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Lesson 10
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WIM Module 5, Lesson 10
Lenore Bechtel Continuing Act 3
My vision: I want to create enough salable screenplays that an agent will want to market my work and recommend me for writing assignments.
What I learned from doing this assignment is that I am unable to speed write while having to come up with extra details not in my outline.
I managed to add one flashback, getting Dire Expectations up to 72 pages. Before I continue, I need to do lots of thinking, so that when I start, I can speed write again.
I have certainly learned how important a detailed outline truly is. I zoomed through my first draft of my Writing Incredible Movies outline of Berlin Rendezvous? Also zoomed through my first draft of the outline I made in the Thriller class for Dire Expectations. But it was inadequate and now I’m in brainstorming mode.
I am looking upon this problem as an opportunity to make the screenplay better. Thinking positively usually works for me. We’ll see!
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Margaret’s continuing Act 3
Vision: To be the best faith-based screenwriter
what I learned: I was missing a few scenes in my outline. The flow didn’t make sense without them. I gave myself permission to add them and kept going…
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WIM Module 5, Lesson 10
Lloyd Shellenberger Continuing Act 3
My vision Working Hard every day to become the best writer I can be and as a result I do become the best writer in Hollywood.
What I learned from doing this assignment is that I missed or put scenes in an improper order which created logic and linear problems. My outline needs to be more comprehensive and on point.
I added or rearranged several scenes since they were not in correct order or inaccurate A detailed outline is king!!!
I see all these mistakes as chance to learn and become better.
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Alyssa’s Continuing Act 3
One Sentence Vision: To be the best writer I can be and a go-to writer in the industry, crafting scripts that become successful movies and make a lasting impact on people.
I was running into a few core problems with the serum/bands so I have brainstormed an alternate that is similar but requires a few tweaks to the world and main character (behavior). I am speed-running the rest of my first draft to honor this version of the outline so I can get into the nitty-gritty of problem solving in the second draft. Will need to adjust some of the core elements but hopefully I can keep most of the outline. So in the meantime my dialogue and action lines are suffering but I am not worried about the quality right now- moving forward!
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Melissa Barreca Continuing Act 3
My vision: Melissa Barreca is one of the most sought after writers in the movie industry because of the artistry of her writing, professionalism and exceptional ability to tell important, entertaining, joyful, and heartbreaking stories that inspire audiences and become legendary classics.
What I learned from doing this assignment is/How it’s going:
I have found myself tweaking scenes as I go at this stage. Mainly because there are some things that don’t feel like they flow and other things that occur as I’m writing that need to be in the scene to fulfill the outline as it is written. So I am sticking very close to the outline, but improving slightly as I go. It doesn’t seem to be slowing me down at all and is clearly a process of the story, revealing itself to me, aided by the outline. I believe this is still in the spirit of fast writing, and all of the rules!
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Adrienne – Continuing Act 3 Module 5 Lesson 10
My Vision: I am going to work as hard as I reasonably am able to succeed at script writing to be recognized by multiple movie producers as a skilled script writer, and to have my scripts produced worldwide.
What I have learned from this assignment is the importance of listening to the audio, and don’t become discouraged. Keep moving forward.
I enjoy writing, especially when I’m not trying to be perfect. My scenes will eventually come together with the final draft, but I have to be content with my 6-10 pages in Act 3.
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Veronica Turowski’s Continuing Act 3
My Vision: I want to be a successful writer who writes several scripts yearly and then sells them to producers who create my vision for the big screen.
What I learned from doing this assignment is I can do this! It’s getting easier every day.
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Module 5 Lesson 10 Continue Act 3
Marguerite Langstaff: THE BILLIONAIRE IN 501
VISION:I WANT TO LEARN TO WRITE AND MARKET MOVIES.
WHAT I learned from doing this assignment: I learned I might have to put the rest of my life on hold while I complete assignments.
State/activity: I love moving forward with my script.
It is going all right, but I’m not so much “into my story.”
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H. Vince Continuing Act 3
WIM Module 5 – 2023
Lesson 10: Continue Act 3. Next 6-10 Pages
My Vision: I am going to be a professional screenwriter
What I learned from doing this assignment is…
Just keep writing..writing..writing…
TITLE: DREAM VACATION
WRITTEN BY: H. Vince
GENRE: DRAMA/THRILLER
HIGH CONCEPT: When a retired couple finally take their dream vacation, the husband starts showing signs of rapid dementia and leaves his wife in distress in a foreign country.
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BRIAN BULL – Continuing Act 3
VISION!!!
My ultimate goal is to get my scripts from my hands to the SILVER SCREEN!!“What I learned from doing this assignment is…
Just stay with it, trying not to be perfect.The ONE THAT GOT AWAY – A Fisherman’s Tale
A fisherman is determined to catch the fish he blames for his younger brother’s death, however, in the end, it turns out the fisherman is the one who had gotten away.
ASSIGNMENT
2. Write 6 – 10 pages a day in the next two days.
3. Tell us how it is going for you.
Plugging away.
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bent’s continuing act 3
………. my vision for myself is this …… i want to be a great feature film writer who knows his shit.
………….. what i learned doing this assignment is this… i am getting improved every day that i write.
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