Lesson 11

[j y]

Jessica Tremblay’s Outline to Script!
What I learned from doing this assignment is that the outline helped make the script a bit tighter. I combined a lot of scenes. Removed some.
I created a longer hook (introducing how her father found the creature). Not sure if that scene will stay at the end. Maybe it’s revealing too much too soon. We’ll see.
Focusing on the character’s transformation means I’ll have to create a few more scenes during the rewrite to establish relationship between Joanna and her father.

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[Tasha Espinoza]

Tasha'a Outline to Script

What I learned from doing this assignment is that even though I intentionally flowed with every scene, it still took me a very long time to write it. Maybe I'm missing something here. But I went for it, I aimed to write absolute garbage just to get the changes down. The script ballooned from 130 to 190, but I'm confident I'll learn how to get that to a more reasonable page count in the following lessons. I'll have a think about why it took me so long. But at least I got it all out. Got that outline to match the script. Also, it was fun.

I changed 30 scenes and wrote 17 new scenes.