Lesson 11

[Brian Bull]

BRIAN BULL – Edited TV Pitch Bible

“What I learned from doing this assignment is…
There are areas in my PICH BIBLE that need more attention.

ASSIGNMENT

Go through these editing steps to make sure your TV Pitch Bible is a quick read, presents absolute clarity, and is highly compelling.

1. Make Sure All Formatting Works
Needs white space. (Big blocks of type).
Consistent fonts, type sizes.
Consistent titles that line up and are done the same way.
Consistent punctuation that is meaningful.
Quotes, all caps, and underlining used sparingly and purposefully.

2. Discover Problem Areas and Solve Them
Fluff/Meaningless.
Confusing.
Not intriguing.
Overwritten.
Cliches.

3. Identify Areas to Elevate and Improve Them
Intriguing, but could be more interesting.
Doesn’t propel us into the future of the series.
Needs more powerful set up or payoff.

4. Tell us what this process did for your TV Pitch Bible.

My PITCH BIBLE is far from perfect and will require more attention. This process has open the door for me to continually finesse, tweet and improve my PITCH BIBLE. I will and need to constantly work on this as this is my ticket to where I want to go.