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Lesson 13: Description Part 2
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Lloyd has great introductions!
Working hard everyday to become the best writer I can be and as a result I doo become the best writer in Hollywood.
What I learned from this module and this assignment is you really are never done improving the script.
I went through my TV and Streaming version and made sure it was in active present tense voice and no passive wording existed. It is a bad habit I have of writing in passive voice. I eliminated as much as possible. I also went through and really looked at the choice of words I used and tried to find a better choice of words.
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CJ’s Introductions:
I realized I had very little narrative descriptions of my main characters but mostly introduced them via their actions and other characters’ reactions to them, so I added more intrique, irony, and descriptions peppered throughout their first scenes.
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