Screenwriting Mastery Forums The 30 Day Screenplay 30 Day Screenplay 13 Final Lesson and Request for feedback

  • Jeanne Sanner

    Member
    May 11, 2023 at 6:59 pm

    Jeanne Sanner

    I’m ready to exchange, and I’m looking forward to, and I’m ready for, feedback.

    I’m also looking forward to reading someone else’s endeavors with a caring eye.

    • Margaret

      Member
      May 12, 2023 at 1:19 pm

      Jeanne,

      I am two days behind you but would love to exchange scripts. I have a Sci-Fi drama. Margaret

    • Margaret

      Member
      May 13, 2023 at 2:53 pm

      Great! I’ll send it to you in a couple of hours. My email is silebi@hotmail.com. Looking forward to reading yours! Margaret

  • Laurie Reilly

    Member
    May 12, 2023 at 12:59 am

    Laurie Reilly is ready for script feedback and exchange. Since the story goes through several timeline, I am hoping the transitions are clear.

    The Other Life: A head injury sends a woman into an altered state where she believes she can stop her first husband’s traumatic death, but then realizes that if she does, she will never meet her second husband or have their beloved daughter.

    • Margaret

      Member
      May 12, 2023 at 1:19 pm

      I am two days behind you, but would love to exchange scripts. I have a sci-fi drama. Margaret

      • Laurie Reilly

        Member
        May 12, 2023 at 4:15 pm

        Sure! Do you want to do the exchange on Sunday or Monday?

        Best

        Laurie

        • Jeanne Sanner

          Member
          May 12, 2023 at 7:44 pm

          Hi,

          I would love to read your script, and if you would like to read mine, my email is:

          jeannesanner@yahoo.com

          • Laurie Reilly

            Member
            May 12, 2023 at 8:16 pm

            Great, sending shortly. I would like to read yours as well. lauriesreilly@gmail.com

            • Margaret

              Member
              May 16, 2023 at 1:36 pm

              Hi Laurie,

              I didn’t receive your script. Did you receive mine? Margaret

        • Margaret

          Member
          May 13, 2023 at 2:54 pm

          Sunday works! I will finish it today. My email is silebi@hotmail.com. Looking forward to reading yours! Margaret

  • Jeanne Sanner

    Member
    May 13, 2023 at 6:06 am

    Jeanne Sanner

    This has been a wonderful class. Every lesson gave me insights I had not had before, probably because I am really new at this. I am thrilled to have the lessons to refer to for all other projects I decide to tackle. Can’t say enough great things about the program. PS and I’m really proud of myself for what I have accomplished – not that I am saying it’s high quality, but I finished everything.

    Thank you.

    luv ya 🤗

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