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Group Confidentiality Agreement
Hi everyone,
Before we begin The Profound Screenplay class, we need everyone
here to acknowledge their agreement to the Group Confidentiality form. The purpose here is to protect yourself, each other and to make this a safe environment where you’ll be able to work on the most marketable concept you have without worry.The release form does all of those things and it also makes whatever we
work on in this class confidential. Once everyone has acknowledged their agreement on the forums, we’ll have a safe environment where we can all focus on our writing, instead of worrying about protection.This Group Confidentiality Agreement covers the entire class.
I highly recommend that you agree to this confidentiality agreement so
you can participate in all the group feedback during the next twelve months.Remember, the more you interact with this group, the stronger your relationships
will be after the class is concluded. Those relationships can translate into career success, so they are valuable to cultivate.See you then,
Hal
Below is the release form. You have one of two choices here:
AGREE, in which case, you hit “Reply to this topic” and include three things
at the top of the page:1. Your name.
2. The words “I agree to the terms of this release form.”
3. Please leave the entire text below to confirm what you agree to.OR
NOT AGREE, in which case, you hit “Reply to this topic” and type in the
words “I’ll do the MSC privately.”If you agree to the terms of the release form, then you can send your
assignments into the group and you’ll get feedback on them.Also, if you don’t agree to this group confidentiality agreement, you’ll
still need to sign an agreement that says you will keep the strategies,
teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the MSC
confidential.
GROUP RELEASE FORM FOR “THE PROFOUND SCREENPLAY”
As a member of this group, I agree to the following:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences,
communications, lessons, and models of the MSC confidential, and that I
will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting
online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any
other way that would make those processes, teleconferences,
communications, lessons, and models of the MSC available to anyone
who is not a member of this class.
2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the
sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted
by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this
group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not
share this information with anyone without the express written permission
of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with
anyone outside this group.
3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or
have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can
independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or
movie idea.4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another
group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof
that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems
them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either
party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the
class.5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as
another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are
the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will
not write or market another group member’s ideas.6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for
any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted
work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from
marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents,
managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment
industry organizations or people.This completes the Group Release Form for The Profound Screenplay class.
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Barbara Shepherd:
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I agree to the terms of this release form. Lynn
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Birgit Syran Myaard
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I agree to the terms of this release form. Suzanne Kelman
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I agree to the terms of this NDA release form. Joseph
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I Paul Mahoney agree to the Group Release Form.
GROUP RELEASE FORM FOR “THE PROFOUND SCREENPLAY”
As a member of this group, I agree to the following:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences,
communications, lessons, and models of the MSC confidential, and that I
will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting
online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any
other way that would make those processes, teleconferences,
communications, lessons, and models of the MSC available to anyone
who is not a member of this class.
2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the
sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted
by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this
group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not
share this information with anyone without the express written permission
of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with
anyone outside this group.
3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or
have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can
independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or
movie idea.4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another
group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof
that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems
them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either
party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the
class.5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as
another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are
the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will
not write or market another group member’s ideas.6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for
any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted
work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from
marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents,
managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment
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1. Brenda Lynn Bynum
I agree to the terms of this release form.GROUP RELEASE FORM FOR “THE PROFOUND SCREENPLAY”
As a member of this group, I agree to the following:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences,
communications, lessons, and models of the MSC confidential, and that I
will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting
online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any
other way that would make those processes, teleconferences,
communications, lessons, and models of the MSC available to anyone
who is not a member of this class.
2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the
sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted
by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this
group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not
share this information with anyone without the express written permission
of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with
anyone outside this group.
3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or
have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can
independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or
movie idea.4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another
group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof
that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems
them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either
party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the
class.5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as
another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are
the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will
not write or market another group member’s ideas.6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for
any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted
work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from
marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents,
managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment
industry organizations or people.This completes the Group Release Form for The Profound Screenplay class.
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Groundhog Day
1) Transformational Journey
TV Weatherman Phil Connors transforms while being trapped in Groundhog Day from a jaded, selfish, egotistical, insincere and cynical man, to a more giving, caring, honest – and even opens his heart to become a more loving and happier man.
For the audience: The journey through the movie helps audience experience growth, making the best of their sometimes jaded and overly similar lives by discarding selfish and cynical ways, and finding excitement and meaning while transforming to more giving, selfless people that allows them to open up their hearts to truly love.
2) Lead Characters
Change Agent: Rita, the Producer
Transformational Character: Phil Connors
Oppressor: Repetitive Groundhog Days
3) Connection with Audience
We go on this journey because we are intrigued with Phil as he struggles and tries to comprehend his daily repetitive Groundhog Day existence.
Relatability to audience:
*Bored going for the fourth year in a row to cover same story about “a rat,” audience can relate to often tedious work.
*Disdain and frustration with co-workers – or even and many others.
*Trying to find meaning in a tedious repetitive daily grind.
*Joy of learning to ice carve, play piano or learn a new language.
*Heartfelt giving and helping of others (changing tires, catching boy in tree, giving money to homeless man) bringing joy and meaning
Intrigue:
*Trapped in Groundhog Day
*Learning the limits and/or boundaries of being trapped
*The different stages and lengths in Phil quest to “win” Rita’s heart
*Rita’s different reactions to Phil’s different ploys to gain her interest, or ultimately love.
4) Old Ways Versus New Ways
Old Ways: Phil is selfish and egocentric, often jaded to the world, looking at others with disdain or a vehicle to gain what he wants.
New Ways: Phil becomes giving, loving and concerned about the thoughts of others.
5) Gradient of Change
The TRANSFORMATION: Phil must complete transformation in order to now longer be trapped in Groundhog Day.
1) Unaware and uncaring how he hurts or “turns off:” those around him.
2) Unaccepting of being trapped
3) Trying to make best of life if no tomorrow
4) Uses his special situation for self-gain, to steal money and have sex
5) Despair and hopeless, becoming unkempt and overeating
6) Frustration and anger: smashing clock, etc.
7) Attempting to escape by committing suicides without desired result
8) Broadening his personal interests spurred by pursuit of Rita, learning poetry, play piano, etc., to become a more well-rounded man
9) Slapped and humiliated when insincere with Rita
10) Opens heart to confess love to Rita
11) Begins giving to others, money to homeless man, brings coffee to crew, fixes flat tire
12) Gain Rita’s love thru sincerity and humility
Beliefs Challenged:
Phil’s focus has been completely on himself and career. In speaking with Rita, she speaks about her “perfect man” is humble, romantic and courageous, not egotistical like Phil
Despite saying and doing all the right things, Phil is unable to gain Rita’s trust and love due to a lack of sincerity.
7) And 8) Profound Moments and Dialogue
Here are a few of the Profound moments:
Despite telling Rita that her college major focused on 19<sup>th</sup> Century French Poetry is “an incredible waste of time,” Phil ultimately studies the poetry
Rita tells Phil: “I can never love someone like you because you’ll never love anybody but yourself.”
Phil: “That’s not true. I don’t even like myself.”
Phil only has the courage to open up and tell Rita his sincere feeling while she is asleep:
“I think you are the kindest, sweetest, prettiest person I ever met in my life. I’ve never seen anyone as nice as you. The first time I saw you, something happened to me but I never told you about it. I wanted to hold you as hard as I could. I don’t deserve someone like you. But if ever I could I swear I would love you the rest of my life.”
Takes elderly homeless guy to the hospital, then learns he died. H wants to see chart…The nurse tells him that “sometimes people just die.”
Phil tries to prevent him from dying by feeding him soup and sandwich prior to the evening, but the man dies anyway.
9)Profound Ending
In an auction, Rita outbids other women, paying $339.88 for Phil, He carves her face in an ice sculpture, saying he knows her face so well. She tells him it is the best day of her life. He promises that “No matter what happens,” he is now happy.
Then he wakes up and asks “if there is anything I can do for you.” They decide to live in the little town he initially said he hated.
10) Profound Truth
Stripping outer façade of ego and selfishness, may open a person to sincerity and maybe love.
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I agree to the terms…sorry….I posted wrong item
Mark
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I agree to the terms of this release form.
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Frank Jordan:
I agree to the terms of this release form.
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I agree to the terms of the release form.
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Mark Smith:
I agree to the terms of this release form:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences,
communications, lessons, and models of the MSC confidential, and that I
will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting
online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any
other way that would make those processes, teleconferences,
communications, lessons, and models of the MSC available to anyone
who is not a member of this class.
2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the
sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted
by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this
group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not
share this information with anyone without the express written permission
of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with
anyone outside this group.
3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or
have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can
independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or
movie idea.4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another
group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof
that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems
them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either
party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the
class.5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as
another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are
the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will
not write or market another group member’s ideas.6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for
any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted
work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from
marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents,
managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment
industry organizations or people. -
Joshua Doerksen
I AGREE to the terms of this release form.
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I agree.
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