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Lesson 14: Description 6 + 7
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Lloyd has amazing descriptions!
Working hard everyday to become the best writer I can be and as a result I doo become the best writer in Hollywood.
What I learned from this module and this assignment is you really are never done improving the script.
I went through my TV and Streaming version and made sure it was in active present tense voice and no passive wording existed. It is a bad habit I have of writing in passive voice. I eliminated as much as possible. I also went through and really looked at the choice of words I used and tried to find a better choice of words. I went through and continued to wordsmith and improve. This is an ongoing process.
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CJ’s descriptions:
What I learned was that I tend to rely on actions/dialogue to build characters and narrative imagery (tone, word choice) to build a scene’s setting and atmosphere. I need to work on using both techniques, especially irony and setting up reveals–I think I will always be tweaking, practicing this with each draft!
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