Exchange Feedback

[John Livingstone]

I would like to exchange feedback.

Robert Livingstone

[hilton Garrett]

Robert, this is Hilton Garrett. I’ll exchange with you. My email address is hiltonga@gmail.com.

[John Livingstone]

Hilton,
I sent you an email with my pilot attached — a PDF.
Robert

[Renee Miller]

Hi,
If anyone else is ready to exchange feedback I’m ready.
Renee

[John Livingstone]

Renee,
I’d be happy to exhange with you. My email address is boblivingstone@msn.com. Please send me your email address.
Robert

[Renee Miller]

Hey Bob,
Let me know when you get done with your exchange with Hilton. Don’t want you overwhelmed with reading and changes on your script.
Renee

[John Livingstone]

Hi Renee,
I finished with Hilton. Ready to exchange with you when you’re ready. My email address is boblivingstone@msn.com
Bob

[Renee Miller]

Great. I’ll send mine right over.

[Janeen Johnson]

I have a one hour drama series set in the Midwest (no cowboy boots or drawls, I promise). I would like to exchange feedback with someone.

[Renee Miller]

Hi Janeen – I have a supernatural horror. If you’d like to exchange you can send it to rmiller0911@gmail.com.

[Janeen Johnson]

Okay. My email is janeenmj@aol.com. I’ll send it right away.

[Patrick Malone]

I am ready to exchange pilot scripts. Mine is a mystery/horror.

[hilton Garrett]

Patrick, I’ll exchange with you if you like. My email is hcg@gmail.com.
Mine is a drama set in the South in 1978.
Hilton Garrett

[Patrick Malone]

That’s great, Hilton. I need to make a PDF version and will email it to you shortly.
My email is: epatrickmalone@gmail.com

[hilton Garrett]

Patrick, correction, my email is hiltonga@gmail.com
Hilton

[Jerry Robbins]

Hello, everyone. I’d like to exchange feedback. my email address is jerryr48@gmail.com. The Story is Robot Revolution, when robots with human brains decide they need their Human Rights to be recognized.. Am willing to exchange feedback with you.

[John Livingstone]

Hi Jerry,

If you’re stll looking to exchange, I’ll exchange with you. My pilot is for a sci-fit series: Return To Mars. My email address is boblivingstone@msn.com

Bob

[Jerry Robbins]

I sent you the screenplay

[Kimbal Thompson]

I would like to exchange for feedback: INDIA SLATE adventure drama
kimbal@akta-ltd.com

Kimbal Thompson

[Jerry Robbins]

I have sent you an email. I would be happy to exchange with you.

[Jason Lauer]

I am still working on my pilot, but I am more than happy to read anyone’s pilot, should they want feedback.

[Jerry Robbins]

Would you like to see mine? jerryr48@gmail.com

• This reply was modified 1 year ago by  Jerry Robbins.

[Jason Lauer]

Sure, send it over to J_Lauer42@yahoo.com

[Jerry Robbins]

I sent it over by email. Thanks.

[Margaret]

Margaret is exchanging scripts with Lenore Bechtel for round 1 of feedback exchange.

[Renee Miller]

Hi,
I’m ready for a second round of feedback if anyone is interested.
Renee

[Jerry Robbins]

Hello, Renee, I’m also ready for Round two if you’d like to exchange. jerryr48@gmail.com

[Jerry Robbins]

Mine is sci-fi.

[Jerry Robbins]

Ready for second round of feedback if someone is ready: jerryr48@gmail.com
Sci fi , rototic world

[Renee Miller]

Hey Jerry,
I sent you my script this morning. If you’d like me to read yours and provide you feedback, you can send it to rmiller0911@gmail.com.

Renee

[Lenore]

I’m ready for a second round of feedback and would like to exchange feedback on both bibles and pilots with someone who writes comedy. If interested, please contact me at lenorebechtel33@gmail.com.

[Jennifer Quintenz-Berry]

Hello all, I’m ready to exchange feedback.
Here’s the info:
BLACKPILL
(crime thriller)
LOGLINE: After a bombing rocks her college town to the core, an ambitious but unseasoned detective joins forces with a reclusive incel message-board moderator to thwart a stochastic terrorist manipulating disaffected men into committing murder.

Trigger Warning: this story includes incels, misogyny, language, and a mass-casualty attack.

[Jerry Robbins]

Hi, Jennifer, I'm on my third round. I'd be happy to exchange feedback if you want. jerryr48@gmail.com. Mine is sci-fi, about the robobs who have human brains. Robot Revolution. (I have changed the title half a dozen times. This best expresses it.) I don’t have your email address.

• This reply was modified 1 year ago by  Jerry Robbins.

[Jennifer Quintenz-Berry]

Hello Jerry – so sorry for the delay! I just emailed you. I’m at jennquintenz@gmail.com

[Margaret]

I’m ready for a second round of feedback. It is a Sci-Fi Drama. silebi@hotmail.com

[Jerry Robbins]

Would you like to trade with me? So far, the last two people either don’t have an email address or haven’t replied back. So I could read yours. jerryr48@gmail.com

[Margaret]

Sure! I sent mine to you. 🙂

[Denice Lewis]

I’d be happy to exchange feedback, Margaret. prismartsllc@gmail.com.

[Denice Lewis]

Denice is ready to exchange feedback at prismartsllc@gmail.com. I have a fantasy adventure.

[Margaret]

I would love to read yours! I responded to Jerry first so give me three days to respond to his feedback before sending mine to you. I’ll read Jerry’s tomorrow and can read yours Monday if you would like.

[Denice Lewis]

Hi Margaret! I also have my first feedback to address. Send me when you’re ready and I’ll do the same. I look forward to reading your bible and pilot! Cheers, Denice

[Patrick Malone]

Please let me know if you’d like to do a script exchange. Mine is a mystery/horror.

[Jennifer Quintenz-Berry]

Hello Patrick, I’d love to exchange! I’m at jennquintenz@gmail.com

[Patricia Semler]

Hey there,
Is anyone still exchanging scripts? I have a supernatural thriller.
A Devil’s Bargain – A vampire coven leader must work with a human cop to discover who is supplying the drugs to the addicts they feast on and how its killing her people.
I’ll read most anything except comedy or romance. email at patriciasemler@gmail.com

[Jerry Robbins]

glad to exchange. jerryr48@gmail.com

[Patricia Semler]

Thanks for the great notes, Jerry. I see points where I can add some background for clarity.