Day 3; “What I learned rewriting my scene/character…?”

[Mi Lock]

(I’ll post my homework of Day 3 when the proper discussion will be open.)

Insights: I realized that I had a scene in my script with a strong turning point as it reveals a secret that a character mentioned earlier in the story. That scene will be part of the transformational journey of my main character.

[Donna Stockwell]

I realized that I need to inject a stronger turning point to make my audience feel more empathy towards my character.

[Lynn Vincentnathan]

Made some improvements toward the end of my script by pushing Jim to the breaking point of breaking up with Ellie, then with the scene where Ellie gets so pushed to the breaking point, she takes charge and gets Jim back, revealing a shift and change in her character.