the team in his mind, he brings the fans

Probably only mascot with a high-powered Hollywood agent

Self-centered, career driven

Focused on Money and Fame

Dislikes kids unless they have a hot mom or kids want to be like him one day

There is only one lane and that’s fast

Womanizer

Not a Team Player

Prankster

New Ways

His new favorite quote from Oscar Wilde “Be yourself; everyone else is taken”

Values being part of a team

Loves helping others succeed

Understands the true meaning of being a mascot

Drops his hollywood agent

Lives without a metaphorical mask and shows people his authentic self

Teaches people how they can be their true self and feel empowered by being a mascot

Able now to have a real and deep relationship with a women

You can’t see the world around if don’t slow down

Love kids but still loves hot moms

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