Lesson 1

[jeffrey jeff glatz glatz]

Jeffrey Glatz Loves Character Depth!

What I learned from doing this assignment is…? Well… this generated the most changes I have done thus far to elevate the script. I added 2 more major storylines and reveals, so I may have included the next lesson as well in this lesson. I expanded the backstories of a few of the characters and tried to pull them all together.

[Anna Maganini]

MODULE 7 – LESSON 1

MY VISION – To write cutting edge, unique, human, soul-inspiring, Oscar-winning scripts that have commercial success and producers line up to buy to make into multi-million dollar movies. Which makes me a Force in the Hollywood Entertainment industry -as a writer, actor, producer, and director.

What have I learned doing this assignment – This was another complicated one for me because it took 2 entire nights for me just to lay out the beats, so it seemed tedious. But once I got that done, I elevated quite a few things, saw how storylines could be strengthened and made more powerful, especially a scene in the first act that was giving me trouble, and one of the last scenes in Act 4 that was also giving me trouble. I also added and deleted a couple of scenes that make the script stronger. Asking what the character was hiding from me provided a treasure trove of stuff and I discovered all sorts of new things about the two main characters.