Lesson 10

[j T]

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[j T]

Jessica Tremblay's Outline Exchange 1

Anybody ready to exchange feedbacks on their outline?

My outline is 13 pages.

DEATH CLEANING
Genre: Horror
Concept: After her father’s death, a pregnant woman seeking her inheritance gets trapped in the basement of his building where she must battle a bloodthirsty creature using objects found in storage lockers to survive the night while protecting a doll who acts as a surrogate for her unborn child.

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[Tasha Espinoza]

Tasha's Outline Exchange 1
Hi Jessica. I'm ready to exchange.
My outline is also 13 pages.
Also, it deals with the Catholic religion (as in the bad guy is a priest), so if you find that offensive and would prefer not to review my outline for feedback, I totally understand. Hal said to be upfront about potentially sensitive material and I wanted to make sure I let you know. If you're okay with it, then let's exchange outlines for feedback😉
DATING WITH DEMONS
Genre: Horror Comedy
Concept: What if Linda Blair from The Exorcist wanted to date?

[j T]

Hi Tasha,
Looking forward to reading the outline!
Jessica

[Edward Gillow]

Many pardons to both of you. I thought I would have more time to work on this class but as luck would have it, some acting projects have come in. Yeah! I want to get my outline posted and have two new pairs of eyes on it and I can look at your outlines as well… looks like the schedule for posting assignments is quite aggressive. anyways, still around just lagging behind you two. too bad there isn’t an easier way to communicate with each other at the same time. cheers.

[Tasha Espinoza]

No worries Ed. Happy to give you feedback when you’re ready. Congrats on the acting projects!

[j T]

Hi Ed,
I’m happy to exchange feedbacks too when you’re ready.
Jessica

[j T]

Jessica Tremblay's Outline Exchange 2

Anybody ready to exchange feedbacks on their outline?

My outline is 14 pages.

DEATH CLEANING
Genre: Horror
Concept: After her father’s death, a pregnant woman seeking her inheritance gets trapped in the basement of his building where she must battle a bloodthirsty creature using objects found in storage lockers.

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[j T]

Correction: 12 pages.
(RE: Death cleaning outline v2 july 4 2024 NUMBERED.fdx)

[Tasha Espinoza]

Tasha's Outline Exchange 2
Please let me know if you would like to exchange feedback.
My outline is 14 pages and some change.
Title: DATING WITH DEMONS
Genre: Horror Comedy
Concept: What if Linda Blair from The Exorcist wanted to date?