Day 5: What I learned …

[Rice Rice]

What I learned in adjusting a scene that advances the relationship between my two characters is the benefit of injecting a bit more of an ignoble trait in my protagonist and a strain of nobility in my antagonist as they pursue their opposing goals.

[Rice Rice]

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[Susan Willard]

Week 1 Day 5: Resolution Scene 1

What I learned rewriting my scene:

· My setups were not as fulfilled in my final resolution scene as they need to be.

· A plot twist, a character change of mind, and an underestimated antagonist, who is more than expected are being added to my final resolution scene.