• Lloyd Shellenberger

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    August 29, 2023 at 6:18 am

    WIM Module 5 lesson 12 Starting Act four

    Working Hard every day to become the best writer I can be and as a result I do become the best writer in Hollywood.

    What I learned from this assignment is the need to watch and learn the direction the script is going. To me it often seems to have a mind of its own.

  • Margaret

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    August 29, 2023 at 7:56 pm

    Margaret’s Starting Act 4

    Vision – to be the best faith-based screenwriter

    Progress: Into the best part – the climax. I envisioned this scene earlier so it was easiest to write.

  • Lenore

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    August 29, 2023 at 9:54 pm

    WIM Module 5, Lesson 12

    Lenore Bechtel Start Act 4

    My vision: I want to create enough salable screenplays that an agent will want to market my work and recommend me for writing assignments.

    What I learned from doing this assignment is that I can write faster than I can cut something I’ve already written.

    Because I’ve already written first drafts for two screenplays for this class, I decided to spend today’s writing time cutting a previously written 117 page screenplay down to 90 pages. Four hours later, I’m shocked to discover what I thought was some serious cutting obviously was not. I still have 113 pages and very little to show for today’s efforts.

    So now I’m wondering about the relative marketability of a 113 page script as opposed to a 90 page script. I hope we find that out in this class.

  • Alyssa Giannola

    Member
    August 29, 2023 at 10:44 pm

    Alyssa Started Act 4

    One Sentence Vision: To be the best writer I can be and a go-to writer in the industry, crafting scripts that become successful movies and make a lasting impact on people.

    Pushing into act four, which is the shortest act in my outline- I only have a few scenes and the main scene is quite long with a lot that happens in one location. As I fill it out, I may have to change the location once or move people around enough that it doesn’t get stagnant. But that’s a problem for the next draft! Speeding through for now.

  • Adrienne Watkins

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    August 30, 2023 at 9:52 pm

    Adrienne – Start .Act 4 Module 5 Lesson 12

    My Vision: I am going to work as hard as I reasonably am able to succeed at script writing to be recognized by multiple movie producers as a skilled script writer, and to have my scripts produced worldwide.

    What I have learned from this assignment is to keep empowering myself, keep writing without going back, and keep my creative juices flowing.

    It’s a good feeling to know I can start Act 4 and keep to my concept and outline, while developing structure and dialogue.

  • Melissa Barreca

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    September 1, 2023 at 5:57 am

    Melissa Barreca Started Act 4

    My vision: Melissa Barreca is one of the most sought after writers in the movie industry because of the artistry of her writing, professionalism and exceptional ability to tell important, entertaining, joyful, and heartbreaking stories that inspire audiences and become legendary classics.

    What I learned from doing this assignment is/How it’s going: I’ve had a lot of productive writing days and very excited to get this draft across the finish line. Not letting the basic dialogue bother me.

  • Marguerite Langstaff

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    September 5, 2023 at 2:18 pm

    aModule 5 Lesson 12 Start Act 4

    Marguerite Langstaff: The Billionaire in 501

    Vision: I want to learn to write and market movie scripts.

    What I learned writing this assignment: I learned I can keep writing even when I think I can’t.

    State/Activity: Putting my characters in the ultimate conflict.

    How is it going? It is coming along…I’d love to say it’s sailing along nicely, but there is this moment when I have to force myself to write.

  • H. Vince

    Member
    September 9, 2023 at 6:58 am

    H. Vince Started Act 4

    WIM Module 5 – 2023

    Lesson 12: Start Act 4. 6-10 Pages

    My Vision: I am going to be a professional screenwriter

    What I learned from doing this assignment is…

    Writing…and writing…and some more breakthrough

    TITLE: DREAM VACATION

    WRITTEN BY: H. Vince

    GENRE: DRAMA/THRILLER

    HIGH CONCEPT: When a retired couple finally take their dream vacation, the husband starts showing signs of rapid dementia and leaves his wife in distress in a foreign country.

  • Brian Bull

    Member
    September 21, 2023 at 3:13 pm

    BRIAN BULL – Started Act 4


    VISION!!!

    My ultimate goal is to get my scripts from my hands to the SILVER SCREEN!!

    “What I learned from doing this assignment is…
    Just keep doing.


    The ONE THAT GOT AWAY – A Fisherman’s Tale

    A fisherman is determined to catch the fish he blames for his younger brother’s death, however, in the end, it turns out the fisherman is the one who had gotten away.


    ASSIGNMENT

    2. Write 6 – 10 pages a day in the next two days.

    3. Tell us how it is going for you.


    It’s a challenge to find the time each day.

  • Veronica Turowski

    Member
    September 25, 2023 at 6:02 pm

    Veronica Turowski Started Act 4

    My Vision: I want to be a successful writer who writes several scripts yearly and then sells them to producers who create my vision for the big screen.

    What I learned from doing this assignment is even though I was traveling for a few weeks and didn’t have the ability to write, I went back to using the methods we’ve learned so far to catch up as quick as I can. I will make it happen!

  • Bent Hanlen

    Member
    May 6, 2024 at 5:50 am

    Bent’s finishing act 3
    …….. my vision for my success is to be a screenwriter who makes enough money to buy a house.
    ….. what i learned doing this assignment was i have the skills and i don’t have to sit on a script for what seems like forever. I can do this. I can write. i am successful in what i do.

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