• Megan Schemenauer

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 9:13 pm

    Finished the First Draft! 🎉

    • Kevin Ash

      Member
      February 26, 2023 at 9:14 pm

      Congrats!!

  • Kevin Ash

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 9:13 pm

    I’ve finished the first draft, and well on my way to finishing the second, and have fallen back a day or two and always managed to catch back up! I plan to be there on Day 30 at the finish line!!!

    • Jane Turville

      Member
      February 26, 2023 at 10:01 pm

      Congratulations Kevin!!!!

  • Luane Beck

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 9:57 pm

    I finished my first draft!

  • Lisa Long

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 9:58 pm

    I became a grandma!

    So, back later to this. ❤

    • Mary Andrews

      Member
      February 26, 2023 at 10:49 pm

      Congratulations. Looks like your whole family has that creation thing going. 🙂

  • Chris Dorsey

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 9:58 pm

    Finished 1st Draft!

  • Karen Sinclair

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 9:59 pm

    I finished my entire story, all four acts, which I’m thrilled about. Life took me physically out of action for the past week but my mind never stopped working.

    • Jane Turville

      Member
      February 26, 2023 at 10:02 pm

      I’m in the same boat. But the time away resulted in some great insights about the project!

    • Donna Stockwell

      Member
      February 26, 2023 at 10:27 pm

      I feel super drained and incredibly satisfied after I complete something creative too!

  • David Thome

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 9:59 pm

    I was breezing along, then had a few speed bumps–thought I didn’t become a grandma–at the end of act 3. I’ve resumed and should be done with the first draft in a couples of days.

  • Margaret Gendreau

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:00 pm

    Rewrote 1st episode of TV Pilot, wrote 2nd episode am half way through episode 3.

  • Jane Turville

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:00 pm

    I’ve finished the first draft and discovered that I want to make some major changes! And, I have no idea what they are but I know I will in the near future!!! Yay!!!

  • Rita Roberts

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:00 pm

    Finished my 1st Draft!

    Now 2nd draft is DONE!

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  • Karena

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:00 pm

    – Finished 2nd Draft – Solving Problems

  • Donna Stockwell

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:01 pm

    Being creative everyday… edited a 2 minute short, also taking Hal’s thriller class, and very smudgy first draft! Wahoo!

  • Jenifer Stockdale

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:02 pm

    I’m halfway through finishing my first draft and I’m continuing to move forward!

  • Cindi Delinsky

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:02 pm

    I’m still working on my first draft, but I feel so empowered, thanks to these Zoom videos! I so appreciate the encouragement and empowerment techniques, Hal! Thank you!

  • Patty Ruland

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:03 pm

    I made progress on the first draft, applied the rules and wrote for hours. I did not berate myself for what I wrote. I made peace with my lost time. I celebrated moving forward.

  • L.D.Janakos

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 10:28 pm

    I finished my first draft, but I still have a few missing scenes to fill in. But I did get the 4 acts finished with a mixture of 10 – 20%. quality. Pretty amazing process.

  • Mary Andrews

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 11:04 pm

    I’m back on the path to seeing daylight, but I’ve learned so much I’m calling it a pre-win til I finish it. 👍

  • Diane Denham

    Member
    February 27, 2023 at 12:40 am

    I finished Lessons 1 through 17 Assignments! Now I’m excited to get going on the next one, Lesson 18! All the way through this course, I have looked forward to working on and completing each assignment.🤩 Celebrating by getting right on it… now!

  • David Thome

    Member
    February 28, 2023 at 4:10 am

    Progress today. The climax is looking pretty good. I’m looking forward to when I get to Draft 2 to fill in the missing scenes and find out what happens between the Act 3 turning point and the climax.

  • David Thome

    Member
    March 2, 2023 at 3:44 am

    Finished the first draft today. Way fun. Feels good. Really good.

    Also emailed my tax info to my accountant. Also fun: Looks like a decent refund this year.

    Two wins in one day.

    Now, on to the next draft.

  • Luane Beck

    Member
    March 3, 2023 at 8:28 pm

    I’ve made my way through all the Draft lessons the best I could. My account isn’t working correctly so I can’t read the actual lesson. I did, however, go through the script for each lesson based on what we learned previously. I’m super excited to have gotten this far. Now, I’m going to take the dialogue class to see if I can beef up the dialogue a little. Then, I’ll take the leading role class when it’s available in April. I want to get the script in the best possible shape I can.

  • Rita Roberts

    Member
    March 4, 2023 at 6:16 pm

    Done with My Finished 3rd Draft – Chronological Edits! Ready for feedback 🙂

  • James Hernandez

    Member
    March 8, 2023 at 3:40 am

    I finished my first draft! It took me a month and two days, but it’s done. Now it’s on to second draft improvements.

  • David Thome

    Member
    March 22, 2023 at 2:21 am

    Day 49–made it through to the point of starting the chronological edit. The hardest part for me was that I left a bunch of placeholders between the middle of act 3 and the start of act 4, and going back and filling is missing scenes is something I’m really not used to. I mean, every script (this was was No. 27) has missing scenes, but this is a thriller and they really have to line up.

    The subsequent drafts went a bit more easily, but I found it difficult to separate scenes from structure from character, it felt like I was going back and forth between drafts. Still, the process worked. As I was puzzling over getting through from the middle of act 3 to the beginning of act 4, I kept having to re-outline–and then sat looking at the final outline, I realized that the last word I’d typed was the answer.

    It took more than 30 days to get here, but out of all the scripts I’ve written, I’m pretty sure this is the fastest I got to this point. My guess is that the next one I do will go faster.

  • David Thome

    Member
    March 27, 2023 at 3:02 am

    OK, the Big Win. 30-day screenplay finished in 54 days and sent to my writing partner.

    A screenplay that I first tried writing 27 years ago. Feels good.

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