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  • Day 4: Triangle – OCEAN’S 11

    Posted by cheryl croasmun on October 29, 2024 at 5:42 am

    1. Please watch this scene and provide your insights/breakthroughs into what makes this character great from a writing perspective.

    2. Read the other writers comments and make notes of any insights/breakthroughs you like.

    3. Rethink or create a scene for your script using your new insights and rewrite that scene/character.

    William Beasley replied 6 months ago 2 Members · 1 Reply
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  • William Beasley

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    November 9, 2024 at 6:19 pm

    What makes the characters great from a writing perspective is that Danny is hell-bent to get his ex-wife Tess back from her current casino owner boyfriend who he believes doesn’t really love her like he does so much that he’s willing to risk going back to jail if his elaborate plan to rob the casino’s fail. Tess is adamant that she doesn’t want to return to the uncertain life she had being married to Danny, preferring the stability of being with Terry and wondering if Danny can convince her to change her mind.

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