Lesson 12

[Karen Christine Angermayer]

Karen Christine is ready for feedback!

What I learned doing this assignment is that next time I will create a framework for a TV show I will take much more care to use less words from the beginning. It took me hours to get my results from previous lessons into the framework 😉

For me it was fascinating and rewarding to see how all the ideas and results now have found their place in the framework.

I also discovered one character I want to think about and maybe make some changes.

Right now, I am very happy with the result, and grateful to exchange some feedback with you. Good luck to you all with your frameworks – and Cheers to everybody who makes it!

[Jan Fantl]

Subject Line: Jan is ready for feedback!

WIL: I love bullet points – now even more. Going over them again and again I failed here and there yet it will help tremendously during the next weeks, I believe.

[Cat Miggs]

Cat has completed the BW Framework!

What I learned doing this assignment was how putting all the lessons together and seeing how my ideas evolved for my show making it stronger. I do feel I can still make some points stronger but at least it is a start!

[Chanda Haynes]

Chanda is ready for feedback!

What I learned doing this assignment is that once you have your framework for your show, there are so many different directions you can take it. You get a general idea of what occurs over the life of your series. Even if you have some things that are questionable or uncertain, the framework gives your show a good head start. I also love the bullet points. Makes everything look neat and concise.

• This reply was modified 1 year, 12 months ago by  Chanda Haynes.

[Kristina Zill]

KZ has completed the BW Framework!

What I learned doing this assignment…is that pulling all the ideas from the disparate lessons into one chart helps assess the strength of the story at a glance, and makes it very easy to elevate the quality in all areas: raise the stakes, deepen the mystery, ramp up the intrigue, etc.