Lesson 12

[David Harper]

David gives great clues!

What I learned doing this assignment is that I need more mysteries in my plot …

Mystery 1: Who is after Damien?
Answer: The Baltimore Mob
Clues:
• Someone says they want him dead
• Whoever it is is living in a big, fancy house
• Two thugs show up and try to snatch him away
• They have an FBI agent on their payroll
• They have Baltimore cops on their payroll

Mystery 2: Why is the mob after Damien?
Answer: He has a twin he doesn’t know about, and they think he is the twin
Clues:
• The two thugs call him by a different name
• The Baltimore cops seem to recognize him when he shows up
• He sees photos of himself with people and in places he doesn’t remember
• A woman slaps him, and tells him he has a lot of nerve showing up after what he did
• Sonny also calls him by the other name

[Andre]

Andre gives great Clues!

MYSTERY: Who is APT28 (and others)?
END RESULT: In 2018, the US indicts five GRU Unit 26165 officers associated with APT28 for cyber operations (including close-access operations).
CLUES:
• Mitre Cyber Attack.
• A Threat Group has been attributed to Russia’s General Staff Main Intelligence Directorate GRU 85th Main Special Service Center military unit 26165 APT28. Some of these operations were conducted with the assistance of GRU Unit 74455, which is also referred to as Sandworm Team.
• APT28 reportedly compromised the Hillary Clinton campaign, the Democratic National Committee, and the Democratic Congressional Campaign Committee in 2016 in an attempt to interfere with the U.S. presidential election.
o Was the election compromised?
o And by whom truly? If compromised, was the compromise a false flag attack, designed to infuriate domestic support for a perceived enemy?
 Due to the lack of integrity on the part of American politics and drum beats of war, this question must be asked.
• Was it an inside job?
• Have there been cyber-attacks on:
o The US Anti-Doping Agency,
o World Anti-Doping Agency (WADA),
o Nuclear weapons manufacturing and storage facilities,
o The Organization for the Prohibition of Chemical Weapons (OPCW)
o The Spiez Swiss Chemicals Laboratory.
• Have there been occurrences regarding Oil pipelines, Derailed trains, wild forest fires, disrupted financial systems, food shortages, ports of entry (marine, rail)?
• The enemy within writing the rules.
o When there is not enemy, create one, even within the ranks.
• NATO expansionism; crossing red lines (year 2014).
• How much money did US pay Russia to ferry us astronauts into space?
• If Russia is such a threat, why support them financially?
• If Russia is such a threat, why did US rely on them to get astronauts into space between (years) at a cost of ($per seat)?
• Why did US import German Nazi’s to create a space industry-NASA?
• The War of 1782. The illusion of freedom.
Fourth of July? Independence from what, corporate rule? The invisible strings that keep society enslaved-monetarily, politically, legally, etc.

MYSTERY: Lawfare as Warfare. Legal system as a weapon, against citizens.
END RESULTS: Distrust the system.
CLUES:
• Using and abusing law enforcement as political warfare.
• Selling State secrets. Money over loyalty.
• Falsely accuse innocents of crime(s) they did not commit. No matter how UNJUST.
• Hegemonic forces shielded behind authoritative control systems.
• The unlimited power of corruption. Unchecked balance of powers.
• Lawfare: Using and abusing legal-judicial-political system as weapon.
• When there is no enemy, create one; even within the ranks.
• Character assassination via department of injustice. They always use the system, which makes it systemic. Truly corrupted!
a. They label innocents as terrorist, felon, to ruin their social standing-it is communism.
b. Associating Hero with terrorist organization.
c. Loss of income adversely affecting credit.
d. Bankruptcy.
e. Tax problems, agents with guns.
f. Vehicle kill-switch.
g. Award decorated, yet character assassinated. A system corrupted from within.
i. Hero is Veteran of military with service with NATO.
• False flag attacks. Physical and cyber.
a. officials in a formal or informal chain of command, to deny knowledge of or responsibility for actions committed by or on behalf of members of their organizational hierarchy.

MYSTERY: Collateral Damage.
END RESULT: Trust no one, distrust everyone.
CLUES:
• Hero has no connection with said threat group, other than living in apartment #28. Hero is essentially collateral damage to a centuries’ old, well planned out agenda of world hegemony.
o Doing research for an artificial intelligence certification, Our Hero comes across a file labeled “APT28”.
• Falsely accuse innocents of crime(s) they did not commit.
• The unlimited power of corrupted authority.
• Lawfare: Using and abusing Law enforcement as political warfare.

• Plausible Deniability. APT 28 is an independent contractor in addition to APT29, APT30, APT32, APT33, APT37, APT38, APT39, APT41, APT5, and others. Contracted to conduct false flag operations resulting in plausible deniability on the part of the government.
o Plausible Deniability: the ability of people, typically senior officials in a formal or informal chain of command, to deny knowledge of or responsibility for actions committed by or on behalf of members of their organizational hierarchy. -Wikipedia.

MYSTERY: Perpetual Warfare or Space Race
END RESULTS:
• Future Wars in space, continuity to the war in heaven.
• Possible sequel to my horror THE PLANETARY PRINCE.
The war in heaven was very terrible and very real. While displaying none of the barbarities so characteristic of physical warfare on the immature worlds, this conflict was far more deadly; material life is in jeopardy in material combat, but the war in heaven was fought in terms of life eternal.
• To be concluded…
CLUES:
• Mankind has been at war with self since the beginning; when will it end?
• How much money did US pay Russia to ferry us astronauts into space?
• If Russia is such a threat, why support them financially?
• If Russia is such a threat, why did US rely on them to get astronauts into space between (years) at a cost of ($per seat)?
• Why did US import German Nazi’s to create a space industry-NASA?
• Make it make sense?
• The war in heaven (space) was terrible, and very real.
• IF there is a ww3, ww4 will be fought with sticks and stones. Sadly, ww3 may already have begun…to be concluded…

Plot 1- Main Story
Plot 2- Protagonist/Hero POV.
Plot 3- Antagonist/Villain POV.
Plot 4- Red Herring POV

ACT 1
Opening
• File APT28
• Doing research for an artificial intelligence certification, Our Hero comes across a file labeled “APT28”.
• Establish his prodigy.
• Establish him living in an apartment 28.
• Establish his wealth, old money, not new and wasteful.
• During research in AI, he identifies a file labeled APT28.

Inciting Incident
• 2016 Presidential campaign of HC (Hillary Clinton) compromised.
• Our Hero lives in apartment 28.
• Cyber-attack.

Turning Point
• Was the compromise a false flag by the dnc (democratic national convention) itself?
• When there is no enemy, create one. Falsely associating our Hero with a threat group APT28.
• Associating Hero with terrorist organization.
• Loss of income adversely affecting credit.
• Bankruptcy.
• Tax problems, agents with guns.
• Vehicle kill-switch.
• Have there been cyber-attacks on The US Anti-Doping Agency and World Anti-Doping Agency (WADA)? Nuclear weapons manufacturing and storage facilities, The Organization for the Prohibition of Chemical Weapons (OPCW) and The Spiez Swiss Chemicals Laboratory?
• Have there been occurrences regarding Oil pipelines, Derailed trains, wild forest fires, disrupted financial systems, food shortages, ports of entry (marine, rail)?
• How to become president: Selling State secrets. Money over loyalty.

ACT 2
New Plan
• How deep does this rabbit hole go?
• Trust not their smiles, for they deviously display their fangs.

Plan In Action
• Down the rabbit hole, there is no there, there.
• Cash, the charismatic Indian personal banker who steals from him, then ghosts him.
• If Russia is such a threat, why did US rely on them to get astronauts into space between (years) at a cost of ($per seat)?
• Why does the technology seem to be uniform?

MidPoint
• Hero is Veteran of military with service with NATO.
• Hero’s sister/brother are a part of the setup, with power of attorney, and eyes on an inheritance payout (if he is removed from the picture).
• Blood is not thicker than (water) a thick wallet.

ACT 3
Rethink everything
• Trust no one, not even family.
• Partisan divide, the united divided states of America.
• Simply living in an apartment with similar number, that is “attributed” to a threat group (that may or may not be itself an independent contractor of the us dod, designed for false flag operations).
• The fake friend who fucks and impregnates his girlfriend,
• who turns out to be a for-hire bimbo.
• Blood is not thicker than a fat wallet. The compromised family.
• Microchipping his pet.
• The War of 1782.

New Plan
• Get your passport, and move away.

Turning Point: Huge failure/Major Shift
• Open borders, Russian czars.
• Failed financial system.
• Multiple “enemies”.
• The pet has a tracking device implanted, moving items ransacked.

ACT 4
Climax/Ultimate expression of the conflict
• The Cyber Attack is a false flag operation, planted with the intent on perpetual warfare.
• Plausible Deniability. APT 28 is an independent contractor in addition to APT29, APT30, APT32, APT33, APT37, APT38, APT39, APT41, APT5, and others. Contracted to conduct false flag operations resulting in plausible deniability on the part of the government.
• Plausible Deniability: the ability of people, typically senior officials in a formal or informal chain of command, to deny knowledge of or responsibility for actions committed by or on behalf of members of their organizational hierarchy. -Wikipedia.
• The future of space, peace or war?

Resolution
Peace or War in space, continuity to war in heaven. Follow up from Planetary Prince.
• For some, war is profitable. Perpetual warfare via dividing and conquering.
• The Sub-World of US Code Title 51 Subtitle V Section 50101-51501: Programs Targeting Commercial Space Opportunities.
o “peaceful uses of outer space, to be of great value and offer benefits to all mankind (1) section 50901”.
o Resources (gold, silver, platinum, uranium, cobalt, etc).
• The war in heaven was very terrible and very real. While displaying none of the barbarities so characteristic of physical warfare on the immature worlds, this conflict was far more deadly; material life is in jeopardy in material combat, but the war in heaven was fought in terms of life eternal.

To be concluded…
6) What I learned is…
• This script may be a sequel to my horror The Planetary Prince.
Types of Clues – Overt/Covert
Overt
• Obvious to the audience.
• Keeps audience engaged in solving the mystery.
• Evidence that shows up.
• Admissions from characters.
• Accusations.
• Putting together the logic.

Covert
• Outside our awareness.
• Part of what makes the solution surprising.
• These clues are outside our awareness until the mystery is solved.
• Clues that show up before audience knows the mystery.
• Implied by action.
• Hidden.
• Background that later becomes foreground.
• Something that appears to be a clue for another mystery, but plays out in this one.
• Passing discussions.
• Things that have one meaning when first heard, but the meaning turns out to be different.
I want a combination of both Overt and Covert Clues.

Selecting the Clues I keep
Objective:
At the end of each of these mysteries, the clues I use will cause the “surprising, yet inevitable” experience.
• I need a balance of Overt and Covert clues.
• Clues can cause mystery, Intrigue, and/or Suspense, but not confusion.
• Too many overt clues have audience solve the mystery before ready. Too many covert clues make the mystery so subtle that no one has any idea what is happening.

Ultimate Objective:
The reveal is surprising, yet inevitable. I want audience to stay engaged in the mystery, and when they get to the reveal, be surprised, but then say, “I should have known!”
• Who gains from the outcome or lose of another?
• Mystery set up, is it a setup or just consequence of life. Sometimes shit happens and there is no conspiracy.
Purpose of this assignment is, the purpose of clues is to keep my audience engaged. With each clue, they become more encouraged to solve the mystery. Not trying to stump them, but I also do not want to make it too easy.
With clues, balance is important. The good news is that it is much easier to determine that balance in the Thriller Map than in an entire script.
Throughout my screenplay, I want the audience to try to solve mysteries that the Hero is up against. To do this, I create the mystery, then build in clues that keep audience engaged in that mystery. The clues sometimes lead audience in the right direction, but they can also mislead audience.

Difference between a Clue and Reveal
It could be something that feels insignificant in the moment, but becomes more important later. Some clues can be part of multiple mysteries. Some mean one thing in the beginning and turn out to mean something different in the end.

Clue:
• Anything that serves to guide or direct the audience toward the solution of a problem.
• Clues are part of keeping the audience engaged and on the edge of our seats.

Reveal:
• A dramatic moment when audience uncovers some truth. That truth may be a clue for another mystery. But a reveal does not have to provide a clue to anything.

How do Clues relate to the Mystery?
For each mystery, I am going to build a trail of clues that lead to the final Reveal for that Mystery. Sometimes, we get Clues before the Mystery is presented. Most of the clues will likely show up while the Hero (and audience) is searching for a solution.
Generally, it goes like this:
1. Cover-up presented as reality,
2. Mystery presented,
3. Clues that are covert or overt,
4. Final Reveal that solves Mystery.
I already have three of the four in my Thriller Map. Now my job is to create a trail of clues that leads audience to solve the mysteries.

Process for generating Clues
1. Go to end of each mystery and look at the final reveal.
2. Make a list of every possible clue that could help the audience get that mystery.
a. Do a general brainstorm session,
b. Go to the events in my Thriller Map. What clues fit those events?
c. Does it work better with an Overt or Covert clue?
3. Decide which clues I will use.
4. Sequence the clues into a “clue trail” and build the clues into my Thriller Map.

End Andre gives great Clues!

[Matteo Ribaudo]

Day 12: Engaging Clue Trails

In this lesson I know more clues will come while writing the script as they usually do, but this was nice execersie to map out some of them.

CLUE LIST:
CLUE: Magdalena walks out of Croc infested waters unharmed.
CLUE: She says the crocs should be scared of her to her husband.
CLUE: She’s a medic and takes out the man’s IV when she gets back. She helps him live.
CLUE: A croc inside the tent kills the soldiers inside the tent. The woman comes out covered in blood. She stands by the river and weeps her lost love. She dives in the water.
CLUE: BRAVO has no family and his agent does. He has envy of his agent and wishes he could have a child to carry on his legacy.
CLUE: Bravo says he could never do this job, he doesn’t like people enough to lead them around the jungle.
CLUE:The Jungle is a living hell with the heat and things that can kill you, sounds like fun thanks for taking us on a Jungle hike.
CLUE: Carlos couldn’t hurt and insect in opening and Bravo steps on a cockroach.
CLUE: The agent has a gun and says nothing in the jungle is going to hurt you. As He is going to.
CLUE: Bravo is hunter and thirsty. He says I’d drink water from a the river he’s so thirsty. She says that would be dangerous to his health.
CLUE: She says you don’t want to get lost out here, or you will never find your way out. As long as I’m here you’re safe.
Clue: Magdalena catches a snake before it strikes our Hero. She bites it in half.
CLUE: Gun is revealed to protect them or to kill Bravo.
CLUE: Bravo is thirsty now from hiking. Lilith is Thirsty for blood.
CLUE: Medical equipment in the cave will be the death of them.
CLUE: Lilith’s complexion isn’t from being stuck in the cave.
CLUE : She’s sweet and polite to men but hates her mother.
Twist: She’s blood thirsty and waits to feed.
CLUE: She says she can out run any man, if her mother would let her.

Thriller Map with clues:

Cold Opening
In a near by river a newly pregnant woman’s bare legs walk out of the water. She comes to a tent and goes inside. Inside lies a man. She lays down with him.

CLUE: Magdalena walks out of Croc infested waters unharmed.
CLUE: She says the crocs should be scared of her to her husband.
CLUE: She’s a medic and takes out the man’s IV when she gets back. She helps him live.

Life threatening event:
Suddenly Guerrilla soldiers invade their tent and drag the man out. They knock her down causing a facial scar. They beat him to almost death. His wife pleads for mercy. They drag her inside and try and rape her. The man’s body is tossed into the lake and crocodiles devour him.

CLUE: A croc inside the tent kills the soldiers inside the tent. The woman comes out covered in blood. She stands by the river and weeps her lost love. She dives in the water.

Mystery: Who is this woman and how did she fight the soldiers off?
Mystery 2: Why would she dive into the water with the crocodiles?
Intrigue: There is something not normal about this woman but what?
Suspense: Will she survive the Crocodile infested waters?

A. What is the reveal? Magdalena is a shapeshifting crocodile
B. How did it get covered up? We don’t see her change into croc.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? How does she swim into the croc infested waters as a human?
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact.
When she turns into the crocodile our hero must escape her wrath.

TWIST 1:
Direction: A pregnant woman exits a crocodile infested waters to a tent without concern.
Twist:Safely in her tent she ins attacked by soldiers.
TWIST 2:
Direction: They kill her husband and feed him to crocodiles. They drag her inside and try to rape her.
Twist: She kill them and comes out covered in blood.

Twist 3:
Direction: She screams sadness.
Twist: She wades into the river with the crocodiles and disappears underneath.

Hero OPENING: Our hero and his longtime sports agent arrive at Jungle expedition. He’s hungover and doesn’t want to go. The sports agent tries to convince and then the expedition is cancelled due to incremental weather.

Mystery1: How is this conceited sports legend our hero?

CLUE: BRAVO has no family and his agent does. He has envy of his agent and wishes he could have a child to carry on his legacy.

CLUE: Bravo says he could never do this job, he doesn’t like people enough to lead them around the jungle. The Jungle is a living hell with the heat and things that can kill you, sounds like fun thanks for taking us on a Jungle hike.

CLUE: Carlos couldn’t hurt and insect in opening and Bravo steps on a cockroach.

Mystery 2: Why is his agent so hell bent on going into the jungle?

CLUE: The agent has a gun and says nothing in the jungle is going to hurt you. As He is going to.

Life Threatening situation: Mudslides, flooding, treacherous terrain awaits them if they go in the jungle.

A. What is the reveal? Agent carries a gun.
B. How did it get covered up? With his shirt.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? Why does a sports agent have a gun on vacation?
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact. The agent pulls out the gun when something stalks them in the jungle at night.

Twist 4:
Direction: Our hero and his longtime sports agent arrive at Jungle expedition.
Twist: Our Hero doesn’t want to go.

Twist 5:
Direction: The agent talks him into going.
Twist: Weather prevents them from going.

INCITING INCIDENT: A woman tells them she can take them into the jungle and the weather will be fine.

Mystery: Who is this strange woman that tells them it’s safe to go into the jungle,

Intrigue: The agent wants to still go even though he’s less adventurous and physically capable and despite all the other tour guides not going in, he eggs on our Hero to go.

Suspense: What will happen when the go into the jungle.

Twist 6:
Direction: The go to leave for the hotel.
Twist: A strange woman takes them on the expedition despite the weather report..

CLUE: Bravo is hunter and thirsty. He says I’d drink water from a the river he’s so thirsty. She says that would be dangerous to his health.

CLUE: She says you don’t want to get lost out here, or you will never find your way out. As long as I’m here you’re safe.

Twist 7:
Direction: They hike the jungle and it’s beautiful.
Twist: Their guide gets them lost and they have to camp the night.

A. What is the reveal? How vast the jungle is.
B. How did it get covered up? From outside looking in it looks pleasant and accessible.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? Being lost in the jungle is life or death.
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact. When Bravo climbs to the top of a mountain the jungle extends for miles.

TURNING POINT 1: The hero and his agent and guide have to spend the night in the jungle. The next day they’re left alone in the jungle and have no way out. They realize they cant get out alive without a guide.

Clue: Magdalena catches a snake before it strikes our Hero. She bites it in half.

Life threatening situations: There’s many predators that are in the jungle that can kill our hero. Snakes and pumas, and deadly spiders are everywhere in the jungle.
A. What is the reveal? Theres folklore about blood thirsty animals that inhabit the jungle.
B. How did it get covered up? They look normal because they haven’t fed yet.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? They don’t see Lilith or Magdalena for who they are until its too late.
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact. When they feed they transform into the animals.

Mystery: Why does Magdalena eat a snake raw.
Intrigue: Why does her cold blood need warmth from the fire?

A. What is the reveal? Lilith stalks them at night as a shapeshifting puma.
B. How did it get covered up? The darkness is great cover.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? What rustles and growls in the night.
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact. When the hero escapes Lilith growls as she runs after him as a puma.

Mystery: Something stalks them at night.
Mystery: What lurks in the shadows.

Clue: Magdalena catches a snake before it strikes our Hero. She bites it in half.

CLUE: Gun is revealed to protect them or to kill Bravo.

Suspense: The predator moves closer to strike.
Intrigue: Where did Magdalena go?

CLUE: Bravo is thirsty now from hiking. Lilith is Thirsty for blood.

Life Threatening :Lost in the jungle without water, the danger of hydration and potential death.

Intrigue: Why is the agent okay with being lost in the jungle? Mystery: Why does Agent keep putting them in dangerous circumstances? Cliff diving and climbing sketching rocks.
Intrigue: Does the agent have a death wish for our hero?
Suspense:Will he survive this trip?

Twist 8:
Direction: Something stalks them in the darkness.
Twist: Its a cute animal that comes into sight.

Twist 9:
Direction: In the morning they go to hike home.
Twist: The guide has left them alone.

Twist 10:
Direction: The hero tries to find their way out.
Twist: The agent plans to kill him with his gun.

Twist 11:
Direction: The agent plans to kill the hero.
Twist: He tosses his gun down the cliff.

MIDPOINT: Magdalena returns and leads them to a cavern for safety. Our hero is glad to see our true villain.
Intrigue: Where did Magdalena go and why did she come back?

A. What is the reveal?The Cave is a trap
B. How did it get covered up? Its an old medical outpost for the military.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? Why is all the equipment still being used.
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact. The equipment is used for blood transfusion for Lilith.

CLUE: Medical equipment in the cave will be the death of them.

Mystery: What’s in the cave?

Mystery: A maze in the cavern leads them to Lilith’s chamber where she waits to feed.
Mystery: Who is Lilith and why is she so pale?

CLUE: Lilith’s complexion isn’t from being stuck in the cave.

Intrigue: Why does Lilith not go out in the daytime?

Suspense: Will they see sunlight ever again.

Twist 12:
Direction: They need water and drink rain water from the leaves.
Twist: They become sick and need to find help.

Twist 12.2
Direction: They find a sign for and aid station and come to a cave system.
Twist: Magdalena is waiting for them.

Twist 13:
Direction: Hero is glad to see Magdalena after she explains she went to go to get water and when she returned they were gone.
Twist: Magdalena is leading them into a trap set in the cave.

Twist 14:
Direction: Magdalena leads them into the cave system to get a radio or something to help the Hero.
Twist: She leads them to her blood thirsty vampire daughter Lilith.

Twist 15:
Direction: Lilith looks harmless and friendly.
CLUE : She’s sweet and polite to men but hates her mother.
Twist: She’s blood thirsty and waits to feed.
CLUE: She says she can out run any man, if her mother would let her.

Intrigue: The mother and daughter argue a lot. She wants to get out and see the world but its not safe.

Mystery: Why does Magdalena and Lilith go swimming at night with the crocodiles?

TURNING POINT 2:
Villain’s plan: Magdalena hold them hostage to drain their blood. The mother uses a rusty IV to transfuse blood from their arms to feed Lilith.

She must be fed in stages or she will get blood drunk and feed too much and kill anything in her way to get it.

Mystery: Is Lilith a vampire?
Intrigue: Our hero tries take Lilith under his wing and pin her against her mother.

Twist 16:
Direction: The agent and Hero get tied up and have to escape.
Twist: The agent confesses his plans to kill them both.

Twist 17:
Direction: The mother brings men to her daughter to feed.
Twist: The daughter hates her mother for not letting her out in the real world to hunt her prey.

Twist 18:
Direction: Magdalena transfuses blood from the agent to make it last longer.
Twist: Lilith smashes the blood supply after she feeds and doesn’t feel like his blood is helping.

Twist 19:
Direction: Our hero decides to befriend the vampire to escape Magdalena before his blood is gone.
Twist: Lilith helps the hero escape

Suspense: As the agent’s blood is almost gone and she plans a grand feast of the hero, but the daughter has second thoughts as she feels a connection to our hero as a father figure.
Life threatening events: The agent dead body is tossed in the river.

Hero’s false hope is dangerous as Lilith will need to feed again.

A. What is the reveal? Lilith is a vampire shapeshifter
B. How did it get covered up? She is an innocent looking girl.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? Her pale complexion makes her look weak.
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact. When the hero escapes Lilith has great speed and is ferocious.

CLIMAX:
Villain’s plan: The mother decides to kill the hero because he is getting too close to her daughter. The hero and Lilith escape the mother as she falls to her death.

A. What is the reveal? Lilith father was a puma shape shifter.
B. How did it get covered up? Magdalena doesn’t know that she has her father’s genes.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? Lilith wants a father figure in her life.
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact. Lilith growls as she runs after him as a puma. When she turns 15.

Twist 20:
Direction: The hero and Lilith escape Magdalena.
Twist: Lilith just wants to hunt the hero in the open jungle.

Twist 21:
Direction: Lilith is about to eat the hero.
Twist:Magdalena saves the hero.

Twist 22:
Direction:The hero and Magdalena now must fend off Lilith’s rage and cross the crocodile infested waters.
Twist: The hero sees Magdalena for what she is shapeshifter crocodile.

Twist 23:
Direction: The hero and Magdalena want to trap Lilith back in the cave.
Twist: Lilith traps them in the cave.

Twist 24:
Direction: Magdalena tricks her daughter into forgiving her.
Twist: Magdalena punishes her for not listening to her.

Twist 25:
Direction: Magdalena ties the hero up to feed Lilith and drain him dry.
Twist: Lilith wont feed.

Twist 26:
Direction: Lilith pleads for his life.
Twist: Magdalena agrees.

Twist 27:
Direction: Magdalena says she wont kill him.
Twist: Lilith makes him into a vampire.

What is the reveal?A hero can be honorable
B. How did it get covered up? He’s a selfish prick who only cares about himself most of the way.
C. What M.I.S. can be used to create demand to know the truth? He tries to save his agent but it’s too late
D. When you reveal the truth, it must have dramatic impact. His heroics to save his agent comes around too late and he’s eaten by Magdalena as a croc.

RESOLUTION: Our hero takes on a father’s role and replaces Magdalena’s for getting Lilith food. The hero is forced to deal with Lilith’s hunger now.

Twist 28:
Direction: Our hero’s now a vampire.
CLUE IRONY from beginning.
Twist: He lures new people into the jungle

• This reply was modified 10 months ago by  Matteo Ribaudo.