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Lesson 14
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Subject: Andre’s Thriller Map Version 1.
• THIS IS A VERY ROUGH FIRST DRAFT OF THRILLER OUTLINE MAP, VERSION 1.Plot 1- Main Story
Plot 2- Protagonist/Hero POV
Plot 3- Antagonist/Villain POV
Plot 4- Red Herring POV
Slugline: INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHTA VERY ROUGH FIRST DRAFT OF THRILLER OUTLINE MAP, VERSION 1.
ACT 1
Opening
FADE IN FROM BLACK
Opening Title Sequence.
INT. -APARTMENT #28 –NIGHT
Our UNNAMED prodigy HERO, while doing research for an artificial intelligence certification, comes across a file labeled “APT28”.
He shuffles through his mail, his DD-214 military separation papers have arrived. Separation duty-Space Command.
The medical separation is a fuck up on the part of the DOD, someone had it out for this guy. He won’t be able to prove it till many years later, after all the tracks of the guilty have been covered up and replaced with newer forms of deceit and maleficence.
When he finally figures it out, he learns the rabbit hole goes deep into the depths of politic hell. The depths of hell that not even the devil himself visits.
Until then, he has to play by their rules.
TRANSITIONEXT. -OUTSIDE OF APARTMENT 28 – DAY
From an elevated telephone line, WE see into our Hero’s apartment. Minimalist approach to furniture, yet quality furniture. He has money, perhaps old.
He works at his computer. Guilt by association, we see that his apartment number is #28.
A surveillance truck and technician monitor his activities by connecting to the power communication telephony lines to his apartment. He is being watched, very closely.
End Opening Title Sequence.INT. COMMUNICATIONS HEADQUARTERS –SAMETIME
Suspense: Lawfare as Warfare. Legal system as a weapon, against citizens.
ON SCREEN is his current computer screen, telephone line, service record and reasons for discharge- medical separation, honorable Discharge. His entire life, all encompassed into data stream.
Our Hero is not the only citizen being highly monitored.
Hegemonic forces shielded behind authoritative control systems. Monitoring the falsely accused innocents of crime(s) they did not commit. No matter how UNJUST. The power of immunity- “Justice” is bought and traded for power and control.
The unlimited power of corruption. Unchecked balance of powers.
TRANSITIONInciting Incident
INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Cyber-attack. 2016 Presidential campaign of HC is compromised. By Whom? What? How? When? Where? Why?
It is reported, the suspects to be APT28. A threat group attributed to Russia’s General Main Intelligence Directorate (GRU) 85th Main Special Service Center military unit 26165.
Perpetual warfare, the illusion of independence; false freedom. The Wars of: 1782, 1812, WW1 (1914-1918), WW2 (1939-1945), Cold War (arguably ww3) (1945/47-1990+/-).
Intelligence agencies place targeting probes on all apartment number 28’s; including our Hero’s. This targeting probe allows them to essentially circumvent all of his supposed rights and protections afforded him under the illusion of the US Constitution. Thank you, US Patriot Act!INT. WORK – DAY
He becomes romantically involved with a Russian girl, but does not know she is Russian. He doesn’t know she’s Russian, she never says it. He’s fond of her beauty and grace. You can imagine the issue this causes with the black female ‘sista-hood, they don’t like it.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Direction: When there is no enemy, create one. Falsely associating our Hero with a threat group APT28.
Twist: The enemy within who writes the rules.
Strange things begin to happen to our Hero. His computer freezes, constantly. Strange construction vehicles are parked outside of his apartment, at all hours.
The assassination of his character and credibility has been going on since his separation, he just didn’t know it! But after the intelligence probe on apartment 28s, it ramps up; almost as if it were planned… like a false flag operation.
His credit (financial, medical, et al) is compromised. Embarrassing moments at the store line when payment is declined. He learns to carry cash. Good thing there is no cash-less society (wink-wink).
He is audited by tax department with false claims he must invalidate.
He is forced into bankruptcy by corrupt and less than honorable us senator whom is looking to support the local state attorney general with eyes on the presidency. State governors and vice presidents seeking presidential appointments, are all willing to towe party lines of lies and bullshit.Guilt by association. That association being “apartment 28”. FYI, there is also APT29, APT30, APT32, APT33, APT37, APT38, APT39, APT41, APT3, APT5, Aquatic Panda, Axiom, BackdoorDiplomacy, BITTER, BlackOasis, Black Tech, Blue Mockingbird, Bouncing Golf, BRONZE BUTLER, Carbanak, and Chimera.
TRANSITIONINT. VA HOSPITAL – DAY
REVEAL: His past with military service with NATO.
TRANSITIONINT/EXT -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Direction: Character Assassination continues…
i. Associating Hero with terrorist organization.
j. Loss of income adversely affecting credit.
k. Bankruptcy.
l. Tax problems, agents with guns.
m. Vehicle kill-switch.
n. Using public records to sow discord.
o. The government is not only complacent, but the ringleader.
p. When there is not enemy, create one, even within the ranks.Lawfare: Using and abusing Law enforcement as political warfare.
o Sycophants with medical degrees on payroll
o When perceived doctor patient confidentiality is sold to the lowest common denominator, the system of espionage.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Enter agents of chaos-change. Like feces sticking to ones shoe, these agents of compromised-corrupted politicians have already been inserted. Hero is just now recognizing them.
False flag cyber-attack to gain signal intelligence.
The beautiful women of intrigue: Asian, Black, Indian, Russian, White, etc. They do not him, just access to him. What access to him brings to them.Twist: The assassination of his character and credibility has been going on since…
o Having his credit (financial, medical, et al) compromised.
o Audited by tax department with false claims he must invalidate.
o Forced into bankruptcy by corrupt us senators, attorney generals, state governors and vice presidents seeking presidential appointments, simply by towing party lines of lies and bullshit.
TRANSITIONINT. PUBLIC LIBRARY – DAY
In the World History section of the local public library, Hero studies up…
The history of those who sold State secrets to obtain office. Twist: How to become president. Money over loyalty to nation and humanity. The enemy within who writes the rules.
Wars of: 1782, 1812, WW1 (1914-1918), WW2 (1939-1945), Cold War (arguably ww3) (1945/47-1990+/-), Divide and conquer. Is there a profit to be made from war?
TRANSITIONINT. WORK – NIGHT
When the villain is the employer. Twist: Good people being forced to do bad work. When you have to pay the bills!
TRANSITION
Turning PointINT. -DNC HQ – DAY/NIGHT
When there is no enemy, create one. Falsely associating our Hero with a threat group APT28. Was the compromise a false flag by the dnc (democratic national convention) itself? Ask yourself, who stands to benefit from the loss?
False flag attacks.
o Physical and cyber. Have there been occurrences regarding Oil pipelines, Derailed trains, wild forest fires, disrupted financial systems, food shortages, ports of entry (air, marine, rail)?
o Have there been cyber-attacks on The US Anti-Doping Agency and World Anti-Doping Agency (WADA)? Nuclear weapons manufacturing and storage facilities, The Organization for the Prohibition of Chemical Weapons (OPCW) and The Spiez Swiss Chemicals Laboratory?Reveal: The use and abuse of the system.
• Using public records to sow discord.
• The government is not only complacent, but the ringleader.
• When there is not enemy, create one, even within the ranks.
• Lawfare: Using and abusing Law enforcement as political warfare.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Life goes on. Just because these things have occurred, our Hero must continue to do research for his artificial intelligence certification. The question to ask now is, does 1+1=2 or 3?
By now, our Hero has been placed on the terrorist watch list by conveniently falsely associating Him with terrorist organization APT28.
He has endured, loss of income which adversely affects his credit.
Tax problems with political operative agents with guns. The type that loves to steal 2nd Amendment Rights from lawful citizens because those lawful citizens were conveniently placed on superficially designed and shallow terror watch lists.
The kill-switch in his vehicle is engaged, forcing the tow of his vehicle, and because his accounts have been closed, his vehicle remains in the pound. Once again, some real pieces of shit have it out for this guy, and they are using the system to target him. The justice system proves to not be about justice, just us… or Them.
TRANSITIONEXT. VA HOSPITAL – DAY
Hero learns his medical record has been cherry picked by the same state attorney general, whom has NO medical education, just a badge of dishonor. Doctor patient confidentiality does not exist. Service to country is viola-table by those with agendas and bias against Veteran’s. If you want to get vengeance against Americans, gain employment with the government, it will put you on payroll. When perceived doctor patient confidentiality is sold to the lowest common denominator, the system of espionage.
The Suspense and thrilling factor are Falsely associating our Hero with threat group APT28.
TRANSITIONEXT. MAINLAND USA – DAY and NIGHT
Physical and cyber threats. Have there been occurrences regarding Oil pipelines, Derailed trains, wild forest fires, disrupted financial systems, food shortages, ports of entry (air, marine, rail)?
Department of Transportation inside jobs, also known as false flag attacks.
Have there been occurrences regarding Oil pipelines, Derailed trains, wild forest fires, disrupted financial systems, food shortages, ports of entry (air, marine, rail)?
Wide OPEN borders, with known terrorists just walking over. Not an invasion, but an invitation! When votes matter more than safety.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Territorial aggression by NATO. Moving one-inch eastward into provocation.
TRANSITIONEND ACT 1
——————————————————ACT 2
New PlanINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Mystery: How deep does this rabbit hole go?Intrigue: The Space Race revealed: If Russia is such a threat, why did US rely on them to get astronauts into space between (years) at a cost of ($per seat)?
Intrigue: He focuses applying his genius to, “peaceful uses of outer space, to be of great value and offer benefits to all mankind (1) section 50901”.
Suspense: 2016 APT28 reportedly compromises the Hillary Clinton campaign, the Democratic National Committee, and the Democratic Congressional Campaign Committee.
Mystery: Is APT28 a threat group? Or a us contractor, contracted to conduct false flag operations?
Intrigue: It/They are attributed to such group.
Mystery: Who(m) is doing the attributing?
Suspense: 2018 the US indicts five GRU Unit 26165 officers associated with APT28 for cyber operations (including close-access operations) conducted between 2014 and 2018 against
o WADA World Anti-Doping Agency,
o the US Anti-Doping Agency,
o a US nuclear facility,
o (OPCW) the Organization for the Prohibition of Chemical Weapons,
o the Spiez Swiss Chemicals Laboratory,
o and other organizations.
Mystery: Did APT28 compromise said situations?
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Hero is isolated from family and friends. Friends who were really co-workers more than friends. Hero’s father dies of a drug overdose
Mother dies of HIV.
Friends distance themselves.
Intrigue: Is our Hero part of this APT28 threat group, or simply a resident of apartment 28?
Reveal: He simply lives in an apartment.
Suspense/Intrigue: But he is former military.
Mystery: The government wants Hero to use his genius, to create a space weapon.
Intrigue: He focuses applying his genius to, “peaceful uses of outer space, to be of great value and offer benefits to all mankind (1) section 50901”.
Reveal: They don’t like his plan, and move forward with systematically (using the system) assassinating the credibility of character.
Intrigue: All the people who are willing to be part of this diabolical plan.
Get your passport, and move away.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Trust not their smiles. Trust not their smiles, for they deviously display their fangs.
Distorting history for future generational confusion. History is written and rewritten by the victor. Replace their God, with your own likeness.
Suspense: 2014 NATO Expansion. Crossing the red line.
Intrigue: Distorting history for future generational confusion.
Reveal: manipulating geographical map lines terrain.
Suspense- False Flag attacks.
Reveal- Oil pipelines. Derailing trains. Forrest fires. Disrupting financial systems. Food shortages.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Suspense: 2018 the US indicts five GRU Unit 26165 officers associated with APT28 for cyber operations (including close-access operations) conducted between 2014 and 2018 against
• WADA World Anti-Doping Agency,
• the US Anti-Doping Agency,
• a US nuclear facility,
• (OPCW) the Organization for the Prohibition of Chemical Weapons,
• the Spiez Swiss Chemicals Laboratory,
• and other organizations.
• Reveal: tbd
• Mystery: Did APT28 compromise said situations?
• Reveal: tbd
• Mystery: Is APT28 a threat group?
• Mystery: Who(m) is doing the attributing?
TRANSITION
Plan In ActionINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Mystery: If Russia is such a threat, why did US rely on them to get astronauts into space between (years) at a cost of ($per seat)?
• Cost per seat on Soyuz paid by American taxpayer.
• Why does the technology seem to be uniform?
• From fighter jets to space craft, commonality or coincidence?
• Why does the technology seem to be uniform?2016 DJT is elected as President.
• Russian collusion.
• US is energy independent and financially strong.
• No wars.
• World is relatively at peace, including middle east, then…
• BLM, Riots, Covid, closing of economy.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
• Mystery/Suspense: Down the rabbit hole We go; there is no there, there.
• Intrigue: Our Hero is an American veteran, wrongfully separated with medical malpractice that is covered up by the Villains. His record from overseas has been manipulated with a false narrative, and he has no access to it.Essentially the us government screwed him over using character assassination via medical malpractice.
• Mystery: What secrets are they (the government) hiding, using him as collateral?
• Intrigue: Our Hero is a veteran, who served overseas with NATO.
• Reveal: Medical malpractice.
• Reveal: Collateral damage in a sick game of overload rulership.
• Mystery: Controlling the negative narrative of the negro.
• Reveal: Juneteenth.
• Mystery: False promises with potential high returns.
• Intrigue: Reparations.
• Cash, the charismatic Indian personal banker who steals from him, then ghosts him, stealing the money.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Suspense Intrigue: The Banker. Cash, the charismatic Indian personal banker who steals from him, then ghosts him.
o What is Cash’s connection to the Indian space industry?
When the truth is hidden behind generational lies and deceit.
o Money over loyalty.
Direction: Always have an enemy, even within the ranks. When there is no enemy, create one. How capitalist-authoritarianism truly works.
Mystery: Controlling the negative narrative of the negro.
• Reveal: Juneteenth.
• Mystery: False promises with potential high returns.
• Intrigue: Reparations.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -INTERNATIONAL SPACE STATION – DAY/NIGHT
If Russia is such a threat, why did US rely on them to get astronauts into space between (years) at a cost of ($per seat)?
Why does the technology of US and Russia seem to be uniform?
TRANSITIONEND ACT 2
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ACT 3
Rethink everythingINT. -MEDIA ROOM –NIGHT
Intrigue: Free and open press. Reveal: it is not so free; it is very controlled dissemination of information.
• When did this begin?
o The War of 1782.
o Intrigue: Creating the Federal Reserve.
o Reveal: Federal Reserve Taxation; Pimping America.
o Mystery: Printing money at will, yet tax the people at will.
TRANSITIONEXT. US BORDER – NOW
Suspense: Open borders, invading forces. Mystery: IF you have an unchecked issue at the border, why leave it open?
Reveal: When you import the third world…The US is imploding, riots, “peaceful” protests, covid released, economy superficially closed, lockdown.
Then, Joe Biden is selected in contested election; and the world goes to war. The US loses is position in the world of leadership. NATO expansion into the east with provocation to war with Russia, middle east is no longer at peace.
With the progression of military weaponry, personnel, and funding, ww3 imminent, inflation worse since great depression of 1930’s.
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION –NIGHT
Suspense: Trust no one, not phony-friends, not even family.
o Reveal: Blood is not thicker than a fat wallet. The compromised family.
o Reveal: The fake friend who fucks and impregnates his girlfriend, who turns out to be a for-hire bimbo.
Simply living in an apartment with similar number, that is “attributed” to a threat group (that may or may not be itself an independent contractor of the us DOD, designed for false flag operations).
Micro-chipping his pet.
Suspense: Knives out, the Darkest Nights of His Soul.
Mysterious Intrigue: Not the popular opinion, Losing faith… In God We Trust? Not these heathens! Who or what truly runs the world? It ain’t God nor Allah.
o Suspense: Losing faith. No longer believing in God.
o Intrigue: God doesn’t write checks, but maybe he should.
Mysterious Thrill: Religions of the world are psychological manipulations for mind control.
TRANSITIONINT. -PUBLIC LIBRARY – DAY
Media room at the library.
Intrigue: Free and open press. Reveal: it is not so free; it is very controlled dissemination of information.
Keyword Subject Searches:
• Partisan divide, the united divided states of America.
• The War of 1782.
Suspense: Roman Trojan Horse, Open borders, invading forces. Reveal: When you import the third world…Mystery: IF you have an unchecked issue at the border, why leave it open?
Intrigue: Creating the Federal Reserve. Reveal: Taxation; Pimping America. Mystery: Printing money at will, yet tax the people at will.
TRANSITIONNew Plan
INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
US targets Russia with NATO.
US weaponizes middle east with Israel. October 7th was the current tipping point to a centuries old tragedy in the “holy land”.“Do not make the mistake of glorifying war, rather discern what it has done for society so that you may the more accurately visualize what its substitutes must provide in order to continue the advancement of civilization. And if such adequate substitutes are not provided, then you may be sure that war will long continue”- 70:2.19
TRANSITIONINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
• Intrigue: Get your passport, and move away.
• Suspense: The corrupted state agency goes through your things.
• Missing items, ransacked moving boxes.
• Intrigue: More corrupted badges, shielded by authoritarianism.
• Reveal: The department of injustice.
Suspense/Mystery: The trusted loyal pet has a tracking device implanted, moving items ransacked.
Intrigue: No friends remaining. No one to trust, not even trust itself.
TRANSITIONTurning Point: Huge failure/Major Shift
EXT. -PARK – DAY
Conversations with a stranger. While the dogs play…
Reveal: The illusion of Freedom eroding away.
Intrigue: 1782 was a set-up, this is the crescendo.
WW3 is imminent with $200billion weapons systems funding to Ukraine.What is truly behind the great seal of the USA? The war of 1812.
Failed financial systems, or successful, depending on how one views it. Off the gold standard. Onto petroleum via fiat. Off petroleum, onto oblivion.
Consequences of an insolvent fat monetary system. (Unfortunate answer: Another war).
Dereliction of duty, abandonment of post
• Open borders, Russian czars.
• Multiple “enemies”, no more friends.
TRANSITIONINT. -PUBLIC LIBRARY – MORNING
Back in the study room, Hero studies world and American history.
Intrigue: 1782 was a set-up, this is the crescendo.
Reveal: False freedoms eroded, or the illusion fading away. Freedom is not free.
Wars of: 1782, 1812, WW1 (1914-1918), WW2 (1939-1945), Cold War (arguably ww3) (1945/47-1990+/-), WW3 (20??-20??), WW4 (there will be nothing left for a 4th world war).
“War is strong medicine, very costly and most dangerous; while often curative of certain social disorders, it sometimes kills the patient, destroys the society”- 70:2.1
Consequences of an insolvent fiat monetary system. (Unfortunate answer: Another war).
TRANSITIONEND ACT 3
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Climax/Ultimate expression of the conflictINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Less confident in his government, Hero attempts to put the pieces of his life together after the complete violation of what he once thought of as his citizen rights.
The future of space: Peace or War?
Hero forms a business and secures funding in,
• The Sub-World of US Code Title 51
• Subtitle V Section 50101-51501: Programs Targeting Commercial Space Opportunities.
• Space Commerce Sections 50101-50134.
Mission Statement:
(1) “The Peaceful uses of outer space continue to be of great value and to offer benefits to all mankind”.(2) Private applications of space technology have achieved significant levels of commercial and economic activity and offer potential for growth in the future, particularly in the U.S.
(3) New and innovative equipment and services are being sought, produced, and offered by entrepreneurs in telecommunications, information services, microgravity research, etc …
• Title 7- Agriculture, Farming.
Hero secures generational wealth.
TRANSITIONINT. -UNDISCLOSED LOCATION – DAY
In 2018, the US indicts five GRU Unit 26165 officers associated with APT28 for cyber operations (including close-access operations).
The US also has increased the threat of world war, lost majority of allies, has inflation worse than or comparable to 1930s depression, open borders with known terrorist cells entering.
The world is less stabilized with the false attribution of a us citizen with a foreign threat group that may or may not have been contracted to conduct false flag operations resulting in plausible deniability on the part of the government.
Suspense: The Cyber Attack is a false flag operation, planted with the intent on perpetual warfare.Who or What controls the country-corporation. The President is insignificant.
When The People have been fed lies as truth most of their lives…The People are insignificant.US provocation of another war proves successful. Not just Russia, but China, North Korea all while isolating itself from allies, with the exception of (white) European nations.
The world economies have relieved themselves from the petulant sanctions of the fiat usd with the creation of BRICS economy.For some, war is profitable. Perpetual warfare via dividing and conquering.
• The Sub-World of US Code Title 51 Subtitle V Section 50101-51501: Programs Targeting Commercial Space Opportunities.
o “peaceful uses of outer space, to be of great value and offer benefits to all mankind (1) section 50901”.
o Resources (gold, silver, platinum, uranium, cobalt, etc).
The war in heaven was very terrible and very real. While displaying none of the barbarities so characteristic of physical warfare on the immature worlds, this conflict was far more deadly; material life is in jeopardy in material combat, but the war in heaven was fought in terms of life eternal.
• Reveal: To be concluded…FADE OUT.
THE END.
“APT28”
An original film by AwefulAndré. 2024©-
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Subject Line: Andre’s Thriller Map Version 1
Title: APT28
Title 2: Iaculis Dignissim (Targeted Asset).
Logline: APT28 reportedly compromised the Hillary Clinton campaign, the Democratic National Committee, and the Democratic Congressional Campaign Committee in 2016 in an attempt to interfere with the U.S. presidential election.ACT 1
Opening
INT. -APARTMENT #28 –NIGHT
Our UNNAMED prodigy HERO, while doing research for an artificial intelligence certification, comes across a file labeled “APT28”.INT. COMMUNICATIONS HEADQUARTERS –SAMETIME
Hegemonic forces shielded behind authoritative control systems, monitor the falsely accused innocents of crime(s) they did not commit, no matter how UNJUST. Our Hero is just one of many, but the focus for this story.
The unlimited power of corruption. Unchecked balance of powers. The power of immunity is bought “Justice” traded for power and control.Inciting Incident
INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
When? 2016. What? Cyber-attack. Presidential campaign of Hilary Clinton is compromised.
By Whom? It is reported, the suspects to be APT28. A threat group attributed to Russia’s General Main Intelligence Directorate (GRU) 85th Main Special Service Center military unit 26165.
Unanswered questions: How? Where? Why?INT. VA HOSPITAL – DAY
REVEAL Hero’s past with military service in NATO.INT/EXT -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Direction: Character Assassination.INT. PUBLIC LIBRARY – DAY
In the World History section of the local public library, Hero studies up…
Wars of: 1782, 1812, WW1 (1914-1918), WW2 (1939-1945), Cold War (arguably ww3) (1945/47-1990+/-), Divide and conquer. Is there a profit to be made from war?Turning Point
INT. -DNC HQ – DAY/NIGHT
At the Democratic National Convention Headquarters, falsely associating our Hero with a threat group APT28. Was the compromise a false flag by the dnc (democratic national convention) itself? Ask yourself, who stands to benefit from the loss? When there is no enemy, create one via False flag attacks.INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Life goes on. Just because these things have occurred, our Hero must continue his life. Does 1+1=2 or 3?
By now, our Hero has been placed on the terrorist watch list by conveniently falsely associating Him with terrorist organization APT28.EXT. VA HOSPITAL – DAY
Doctor patient confidentiality is non-existent. Hero learns his medical record has been cherry picked by the same state attorney general, whom has NO medical education, is NOT a veteran, just a badge of dishonor.EXT. MAINLAND USA – DAY and NIGHT
Have there been occurrences regarding Oil pipelines, Derailed trains, wild forest fires, disrupted financial systems, food shortages, compromised ports of entry (air, marine, rail), Wide OPEN borders, with known terrorists just walking over. Not an invasion, but an invitation! When votes matter more than safety.INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Territorial aggression by NATO. Moving one-inch eastward into provocation of yet another preventable war.ACT 2
New Plan
INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Mystery: How deep does this rabbit hole go?INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Hero is isolated from family and friends. Friends who were really co-workers more than friends. Hero’s father dies of a drug overdose. Get your passport, and move away.INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Suspense: 2014 NATO Expansion. Crossing the red line for natural resources. Reveal: manipulating geographical map lines terrain.Plan In Action
INT. USA –NIGHT
2016 Donald J. Trump is elected as President. US is energy independent and financially strong for nearly three years; No wars. World is relatively at peace, including middle east, then…BLM, Riots, Covid, closing of economy.INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Suspense Intrigue: The Banker. CASH-ING, the charismatic Indian personal banker who steals from hero, then ghosts him. What is Cash-Ing’s connection to the Indian space industry? To the US government?INT./EXT. -INTERNATIONAL SPACE STATION – DAY/NIGHT
If Russia is such a threat, why did US rely on them to get astronauts into space between (years) at a cost of ($per seat) when no American manned-space craft launched? The rabbit hole is deep and dirty.Why does the technology of US and Russia seem to be uniform?
END ACT 2
MidPoint
INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
“War is an animalistic reaction to misunderstandings and irritations; peace attends upon the civilized solution of all such problems and difficulties.”- 70:1.2January 6th – USA
Another false flag operation? Who was in charge of security at capital? Terrorists or Patriots demanding accountability. The US is imploding!INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Hero is Veteran of military with service with NATO. Why him? What is so special about our Hero? War is profitable. They want him to create a space weapon.INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
APT28 is a threat group that has been attributed to Russia’s General Staff Main Intelligence Directorate (GRU) 85th Main Special Service Center (GTsSS) military unit 26165. This group has been active since at least 2004.END ACT 2
ACT 3
Rethink everything
INT. -MEDIA ROOM –NIGHT
Intrigue: Free and open press. Reveal: it is not so free; it is very controlled dissemination of information.EXT. US BORDER – NOW
Suspense: Open borders, invading forces. Mystery: IF you have an unchecked issue at the border, why leave it open? When you import the third world…INT./EXT. -LOCATION –NIGHT
Suspense: Knives out, the Darkest Nights of His Soul.
Mysterious Intrigue: Not the popular opinion, Losing faith… In God We Trust? Not these heathens! Who or what truly runs the world? It ain’t God nor Allah.INT. -PUBLIC LIBRARY – DAY
Media room at the library. Intrigue: Free and open press. Reveal: it is not so free; it is very controlled dissemination of information.New Plan
INT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
US targets Russia with NATO.
US weaponizes middle east with israel. October 7th was the current tipping point to a centuries old trajedy in the “holy land”.“Do not make the mistake of glorifying war, rather discern what it has done for society so that you may the more accurately visualize what its substitutes must provide in order to continue the advancement of civilization. And if such adequate substitutes are not provided, then you may be sure that war will long continue”- 70:2.19
Turning Point: Huge failure/Major Shift
EXT. -PARK – DAY
Conversations with a stranger. While the dogs play…
Reveal: The illusion of Freedom erodes away.
Intrigue: 1782 was a set-up, this is the crescendo. What is truly behind the great seal of the USA? The war of 1812. WW3 is imminent with $200billion weapons systems funding to Ukraine.ACT 4- Resolution
Climax/Ultimate expression of the conflictINT./EXT. -LOCATION – DAY/NIGHT
Less confident in his government, Hero attempts to put the pieces of his life together after the complete violation of what he once thought of as his citizen rights.INT. -UNDISCLOSED LOCATION – DAY
In 2018, the US indicts five GRU Unit 26165 officers associated with APT28 for cyber operations (including close-access operations).The US also has increased the threat of world war, lost majority of allies, has inflation worse than or comparable to 1930s depression, open borders with known terrorist cells entering.
The world is less stabilized.
FADE OUT.
THE END.
“APT28”
An original film by AwefulAndré. 2024© -
Title:Sangre
Thriller Map 1
Characters:
Bravo Hero
Carlos red herring
Magda Vilain
Lilith Villain/Hero
TITLE CARD: “A LOVING MOTHER WILL DO ANYTHING TO FEED HER HUNGRY CHILD.”
COLD OPENING
EXT. JUNGLE – DAY
A crocodile crawls into the river. Suddenly a woman walks carefree out of the water.
INT. TENT – DAY
She makes her way to a tent and goes inside. She buttons up her shirt and tends to a man on a gurney with an IV. He says you have to be careful of the crocs in the river. She says they should be the ones who should scared. She tells him he will be fine and he’s got a baby on the way. He has puma claws around his neck. They are from his ancestors. She looks at his nails. They’re dirty and she asks him has he been out in the jungle hunting again. He smiles and hugs his wife. We need to eat he says. Suddenly SOLDIERS storm in the tent and drag the man out. The woman tries to stop them.
I/E. TENT – DAY
The soldiers beat the life out of the man and toss him into the river where the crocs devour him. His wife watches him die and the soldiers hold her back. They drag her inside the tent. She tells them to get away from her. They rip her clothes. Screams ensue from the soldiers. The silhouette of something inhuman thrashes inside.
The woman crawls out covered in blood. The soldiers inside are dead. The woman stands at the river, and screams at the loss of her husband. She caresses her flat pregnant belly she looks off into the distance.
HERO OPENING
INT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY
A slinky dress and a man’s clothes on the floor. A GIRL lays next to BRAVO, (50’s), a legendary football player and celebrity from Argentina. A LOUD knock at the door. It’s his long time agent CARLOS. He’s yelling for Bravo to get up because they’re going on a jungle tour.
INT. CAR – DAY
In a car ride to the jungle entrance we learn about our lead and his agent’s relationship. Carlos surprises him with a safari to hunt pumas in the jungle. Bravo is a lover not a fighter, but goes anyway since this is the first time his agent has bought him anything. Bravo also says how much his misses being able to run and he would give anything to sprint like he used to. His knee injury that ruined his career.
EXT. JUNGLE TOUR – PARKING LOT – DAY
Sunny bright day. Tour GUIDES wait to take ADVENTURE SEEKERS and HUNTERS into the jungle. An OFFICIAL tells the guides that the weather is going to be bad and all tours are suspended. GUIDE #1 walks up to BRAVO hungover and CARLOS. The guide hands them an envelope with a refund.
INCITING INCIDENT
MAGDALENA (40’s) a local, who wears puma claws around her neck in honor of her late husband, says she can take them on the tour no problem. She carries a rusty old rifle from the military. Our hero is hesitant but his agent taunts him that he’s chicken and they into the jungle. She only has one rifle and she is in charge of the fire arm.
The guide hands them an envelope with a refund.
EXT. JUNGLE – DAY
Magdalena takes them through the jungle. They learn about the beauty, dangers, and pitfalls of the jungle. They see waterfalls and experience treacherous terrain. Bravo the footballer twists his bad knee and can’t move that well. She points to a cave system on the horizon which is an old military medical station. He can get help there.
TURNING POINT
EXT. JUNGLE – NIGHT
The group is forced to camp out at night. The caves are too far to travel to in the dark. Magdalena warns them the jungle is filled with predators. A snake crawls near Bravo and Magdalena kills it. She bites it’s head off. She cooks it and Bravo doesn’t want to eat it. Carlos loves it.
Carlos pulls out a flask to calm down Bravo. Later Carlos talks about how his Abuela use to tell stories about people who could transform into beasts if they lived in the jungle long enough.
Something in the jungle grumbles. A Puma’s eyes glow in the jungle. It hunts them. Carlos takes out his pistol and shoots blindly into the forest. Magdalena yells at him to no be so careless. She’s pissed off goes after the Puma and doesn’t return. Bravo questions why the hell does Carlos have a gun.
EXT. JUNGLE – DAY
The guys wake up and see Magdalena back. She says she had to wait till day light to make her way back to them. She leads them to the caves.
MIDPOINT
EXT. CAVE – DAY
The guys follow Magda to the cave. The see the remnants of a military medical camp. She gets the Bravo a splint and crutch to get him to follow her into the cavern. Carlos says this is not a good idea, and Bravo says we need to follow her, she’s our only way out of the jungle.
INT. CAVE – DAY
The guys follow Magda into the dark cave. She walks ahead and the guys try to keep up. Carlos goes ahead to tell her to slow down because Bravo is slow on the crutches.
Dark and now alone Bravo thinks he sees a girl. He follows her away from the group. She leads him into a room that she lives.
INT. CAVE – DAY
Carlos tries to follow Magda. He loses her in the darkness. Carlos screams for Bravo but hears his voice echo back at him. Suddenly eyes glow in the dark back at him from a puma. Carlos fires his pistol. We see flashes the puma running at him. He empties out his revolver. Carlos gets tackled to the ground. The puma breathes on top of him it bears it’s teeth. Carlos closes his eyes for a quick death. Suddenly he opens his eyes and the puma is gone. He can’t believe he’s not dead. He gets up and walks again. He sees a light up ahead.
INT. CAVE – HOME – DAY
We learn who Lilith is. She’s enamored by Bravo. She wants to know all about outside the jungle.
INT. CAVE – BLOOD ROOM – DAY
Carlos comes to hospital looking room. He sees Magdalena prepping the room. He explains his crazy puma incident. She says why don’t you lie down and rest. She could set up an IV to rehydrate him. He asks about Bravo and says he’s probably lost, but all tunnels end up here. He should be by any minute.
INT. CAVE – HOME – DAY
Carlos is now missing and Magda comes into the room and tells Bravo this is her daughter. Bravo wants to know where Carlos is? Magda explains she hasn’t seen him and hopefully he didn’t go down the wrong cave. They’re endless and he could be forever lost or fallen down a ravine.
Magda AND Lilith argue about last night and how she left the cave and it’s dangerous out alone in the jungle. She complains that she is old enough and wants to venture out. Magda defends her point by saying there’s hunters all around.
They eat lunch. And we find out she’s on a special diet. She eats blood sausage and drinks her juice, which is blood. She tells her to drink slow and to remember what happen the last time. Lilith defiantly drinks it down. Magda pulls away her blood sausage to moderate her feeding. Bravo really wants it because it reminds him of his childhood and he thought it was disgusting. His hungry and eats it and realizes it tastes good. Lilith whispers to Magda, can she have Bravo as a father. The mother says you can’t get attached to men. She says that what’s to stop her from turning him. She laughs. At her naiveté. Magda secretly says she’s not old enough or strong enough to make him transform into one and she would never live through the process.
Bravo thinks they should find Carlos, but he can’t walk. Magda says she will look. Lilith keeps Bravo company and they talk about the outside world.
TURNING POINT 1
INT. CAVE – NIGHT
Magda walks the caves and moaning is heard from down the way.
INT. CAVE – BLOOD ROOM – NIGHT
Magda comes in and tells him to be quite. Carlos is on a blood transfusion machine. He pleads for his life to Magda. She gives him more drugs to calm him down. She said he had a nasty fall and needs to stay still. She pulls a pint of blood from him. He doesn’t have much more. She explains he’s lost a lot of blood and needs to rest.
INT. CAVE – HOME – NIGHT
Magda says she hasn’t found Carlos. She tells Bravo it’s too late to leave now, especially since it’s dark out. She will look for him tomorrow and then they can head back if Bravo wants.
INT. CAVE – HOME – DAY
Magda serves blood sausage again. Bravo doesn’t want it again. Lilith also complains. Magda flips out and tosses his plate against the wall. She leaves them. Bravo asks if they are going to leave. Magda leaves and doesn’t come back until nightfall.
INT. CAVE – DAY
Bravo crutches through the cave with Lilith to leave and they hear moaning. Lilith heart beats to hunt. She’s hungry for blood. She leaves to find Carlos wailing. Bravo hears a puma growl and limps fast to hide and gets lost.
INT. CAVE – BLOOD ROOM – NIGHT
Carlos in a hospital reaches for Magda’s rifle he aims to shoot at something that lurks in the darkness. He fires the rusty relic and the trigger breaks off. The gun is useless.INT. CAVE – NIGHT
Bravo hears screaming and thrashing echoing in the cave. The puma tares apart Carlos. Magda finds Bravo in the dark. He looks frightened. He thinks he heard Carlos and an animal. Magda consoles him and says theres no animals in here. She apologizes for earlier as teenagers are difficult to deal with.
INT. CAVE – HOME – NIGHT
Lilith comes in covered in Carlo’s blood. Her mother is pissed and tells her to wash her face. Bravo wants to know where all the blood is from. Magda says she got into the blood sausage. Lilith and her mother argue some more and how she wants to leave the cave. She tells her she can’t.
Lilith is blood drunk from feeding too much and comes onto Bravo. Her hormones rage. Magda realizing this locks her in a dog cage. Bravo sees a way out. If he can convince Lilith to help him escape he can take her into town and see the world.
INT. CAVE – HOME – DAY
Bravo wakes up early morning and he and Lilith set out to escape.
INT. CAVE – BLOOD ROOM – DAY
Bravo and Lilith walk by a blood trail that leads to Carlos half eaten. Bravo freaks out. Lilith tells him not to worry it was probably a puma that killed him. Why is he on an IV? He grabs Carlos’s gun on the counter. Lilith tells him we have to leave!
INT. CAVE – DAY
They walk in the cave and Bravo’s flash light goes out. She says to keep following her she can see in the dark as she’s use to the darkness. Her eyes glow like a puma.
INT. CAVE – DAY
Bravo and Lilith make their way to the cave exit. She is sensitive to light and puts on sunglasses as they get closer to the exit of the cave. Bravo says where to? He gets knocked out by Magda. She injects him with a needle.
TURNING POINT 2:
INT. CAVE – BLOOD ROOM – NIGHT
Lilith and her mother Magda stand over Bravo on the bed. She pleads again to turn Bravo into a shapeshifter puma. She says if not done properly he could die. Lilith says she won’t leave again but if we had a family living in the cave would be easier and he could protect her. She says no and Lilith walks out pissed.
Bravo wakes up on the table with a blood transfusion on his arm. Carlos’s gun in his pocket.
Magdalena tells him what’s going on and his sacrifice will not be wasted. She leaves him to lie there while his blood drains from his arm. His arms bound he tries to pull out the gun and can’t. Lilith comes in and says that she’s sorry. He says untie her and they can escape.
Magda comes back in and she tells Lilith to let Bravo rest. She doesn’t want to leave. She tells her mother she wants to turn him so she can have a father. She says no because she’s jealous and doesn’t trust men. She tells Lilith that she can hunt him instead.
Climax
EXT. CAVE – NIGHT
Bravo is let out of the cave to flee. Magda says your free to go. He asks what about Lilith and her? Don’t worry we’ll find you soon enough.
Bravo limps through the forest. Rustling noises in the jungle. He limps faster. Two pumas run on opposite sides of him. He trips and falls to the ground. A puma comes up. Bravo pulls out his gun. The puma is about to strike and he’s about to shoot.
Suddenly Lilith comes out of the brush. She says wait don’t. She says mother don’t. She pleads for her to turn him.
Magdalena transforms back into herself. She says okay, and that she was turned by her father at her age.
Bravo doesn’t know whats going on. Lilith walks over to him and gently grabs the gun. She tosses it in the jungle. She caresses his face and says this may hurt a little but soon you will be one of us and run again, like you have never run before. Like puma. She extends her finger and a puma claw grows out. She cuts her arm and offers her blood to Bravo. He sucks her blood. She pulls away her arm and she staggers. Her mother holds her up and asks if she’s okay. She nods I think so. Bravo convulses on the ground and lies still. Lilith thinks he killed him.
Suddenly he wakes up in a gasp of air. His eyes change to puma’s eyes. Bravo gets on all fours and changes into a puma. Lilith and Magda change into a puma. They dash into the forest.
RESOLVE
EXT. HIKING TOUR – PARKING LOT – DAY
Magdalena, Bravo, and Lilith wait with sunglasses for the next couple of guys for a hiking tour. It’s overcast. They talk about killing the people who hunt and destroy the jungle. Thrill seekers with a selfish nature deserve to be eaten. But you must be careful as hunters hunt us, thats why we hunt them wisely.-
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