Lesson 15

[Kenneth Wood]

Ken Wood’s Horror Outline Version 1

With this process, one can enhance scenes with strong and well-paced, horror emotions. Knowing the emotions needed in each segment of the screenplay, one has clearer direction on how to set up and write the story to grow to a true and powerful climax.

Emotions for Map:

Apprehension, Surprise, and Shock

Fear, Suspense, and Dread.

Anguish, Panic, Horror, and Hysteria.

Horror Outline:

ACT 1

EXT. SHIPPING PORT, BRAZIL – DAY p.1

A CAPTAIN and four family CREWMEN finish loading an old cargo boat with bananas. One of the crew finds some SPIDER webbing and finds it is unusually sticky and tough. We see the leg of a large spider disappear into the banana shipment.

EXT. SHIPPING PORT, U.S.A – DAY p.1

DOCK

Surprise, and Shock: The old cargo boat slams into the dock, bounces and keeps slamming into the dock. The PORT SUPERVISOR and PORT ASSISTANT try to get the (Hysteria) hysterical Captain to turn off the engine to no avail.

Suspense, horror: Port Assistant goes down into the SLEEPING BIRTH, finds four Crewmen’s dead bodies, and is horrified.

Apprehension, suspense: Port Supervisor goes down into the ENGINE ROOM to turn off the engine.

Panic, horror: The Spider kills him. Port Assistant watches the death and is horrified again.

Release: The Captain comes and shuts the engine room hatch and locks the Spider in.

INT. PORT AUTHORITY OFFICE – CONTINUOUS p.7

The distraught Captain sits in a chair blurting out, in Portuguese, details of the deaths to state medical examiner KEATON and Port Assistant.

EXT. DOCK/BOAT – CONTINUOUS p.9

Apprehension: SHERIFF MAUER investigates and gives us a closer look at the dead Crewmen in the sleeping birth.

Panic, fear: He gets halfway down into the engine room when Keaton comes running warning that the killer Spider is still down there.

Shock/Surpirse: The Spider tries to catch him with a silk strand.

Release: The Sheriff has to cut the silk off of his pants to escape.

INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB – CONTINUOUS p.12

White light with a blurry, out-of-focus, dark thing suspended in air. A spider comes into focus. DR. REXY LAMBERT, arachnologist, and two lab assistants, REESE ROBBINS and CALI ANN NICHOLE are in a venom extraction process as Keaton’s call comes to Rexy to assist him in this “killer spider case”.

INT. MORGUE – DAY p.15

Keaton and Rexy must visit the CORONER to get a tissue sample from the deceased in order to identify the genus and species of the spider. This is a gross out moment. They identify similarities with the Phoneutria Feras , the most poisonous spider in the world, but also realize the venom and digestive juices are many times more toxic and corrosive.

INT. KEATON’S AUTOMOBILE – CONTINUOUS p.17

Driving. Rexy chatters away while Keaton drives. They talk about their former love lives and why they broke up. Rexy eludes to a deep dark secret, but does not divulge it to Keaton.

EXT. BOAT DOCK, PARKING LOT – DAY p.21

Keaton meets up with Rexy, who lugs a suitcase out of her vehicle and shuts the door. ATTICUS XANDERMAN, arachnologist from Brazil, mysteriously shows up and dispels any thought of killing the spider on sight, claiming the spider, while new, is a protected species.

Anxiety: Keaton gets on his stomach to peer into the dark engine room to see if he can spot the killer spider. With a flashlight he scans the room. There, at the foot of the steps, is the dead body of the Port Supervisor on the floor.

Surprise/Scare: Rexy shouts, “Careful!” Keaton jumps.

Keaton jumps.

Keaton:

I’m being careful. That doesn’t help.

Release: Keaton on edge, resumes his scan of the walls. Something moves close to his head. Keaton jerks his hand out. The flashlight gets knocked out of his hand and sputters out on the floor.

Fear: He takes out his cell phone and turns on its light, and carefully aims it where he saw the movement. This time he realizes that a wall-mounted coat rack’s shadow was what moved when his light went from right to left.

Release:

Keaton looks again.

Keaton

It’s just a sprinkler. I don’t see anything else. Come on. Let’s go down.

Dread: The three descend down the ladder stepping over the Port Supervisor’s body. Keaton carries a rope they will use to get the Port Supervisor’s body out.

They search around the entire engine, dreading that they could be attacked with little chance of escaping.

Fear: The three are unaware of the movement taking place in the leg of the Port Supervisor’s pants, but the audience sees it.

Release: Keaton ties one end of the rope around the Supervisor’s chest. They all go up the ladder and begin to pull. The body come part way, but a knife in a belt pouch gets caught on the ladder.

Anxiety: As the body is hoisted up, head first, the spider falls out of the pant leg and retreats into the shadows. Keaton volunteers to go back down and fix the problem.

Dread: As Keaton pulls down on the body, the rope starts slipping out of Rexy’s and Atticus’s hands.

Shock: The rope slips completely out of their hands. The body knocks Keaton to the ground. Keaton hits his head and the body pins him to the floor, arms and all. Keaton is dazed.

Dread: The Spider crawls out of the shadow for a second and retreats. Keaton, still in a daze and weak, tries to get his arms free.

Panic: He looks up to see the Spider has moved up on the body just above his head. The fangs of the Spider protrude and venom beads form on their tips. The Spider hisses and begins to attack.

Surprise/Shock: The metal clap of Rexy’s POLE NET snaps shut around the Spider’s body, an inch from Keaton’s nose.

Panic: The Spider rages like a hooked Marlin. She pulls it out of the hole.

Release: Keaton, with renewed adrenaline, gets his arms out, pushed the body off and hustles up to the top deck. They subdue it several sprays of CO2, causing it to relax and go to sleep. They decide to take it to the lab right away and start to leave.

Release:

Atticus asks about the body? Keaton tells him , “I’m turning that duty back over to the Sheriff.”

ACT 2

INT. UNIVERSITY ENTOMOLOGY WING – DAY p.32

Walking down the HALL to the ANTI_VENOM LABORATORY Atticus references the gruesome closeup poster-sized photos of Spider faces, calling it the Hall of Horrors (Another gross out moment).

INT. ANTI_VENOM LAB – DAY

Anxiety and Monster Reveal: We finally get to see the Spider in all its grotesque features.

When Reese and Cali Ann arrive, a venom extraction begins.

Dread: They sedate the Spider with CO2.

Shock and Surprise: Thinking it is enough, they start to lift out the spider from its encasement, only to have it strike at the tongs.

Apprehension: They sedate it some more and take it out of the encasement.

Fear and Dread: The extraction with simple stroking the fangs does not work. They must hook up a an electrical shock mechanism to get it to produce venom, and risk waking and angering the spider.

Release: The extraction works and they unhook the electrodes from the spider’s body…

Shock and Panic: …only to have it wake up with Cali Ann, the lab assistant, holding the tongs and the creature as it goes wild.

Surprise and Panic: Rexy, the instructor, freezes instead of helping Cali Ann.

Release: They manage to get the spider back in its encasement and secure the lid with a weight.

INT. UNIVERSITY HORSE STABLE – DAY p.43

Rexy takes the venom to JACK(60s), the HORSE BARN manager. Atticus goes with her and learns which horse, GEORGIE, is used to produce the anti-venom. We learn that Atticus is working for CIA Operatives who want the venom but absolutely no anti-venom. Atticus is there, not to help, but to get the Spider back at all costs.

INT. REXY’S CAR – CONTINUOUS p.45

A text message from Keaton pops up on her cell phone. DINNER? The “B” story of Keaton’s love interest is furthered.

INT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT p.45

Keaton finally gets Rexy to explain why she decided to not pursue a Pathology Degree with Keaton and, instead, transferred to another college to get a degree in Entomology. Rexy reveals she is the cause of her sister’s death at the fangs of a killer spider.

EXT. COUNTRY FARM – DAY p.47

Rexy describes, with an accompanying flashback, how she had purposely aggravated a MOTHER SPIDER with a rock.

Surprise and Shock: When sister, DARLA, pushes Rexy back, Rexy pushes Darla onto the egg sac. It bursts open and a thousand baby spiders being to swarm Darla, and the Mother Spider attacks her.

Panic: Rexy freezes.

Horror: Darla is attacked and bitten by the mother spider.

Anguish: She cries for Rexy to help her.

Fear and Dread: Rexy is too afraid for her own safety to help.

Horror: Rexy looks back to see Darla fall to the ground and be swarmed by the spiders.

INT. COUNTRY HOUSE – CONTINUOUS p.48

Hysteria: Rexy runs into the house, up the stairs, into her bedroom, and cowers in the closet. Rexy froze and ran back to the house and hid in her closet.

Surprise and shock: She didn’t tell her parents about the Spider’s attack until an hour later, when it was too late.

INT. RESTAURANT – CONTINUOUS p.48

Keaton consoles her, “You were a young child, too young to realize consequences.

EXT. RESTAURANT, VERANDA – CONTINUOUS p.49

The night is warm. String lights and large potted plants make this a romantic spot. Keaton asks for a second chance at the relationship. They kiss.

INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB – NIGHT p.51

Apprehension and Monster Reveal: Reese and Cali Ann are tasked with feeding the lab creatures, including Teras.

Dread: After Reese feeds Teras, he gets interested in making out with Cali Ann and fatally forgets to put the weight back on the lid of Teras’s enclosure.

Surprise, shock, horror: Teras gets out and kills Cali Ann.

Panic: Teras blinds Reese with irritating urticating hairs. These also restrict his breathing.

Hysteria: We feel the additional terror of fighting off a deadly creature while blind.

Horror: Teras finally kills Reese. In a gross out display we see Teras spray Reese with digestive juices which dissolve his face. He then plasters his head to the wall with silk.

INT. UNIVERSITY HORSE STABLE – NIGHT p.55

We see a pen light down at the end of the corridor going from one stall to the next. It’s Atticus. He uses a Brazilian bamboo poison to kill Georgie.

ACT 2 MIDPOINT

INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB – NIGHT p.56

Shock and Horror, Monster Reveal: After Teras, finishes with the humans, it proceeds to attack, and kill every other venomous creature. It finally fights and kills the King Cobra in an epic battle.

Horror and anguish: In the morning Rexy discovers Reese and Cali Ann and all of the lab creatures dead. She calls Keaton. She also hears from Jack that he has given George, the horse, an antidote which reverses the bamboo poison. Rexy is so distraught, Keaton tells her to go home while he and Atticus find the “lost” spider again. The spider escapes the lab in Rexy’s large purse.

INT. REXY’S VEHICLE – DAY p.58

Anxiety: Rexy drives through her residential neighborhood. Next to her is her oversized purse with Teras inside. Teras does not attack, because she is exhausted and engorged with feasting on Reese and the lab creatures from the following night. It is also day and the Phoneutria Genus of spiders primarily hunt at night.

INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB – MORNING p.59

HALLWAY. Atticus gets a call from the CIA Operatives and disappears. He is threatened to get the spider back.

INT. CIA HEADQUARTERS – CONTINUOUS p.63

We finally see Anon(50s), a rugged CIA operative with the demeanor of a callused Nazi, vowing to kill Atticus. We find they have hired Atticus to crossbreed spiders to create the fastest and deadliest acting venom to use in their ballistic, assassination program deemed, QUICK KILL. If the bullet doesn’t kill you the venom will. Smart Horror!

INT. HALLWAY OUTSIDE ANTI-VENOM LAB – CONTINUOUS p.64

Atticus pockets his phone and goes into the lab where Keaton is consoling Rexy to go home while they look for the spider and take care of Reese’s and Cali Ann’s bodies. Rexy leaves with Teras in her purse.

EXT./INT. HORSE BARN – DAY p.65

Rexy stops at the horse barn to see Georgie has recovered. Jack gives her the first anti-venom vial. It’s not up to full anti-venom strength, but it may have some positive effect if needed.

INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB p.67

Keaton receives a call. Sheriff Mauer calls Keaton to tell him that he has found Atticus’s station is on the Pará River where the bamboo poison is found and close to the shipping port in Belém, where Captain Andrade’s company is based. The Sheriff found evidence of Atticus’s Dan and the bamboo poison on a glove Atticus accidentally left at the Horse Barn confirming Atticus poisoned Georgie and he is officially deemed a bad actor.

EXT./INT. REXY’S CAR – CONTINUOUS p.68

Rexy get’s in her car and starts the engine. The movement of the car, going from reverse to drive, causes the purse to shift and one of Teras’s legs comes out. Will the Spider come out and attack her while she is driving? Suspense!

EXT./INT. REXY’S HOME – CONTINUOUS p.68

Anxiety: Rexy swings her LARGE PURSE onto her shoulder and carries it to the front door. Tension fills the air. Will Teras attack? Not yet.

Anxiety and fear: Rexy puts the purse on a credenza in the entrance hall. We now fearer for two other people as Rexy’s daughter LILLY comes home, and ROSCO, Rexy’s dog are introduced.

Denial: Rosco is so happy to see them and hungry for pancakes, he disregards the scent of the Spider in the purse, even though he looks at it.

Dread: Rexy tells Lilly to go in to her purse and get the video game, Donkey Kong.

Lilly gets the package quickly and doesn’t realize that Teras was near and tried to strike her.

Anxiety: After pancakes, Rosco goes outside. Rexy goes upstairs and gets in the shower, and Lilly goes to her upstairs bedroom and lays down with a new video game, Donkey Kong. Lilly drifts off to sleep.

Shock and Dread: The jungle sounds of the game attract Teras who climbs up on Lilly’s body and rest on her hands, still not in hunting mode.

Panic and anguish: Lilly awakes and calls for her mother who is drying her hair.

Release: Rexy finally turns off the hair dryer and hears Lilly’s pleas for help.

Subdued Panic: Rexy in a bath towel tells Lilly to fling the spider off toward the door. Rexy takes a tennis racket to Teras but misses.

Surprise and Hysteria: Teras jumps on her towel.

She knocks it off.

Release: Rosco enters and engages the spider, fighting it all the way down the stairs.

Dread: Rosco gets bit, but, Rexy has anti-venom in her purse. She administers it and Rosco lives.

Release: Rexy takes a fire extinguisher (CO2) and sprays Teras until the spider escapes out the back doggie door.

BACKYARD p.75

Teras climbs over the backyard gate and drops to the ground on a silk strand. She walks to the front yard where she picks up the scent of the port and the warehouse where her egg sacs are hidden among the bananas.

ACT 3

INT. KEATON’S AUTOMOBILE – CONTINUOUS p.80

Rexy and Keaton are driving toward the Port as Keaton tells Rexy that Atticus is based in the same area on the Para2 River that the bamboo poison is from and Captain Andrade’s shipping company operates out of. They finally deduce that Atticus, in a “GAIN-OF-FUNCTION” crossbreeding experiment created Teras from a Brazilian Wandering Spider and a Goliath Bird-Eating Tarantula.

Apprehension and fear: They also deduce that this aggressive and deadly species, if allowed to live and procreate, has the potential to create a plague which will endanger all other species and possibly humankind. (SEQUEL SETUP)

EXT. SHIPPING PORT, U.S.A – CONTINUOUS p.81

Rexy opens the door and starts to get out. Keaton grabs two CO2 dispensers. They rush to Crutchfields Warehouse to look for Teras and any egg sacs that Teras may have left.

Apprehension: We find that Bob Crutchfield distributed half of the bananas to the local grocery stores and didn’t inspect them throughly enough for all egg sacs. He found one and Rexy, Keaton and the Sheriff find another.

Surprise and shock: Atticus and the CIA Operatives show up and, at gun point, take them, but drop them on the concrete floor when Teras shows up and threatens to attack them.

Surprise and shock: The egg sacs burst open.

Anguish, panic, horror: Baby Terases swarm the CIA Operatives and Teras attacks and kills them.

Dread: BOB CRUTCHFIELD grabs his homemade flamethrower and start to torch the baby Terases.

Panic: Teras attacks Atticus and Keaton next. When Bob succumbs to the baby Terases, Sheriff Mauer grabs the flamethrower and torches the rest of the baby terases.

Surprise, shock, dread: Rexy tries to get the anti-venom to Keaton, but Atticus takes it and injects himself, leaving Keaton to die.

Surprise, shock, horror: Keaton tells Sheriff Mauer to shoot off the finger that Teras bit. The Sheriff complies in a gross out moment.

Surprise, shock, hysteria: Teras can’t get to Sheriff Mauer and attacks Rexy next. She is knocked to the floor, but manages to hold off a bite from the Spider until Keaton can knock Teras away from Rexy.

Tension and Release: Rexy then asks for the flamethrower from Sheriff Mauer and takes after Teras. Teras heads for the door, afraid of the flames, Rexy attempts to set her on fire.

Surprise and fear: Only a spurt comes out and lands on the Spider’s back. Teras escapes out the door, while Rexy goes back to check on Bob.

Horror: Bob goes into a seizure and dies.

EXT. DOCK – CONTINUOUS p.88

Release: Teras limps across the dock platform in an escape, but it looks like she is still going to burn to death.

INT. ATTICUS’S VEHICLE – CONTINUOUS p.88

Atticus breathes heavily, pain down below comes in sharp pulses. Atticus, is feeling the painful cure of ED that the Phoneutria species is known for, only it is amplified. Morbid Humor.

EXT. DOCK AT OLD CARGO BOAT – CONTINUOUS p.89

Surprise and shock: Still on fire and SIZZLING, Teras drags herself to the edge of the dock and stops. She molts, leaving her burning exoskeleton behind and boards the Old Cargo Boat, the one she came in on.

Dread: She climbs down into the Engine Room and up into a corner where she has laid another undiscovered, large, egg sac. We feel dread that a spider plague is about to visit the world.

DOCK p.90

Sheriff Mauer walks toward the exoskeleton thinking it is the whole spider. He crushes it and sweeps it into the water with his foot.

EXT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT p.90

Keaton, Rexy, and Lilly exit onto a sidewalk and take a stroll. We see that they are together as a couple and potential family.

INT. GROCERY STORE – NIGHT p.91 Rexy, Keaton walk past a kiosk with bananas. They instinctively look for spiders. Seeing none, they walk past. However, as the camera stays on the bananas, we see one baby Teras spider. As another customer lifts a cluster of bananas out of the crate, we see an egg sac with another baby Teras coming out. It screeches and jumps on the Camera Lense, creating a FINAL BLACKOUT.

• This reply was modified 2 years, 2 months ago by  Kenneth Wood.

[Mike Coste]

Mike’s Horror Outline Version 1

ACT 1

INT. UNKNOWN HALLWAY- DAY

Emily is walking down the hallway past classrooms. She stops at one and is beckoned in by a man at the front.

INT. UNKNOWN CLASSROOM- DAY

The teacher motions for her to sit down. He hands her a paper and tells her she has three hours to finish the exam.

Horror Situation: Emily is unprepared for the test.

Apprehension: She isn’t ready for the test.

Surprise: She looks down and sees she’s in her underwear.

Fear: The test has indecipherable symbols on it.

Shock: The professor’s face appears–it’s grotesque.

Hysteria: Emily gets up and starts running.

Release: Emily hears the sound of a text come in and wakes up in bed

INT: EMILY’S ROOM- DAY

Emily wakes up and texts with Brad. Emily gets ready to go out.

EXT: COFFEE SHOP- DUSK

Emily’s car pulls up.

INT: COFFEE SHOP- DUSK

Emily meets her friends and hears a story about a creepy old classroom

EXT: OLD CLASSROOM BUILDING- EVENING

They talk about going in but have second thoughts. Heather goes in, and the rest follow reluctantly.

INT: CLASSROOM BUILDING- EVENING

Shock: The door clicks shut.

Fear: They can’t get out.

Panic: They start trying windows and doors to get out

Apprehension: Something is going to happen, but what?

They decide to split up and find a way out.

INT: HALLWAY- EVENING

Heather and Emily are searching for a way out. Emily spots David and Madison making out. She’s angry and jealous.

ACT 2

INT: DIFFERENT HALLWAY- EVENING

Apprehension: Brad is looking around, trying a locked door.

Fear: A shadow goes by.

Surprise: A person runs into Brad.

Release: It’s Heather.

Shock: A voice comes on the intercom telling them to go to room 313.

Suspense: They hear Jacob yelling and find him weeping in a classroom

Anguish: The monitor comes on and they see David in a room with a frightened look on his face.

Terror: They are told about the exam and to go to Room 313

INT- ROOM 313 EVENING

Heather, Jacob, and Brad enter the room.

Aguish: David is back on the Monitor

Panic: They are told to handcuff themselves to the desks.

Hysteria: They refuse the order and demand that David be let go.

Terror: A knife is held to David’s throat.

Anguish: They handcuff themselves as David is held at knifepoint.

Panic: They a re given the test question

Fear: They watch David drink the glass they chose

Release: David appears okay

Suspense: Now what?

Shock: David is pushed through the door.

Terror: He takes a few steps and falls over, dead.

Panic: Who’s doing this? Madison? Emily?

INT: ANOTHER ROOM- EVENING

Dread: Madison has a noose around her neck and is astride two chairs

Anguish: We hear the group being asked another question

Dread: Madison steps on the chair they direct her toward

Suspense: A hand pulls the lever.

Terror: Madison swings from the noose.

ACT 3

INT: ROOM 313- EVENING

The groups starts to speculate on what’s happening. Maybe Emily’s involved. After all, she was jealous of Madison and David.

Surprise: Emily appears at the door.

Shock: She is followed by a man with a mask holding a speargun.

Apprehension: He handcuffs Emily to the desk.

Anguish: He takes Jacob away.

Emily describes having been locked in a closet and then taken out by the man with the gun.

Anguish: Jacob is in a compromising position.

Dread: The problem is posed.

Emily asks for paper to work on the solution.

Suspense: Emily provides and answer. is it correct?

Release: It is.

Fear: Emily is announced as the next victim.

INT: ANOTHER ROOM- EVENING

Jacob is taken out of his restraints by the man with the speargun. He is told he will be joining his friends. He begs to be let go and is taken to another room for “extra credit.”

INT: YET ANOTHER ROOM- EVENING

There are two guns with different answers labeled on them.

Suspense: Jacob is asked the question.

Panic: Jacob grabs a gun and fires at The Professor.

Terror: The gun doesn’t have bullets; neither does the other one.

Hysteria. Neither gun is loaded. Jacob cheated and now has to pay the consequences

Terror: The Professor aims the speargun at Jacob

INT: ROOM 313- EVENING

The three survivors are in the room. Emily is writing on a piece of paper.

Shock: The Professor walks in with the speargun and takes Emily

Surprise: Emily lunges toward Brad and kisses him.

Dread: Emily is escorted from the room.

Brad pulls a piece of paper out of his mouth and reads it.

Anguish: The monitor comes on.

Suspense: The Professor starts to explain the question.

Release: Brad asks for a review session.

Suspense: The monitor goes off.

Anxiety: no one is sure what’s happening.

Shock: The Professor enters the room.

Release: The Professor starts lecturing.

Anguish: The Professor gives Brad a problem to try, holding Heather with the speargun

Suspense: Brad can’t seem to finish the problem.

Terror: The Professor approaches Brad and takes the chalk.

Hysteria: Brad rushes The Professor and pushes him.

Release: The Professor falls out the window.

EXT: OUTSIDE OF THE BUILDING- DAWN

The Professor is motionless outside of the building.

EXT: FRONT OF THE BUILDING- MORNING

The police are leading Brad, heather and Emily out of the building. A body is being put into the ambulance.

Dread: Emily looks back to where The Professor landed. Nothing is there.

BLACKOUT

• This reply was modified 2 years, 2 months ago by  Mike Coste.
• This reply was modified 2 years, 2 months ago by  Mike Coste.

[Kenneth Wood]

Hang in there Mike. You’re almost across the finish line.

[Mike Coste]

Does anyone know how we get into the Lesson 16 forum?

[Kris Kristensen]

Not sure I did this correctly. My outline is SUPER long.

[Andre]

Andre’s Horror Outline Version 1.
“What I learned doing this assignment is…• Make sure the horror scenes use the Scary-As-Hell model so they are exceptional
• Build in non-horror scenes so story flows and makes sense.
In order to keep the focus on horror, DO NOT flesh out any Scenes that are not horror scenes. Just give the essence of those scenes, so reader gets to stay in the story. But when I get to the horror scenes, follow the instructions (see Instructions) to make them exceptional.
Also see outline “It Follows”, included as download.
Purpose in this class/horror program is to make sure the horror parts of my outline accomplish their purposes in a big way!
At the same time, we want to see a story in the outline, but have the non-horror scenes be essence-only so it is easy for anyone giving feedback to focus their attention on critiquing the horror parts.

Non-Horror scenes include any scene that doesn’t scare the audience. These could be character introductions, establishing relationships, set up scenes, transition scenes, scenes where they plan or decide the next step, and any Character drama scenes.
1. Start with the outline I did from Lesson 9.
Go through it and add in any scenes I believe make the story flow better.
Number each scene.
Then include the Slug Line and the Essence of the Scene.
(For Horror Scenes only) Apply the Scare-As-Hell Scenes model.
On those, I will list the following:
• Slugline
• Essence of the Scene
• Horror Situation
• Horror Emotions (followed by the action that causes them)
• Scares
• Releases
• Monster reveals
3. If I have a Horror Scene that is under-performing, then determine the beginning emotion, ending emotion, and the emotions between. Make sure the horror situation fits the place in the script (1st Act Horror is not as intense as 3rd Act Horror).

Once I have those components, build in the actions, scares, releases, and monster reveals.

4. Please do NOT include any written scenes in the outline. I want people to be able to see the specific horror techniques, not be hung up on the wording of the scene.

Again, if I look through the example outline, I will see what I need to do for this assignment. Please do not overdo it, especially with non-horror scenes.

THE PLANETARY PRINCE
An original film by AwefulAndré
-ROUGH DRAFT OUTLINE-

The Planetary Prince- Horror Situation Outline (rough draft)
Major Story Hook:
A cautionary tale about freewill…
Fatherhood Abandonment and Betrayal of Trust being one of the consequences of the default of the Luciferin rebellion, resulting in the miscarriage of modern-day humanity.

Opening Quote: “Haters of God, … inventors of evil things” – Romans 1:30.
Question Posed: What would one in power, do, to remain in power? Align itself with evil.

High Concept:
What would power do to remain in power? Align itself with evil!
Rosemary’s Baby and The Omen meets The Devil’s Advocate.

After 500,000 years of freewill experimentation, humanity is judged on its collective actions. With Lucifer on trial, Gabriel vs. Lucifer, and annihilation from existence as his potential judgment, Lucifer conducts his Final Act to perfect the imperfection of his earthly assignment -Humanity.
As evidence, using human freewill, fatherhood abandonment, abortions as plan-b birth control, scientific-experiments utilizing aborted fetuses as ingredients, and constant forever-wars, Lucifer proves humanity is sinfully-evil.
(Either Big Intrigue or Major Dilemma.) Utilizing particle acceleration technology to merge Anti-Matter with aborted fetus’ within a barren woman – to create the Anti-Christ. The purpose, to take his seat of the all-powerful position of President of the US.
 
OPENING SCENE:
1. EXT. SPACE-SYSTEM SATANIA – DAY/NIGHT
Introduction to the coordinate Space System Satania, in which planet earth resides.
Narrator: Deity Absolute. Universal Absolute. Qualified Absolute.
SATANIA itself is an unfinished coordinate SPACE-SYSTEM, containing 619 inhabited worlds. Earth is planet number 606.

2. EXT. ASIA – DAY
One-million years ago. ASIA is the homeland of the human race. It is on a southern peninsula of this continent that the progenitors of humanity, Andon and Fonta are born; in the highlands of what is now Afghanistan.

3. EXT. MANHATTAN, NEW YORK – DAY
Today. The Devil and his One-Hundred Associates “The Caligastia 100” descend, not fall, like lightning onto the courthouse plaza for the trial of Gabriel vs. Lucifer.
And I beheld Satan fall as Lightning from Heaven. He had come with Lucifer to Earth (Urantia) for the last crucial struggle.
-UrantiaBook53:8:4(609.7
Lucifer and Satan were last on our world together during the time of their combined assault upon the Son of Man.

4. INT – TURNSTYLE ABORTION CLINIC – DAY
Present Day…Inside an urban building eerily similar to the White House.
There is a keen sinister approach to killing another mans child. Even soldiers at war do not get the same acceptance. Baby killer is what they called, when returning home. But this IS War!
Horror Situation- Cut. Snip. Cut. Vacuum suction. Sounds of another successful abortion, or induced “miscarriage”.
• Release- Soothing music. Classical, is it?
• CONFIDENCE: Her body, her choice, again.
• APPREHENSION- Avoidance and Rapid eye movement.
• RELEASE- Fresh cut Flowers. Symbolic of cutting and killing of life, but hey, they smell good. Double standard of the beauty of life and death-pretty smelling flowers that are dying.
• CONFUSION- Dr. Asclepius “Abortion is between a woman, her doctor and the government (hush-hush, but not the father).
• RELEASE- Everything is going to be okay. We’re here to help you.
• SHOCK- Look and feel of the environment. Cold. Sterile yet unclean. Think county hospital basement morgue.
• FEAR- Raised heartbeat.
• Sadness- Crying. Sobs. False conciliation of its going to be okay.
• RELEASE- eye contact and a smile. A loving touch.
• SUSPENSFUL CONFUSION- Fidgeting as the living fetus attempts, inside her, attempts to dodge the medical instruments, honing in on killing it. Almost as if it wanted to live.
• DREAD- Avoidant and detached solemn looking Nurse Practioner.
• RELEASE- Crying stops. Consoling of the experience, “Crying is normal”.
• Trepidation- Sound of cut, snip, suction.
• DOUBT- the sales speech of “Abortion is a woman’s right. Your body, your choice. Abortion is between a woman, her doctor and the government (hush-hush but not the father)”.
• ANGUISH- Avoidance of eyes of the girls before that were all smiles, but now feel the loss.
• PANIC- covered gurneys.
• RELEASE- Just medical equipment beneath the sheets on the gurneys.
• FEAR- Blood drips from beneath the sheet covered gurney carrying “medical equipment?
• DOUBT -Crying.
• AGNER- It was just sex, I didn’t want to get pregnant.
• HORROR- the medical instruments including vacuum.
• and Hysteria, then…
• RELEASE- Passing out.
• ENDING EMOTION- Dismay- He’s not even here. Where is your baby-daddy?
• FINAL RELEASE- Your life is your own now, we have taken care of the problem.

5. INT. TBD – DAY
Caption: Many- many thousands of years ago…
“993,408 years ago, from the year AD 1934, this planet, was formally recognized as a planet of human habitation. Biologic evolution had once again achieved the human levels of will dignity; man had arrived on Planet 606 of Satania.
We were directed not to intervene in the affairs of human progress.”
-Life Carrier of Nebadon resident on UrantiaEarth.

6. Prologue Opening- EXT. THE PERSIAN GULF -DAY
The past… 500,000 years ago,.
Then Earth’s PLANETARY PRINCE, “The Caligastia 100”, the Devil along with 100 of his OTHERWORLDLY ASSOCIATES arrive. Their mission, to uplift humanity from its retarded strains advance the interests and promote the welfare of the human races.
Teaching Regime for the Prince’s City of Dalamatia…
HAP presents the early races with a moral law. This is the law of Dalamatia for almost three-hundred thousand years. And many of the stones on which this law is inscribed, now lie beneath the waters off the shores of Mesopotamia and Persia.

7. EXT. GARDEN OF EDEN – NIGHT
Adam and Eve find themselves on a sphere wholly unprepared for the proclamation of the brotherhood of man.
Horror Situation: Under normal conditions the first work of a Planetary Adam and Eve would co-ordinate the blending of the races. But on UrantiaEarth, such a project seems just about hopeless, for the races, while biologically fit, have never been purged of their retarded and defective strains.
(This introduces our dramatic purpose, perfect the imperfected, merging Anti-matter with biologic DNA.)
From Dread to Dismay.
• DREAD: a world groping about in abject spiritual darkness
• RELEASE: add
• SURPRISE: and cursed with confusion
• SHOCK: worse confounded by the miscarriage of the mission of the preceding administration.
• RELEASE: add
• ANGUISH: Mind and morals are at a low level,
• PANIC: Instead of beginning the task of effecting religious unity, they must begin all anew the work of converting the inhabitants to the simplest forms of religious belief.
• CONFUSION: Instead of finding one language ready for adoption, they are confronted by the world-wide confusion of hundreds upon hundreds of local dialects.
• RELEASE: add
• DISMAY: No Adam of the planetary service was ever set down on a more difficult world; the obstacles seemed insuperable and the problems beyond creature solution.

8. EXT. Twin Flight -NIGHT.
With the purposeful decision of THE TWINS to flee northward and segregate their offspring from their inferior ancestors, the first decision of mind – the human type of mind.

9. INT. GARDEN OF EDEN. -DAY
The past…Eve’s Affair: The Fall of Mankind.
Horror Situation-Day 2 in The Garden. The realization of isolation and fatherhood abandonment. After their formal installation, Adam and Eve became painfully aware of their planetary isolation.
Sin was ritual, not rational, an act, not a thought.
The tradition of Adam and the Garden of Eden also lends substance to the dream of a onetime “golden age” of the dawn of the races. And all this confirms the ideas, later expressed in the belief that man had his origin in special creation, that he started his career in perfection, and that transgression of the taboos-sin-brought him down to his later sorry plight.
• DECEIT: After five years of secretly planning, Eve consents to a secret conference with Cano (father of Cain), the most brilliant mind and active leader of the near-by colony of friendly Nodites.
• INFLUENCE: Influenced by flattery, enthusiasm, and great personal persuasion, Even consents to embark upon, and add her own little scheme of world saving to the larger and more far-reaching divine plan. Then, she cheats on Adam.

10. EXT. MESOPOTAMIA PERSIAN GULF -NIGHT.
Disruption of the Teaching Regime.
The Schools of the Planetary Prince are primarily concerned with philosophy, religion, morals, and the higher intellectual and artistic achievements. The Garden Schools of Adam and Eve go on for more than (300,000) three-hundred thousand years, until, suddenly, by planetary secession AND the Disruption of the Teaching Regime, it TERMINATES!

11. EXT. SEA OF GLASS. -DAY
The past… Two-Hundred Thousand Years Ago, on the last day of the year, at the Sea of Glass at the annual conclave of Satania, the Lucifer Manifesto is issued.
It is very difficult to point out the exact cause or causes which finally culminate in the Lucifer rebellion, but one thing is certain, and that is Whatever these first beginnings are, they have their origin in Lucifer’s mind.
Gabriel is so profoundly impressed with the certainty of the impending outbreak that he goes directly to Edentia to confer with the Constellation Fathers regarding the measures to be employed in case of open rebellion.
Horror Situation: The cause of the Lucifer Rebellion is stated under three heads:
1. The reality of the Universal Father.
SHOCK: Lucifer charges: that the Universal Father does not really exist.
2. The universe government of the Creator Son—Michael.
INTRIGUE: Lucifer contends that the local systems should be autonomous.
3. The attack upon the universal plan of ascendant mortal training.
• DOUBT: Lucifer maintains that far too much time and energy are expended upon the scheme of so thoroughly training ascending mortals in the principles of universe administration, principles which he alleged were unethical and unsound.

• SHOCK: He protests against the agelong program for preparing the mortals of space for some unknown destiny and points to the presence of the finaliter corps on Jerusem as proof that these mortals have spent ages of preparation for some destiny of pure fiction.

• RELEASE: He advocates that ascenders should enjoy the liberty of individual self-determination.

• HYSTERIA: And it was with such a Declaration of Liberty that Lucifer launched his orgy of Darkness and Death.

• RELEASE: At first, the Lucifer upheaval appears to be an unmitigated calamity to the system and to the universe. Gradually benefits begin to accrue. With the passing of twenty-five thousand years of system time (twenty thousand years of Urantia time), the Melchizedeks begin to teach that the good resulting from Lucifer’s folly have come to equal the evil incurred. The sum of evil has by that time become almost stationary, continuing to increase only on certain isolated worlds, while the beneficial repercussions continued to multiply and extend out through the universe and superuniverse.

12. EXT. THE GARDEN OF EDEN. NIGHT
The past… Abject Spiritual Darkness.
Adam and Eve find themselves on a sphere wholly unprepared for the proclamation of the brotherhood of man, a world groping about in abject spiritual darkness and cursed with confusion worse confounded by the miscarriage of the mission of the preceding administration.

13. EXT. STATUTE OF LUCIFER-LIBERTY. -DAY
Present day…Logoed on their uniform, with Sir Thomas Lawrences 1797 Lucifer summoning his Legion, a demolition crew, posing as construction workers, prep for work, specifically on the chains around the statutes foot, as the Statute of Lucifer glares Ominously over the big apple.

14. EXT. MANHATTAN COURT HOUSE / THE HIGH COURTS LOCATED ON SALVINGTON -DAY.
Present Day…Opening Statements in the trial of GABRIEL vs. LUCIFER.
In all administrative work of a local universe, no high trust is deemed more sacred than that reposed in a Planetary Prince who assumes responsibility for the welfare and guidance of the evolving mortals on a newly inhabited world.

And of all forms of evil, none are more destructive of personality status than betrayal of trust and disloyalty to one’s confiding friends.

The 19 charges in the Trial of Gabriel vs Lucifer are read.
Lucifer is on trial for being in-league together with both Satan and Caligastia (the devil) to affect the intentional miscarriage of the Bestowal Mission.

15. EXT. THE GARDEN OF EDEN -NIGHT.
Hundreds of thousands of years ago, the event that set us up…The miscarriage of Adam and Eve.

16. INT. BACKSEAT OF A DUSTY CADILLAC. -DAY
Present Day…Another father planning his abandonment. The female is BBB, Indigo’s girlfriend, gets it on with a wealthy married man. During the affair, she consciously relives the experience of being a young girl, well developed and forced to entertain her father’s co-workers and peers. She learns the power she has over men.

17. EXT. FEARING THE MOON -NIGHT.
The past, yet current day as well… Sun worshipers.
Horror Situation- As the human race advances, the object and purpose of sacrifice progressively changes, but the offering of human sacrifice as a part of religious ceremonial long persisted.
• FEAR- They rather live in fear of the dark; they have a mortal dread of nightfall.
• RELEASE- As long as the Moon shines a little, they manage to get along,
• PANIC- but, in the dark of the Moon, they grow panicky,
• FEAR- and begin to sacrifice their best specimens of manhood and womanhood in an effort to induce the Moon again to shine.
• RELEASE- The Sun, they early learn, will regularly return,
• CONJECTURE- but the Moon they conjecture, it only returns because they sacrifice their fellow tribesmen.
• CONFIDENCE- As the human race advances, the object and purpose of sacrifice progressively changes.
• HORROR- but the offering of human sacrifice as a part of religious ceremonial long persisted.

18. INT./EXT. TBD. DAY/NIGHT.
Present day… the nature of the beast- Humanity; the true Monster.
Horror Situation: A true piece of shit, poisons his neighbor’s dog because of a disagreement.
• Anger: Two neighbors argue over something stupid.
• Bitterness: the argument ends in bitterness.
• Revenge: Places broken glass inside of chunks of meat, and throws the meal over the fence.
• Sadistic satisfaction: Laughs as he hears the dog grimace in pain and then…silence.

19. EXT. SPACEHEAVEN – DAY/NIGHT.
The War in Heaven is a depiction of the hell to be fought on planet earth.
Marvin Gayes What’s Happening Brother – “War is hell, when will it end?”

20. EXT. WORLD OF NON-BREATHERS -DAY or NIGHT
The majority of inhabited planets are peopled with the breathing type of intelligent beings. But, there are also orders of mortals who are able to live on worlds with little or no air. On the nonbreathing worlds, the advanced races must do much to protect themselves from meteor damage by making electrical installations which operate to consume or shunt the meteors.
Millions upon millions of meteorites enter the atmosphere of UrantiaEarth daily, coming in at a rate of almost two hundred miles a second (xxxmph).
Great danger confronts them when they venture beyond these protected zones. These worlds are also subject to disastrous electrical storms of a nature, previously unknown on UrantiaEarth, that is until now.
During such times of tremendous energy fluctuation, the inhabitants must take refuge in their special structures of protective insulation.

You would be more than interested in the planetary conduct of this type of mortal because such a race of beings inhabits a sphere in close proximity to UrantiaEarth.

21. INT. THE GARDEN OF EDEN – NIGHT.
• After their formal installation, Adam and Eve became painfully aware of their planetary isolation.
• The rebellion has changed everything.
• The Planetary Prince is very much present, and though shorn of most of his power to work evil, he is still able to make the task of Adam and Eve difficult and to some extent hazardous.

22. RACE SERIES…
• ASIANS- Highly intelligent. Jealousy among other races. Abandonment issue…
• HISPANICS- Happy. Quin Sierra, without the father. Joyful life. Hardworking. Humble.
• BLACKS- Accepting the negative narrative of the negro. Black is bad and evil. For entertainment purposes only.
• WHITES- Loss of freewill, becoming beholden to system like a slave. You know times are hard when White women must work.
• NATIVE AMERICAN “REDMAN”-
• HUMANITY- Has freewill, but is judged according to that “freewill”.

23. INT. TURNSTYLE ABORTION CLINIC – DAY
Aborting a life. The Abortion process- from baby to no baby.
Tours of pregnant women (of twins and triplets and more) counted as 1; leaving without.
Present Day…Inside an urban building eerily similar to the white house, vacuum suction sounds of another abortion take place. Within the womb, the fetus attempts to dodge the medical instruments honing in on killing it. Imagine if fetus’ had Second Amendment Rights. There is no escape! Snip! Cut! Suction! Wash, rinse and repeat. Another successful “miscarriage”, albeit intentional aborting of human life.

24. INT. TBD- DAY
Life Carrier of Nebadon resident on UrantiaEarth…
“Up to this time, we had been permitted to manipulate the environment and shield the life plasm in a special manner, and it was this extraordinary but wholly natural supervision that was to be discontinued.”

25. INT – MEDICAL CLINIC – DAY
Meanwhile, as a form of retaliation from his former employer, an unnamed government sponsored entity with immense authoritative powers and no accountability nor oversite, our main Protagonist is essentially fired and forced to undergo psychological treatment in order to receive a meager pension.

26. INT – ASHKENAZIS MEDIA STUDIO – NIGHT
A media mogul suffering from Stockholm Syndrome pitches an idea for his network. The title of the show is “Juneteenth”.

27. EXT – ATLANTIS EYE OF THE SAHARA – DAY
Technology of particle accelerator used to harness dark energy for the purpose of merging with aborted fetus, while the world chants Black Lives Matter?
Harnessing Anti-Matter for the purpose of DNA sequence manipulation. Sub-Atomic particles, The Particle Accelerator.

28. EXT. GARDEN OF EDEN -DAY.
The “voice in the garden”. The warning of Default of Trust. Always had the archangel custodian admonished Adam and Eve that Default of Trust would culminate in degradation of status, loss of immortality.

29. INT – CITY OF DALAMATIA, THE PERSIAN GULF – NIGHT
Lucifer and Satan were last on our world together during the time of their combined assault upon the Son of Man.
The One Hundred are superhuman, infused with the life plasma of Adam, from Adam&Eve; The 100- 50 males and 50 females, look human, but superhuman, corporeal life flesh infused with the Adamic life plasma. They are organized for service in ten (10) Autonomous Councils of ten (10) members each. When two or more of these ten councils meet in joint session, such liaison gatherings are presided over by Daligastia, the Devil’s Assistant.
Each one of the chosen One-hundred (now One-Thousand) is from a different planet, and none are from Earth.

30. INT. MAINSTREAM MEDIA – DAY
Triggering the Jews. Stockholm Syndrome.
From the teachings and practices of Jesus regarding tolerance and kindness that ran counter to the long-standing attitude of the Jews toward other peoples whom they considered heathen.

31. INT. HOME – DAY.
Preacher Teacher, all that’s bad. BBB deals with father sexual exploitation. Children’s songs played backwards, at slow pace.

32. INT. NEWSROOM – NIGHT
Triggering the Blacks. News report, leading story.
Newsroom story pitch based on the feed beaming down from around the world. Personalities clash. Tempers flare. Biases and prejudices reveal themselves.

33. INT. MANHATTAN/SALVINGTON COURTROOM – DAY
Opening Statements… Lucifer’s folly was the attempt to do the non-doable, to short-circuit time in an experiential universe.
The Case of Gabriel vs. Lucifer: The 12 Charges are read…
The 3 stances of the Lucifer Declaration of Liberty is revealed…

34. INT. MEDICAL CLINIC – DAY.
The myth of Asclepius.
Horror Situation- Asclepius struggles with his dilemma of dealing with Zeus “God” killing his with thunderbolt for not bringing over the souls.
• Suspense- Gift of healing is a curse.
• Dread – Zeus is a God that wants him to bring souls over, not heal them.
• Release- Killed by thunderbolt. Problem solved.
• Anxiety- Another life, this time.
• Hysteria- Reliving the same life journey, different times.
• Dismay- Same trauma and drama.
• Apprehension- Abort- abort- abort the babies.
• Release- Fuck ‘em, kill the babies.
• Panic- Save lives, or kill lives.
• Fear- Fear of being killed again, by a thunderbolt.
• Anguish- Forced to kill by a God
• Release- Another chance at life.
• Reluctance- Kill or be killed!

35. INT. ASHKENAZI’S MEDIA STUDIO OUTLET –
Oh no he didn’t! A cacophony of angry colored people decry at the reissuance of such a decree.

36. INT. COURT – DAY
Life Carrier of Nebadon resident on UrantiaEarth…
It should not be inferred that Life Carriers ever arbitrarily and mechanically interfere with the natural outworking of the planetary evolutionary plans, for we do not.

37. INT. ABORTION CLINIC – MOONLIT NIGHT.
Horror Situation- Perfecting Imperfection.
• DOUBT- Infecting the world with the cytosine Meteorite to comingle, disrupt and alter the human genome DNA sequence.
• UNSUSPECTING- Unsuspecting father’s child is aborted, and the unrealized soul torments his experiences. He unknowingly lives with a loss, not knowing why. Is there a soul connection with men and their life-force seed (sperm)?
• Doubt- Why did she do it? Because she wasn’t 100% certain the child was his.

38. EXT. STATUTE OF LUCIFER-LIBERTY. -DAY
The construction crew on site, with Sir Thomas Lawrences 1797 Lucifer summoning his Legion as company logo, at the Statute of Lucifer-ty, demolish the chains binding Lucifer.

39. RACE SERIES…
Tensions mount as the human race divides upon tribal cultural heritage.
 Horror Situation The Races
• ASIANS- Wealth, status, pride then Racism experienced.
• HISPANICS- Hidden history keep it secret. Moving on up as the new kids on the block to prosperity.
• BLACKS- Advancement in society but continues to victimize on racial bait topics, breakdown of family, drug and alcohol abuse.
• WHITES- Whiteman fear of daughter/wife being with black man. Becoming a minority. Way of life going away.
• NATIVE AMERICAN “REDMAN”
• HUMANITY-Wars. Abortions. Less than evolved. Not perfect.

40. THE TEN DESIGNS OF MORTAL LIFE.
• The majority of inhabited planets are peopled with the breathing type of intelligent beings.
• Due to erosion of the planet by humans, a change happens. From (#4-23%) Atmospheric Electric to (#5-27%) Non-Breathing.
• Earth began as Number 4, Atmospheric-Electric (electric, magnetic, and electronic behavior), and transitions to Number 5 Non-air Breathing.
The evolution of the planet is adversely affected by the erosion of the planet, directly associated with human dumping. The great garbage patch.
From (#4-23%) Atmospheric Electric to (#5-27%) non-breathing.

Horror Situation A neighbor’s dog is poisoned.
• (The dog that is poisoned by the neighbor with glass in the meat. And the consequences to him. Perhaps he is reincarnated as a dog.

41. INT. THIS WORLD – PRESENT TIME
The wages of Sin, is death. “There was war in heaven; THAT War is being played out, here, on earth.

Our Human Characters find it difficult to fully comprehend the significance and to grasp the meanings of Evil, Error, Sin, and Iniquity.
Black lives that mattered (anti-matter), the consequences of selling your soul. Rewriting the negative narrative of the negro.

42. INT. TBD – DAY
Life Carrier of Nebadon resident on UrantiaEarth…
“And no sooner had the Most Highs left off speaking then, the beautiful message from Lucifer, contained the official acceptance of the Life Carriers’ work on Urantia and absorbed us from all future criticism of any of our efforts to improve the life patterns of Nebadon as established in the Satania system.
These messages from Salvington, Edentia and Jerusem formally marked the termination of the Life Carriers’ agelong supervision of the planet.”

43. INT. COURTROOM – DAY.
Lucifers defense is… earth was his responsibility, as stated by the Life Carriers, and uplifting the backwards nature of humanity was his goal, human freewill was established before he and his crew arrived, don’t blame him.

44. RACE SERIES
• ASIANS- Are ostracized, group together. They lose their intelligence and wealth.
• HISPANICS-Immigration acceptance challenges, not worth being the new minority.
• BLACKS- Lynchings reinstitution and enforcement of 15th of the Constitution.
• WHITES-fear of intinction. Mass migration to European countries, but not wanted there. New status-minority.
• HUMANITY- Wars. Turnstyle abortions.
• The Melchizedeks now teach that the good resulting from the Satania rebellion is more than a thousand times the sum of all evil.

45. EXT. ATLANTIS EYE OF THE SAHARA RICHAT STRUCTURE THREE CONCENTRIC CIRCLES– DAY.
Present day…Harnessing Anti-Matter during the timing of an Electrical Storm, chanting of Black Lives Matter, riots and violence, the Particle Accelerator is used to harness Anti-Matter.

Past and present converge… Although the upheaval of Rebellion did not seriously interfere with the progress of organic evolution, it did markedly modify the course of social evolution and of spiritual development. The entire superphysical history of the planet is profoundly influenced by this devastating calamity.

46. EXT. LOCATION -NIGHT.
In short, what God had given men and angels, Lucifer would have taken away from them, that is, the divine privilege of participating in the creation of their own destinies, and of the destiny of this local system of inhabited worlds.

47. The HUMAN RACE SERIES…
The Race War…
Horror Situations…
• From 1930s Freedom to Modern day Slavery for ALL races. 2/3 DIE!
• ASIANS Return to ASIA. Those who stay, lose their intelligence and are poor, poverty stricken. Pride came before the fall.
• HISPANICS return to South America. Being the new black ain’t worth it. Esta no bueno aqui.
• WHITES- Not the majority, but the minority.
• Triggering the Blacks. Jim Crow laws reinstated. Since the Civil Rights movement, the black church has aligned with the evil power structurer, thus relegating progress of the black community, family values, successful businesses et al.
• 2/3 of humanity is gone. The final 1/3 fight with fallen angels, Nephilim etc. The “race war” wasn’t what nationalists thought it would be.

o PRIDE: add
o OVER CONFIDENCE: add
o PREJUDICE: add
o RELEASE: add
o DOUBT: add
o CCONCERN: add
o FRUSTRATION: add
o RELEASE: add
o ANXIETY: add
o FLIGHT OR FIGHT: add
o FALL: add
o UTTER RUIN: add

48. EXT. LOCATION -NIGHT.
Rebel annihilation- The Wages of Sin is death.
Anticipating the verdict of the annihilation of these interned rebels. Then will you look for their places, but they shall not be found. “And they who know you among the worlds will be astonished at you; you have been a terror, but never shall you be any more.” And thus, shall all of these unworthy traitors “become as though they had not been.”

Resolution…
49. INT. WASHINGTON DC -NIGHT.
The Anti-Christ.
“So the devil’s child, will rise from the world of politics”- “The Omen”.

50. EXT. Re-(B)EARTH -DAY.
Not all worlds are alike. Earth was an Atmospheric – Energizing Type of planet; the new planetary type that is formed, due to the default, allowing more Artificial Intelligence, is Electric – Non-Breathers.
1/10th of original 100%, to perfect the future bloodline of humanity including Indigo are allowed to live.

Character Outros (all of these will be updated).
• INDIGO
o Abandonment issues.
o Indigo learns his ancestry is Caligastia 100.
o NDE stuff.
o The abortion stuff with BBB.
o Who knew that turning women on could be so suck-sessful! Indigo’s writing takes form, well received by female audience. Who knew getting dicked down by the devil was a quite fantasy? The allure of the horrific with the females audience takes shape.
o End jury. The case of Gabriel vs. Lucifer…

• SAN / The Unseen Father
o The SAN (Sorry Ass Negro) soundtrack includes old worn-out negro spirituals.
o These abandoners are annihilated from existence. Lost in the race war.

• BBB
o In the end, with a womb barren from one too many abortions “induced miscarriage”, her barren womb is used to host the birth-creation of the Anti-Christ.
o The aborted fetus are collected from an illuminati orgy, run by Asclepius and funded by Ashkenazi.

• ASCLEPIUS
o In the end, this is what happens to…

• ASHKENAZI
o In the end, this is what happens to Ashkenazi’s Character Arc…
“Happy are they who mourn, for they shall be comforted.” So-called common sense or the best of logic would never suggest that happiness could be derived from mourning.
But Jesus did not refer to outward or ostentatious mourning. He alluded to an emotional attitude of tenderheartedness.
It is a great error to teach boys and young men that it is unmanly to show tenderness or otherwise to give evidence of emotional feeling or physical suffering. Sympathy is a worthy attribute of the male as well as the female. It is not necessary to be calloused in order to be manly. This is the wrong way to create courageous men.
The world’s great men have not been afraid to mourn. Moses, the mourner, was a greater man than either Samson or Goliath. Moses was a superb leader, but he was also a man of meekness.
Being sensitive and responsive to human need creates genuine and lasting happiness, while such kindly attitudes safeguard the soul from the destructive influences of anger, hate, and suspicion.

51. INT. TBD – DAY
Life Carrier of Nebadon resident on UrantiaEarth…
For ages, we had been on duty, assisted only by the seven-adjutant mind-spirits and the Master Physical Controllers. And now, will, the power of choosing to worship and to ascend, having appeared in the evolutionary creatures of the planet, we realized that our work was finished, and our group prepared to depart.

52. INT. MANHATTAN SALVINGTON COURT -DAY
While humanity blames the devil for evil, humans are responsible for killing its God. Then creating an institution to cash out on his demise. Call it tithing.
True evil resides with Carbon based Man… 6 protons + 6 neutrons + 6 electrons.
Technically terminating the Lucifer rebellion in the system of Satania.
Lucifer asks for mercy. He asks for Mercy because he was assigned planetary prince and his job was to uplift the human strain.
Mercy is simply justice tempered by that wisdom which grows out of perfection of knowledge and the full recognition of the natural weaknesses and environmental handicaps of finite creatures.
Therefore “whosoever calls upon the Lord shall be saved,” “for he will
abundantly pardon.”
Verdict of the twelve charges…

On the stand…Lucifer (contemptuous)
• Earth is a life-experiment station.
• “You dare judge Me? You seek to place me on trial, as defendant, for aborting the Divine Plan? Defend I will! You dare prosecute Me? Perhaps it is I who should be prosecuting you Gabriel?
o Gabriel was so profoundly impressed with the certainty of the impending outbreak that he went direct to Edentia to confer with the Constellation Fathers regarding the measures to be employed in case of open rebellion 53:2.4 (602.7). Impressed, not appalled.

53. INT. TBA – DAY
Life Carrier of Nebadon resident on UrantiaEarth…
“UrantiaEarth being a life-modification world, permission was granted to leave behind two senior Life Carriers with twelve assistants (where are they, where were they), and I was chosen as one of this group and have ever since been on UrantiaEarth.”
And look what Humans have done with it? Pollution, warfare.

ANNIHILATION AND CESSATION OF EXISTENCE
Annihilation
The greatest punishment (in reality an inevitable consequence) for wrongdoing and deliberate rebellion against the government of God, is loss of existence as an individual subject of that government.

The final result of wholehearted Sin is annihilation. In the last analysis, such sin-identified individuals have destroyed themselves by becoming wholly unreal through their embrace of Iniquity.

The factual disappearance of such a creature is, however, always delayed until the ordained order of justice current in that universe has been fully complied with. In our movie, this ordained order of justice is the trial of G vs L.

Cessation of Existence – Dissolution of soul
Cessation of existence is usually decreed at the dispensational or epochal adjudication of the realm or realms. On a world such as UrantiaEarth it comes at the end of a planetary dispensation.

Cessation of existence can be decreed at such times by co-ordinate action of all tribunals of jurisdiction, extending from the planetary council up through the courts of the Creator Son to the judgment tribunals of the Ancients of Days.

LUCIFER
In the end…
Is the personality soul of Lucifer terminally annihilated? Terminated? Or is he given mercy?

SATAN
In the end…similar to Lucifer, personality soul annihilation.

CALIGASTIA
In the end… The universe personalities look with peculiar disdain upon Prince Caligastia because of his premeditated betrayal of TRUST.

“You Caligastia are like your leader, Lucifer, and you have sinfully perpetuated his iniquity. He was a falsifier from the beginning of his self-exaltation because he abodes not in the Truth”.

CREATOR SON: (voicing this contempt) You Caligastia are like your leader, Lucifer, and you have sinfully perpetuated his iniquity. He was a falsifier from the beginning of his self-exaltation because he abodes not in the Truth”. Yet he was from truth. How is this?

54. EXT. WASHINGTON DC –DAYNIGHT
Year twenty-thirty something…
The Lucifer banner hangs freely beneath A FULL MOON casting stark grey contrasted deep dark shadows. The first city designed before built.
The obelisk creates a time shadow over the National Mall.
All is now in place.
A figure, once sitting, now standing, steps onto the second floor of the east wing. With large reptilian dragon-like half man, with burlaping wings unfolding… this thing, lifts off into the eerie dark grey sky. So dark, one would think it were night. This darkness is here to stay, bye-bye safety of the day.
The ANTI-CHRIST BEELZEBULB
The anti-matter mergence with aborted fetus, altering of the human DNA structure to 1056665 from [ATCG 10 5 6 5] thus becoming the US President- Anti-Christ, (and female), By her side, BEELZEBULB.

55. EXT. -SPACE SYSTEM -DAY.
“Perfecting Imperfection”.
By losing its freewill, and with the biological uplift, humanity evolves from imperfection to perfection.
“Happy are they who mourn, for they shall be comforted.” So-called common sense or the best of logic would never suggest that happiness could be derived from mourning.
But Jesus did not refer to outward or ostentatious mourning. He alluded to an emotional attitude of tenderheartedness.

FADE TO BLACK.
ROLL END CREDITS.

Hope/Fear: A cautionary tale of/for the bestowal of the second coming, via the Anti-Christ; sets aside the temporal consequences of these serious blunders of the earlier administrations of the world. A screenplay designed to thrill and horrify its audience, for entertainment purposes only. There is no intention in manifesting this into reality other than a successful motion picture franchise.

The End.
THE PLANETARY PRINCE
An original film by AwefulAndré
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